Very good for a first attempt, not that I expected anything less from you. You have incredible talent, my friend and I look forward to reading more in the future!
Thank you, everyone! I'm glad you liked it. Right now, I'm focusing more on my character Cherry (who eats shrunken, willing people, without transforming them) and on Karbo's world of Felarya, but I may well return to transformation vore one day.
A cake gift is an interesting idea. Although, would someone really eat a whole cake, even over the span of two or three days? I do think the next prey might need to be transformed into a more filling meal than just one small piece of fruit, though... I'll have to think about it. :)
Nicely done. I was a little surprised that in such a consensual, "loving" story, that Franck would experience himself getting excreted from his "girlfriend's" body: that's usually a fate that comes at the whim of a more vindictive predator.
What makes it seem a little lonely is that she's not aware of his presence-- she "guesses" that he might be able to hear her, but even after he becomes a part of her body he's unable to answer.
Most interesting -- and kind of the key scene in the entire story -- is this charity that Franck feels: he's been transformed, eaten, digested, and pooped out, with no idea that any future remains. He's looking up at Miranda's bottom as she's starting to poo again on top of him, and at that moment he's grateful for the opportunity to make that sacrifice. A very powerful point, and strangely not difficult to identify with.
Thank you for your interesting comments. And, indeed, it was a journey with an unknown ending for Franck. He had no idea what exactly would happen to him, but he gave himself to Miranda all the same - an ultimate act of commitment, of love, even if their love always remained implicit.
And you're right that the uncertainty, for her, remains. She'll never know what exactly became of him. Whether or not he's there, with her, part of her. They're together, but from her perspective there may indeed be a sense of loneliness. It depends on how you want to look at it; I deliberately refrained from spelling out Miranda's perspective. (The main reason why I didn't give Miranda's viewpoint, of course, is that her thoughts and feelings always remained a little mysterious, unknowable, to Franck.)
I would love to see a transformation story written by you about a sandwich preferably a PB&J, or even as the slice of bread, instead of eaten right away, I would love to see being put in a lunchbox saved for later. I still loved this story though, there never is enough transformation vore, so I hope you do write more.
Lucky guy, sad that he only became a small part of her breast >.< well I would prefer the bum anyway. ^^
Liked the story a lot, I actually haven't seen so much stories yet in which the prey gets transformed into food (I mean fruits, etc). So it's something special as well.
I'm not much on the getting-turned-into-food bit, personally, but the story was well-written enough on the whole that I could get over it. You have an excellent way of building anticipation over the course of the story, looking at every facet of the soon-to-be-eaten's experience. I like that.
Thanks! I found it interesting to write, looking into Franck's perspective, his feelings and experience, his way of viewing Miranda... Looking back, I think this is one of my favourite among my own stories. Nothing much happens, but there's a genuine -yet unspoken- relationship between eater and eaten.
Thanks! I rarely write transformation vore stories, for some reason, although it's an idea I really like; my inspiration simply takes me in other directions. If I do write one again, I doubt it'll be any time soon... Although there *is* this one already: http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=174021' target='_blank'>http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=174021 .
As for butt versus breasts... My preference would be to become part of a woman's breast, but I must admit that the prospect of being a conscious part of a woman's bottom is... very appealing too. Maybe one day. :)
That was great! :) And, I hope it doesn't sound like I'm complaining, but I felt it would be a bit better if he would become a part of her <i>as</i> he was going through her digestive tract and would gradually be absorbed throughout all of her, not just a specific part. Realisticly speaking, his nutrients would be spread throughout her entire body instead of only to her left breast. (I always feel a little nervous saying the word 'realistic' when commenting on a work of complete fiction, so if it seems like I'm whining feel free to just ignore me. ^_^;)
Why did I not see this comment before? Thank *you*; I'm very glad you enjoyed it! There's not enough transformation vore out there. (Which is partly my fault for hardly ever writing any!)
Thanks. You wouldn't like to be part of her body when she has a lover? I think I actually would (which is probably rather perverse of me). But if you like, you can imagine that he gradually fades.
I just wanted to say that, although the International Vore Competition series is my favourite, with Forbidden Dish a close second, this is my favourite of all your stories. I cannot think of a better example of transformation vore, even Cosmagic Kitchen on DeviantArt doesn't compare.
