Hi all.
I just finished a comic about elves (the Icelandic kind, not the Tolkien kind).
Thought I'd post it here, in case anyone wants to go have a look.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/662784
All comments are appreciated, however mean.
Also, the first person to decode the written conversation on p. 4-5 gets a free art request.
Cheers,
Emily
New comic! - Anna Mundi
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Re: New comic: Hidden Folk
I enjoyed it, well done. My one issue is on page one: "Their little ears weren't made for listening." I see what you're going for, but it feels counter to what you're trying to establish.
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TheWildeWood - Been posting for a bit
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New comic! - Anna Mundi
Hi, thought I'd share my new comic here. It's based on an idea by GCreep (https://aryion.com/g4/user/Gcreep), and features AI, soul vore, hard vore, weight gain, among other things.
Inspired by I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream.
Hope you enjoy!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/688343
Inspired by I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream.
Hope you enjoy!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/688343
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EmilyNidhoggr - Participator
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
So, in a world where everything biological but a few humans is gone, where a super AI has been created to only understand suffering and pain, and as such find meaning in causing pain, both from devouring others into pieces, but then also torment them for thousands of years that lasts but a second in the real world, where the creator broke down the barrier and opened the floodgates for the only surviving humans to now only have the choice of dying on their own terms, choke/starve to death from no more plants or animals, or choose to become immortalised as a form of ARK from Soma, but is ever going to only bring them torture in payment for letting humanity remain in her, rather than be snuffed out entirely, most likely without knowing the true horror waiting on the other side?
That is really dark... Still not as dark as the 41st millenia I think, but real dark! I think Lovecraft may have been proud.
That is really dark... Still not as dark as the 41st millenia I think, but real dark! I think Lovecraft may have been proud.
Inside every cynical person, there is a disappointed idealist.
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
Gendor wrote:So, in a world where everything biological but a few humans is gone, where a super AI has been created to only understand suffering and pain, and as such find meaning in causing pain, both from devouring others into pieces, but then also torment them for thousands of years that lasts but a second in the real world, where the creator broke down the barrier and opened the floodgates for the only surviving humans to now only have the choice of dying on their own terms, choke/starve to death from no more plants or animals, or choose to become immortalised as a form of ARK from Soma, but is ever going to only bring them torture in payment for letting humanity remain in her, rather than be snuffed out entirely, most likely without knowing the true horror waiting on the other side?
That is really dark... Still not as dark as the 41st millenia I think, but real dark! I think Lovecraft may have been proud.
Ikr? Last time something made me feel this particular way was when I watched Attack on Titan for the first time.
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
MianQ wrote:Ikr? Last time something made me feel this particular way was when I watched Attack on Titan for the first time.
:O
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EmilyNidhoggr - Participator
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
EmilyNidhoggr wrote:MianQ wrote:Ikr? Last time something made me feel this particular way was when I watched Attack on Titan for the first time.
:O
I mean it in the best way possible ofc, the feeling *really* stuck with me after that. Your comic is visceral in the best way possible tbh. I cant wait for what else you choose to make!
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
MianQ wrote:I mean it in the best way possible ofc, the feeling *really* stuck with me after that. Your comic is visceral in the best way possible tbh. I cant wait for what else you choose to make!
Haha, yeah I know, you big flatterer. Certainly wish I could draw as well as the Attack on Titan guy (or you for that matter).
Visceral is a good word, especially when referring to the splanchnic viscera, which should always play a starring role in any story.
Thanks as always for reading and for commenting.
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EmilyNidhoggr - Participator
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
Hi! I see many say this is dark, and as a long time fan of your work I'd say they should see one of your other works, "the Pit", for something even darker
Intresting idea, well done!
Intresting idea, well done!
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
Ilove wrote:Hi! I see many say this is dark, and as a long time fan of your work I'd say they should see one of your other works, "the Pit", for something even darker
Intresting idea, well done!
Thanks Ilove! That is a deep cut, The Pit's almost ten years old now.
