Assimilation - 1 month ago
Appreciate the friendlist shoutouts, MSBlackN. Seriously, your comic is riveting. :)
Assimilation - 1 month ago
If you didn't, I was going to.
Assimilation - 1 month ago
Good to see you around here again!
Assimilation - 1 month ago
I'd love to see her day-to-day struggle with resisting tasty, tasty men.
Assimilation - 2 months ago
I met someone at the dog show / she was holding my left arm
Assimilation - 2 months ago
I saw this when searching tags, went to the 1st in the series, and read through all seven in one sitting, allowing no interruptions.
I don't know the IP these characters come from at all and yet you've written their characterizations so compellingly. I am lucky to find that you're hitting upon all the particulars I love about vore—impulsiveness, rapid digestion, gain, metabolism improvement, descent into cruelty—in addition to having such a great command of storytelling.
Thank you for writing this! I'm looking forward to the next one.
Assimilation - 2 months ago
No, I heard the voice! Stick with it! =)
Assimilation - 3 months ago
This felt *SO MUCH* like a Goosebumps book and it was fucking incredible. Holy shit holy shit I enjoyed every goddamn line from this. I goddamn peaked at, "I think Emily might be evil". This was everything I want out of vore.
Hats off to you two, Kattu and Brazzel.
Assimilation - 3 months ago
Great palette.
Assimilation - 3 months ago
Love the work and all you do. Zelda looks particularly thicc in that fourth panel.
The action lines in the fourth panel, though, combined with the sweat drops from them literally fucking in a volcano, sorta reads like it's raining in that panel. It also obscures her uh... full beauty.
Any chance you got a clean version of that panel (and maybe panel 5 too) still available to upload? (No pressure, and nothing too critical meant by this!)
Assimilation - 3 months ago
Except Zelda wants inside. She was reluctant to leave the belly when they met in her throne room seven years earlier.
Assimilation - 3 months ago
Probably because of a history of being literally preyed upon
Assimilation - 3 months ago
Embrace it; you're in good company
Assimilation - 3 months ago
Nice brush effect for the digital screen
Assimilation - 3 months ago
I thought II-10's BTA gauge system was an interesting hybridization of turn-based and real-time, and the dresscubes were a nifty class system. I know it was pretty widely panned, but in isolation without comparing it to the other Ultimate Odysseys, the only thing super crappy with it was its story.
Assimilation - 3 months ago
Given her attitude, I think she's been chasing the prey high ever since she was first swallowed in the castle when Link visited.
Assimilation - 3 months ago
Incredible. Great expression of attitude in her arms and eyelids.
Assimilation - 3 months ago
Glad to see you're posting around here! Love this mawshot, especially the blue/purple inside.
Assimilation - 4 months ago
Was just thinking of you yesterday! Glad to see you surface alive from the depths of 2020. :)
Assimilation - 4 months ago
Hooray!
Great work. I love the simple style that you draw in. It's very expressive!
Assimilation - 4 months ago
I also like how you use the other characters surrounding Gabi as forces that pull her in different directions. Her parents are supportive of her without reproach, which gives her a foundation to know comfort even when she relents to her hunger. Emily is the darkness that gives her opportunities to exercise that hunger. Lily is the moralizing voice that cuts across her hunger for Gabi's own sake.
That's why bringing the Jill and Samantha storyline in is also nifty. I view them as insights to view what dealing with young Gabi's was somewhat like (in Samantha) and what Gabi could become without morality constantly being reinforced (in Jill).
I particularly loved Gunung because it was the longest view into an unrestrained Gabi—one where she had a favorable excuse ("the villagers *must* not be real, it's a game"), a plot that interfered with Lily's ability to rein her in, and an uncivilized jungle for her to exercise her dominant powers.
Assimilation - 4 months ago
I find it interesting that you and a lot of others replying to you feel this way—it's exactly this reason that makes it such a turn-on to me. Her being a shitty person who tries to always justify it to herself is what makes her so... real.