I like it because of the gentle, casual and almost innocent relationship between the two characters. I love her underlying domination of him like she instantly knows she can make him say yes and it is his fate to indulge her.
I would love to read another story which includes Miranda if you ever feel like using her again. I assume she still has the magic book?
Thanks. The combination of dominance and affection was interesting to play with. Yes, I assume she still has it, though I haven't had any further plans for her.
Wow. That was stunning. Your style in this writing has an appeal which most other authors are lacking. It is so vivid and welcoming to read. The beginning creates an longing for these special days of the past. And you can really feel the bond of the two. Additional to this there is this thrill after his transformation because he can not stop the inevitable even if he wanted to, since he can not communicate. That and the uncertain fate of him afterwards.
So let me applause you. It was marvelous. Too bad it took me so long to stumble upon it.
Thank you for that kind and perceptive comment! I wanted the dynamic between the characters to seem quite natural to them, due to their closeness and shared understanding - but a little bit thrilling all the same.
Posted by Tsavo 15 years ago Report
I'm not usually a fan of transformation vore but you pulled it off wonderfully. Excellent story. :)
Posted by Vorefreak 15 years ago Report
Great job!
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Thank you, both! I may not do this type of vore often, but I wanted to give it a try.
Posted by Vorefreak 15 years ago Report
Very good for a first attempt, not that I expected anything less from you. You have incredible talent, my friend and I look forward to reading more in the future!
Posted by Fidel2323 15 years ago Report
that was the best transformation story ive ever read O_O
really!
you did a great job, writing his journey
Posted by MisterEbony 15 years ago Report
Nice. Would you be willing to do another? I would love to see someone turned into food again, maybe a cake or something, as a gift for a lover.
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Thank you, everyone! I'm glad you liked it. Right now, I'm focusing more on my character Cherry (who eats shrunken, willing people, without transforming them) and on Karbo's world of Felarya, but I may well return to transformation vore one day.
A cake gift is an interesting idea. Although, would someone really eat a whole cake, even over the span of two or three days? I do think the next prey might need to be transformed into a more filling meal than just one small piece of fruit, though... I'll have to think about it. :)
Posted by MisterEbony 15 years ago Report
Please do. I think it would be very romantic.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 15 years ago Report
I usually dont like a sappy story. But this was...excellent. Thanks for the contribution.
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by dreamweevil 14 years ago Report
Nicely done. I was a little surprised that in such a consensual, "loving" story, that Franck would experience himself getting excreted from his "girlfriend's" body: that's usually a fate that comes at the whim of a more vindictive predator.
What makes it seem a little lonely is that she's not aware of his presence-- she "guesses" that he might be able to hear her, but even after he becomes a part of her body he's unable to answer.
Most interesting -- and kind of the key scene in the entire story -- is this charity that Franck feels: he's been transformed, eaten, digested, and pooped out, with no idea that any future remains. He's looking up at Miranda's bottom as she's starting to poo again on top of him, and at that moment he's grateful for the opportunity to make that sacrifice. A very powerful point, and strangely not difficult to identify with.
-- dw
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you for your interesting comments. And, indeed, it was a journey with an unknown ending for Franck. He had no idea what exactly would happen to him, but he gave himself to Miranda all the same - an ultimate act of commitment, of love, even if their love always remained implicit.
And you're right that the uncertainty, for her, remains. She'll never know what exactly became of him. Whether or not he's there, with her, part of her. They're together, but from her perspective there may indeed be a sense of loneliness. It depends on how you want to look at it; I deliberately refrained from spelling out Miranda's perspective. (The main reason why I didn't give Miranda's viewpoint, of course, is that her thoughts and feelings always remained a little mysterious, unknowable, to Franck.)
Posted by Bomb_Nom_Nom_Nom 14 years ago Report
I would love to see a transformation story written by you about a sandwich preferably a PB&J, or even as the slice of bread, instead of eaten right away, I would love to see being put in a lunchbox saved for later. I still loved this story though, there never is enough transformation vore, so I hope you do write more.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Paradox 14 years ago Report
Lucky guy, sad that he only became a small part of her breast >.< well I would prefer the bum anyway. ^^
Liked the story a lot, I actually haven't seen so much stories yet in which the prey gets transformed into food (I mean fruits, etc). So it's something special as well.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you! Glad you liked it. (And he's quite happy where he is, I think. ;))
Posted by DT5459 14 years ago Report
You're a genius. Great story indeed!
one of the best ever read.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 14 years ago Report
Neat story.