Just saw your gallery, top shelf stuff, how have I never seen you around before?
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EmilyNidhoggr - Participator
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
EmilyNidhoggr wrote:Ilove wrote:Hi! I see many say this is dark, and as a long time fan of your work I'd say they should see one of your other works, "the Pit", for something even darker
Intresting idea, well done!
Thanks Ilove! That is a deep cut, The Pit's almost ten years old now.
Just saw your gallery, top shelf stuff, how have I never seen you around before?
No prob, 10 years is quite old... damn that's even darker to think about
And so happy you like my stuff! ( saying it's top shelf makes me quite proud ) guess I'm not good at advertising myself? most probably bad luck with the algorithm
Well, hope you the best!
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
Ilove wrote:guess I'm not good at advertising myself? most probably bad luck with the algorithm
Ugh tell me about it. I've still got baby page numbers after so many years of tasty content. 90% sure the globalists and/or my ungrateful grandkids are shadow-banning me.
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Re: New comic! - Anna Mundi
EmilyNidhoggr wrote:Ilove wrote:guess I'm not good at advertising myself? most probably bad luck with the algorithm
Ugh tell me about it. I've still got baby page numbers after so many years of tasty content. 90% sure the globalists and/or my ungrateful grandkids are shadow-banning me.
Checked right now, yeah, it's pretty surprising!
Well, you make thoughtful content, which is not usually popular
But if I have to talk about myself, I started and continue this because I like it and it's a lot of good practice, the rest doesn't worry me as much
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New comic! Yurlunggur
A comic about two sisters, borrowing from and in the spirit of common Australian myths and folklore.
Hope you enjoy.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/698370
Hope you enjoy.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/698370
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EmilyNidhoggr - Participator
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Leviathan
Hi everyone!
I have started a new piece of illustrated serial fiction, set in the body of a big lady leviathan called Tia, who houses all the souls of the humans she eats. Naturally, it is full of drama, character, intrigue, and tasty vore. I have a good deal plotted out, and I've written the prologue and first chapter, but I thought I'd check to see if anyone is actually going to follow it before pushing on beyond that.
Synopsis:
When George Marduk Malter receives a knock on his door informing him that he is to be fed to Tia the leviathan, he is embarrassingly quick to accept his fate. However, no sooner has he found peace in oblivion, than his soul is pulled from his body and forced into degrading labour in service of Tia's stomach. Tia's body, he discovers, is home to a thriving but mercilessly brutal society of digested souls, and he is at the bottom of the food chain.
He is not alone, however. Somewhere, out in in the vast expanse of Tia's flab, is the wife he unwittingly betrayed to her, whom he always imagined was gone forever.
And there are rumblings in the bowels of a new movement, that will make Tia's army of souls into a power no leviathan has ever matched.
Anyway, here's the prologue. If you like what you see, please comment so I know to keep it going.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/699106
I have started a new piece of illustrated serial fiction, set in the body of a big lady leviathan called Tia, who houses all the souls of the humans she eats. Naturally, it is full of drama, character, intrigue, and tasty vore. I have a good deal plotted out, and I've written the prologue and first chapter, but I thought I'd check to see if anyone is actually going to follow it before pushing on beyond that.
Synopsis:
When George Marduk Malter receives a knock on his door informing him that he is to be fed to Tia the leviathan, he is embarrassingly quick to accept his fate. However, no sooner has he found peace in oblivion, than his soul is pulled from his body and forced into degrading labour in service of Tia's stomach. Tia's body, he discovers, is home to a thriving but mercilessly brutal society of digested souls, and he is at the bottom of the food chain.
He is not alone, however. Somewhere, out in in the vast expanse of Tia's flab, is the wife he unwittingly betrayed to her, whom he always imagined was gone forever.
And there are rumblings in the bowels of a new movement, that will make Tia's army of souls into a power no leviathan has ever matched.
Anyway, here's the prologue. If you like what you see, please comment so I know to keep it going.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/699106
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