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End of August (part 7)

Uploaded: 2 years ago

Owner: 13master13

Hagglesmite - 2 years ago

Phenomenally done. You do a great job with describing the characters and the environments in a sub group (weight gain and vore) that is not very common on this site. I can't wait to see where you go from here!

Post vore poolside lounge

Uploaded: 3 years ago

Owner: IGA

Hagglesmite - 3 years ago

I like this one a lot! Though the realistic background doesn't quite fit with the character that you've drawn. I know backgrounds are often a pain, but for your next one perhaps you could trace over a background to make it fit better?

Just a suggestion :)

bw

Uploaded: 4 years ago

Owner: nanaki

Hagglesmite - 4 years ago

Great work! My only real critique is actually his left foot, as it looks a tad awkward. Other than that, this is a good pose!

Linda 007

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: Emi

Hagglesmite - 5 years ago

Fun image! But... is someone else holding the little guy or is her hand all twisted around? It just seems... off? Hard to describe

In The Morning

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: BIGBIG

Hagglesmite - 5 years ago

I love the facial expression that you put on her. Well done!

One Night

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: unknownwolf

Hagglesmite - 6 years ago

Not enough good M/F stuff like this. Well done :)

Milfburger Being Eaten - Color

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: Hellblar

Hagglesmite - 6 years ago

Love this!

Jonathan's Story: Chapter 1

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: Predator

Hagglesmite - 6 years ago

Absolutely superb beginning. I do think it would greatly benefit you to put a bit more environmental detail in around the scenes, as the characters are already quite good, but overall this was a very fun read!

*Moves on to read the next chapter*

Fairy Tail vore Comic 07

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: Natsumemetalsonic

Hagglesmite - 6 years ago

Quite possibly one of my favorite vore comics. Well done!

Serving Her Master

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: Bobo

Hagglesmite - 6 years ago

Awesome story and concept! I likey :)

mom no!!

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: kilaa

Hagglesmite - 7 years ago

Tag's reversed. M/F implies that it's a male eating a female. This should be F/M :)

New Rule: Page 15

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: SkyLark

Hagglesmite - 7 years ago

This comic is fucking hilarious. Keep up the great work! xD

07

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: Mukat

Hagglesmite - 7 years ago

Can't wait to see more of this :) Nicely done!

A Maid's Meal

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: veender

Hagglesmite - 7 years ago

Hehe sorry, didn't mean to preach to the choir :P

Hagglesmite - 7 years ago

Very entertaining :P Just one small critique: when it comes to the dialogue, people always read up down and left right, so when you have an instance where the person on the right is talking first, it makes more sense to put it slightly above the person on the left's dialogue so you read it first.

I read the maid's dialogue first and got a bit mixed up the first time I saw this.

Just a thought :)

Cheers!

Beach Angel (08/12)

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: Angel

Hagglesmite - 7 years ago

Great job on the coloring, however one critique that I have is the strange absence of shadows on the wings. You're very consistent and good with the shadows on the legs and especially the stomach, but the wings almost look flat in comparison. Maybe add in a light shadow layer on the wings to balance it out?

Other than that, great work!

I was lying in
bed, resting my heavy hefty body on top of her. She had trouble
breathing, drowning in a thick sea of squishy lard. Please get off
me, she whimpered. Hearing that made me so excited. A sense of utter
domination surged through my body.  All of those who get
trapped beneath me doesn't get away until I say so.  Hohoho,
what a squirmy little maggot she was. I wonder how it felt being
buried beneath hundred upon hundred pounds of wobbling flesh. The fun
had only beg

A sensual snack

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: Sibon13

Hagglesmite - 7 years ago

Well, start with the new paragraphs first and go from there :P

The easy way to figure out paragraphs: Whenever the perspective changes, or whenever a new person is talking.

If you do that, most of the rest of the story will work much better.

Best of luck!

Hagglesmite - 7 years ago

A very interesting story, but almost impossible to read from the lack of paragraphs.

Add in some paragraphs, fix the grammar and punctuation, and you'll have a little bit of gold here.

Lina's Secret Part 2
F/m, unwilling
 
Jack was grinning widely as he packed his backpack. He filled it with every sex toy he could think of. Any time his girlfriend called him with a tone of voice like that, he knew they were going to have some fun. Once the bag was filled, he hopped on his bike to ride to Lina's house. Even though the ride was a long two miles, he knew that he could handle it. Jack was in nice shape, not muscular but not skinny either. His tanned skin hid most of the mus

Lina's Secret Part 2

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: KiwiKiwi

Hagglesmite - 8 years ago

Not bad for one of your first postings here! Just two things to keep in mind:

a) it's much easier to read a story when you have paragraphs between what the characters are saying, and

b) M/F means that a male is eating a female, rather than what you have here, which is F/M

Other than that, it was a pretty fun read. Keep it up!

