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  Ryuka's Pit
 
Just so you all know, This is my first ever story. It may take a little while to get into but im still learning ^_^ Please be gentle lol
 
 
It was a warm sunny day in the village of Forestia. The wind swept past the flowery fields, casting pettles into the wind like a cloud of colour rising from the ground. The sound of waves in the distance was a soothing am

Ryuka's pit

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Tyrix

Akela - 11 years ago

Woooooooooooot, worked ^^

Akela - 11 years ago

Uhhh, I don't have the slightest idea why this is blank. o_o' If I post stories, I put them up in RTF files. But if you download the story you get it alright. ^-^
Try re-posting it in RTF format. o:

In the blink of a gulp
Everything was quiet inside the mysterious forests of Anumen. The black nightly sky was still casting it's blinding sheet over the world, and the inhabitants of the forest were still in a deep sleep. The hundreds of stars that filled the sky shone brightly, and the only occasional movements were caused by owls and other nightly creatures. Slowly but surely, dawn was approaching, as the dark colors of night started to turn into a bright violet as the sun started to rise. Br

In the blink of a gulp

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Akela

Akela - 11 years ago

You and I undersstand each other ;o And besides, it's quite filling, too!

Akela - 11 years ago

*tries to memorise it*

Akela - 11 years ago

At least you have less space to be annoying now;p

Akela - 11 years ago

Prove it! *noms*

Akela - 11 years ago

*dodges* Yeah you keep sitting there on your little isolated island with your own currency, your unlogical driving, metrical system, yards and miles and whatnot. The reason we locked you up there is because you're a danger to the rest of the world ya git! :O Vinegar SUCKS! ;P

Akela - 11 years ago

Aye, Europe > the world

Akela - 11 years ago

Punishment must be prepared!

Akela - 11 years ago

.... did you just SLAP me?

Akela - 11 years ago

I do not, I do not ;)

Akela - 11 years ago

Really? By who?

Akela - 11 years ago

Aye, was quite the little try-out, this one. Good everything managed out OK. Next step, let Finn parttake in same size predding. x)

Akela - 11 years ago

Yeah, yeah what you said... *snores*

Needy Krystal

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Slash

Akela - 11 years ago

Hah, sweet pic <3 Krystal

Javnis

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Akela

Akela - 11 years ago

It's evil! Pure evil! o/

Akela - 11 years ago

Thanks. ;>

Akela - 11 years ago

Hmmm, they're still looking for people in Hope's Stand. ;P

Akela - 11 years ago

And crap, but that aside - yeah, spooky ftw! o.O

Page 4

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Strawberry

Akela - 11 years ago

Hurray for two more! o/
This is seriously sweet stuff. ;>

The Map of Navras

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Akela

Akela - 11 years ago

Muhahahahaha

Akela - 11 years ago

... oh well you'll just die of unknown causes then. :P

Akela - 11 years ago

Ergh, at least you can tell it's a map XD

Akela - 11 years ago

That's what they call 'fantasy names' =P

Akela - 11 years ago

I knew you'd be obsessed about that area lol - too bad though. Everyone who sets foot there dies. ^^
The very air and ground are toxic!!

Akela - 11 years ago

Careful! =O
Don't go beyond the borders of the map, the other parts of the world are still.. white!

THE DIAL

By NocturneWolf


The dial on her wristwatch turned slowly as I watched her sit idly at a caf. I took comfort in its reliability, how every tiny movement reassured me that time was still in motion. Unfortunately, I couldn't say the same for the girl, for after watching her for only and hour I could tell that her mind worked in quite the opposite.


Years of prowling the streets taught me how to sense clues to find out more about my targets. From one of her phone calls, I knew her

The Dial

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: NocturneWolf

Akela - 11 years ago

Hmm, I like the description!
There's something catchy about the flow of words which makes it a nice thing to read, as well as the reason as to why the predator decides to act. The whole thing revolves around every day problems, yet a tad different.

