Vortex stories (Shrinking, Vore, Digestion)

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Vortex stories (Shrinking, Vore, Digestion)

Postby VortexFoodsTM » Sat Jan 09, 2021 8:51 pm

Hi!

After lurking for many years, I thought I'd finally start posting on the forums, and I'll begin by shamelessly advertising some of the stories I've written and uploaded here over the last couple of months. I've received very positive feedback so far, so I now feel confident enough to actively promote them a bit! ^^;

Here's a short overview so that you can tell if my stories are your cup of tea:
My stories are all set in an "alternate reality" of sorts where a restaurant chain named 'Vortex' sells shrunken people as food, and this is widely seen as nothing unusual. Accordingly, these are shrinking stories with lots of vore (mostly soft, but also some hard vore). All characters are human, and the (mostly female) preds are aware and casual, whereas the (mostly male) prey is generally unwilling. There's a lot of focus on digestion, and there are also some shorter parts featuring disposal. Some stories also feature crush scenes.

Among others, I'm a big fan of the works of ElPortero, Zombie Slave, observer, girlfood, oishi1, French_snack and supernova - so if you're familiar with their stories, that might also help you narrow down in which direction my stories go.

All stories are available in English and German versions. I'm always open to feedback and constructive criticism, either in the comments of the respective stories, or here in this thread. I'll also be using this thread to post status updates on upcoming stories.

You can find all my stories here.
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Re: Vortex stories (Shrinking, Vore, Digestion)

Postby Makuta » Sun Jan 10, 2021 6:58 am

Hello (also from Germany), I read your stories and I like them. I love the scenario and the stories are beautifully detailed. I'm looking forward to read more. :)
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Re: Vortex stories (Shrinking, Vore, Digestion)

Postby VortexFoodsTM » Sun Jan 10, 2021 8:02 am

Thanks! :) I've got plenty more ideas and the outline for the next story is done too. I hope I'll find the time to write and translate it soon!
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Re: Vortex stories (Shrinking, Vore, Digestion)

Postby ModelbeiInsta » Fri Jan 22, 2021 5:52 am

I like how there‘s no unnecessary interaction between the Shrunken and the consumers. They are just usual food for them. But what I liked a lot was when they recognize a shrunken guy as someone they know and how cruel they are. They just don’t care about him though they know him from school or sports club. Please more like this maybe with little interaction in that case.
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Re: Vortex stories (Shrinking, Vore, Digestion)

Postby VortexFoodsTM » Fri Feb 26, 2021 10:43 am

ModelbeiInsta wrote:I like how there‘s no unnecessary interaction between the Shrunken and the consumers. They are just usual food for them. But what I liked a lot was when they recognize a shrunken guy as someone they know and how cruel they are. They just don’t care about him though they know him from school or sports club. Please more like this maybe with little interaction in that case.


Sorry, I didn't see your post until now! Thank you so much for your kind words! :) Yes, that is a balance I sometimes find challenging to uphold! I experimented a bit more with the interaction between the preds and the prey in my new story, which also brings me to the next point:

Story 6 ("The Drinking Game") is now online! It once again features the girls from "A Saturday in Town" and "An Afternoon At The Pool", and references the latter story quite a bit, so it might not be the ideal story to start with for those who aren't familiar with my stories yet. As mentioned above, I experimented with a couple of new ideas here and am looking forward to the community feedback! :)
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Re: Vortex stories (Shrinking, Vore, Digestion)

Postby kvyber » Sat Feb 27, 2021 6:36 pm

I like your stories. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Vortex stories (Shrinking, Vore, Digestion)

Postby VortexFoodsTM » Sat Mar 06, 2021 5:53 pm

Story 7 ("An American Nightmare") is now online! It features completely new characters and therefore doesn't require any knowledge of my previous stories. It's a bit different again, this one is soft vore only, so no scenes featuring hard vore or crush. However, it's also quite a bit longer than my previous stories, with a much longer and more detailed digestion part - so "soft" may not be the right word here, it's all pretty graphic ^^; I hope you enjoy it and am looking forward to your feedback. Also, no male preds whatsoever in this one - for anyone who was bothered by that in the previous two stories :wink:
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