Hey everyone! I'm glad to see the positive reaction to my recent FAPP story!
(As seen here)
I had a lot of fun doing the project and I've been considering what to do for my next RPG experiment. I have some questions for everyone who checked out the log. Feel free to answer all of them or just one, any feedback is appreciated!
1. Was it too long-winded? Did the turn-based system bog it down? Would it be worth it to make a version of the story with the RPG mechanics removed and fat trimmed out, like an "abridged" version that could be read like a normal story?
2. What should I do for my next FAPP story?!? Would you like to see another boss fight like with Abigail? Or would a battle with a more ambiguous outcome and multiple possible predators (as in the original FAPP log) be more interesting?
3. Who would you want to see as a future boss fight? I have a few ideas of my own, but I'd love to hear everyone's thoughts! Feel free to recommend from among my characters, one of your own, or someone else's.
4. If I do another boss fight, I've considered making it a YCH sort of thing where people can bid to get their characters put into the adventuring party. How would everyone feel about that? Any advice on how it should be done? I've never done any writing for pay before, and the reason I'm considering it now is that this is the first time I feel reasonably confident I'll be able to deliver a product in a reasonable time frame, based on my experience in writing the Abigail boss fight.
Posted by YesImCanadian 4 years ago Report
1) it depends on what people like when it comes down to it. For me it’s 50/50. Some days I like it others I don’t. As for length, if you wrote a book I would read it.
2) Honestly, I love the way you describe things. Though my favorite is definitely your CV stuff.
3) Boss ideas are non-existent for me unfortunately.
4) I’d love to have a sort of YCH for this thing, as long as you can get the right information about the characters.
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Posted by ThatWeirdo 4 years ago Report
Yeah me too.
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Posted by DB1224 4 years ago Report
1) the length didn't bother me, I even found it pleasant. And the turn based system was interesting.
2) Both idea are good... I personally tend to prefer the boss scenario, but a multi-pred fight is always welcome.
3) For a boss idea...I don't really have anything. Maybe playing on some kind of gimmick, like a rubbery/elastic boss ?
4) As for the YCH, it could be interesting too, but you'll need to anticipate how much information you'll need.
All in all, good luck and keep up the good work.
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Posted by Taren 4 years ago Report
1) For me the RPG elements are part of the appeal so I don't mind and you're one of my fav vore writers I revisit your older stories all the time so personally I enjoy it the way it is.
2) I'd love to see another boss fight story from you especially if it had CV or AV as the main type of vore as the focus.
3)I'd really love it if you made Bruna or Eko the boss if you went that route.
4)I don't really mind YCHs but I'd prefer if you used your characters personally because I really enjoy the banter between them and seeing them interact I just wouldn't have that kind of vested interest in random OCs than with your pre-established characters as for how to go about it I guess bidding makes the most sense if you did a YCH.
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