It has mutliple levels, this story does. oO
Sweet write. ;>

horse vore

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Sparky_the_chu

Akela - 11 years ago

Great and well done. The tongue-lopping at the end is pure cuteness. ^^

The Light and the Shadow
``Will I ever see you again?''
``I already told you the answer to that, remember?''
``I'm glad I met you, I really am.''
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``Please, you're my only hope. You have to… take them with you.''
``Shando… I… I can't…''
``Please, for me… for…us…our friend…sh ``
``Shando? Shando?! No! NOOOOO!''
That night had been engraved in his memory ever since. A painful memory, one of those you wish you'd never experienced. As much a

The Light and the Shadow

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Akela

Akela - 11 years ago

Haha, you really should - great trilogy.

Akela - 11 years ago

o: !
Someone wants to join Antaka down there, huh? ^^

Akela - 11 years ago

Hah - I thank you, you silly creature. ^^
Glad you liked it, Antaka just HAD to clash with him. ^^ Hope we'll continue to brainstorm our asses off in the future! ;D Haha

Akela - 11 years ago

Haha, that's the softest fight of them all though. ^^

Akela - 11 years ago

The Chateau one and the final fight are my favourites. o/

Akela - 11 years ago

God I love the fighting sequences in that trilogy. ^^

Akela - 11 years ago

Don't mess with Antaka. All the advise I can give you, he's like the Neo of vore. :P

ALL WAYS POWERFUL

By NocturneWolf


The following words are of legend, describing a mystic force beyond our grasp or understanding. The people of my village take these words as truth, following their letters every time they travel the forests. You may choose not to accept them, but be warned: he can make you believe…


You are wind, ever-changing yet constant, as gentle as a breeze or as powerful as a gale. Everywhere I feel your presence, sending shudders and chills through my bod

All Ways Powerful

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: NocturneWolf

Akela - 11 years ago

I...
I'm struck. o.O
I don't know what to say... (that doesn't happen alot)
It's - beautiful.
Amazingly, short and powerful. I never saw this coming, what a wonderful surprise!

I love it, you know I like you, Nocturne. ^^ *nuzzles*
Hope we continue the way we are now, dear friend.

Thanks again,

The White

The Dark Packt
Prologue
Many years ago, in a time when things were harder, when food was scarce and surviving was an act of sheer will, there lived a wolf. His name was Gafris, Gafris the Noble. Within the vast and deep forests of Nevehin, he lived a happy life with his mate and his pack of brown timber wolves. He loved her more than life itself, and she shared his feelings. Together they faced every challenge and spent every day with each other. They were the happiest couple one could think of.

The Dark Packt Prologue

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Akela

Akela - 11 years ago

Just finishing up the first chapter. ;>
I know you are, but pfft. I don't consider myself to be good. :P I just write what I feel like and there are people who may like it, and others who don't. Muha ^^

Akela - 11 years ago

D... ergh - ya got me there.

Akela - 11 years ago

Muha, you do, do you? ^^

Akela - 11 years ago

Muha, wait and see - I'll (try to) amaze you! ;>

Akela - 11 years ago

Rofl, flatterer.

Antaka's Story
It's true not many people know me. Most people I encounter are merely targets and don't live to tell the tale. Only my closest friends, which aren't a lot, know the tale of my life. But should the occasion arise that I need a follower, someone to take my place I will write it down on this scroll. May the one who finds this scroll bear with him or her the secret to my life and living. My story begins on a cold day, in the middle of a blizzard.
The windows ruffled as the cold wind

Antaka, the Shadow

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Akela

Akela - 11 years ago

Rofl ^^

Akela - 11 years ago

Bah, consider yourself lucky

Akela - 11 years ago

Hate that - hair with curls instead of straight hair, bah bah. :/

Akela - 11 years ago

I wake up with a head that looks as if my hair exploded.

Akela - 11 years ago

Oh darn that's extra dangerous lol

Akela - 11 years ago

Someone got a sugar rush. ;P

Akela - 11 years ago

Rawr!

Akela - 11 years ago

Heyz Markie ^^
Thanks, can't reveal too much now can we? ;o