Vore Audio - Short Narrative

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Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Hestia042 » Thu Oct 27, 2016 12:11 pm

https://chirb.it/vyD90F
First try, first take of a collaborate effort at reading something aloud for my husband. Ensuring interest before committing enough effort to make sure sound quality is good (and that furnace doesn't halfway through DAMN YOU!)

*****UPDATED***** I re did this one and can't find the original, I like this one better anyways.

Female Pred - BDSM, Digestion, Oral Vore
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby BellyOfTheBitch » Thu Oct 27, 2016 4:23 pm

Consider me interested
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Hestia042 » Thu Oct 27, 2016 4:40 pm

Thank you for your response. And interest.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby BellyOfTheBitch » Thu Oct 27, 2016 4:44 pm

Anything that you wanted in terms of feedback?
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Hestia042 » Thu Oct 27, 2016 4:48 pm

Any thing you'd like to share with me is appreciated and will be taken to heart. Thank you for your time.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby BellyOfTheBitch » Thu Oct 27, 2016 5:10 pm

I like it. The tone of voice works well for the scenario. If I had one thing that I would further add, I think it would just be more physical, tactile descriptions along with describing what this character is thinking.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Hestia042 » Thu Oct 27, 2016 5:32 pm

Thank you. I agree! It's difficult to get the physical into voice, that doesn't mean that I won't try though. I feel I could have been a bit more condescending to my prey but that was done in one take only.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby ryanshowseason3 » Fri Oct 28, 2016 6:54 am

Wow pretty dang good for a first take.

Could use some soundfx to accompany your voice. But geeze that's good stuff your voice is pretty smooth and you're just on the edge of overacting but not too far. The pronunciation is clear and understandable.

Is this basically just a hobby to please your husband? If I knew his interests I could be convinced to whip up a short script.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby jaykayeight » Fri Oct 28, 2016 3:33 pm

is that your own voice? that is simply amazing! if its true, you have so much going on in your voice. actually at first i thought this would be something sampled out of an audio book with a professional narrator but then i noticed that its actually a real recording. so, whoever did this did a very fine job! thanks for sharing!
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Hestia042 » Fri Oct 28, 2016 5:52 pm

Thank you! It is me. So is that a yes, you're interested in hearing me read more?
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Hestia042 » Fri Oct 28, 2016 8:21 pm

@ Ryanshowseason3 : I am into BDSM IRL so my husband and I play out scenarios for each other. I am accepting of soft vore and appreciate the art that my husband posts on here. I would love to read a script for you some time soon. :-D
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Spunkomatic66 » Fri Oct 28, 2016 9:09 pm

Well... that was pretty sexy. Nice job!
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby AbbieDoll » Fri Oct 28, 2016 9:31 pm

Good to have another voice actress on the forum, welcome.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby jaykayeight » Sat Oct 29, 2016 12:24 am

yes! id like to. it sounds like you have voice acting experience. A very broad range from warm teasings to chilling BDSM vibes. I guess you could also read out a shopping list and cause ears to tickle. I had to laugh about the "grinning like an idiot" part. I guess you and hubby are a match made in heaven :)
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Hestia042 » Sat Oct 29, 2016 5:58 am

Thank you, Abbiedoll and Jaykay. No experience just life experience, being a woman, you learn quickly how your voice effects people. I am hoping to be like Abbiedoll one day and make a living from my voice, it's only ever used over the intercom at my current job.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby nnn4463 » Sat Oct 29, 2016 8:18 am

That was truly excellent for a first take and try at something like this
As a personal preference I think a burp in there would be nice but that's just me
Not sure what sort of software you have or your availability to add things in or edit
But just some background noise such as some quiet groans from your stomach or some muffled noises of your prey tucked away under your voice, barley audible could really up things

Maybe a few more lines commenting on how a meal they were, example "Mmmm, I must say, you were tasty, feeling you slide down my gullet, truly was wonderful"

But this was very impressive and I do hope you decide to do more
I know a fair bit about editing and recording so if you need any advice on working with the audio or anything of the sort do feel free to message me and I will gladly offer any advice or opinions I can

You do have a wonderful voice though, you sounded fairly demanding and controlling, though like I said, a little bit coming from your prey could help bring things up a notch

Look forward to whatever you do next with this love
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Hestia042 » Sun Oct 30, 2016 8:41 am

Thank you for the ideas, nnn4463. I am looking forward to doing more, and adding more details as I get more comfortable reading into the mic. I also need my husband to write some more for me. He and I are planing some visual novels, just need to light a fire under his butt. :D I appreciate all of the support and interest! Thanks everyone.
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby nnn4463 » Sun Oct 30, 2016 8:31 pm

No problem
Happy to lend any advice or help when I can

Excited to see what you two come up with next ^^
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby ryanshowseason3 » Mon Oct 31, 2016 6:14 am

Hestia042 wrote:Thank you for the ideas, nnn4463. I am looking forward to doing more, and adding more details as I get more comfortable reading into the mic. I also need my husband to write some more for me. He and I are planing some visual novels, just need to light a fire under his butt. :D I appreciate all of the support and interest! Thanks everyone.


Visual novels eh? I have a spot of experience on that front. What engine were you thinking of using? Might have to think of a script that fits that format...
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Re: Vore Audio - Short Narrative

Postby Hestia042 » Mon Oct 31, 2016 5:24 pm

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