Story - Contains cock vore, unbirth and transformation

[ub_centaur]

My second story,
sorry if its a bit short, but im new to the whole story writing thing.
Involves a young man at his parents farm, a huge balled horse, and a mare.
Feedback would be appreciated.

[soline]

Nice!, you are a great writer (more so because I love horse vore)

[JamesTakenaka]

Wow. That was nice if rather short ^^... now I'm intrigued how the mare became 'resexed' =P

[t4capt]

very good, but I'm a little more partial to longer story's

maybe longer like at least five pages but hey if you have add like me .... lets ride bikes

[Groblek]

Very nice - I've always liked cock vore that leads to unbirth. I agree, I'd try and draw the story out longer, experiment with description and such. Still, you're certainly improving, and I encourage you to keep writing - it's the only way to get better at it.

[hio45]

very cool story, noticed a few spelling errors but hey, who cares, the story was still gud

keep up the gud work

[haphazard]

The story is awesome almost my type of vore. I think that you should continue with your writing. I hope to enjoy another of your stories.

[The Requester]

Well done I enjoyed the story

[Radijs]

An improvement to the previous story I read by you. Its a little short for my tastes and I think you can afford to be a little more descriptive still.
By all means keep writing!

[Razgriz]

Wow. That was nice if rather short ^^... now I'm intrigued how the mare became 'resexed' =P

de-sexed not resexed. :3

means she had her overies cut or whatever they do to horses.

[Squirelly]

Wow. That was nice if rather short ^^... now I'm intrigued how the mare became 'resexed' =P

de-sexed not resexed. :3

means she had her overies cut or whatever they do to horses.

The story says that she had been desexed. He was wondering how it had been undone. My guess is that the horses used this as a way to get around the desexing.

[ublover1]

Nice story i liked it:)

[Throat_Wolf]

Neat little story.

Though as a point of order, from someone who lives on a farm, female horses generally are not ever de-sexed. Equine birth control is done by gelding the stallions. Mares are just penned up to keep them from getting pregnant.

[darklord]

My second story,
sorry if its a bit short, but im new to the whole story writing thing.
Involves a young man at his parents farm, a huge balled horse, and a mare.
Feedback would be appreciated.

looks good I read it a few times before I joined EKA's.

[knightsrest]

ub_centaur, A short story but a good one, do you still write them or have you stopped for good?

[Paraffine]

ub_centaur, A short story but a good one, do you still write them or have you stopped for good?

The account says: "Last visited: Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:47 am". So I think it is safe to say: stopped :/