Assimilation - 4 months ago
Fingers crossed that the interrupted line was "Today's the day. Pick your pokemon, eat your remaining parents, and start your adventure!" ;)
Assimilation - 4 months ago
Looks like a good ending so far! ;)
If you're into digestion, any chance you'd consider a 5/4 where the stomach shrinks down... and our hero is hungry again?
Just an idea; if you're satisfied here, I'm satisfied too. :D
Assimilation - 4 months ago
It's the darkness and perverseness that makes me love the Gabi stories. If we have an alternate ending where Bryant lives, I'd hope it's one where we get to see him also be fucked up.
Maybe he deceives other students to bring them as prey to her. Maybe he keeps them caged waiting obsessively to feed them to Gabi. Maybe he gets pushy about feeding her each day even when she's trying to lose weight, and she starts to resent it, but she ultimately doesn't do anything to stop it because she just loves the food too much.
Just some ideas.
Assimilation - 4 months ago
I *love* hammerspace and this comic and story use it well!
Assimilation - 4 months ago
Her design is great. The blue fabric looks especially great!
Assimilation - 4 months ago
Good job, boots.
Assimilation - 4 months ago
His name is Ricardo because he's the character who gives Gabi a business card. Got it! I'm brilliant. Checkmate, Kattu.
☺
Assimilation - 4 months ago
This series made me instantly choose to watch you as an artist. You convey attitude so well!
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Ah yes, the internet is where I get all my predator advice too
Assimilation - 5 months ago
I love the screams coming in and fading out as the camera passes over the stomach, it was an excellent touch!
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Since Melisa is at the equivalent of University of Alabama, is the coach/team leader pronouncing her last name as buhREEguh-YAYnuh or BARRY-guhLAYnuh?
Assimilation - 5 months ago
This is probably a contender for the best dramatic storytelling in a vore comic, period.
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Oh, this was great. I was sort of wondering how it was going to end once the conversation between Emily and Charlotte turned from awkwardness to relief, and it was a rather welcome surprise that it was just a hefty denouement slice-of-life rather than the usual trope of converting someone to become a predator.
I enjoyed the pacing of this immensely. It feels frankly wholesome, as everyone came out of the story's central conflict better from it.
Well, everyone that matters, I s'pose. ;)
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Take a well-deserved rest, bogbug. We'll keep the koala off your back for the time.
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Because he's wearing the hat.
Assimilation - 5 months ago
It was definitely worth the time from the perspective of the art. Well done!
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Hell yes, brother.
Assimilation - 4 months ago
Just reporting in that it's still got me going strong. This series is incredible and I'm shocked that your output is still this frequent!
u da bess
Assimilation - 5 months ago
jagd, you've always been one of the best storytellers around these parts, and this comic has me rapt. I just want you to know that while the vore aspects of this particular comic doesn't hit upon most of my preferences, the worldbuilding and characterization are so grounded and interesting that I'm absolutely excited to continue to see updates. Great job, you're really knocking it out of the park! :D
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Evil is hot.
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Patience, my friend. The buildup makes the payoff worth it.
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Fat Tits And A Hammerspace Gut is my favorite band
Assimilation - 5 months ago
If it's the threat of vore, and this seems to heavily imply it, the scenario does it for me. Pre-vore ain't non-vore! Great work. :)
Assimilation - 5 months ago
It's so weird seeing realistic character choices in a vore comic!
Assimilation - 5 months ago
Great series, the scenarios in your descriptions were very evocative and rounded out the panels. Excellent work!
Assimilation - 5 months ago
I mean, likely yes, this is what he'd have wanted, considering he signed the form saying so.
Assimilation - 5 months ago
You and your drawing both look great! Your friend and you both have good taste as well. ;)
Assimilation - 6 months ago
Dude, I'm not even that high on the Kinsey scale and I'd totally slam it into that petite, goofy-natured sociopath's booty.
Assimilation - 11 days ago
Link don't stop for crumbs