My second story,
sorry if its a bit short, but im new to the whole story writing thing.
Involves a young man at his parents farm, a huge balled horse, and a mare.
Feedback would be appreciated.
Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
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3) Please do not upload material that are specified "Do not Distribute ".
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Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
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- ub_centaur
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
Nice!, you are a great writer (more so because I love horse vore)
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
Wow. That was nice if rather short ^^... now I'm intrigued how the mare became 'resexed' =P
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
very good, but I'm a little more partial to longer story's
maybe longer like at least five pages but hey if you have add like me .... lets ride bikes
maybe longer like at least five pages but hey if you have add like me .... lets ride bikes
He who laughs last ,thinks slowest
What happens when you put the battery's in backwards in the Energizer Bunny?
He keeps on cuming and cuming and...
What happens when you put the battery's in backwards in the Energizer Bunny?
He keeps on cuming and cuming and...
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
Very nice - I've always liked cock vore that leads to unbirth. I agree, I'd try and draw the story out longer, experiment with description and such. Still, you're certainly improving, and I encourage you to keep writing - it's the only way to get better at it.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
very cool story, noticed a few spelling errors but hey, who cares, the story was still gud
keep up the gud work
keep up the gud work
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
The story is awesome almost my type of vore. I think that you should continue with your writing. I hope to enjoy another of your stories.
Do you know Bob from Canada?
Yeah I ate him and he died eh.
Yeah I ate him and he died eh.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
Well done I enjoyed the story
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
An improvement to the previous story I read by you. Its a little short for my tastes and I think you can afford to be a little more descriptive still.
By all means keep writing!
By all means keep writing!
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
JamesTakenaka wrote:Wow. That was nice if rather short ^^... now I'm intrigued how the mare became 'resexed' =P
de-sexed not resexed. :3
means she had her overies cut or whatever they do to horses.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
Razgriz wrote:JamesTakenaka wrote:Wow. That was nice if rather short ^^... now I'm intrigued how the mare became 'resexed' =P
de-sexed not resexed. :3
means she had her overies cut or whatever they do to horses.
The story says that she had been desexed. He was wondering how it had been undone. My guess is that the horses used this as a way to get around the desexing.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
Nice story i liked it:)
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
Neat little story.
Though as a point of order, from someone who lives on a farm, female horses generally are not ever de-sexed. Equine birth control is done by gelding the stallions. Mares are just penned up to keep them from getting pregnant.
Though as a point of order, from someone who lives on a farm, female horses generally are not ever de-sexed. Equine birth control is done by gelding the stallions. Mares are just penned up to keep them from getting pregnant.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
ub_centaur wrote:My second story,
sorry if its a bit short, but im new to the whole story writing thing.
Involves a young man at his parents farm, a huge balled horse, and a mare.
Feedback would be appreciated.
looks good I read it a few times before I joined EKA's.
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
ub_centaur, A short story but a good one, do you still write them or have you stopped for good?
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Re: Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation
knightsrest wrote:ub_centaur, A short story but a good one, do you still write them or have you stopped for good?
The account says: "Last visited: Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:47 am". So I think it is safe to say: stopped :/
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