I'm not much on the getting-turned-into-food bit, personally, but the story was well-written enough on the whole that I could get over it. You have an excellent way of building anticipation over the course of the story, looking at every facet of the soon-to-be-eaten's experience. I like that.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thanks! I found it interesting to write, looking into Franck's perspective, his feelings and experience, his way of viewing Miranda... Looking back, I think this is one of my favourite among my own stories. Nothing much happens, but there's a genuine -yet unspoken- relationship between eater and eaten.
Posted by Midir 14 years ago Report
A really lovely story. I think, it's the best transformation story i have ever read.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing it, and I'm glad you like it.
Posted by girlfood 13 years ago Report
Outstanding job! I would rather become a part of her butt. Maybe if you wrote another story like this one?
Posted by French_snack 13 years ago Report
Thanks! I rarely write transformation vore stories, for some reason, although it's an idea I really like; my inspiration simply takes me in other directions. If I do write one again, I doubt it'll be any time soon... Although there *is* this one already: http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=174021' target='_blank'>http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=174021 .
As for butt versus breasts... My preference would be to become part of a woman's breast, but I must admit that the prospect of being a conscious part of a woman's bottom is... very appealing too. Maybe one day. :)
Posted by Maurt899 13 years ago Report
aha! finnaly i found it again! i love this story!
Posted by French_snack 13 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!
Posted by Crushermach3 13 years ago Report
That was great! :) And, I hope it doesn't sound like I'm complaining, but I felt it would be a bit better if he would become a part of her <i>as</i> he was going through her digestive tract and would gradually be absorbed throughout all of her, not just a specific part. Realisticly speaking, his nutrients would be spread throughout her entire body instead of only to her left breast. (I always feel a little nervous saying the word 'realistic' when commenting on a work of complete fiction, so if it seems like I'm whining feel free to just ignore me. ^_^;)
Posted by French_snack 13 years ago Report
Yes, I know... Don't worry about it. I'm aware that the nutrients would be spread around; chalk it down simply to preference.
Posted by Luckless 12 years ago Report
Oh my goodness. This is easily my favorite Tf story! Thanks for the very professionally written introduction into a new kinky frontier!
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Why did I not see this comment before? Thank *you*; I'm very glad you enjoyed it! There's not enough transformation vore out there. (Which is partly my fault for hardly ever writing any!)
Posted by RTSgroove 10 years ago Report
this is beyond words cute and amazing
Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report
Thanks very much!
Posted by FrozenTear89 8 years ago Report
Great story! Such an unexpected decision to become her food... Thank you for your amazing work!
Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report
Goodness, this one really takes me back… Six years ago already!
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Transformation vore is all too rare...
Posted by nick222238 8 years ago Report
I'd hate it if I was him lol at some point she would find a lover. I think it would be better if my life faded. well anyway good job.
Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report
Thanks. You wouldn't like to be part of her body when she has a lover? I think I actually would (which is probably rather perverse of me). But if you like, you can imagine that he gradually fades.
Posted by DontTellMyWife 7 years ago Report
I just wanted to say that, although the International Vore Competition series is my favourite, with Forbidden Dish a close second, this is my favourite of all your stories. I cannot think of a better example of transformation vore, even Cosmagic Kitchen on DeviantArt doesn't compare.
I like it because of the gentle, casual and almost innocent relationship between the two characters. I love her underlying domination of him like she instantly knows she can make him say yes and it is his fate to indulge her.
I would love to read another story which includes Miranda if you ever feel like using her again. I assume she still has the magic book?
Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report
Thanks. The combination of dominance and affection was interesting to play with. Yes, I assume she still has it, though I haven't had any further plans for her.
Posted by Satay 5 years ago Report
Wow. That was stunning. Your style in this writing has an appeal which most other authors are lacking. It is so vivid and welcoming to read. The beginning creates an longing for these special days of the past. And you can really feel the bond of the two. Additional to this there is this thrill after his transformation because he can not stop the inevitable even if he wanted to, since he can not communicate. That and the uncertain fate of him afterwards.
So let me applause you. It was marvelous. Too bad it took me so long to stumble upon it.
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Thank you for that kind and perceptive comment! I wanted the dynamic between the characters to seem quite natural to them, due to their closeness and shared understanding - but a little bit thrilling all the same.