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An experiment

Posted by marloweny 3 years ago

 

So I tried to make an interactive story. I believe the link below will download it as an html and you can then open it in your browser and try it.

https://drive.google.com/uc?id=1B9U_xSeYeYirGR2juUjipUiTS-NRzVXM&export=download

If you try it and it works, let me know what you think! I might do more of these.
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RoundSquare

Posted by RoundSquare 3 years ago Report

Interesting, I haven't tried every choice but I did a few run throughs. The idea of a multiple choice where the person is the same for each is interesting. The most interesting idea this brought up to me is lying about your gender, so many possibilities for hijinks. I look forward to your next story.

WaterInRain

Posted by WaterInRain 3 years ago Report

Works fine. Better platform than other interactives

Morphy

Posted by Morphy 3 years ago Report

The html wrapper makes the experience quite smooth and responsive. The text is also pleasantly large enough to read without being excessive. Also, thank god for dark mode, heh.

I also got curious and examined the code itself. Oof, so much math. Makes me wonder what else this game engine can do since the story text is maybe 10%, the other 90% is the code base.

This also reminds me of the naughty Choose Your Own Story program I once had way back in my DOS days. I never did figure out how to pull the story text out of the single executable file. Pity. (I wonder if I still have it on one of those 3.25 floppies I used to archive with. Heck, I wonder if the media is still valid after 25 years!)

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 3 years ago Report

That was quite enjoyable!

Pokeman

Posted by Pokeman 3 years ago Report

pretty good, hope you do more!

Evbro22

Posted by Evbro22 3 years ago Report

That was interesting! You should do one with Self-vore! And by that I mean a scenario where we can choose how the protagonist vores themself!

RLord4268

Posted by RLord4268 3 years ago Report

This!

Boonythewolf

Posted by Boonythewolf 3 years ago Report

Worked for me, you need to make a CV interactive story next~

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 3 years ago Report

I like it. But I thought while playing: if you choose for her to pay immediately, and you go with exchange (or cash) payment she never actually receives her product.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 3 years ago Report

If you read carefully, the product vends after she gets sucked up.

hornywing

Posted by hornywing 3 years ago Report

That was fun and is inspiring to me. I assume you used Twine for it?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 3 years ago Report

Yep, that was Twine with default settings.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 3 years ago Report

Nice, that's a fun little scene set.