Junk food By jackurai

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: brainstorm

Hagglesmite - 8 years ago

Am I the only one who gets stuck after the "what does she do? Eat it?" It won't let me go any further >.>

Lucifer XP

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Mavu-chan

Hagglesmite - 9 years ago

Haha very true, very true.

Hagglesmite - 9 years ago

Yeah... that's kinda how it goes ^^; though i've managed to find a decent group females on the site.

You'd probably get more hits as a female pred also, which I'm sure you've figured out :P though you gotta go with your prefs *shrug*

Hagglesmite - 9 years ago

You know what I mean xP

And yeah, I get it. I was a bit reluctant at first, but as a pred who doesn't mind female or male prey, if you decide to go for it, you'll have a nice wide selection... or at least supposedly, since about 90% of this site is male :P

Just took me by surprise since last I talked with ya you said you'd never do it :3

Hagglesmite - 9 years ago

He kinda looks like you designed in for a hentai xD

Interesting concept... Though I'm a bit intrigued. Last time we spoke I thought you didn't rp? ...eh, it's been a while.

Cool concept, nonetheless!

Amy-Chan in Bondage

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Amy-Chan

Hagglesmite - 9 years ago

I'm guessing you haven't experienced the wonders of shibari yet, hmmm? :P

Love this pic though :D

Syth Headshot

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Mavu-chan

Hagglesmite - 10 years ago

Looks kinda like he's burping up pixie dust, but maybe that's just me xP

Silly Vore Comic

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Jitoru

Hagglesmite - 10 years ago

I have no idea what's going on other than there was an attempted vore rp xP

Very silly though, nice work!

Page 4

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Strawberry

Hagglesmite - 10 years ago

I think you've got the label on this wrong. M/F implies a male werewolf eating a female human, but it's the other way around with this one.

Other than that, enjoyable comic :)

After Battle, Small Snakes, Grassland2

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: KavenBach

Hagglesmite - 10 years ago

I'm half expecting her to do a DBZ-esque blast out of her stomach or vagina or something now xD

Very funny ^^

After Battle, Imps, Grassland2

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: KavenBach

Hagglesmite - 10 years ago

Using an imp's rock-hard penis as a bludgeoning weapon...

Now THAT is a mortal combat finisher! O.o

lol nice work on this. The twist in the body seems a bit off though.

Kitty?

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Mavu-chan

Hagglesmite - 10 years ago

Lol, made yourself a mini celebrity on Eka's, neh? xP

I love male reptilian preds... I think you should do one with a male naga next maybe :3

Ruri 2 pg 2 (Lamia F/M softvore)

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: negi

Hagglesmite - 10 years ago

"retreat, retreat!" lol

I like these ^^ Although the text is a little hard to read at times... Mayb putting these in photoshop and putting in text bubbles or something of that like to make it easier? *shrug*

Pretty funny nonetheless ^^

Mmm... That Looks Tasty

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Mavu-chan

Hagglesmite - 10 years ago

heh, this just reeks awesomeness ^^ Nice one mavu!

Snow white

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: TinCanMan

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

hehe, nice concept here xD

Poor Dopey... hope she has room for dessert in an hour or so after her little thanksgiving :P

Cow Dragon

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Laguna

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Now THAT is something you don't see every day xD

Nice creativity with this one! ^^

Chub

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Laguna

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Lovely :P I love it!

HLB 15: Forethought

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Ragtime

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

This one gave me a great laugh ^^ Thanks for the post!

Ridin' Dirty Page 4

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Dolorcin

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Save a horse, unbirth a cowgirl :D

Catgirl Play Time

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: WHTB

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Nice!

Page 6

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: TinCanMan

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

LOL that guy's expression in the last panel is priceless! That was a classic joke pulled off exceptionally well!

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Wow. Haven't really seen many inu/kag pics out there. Love it!

april brand choclatemilk

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: jimsugomi

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Lmao! That was great! Excellent work!

Pegadygor's Whistle

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Somiad

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

O.O Holy crap! That's amazing!! :D

Troubleincloudland

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Stealth-Bunny

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Hahaha. "she ate disturbingly affectionate bear!" XD Classic!

NightElf Special ability

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Slash

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Love it! :P Love the little faces off to the side as well, hehe.

Comic 01 Paint

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Fidel2323

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Holy crap, mate! That's HOT!! *drools*

oiled, stuffed and ready to cook

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Amy-Chan

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Wow! That is TASTY lookin!! Nice work ^^

bar-b-que time

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: Amy-Chan

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

"Now would you like a breast, leg, or thigh?" "Can I have some ass?" "That works too!" love it mate, keep it up!

Numbuh 3 Meal Censored

Uploaded: 11 years ago

Owner: canime

Hagglesmite - 11 years ago

Edible panties? ^_^ Hehe, i love the picture, regardless :D