JackNoName - 7 days ago
DIE Katze und DER Ritter!
JackNoName - 1 month ago
Still better than brans face!
JK, really well done for sure. One of my favorites instantly.
JackNoName - 1 month ago
Please Big, make a version without Brans ugly face :p
JackNoName - 1 month ago
Fuck yeah, I totally agree with the description.
JackNoName - 1 month ago
Now that'd sure be a sight to see.
JackNoName - 1 month ago
Nice, thanks! I'm guessing that before long, she started to get a bit bored by mere toys and started to experimenting with her sexual partners as well? With all that experience at her age she'd probably be able to fit a prey or 2 in there. Or are those just "toys" for her as well?
;) Just my own fantasy doing its thing.
JackNoName - 1 month ago
Well damn, thats’s one big asshole! And I bet that cock gets used for some nice cock vore on occasion as well... Would love to know a little about her background story.
JackNoName - 1 month ago
I really liked the way you wrote this. Joanne using a porn to show her partner her fetish felt very relatable. Me and my gf did the same during our first year. That excitement of not exactly knowing what to expect from the other is pretty nice to see back in an anal vore fic no less.
I would just suggest going over it one more time to get some awkward sentences out. Especially your use of the word “though” is a bit excessive and could often be left out completely.
Looking forward to the next part and hope you continue giving the dynamic between the characters and the fetish that *believable* twist as it continues, for me, thats really the turn on here. Them trying it for the first time and (awkwardly) failing would seem pretty common. Maybe she’d even need to train her ass for a while to gape so wide...
JackNoName - 1 month ago
Must be your best work yet. Came twice. 9/5.
JackNoName - 2 months ago
Amsterdam is always a good time.
JackNoName - 2 months ago
Nah, I've just had enough experience to enjoy more mature women is all. Only insecure girls really shave everything off, plus the stubble is a bitch for the nose. A nice trimmed pussy or a bush is really the best to go down on, fun to play with too.
JackNoName - 2 months ago
Bald pussies look like kids’. I love me a women with a nice hairy cunt!
JackNoName - 3 months ago
I wonder what the real KP would say if she saw this :3
JackNoName - 3 months ago
Dear god thats a nice fat tail. The things I coukd do with that...
JackNoName - 3 months ago
Ah, so that's the reason you've not put out as many pieces lately. You've been stuck in your GFs ass! Can't blame you.
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Great stuff, the naga's voice was very convincing. Also liked how you could hear her slide from left to right, cool detail!
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Thanks! I too love fatal vore. Safe vore often feels like an easy cop-out, but I wanted to let her son meet a truly destructive and gluttonous stomach and still let his mother, despite her duality, find the will power to make him come out alive. I hope it turned out well.
JackNoName - 4 months ago
If I*d ever continue their story, the duality of her alter ego and herself would probably be a focus point.
Thanks for the compliments ^^
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Possibly, but likely not anytime soon ;)
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Oof, typing on a phone is hell.
JackNoName - 4 months ago
I have ;) check out mupy gallery and you’ll find something you’ll like and I’ve got a. Unch of stories coming up.
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Yknow thats what its all about ;) thanks
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Glad you liked it ^^
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Thats a big statement. Thanks a bunch!
JackNoName - 4 months ago
I get the feeling. Been sitting on it for far too long, but Its difficult to release something when I’m not fully happy with it yet. Thanks for the compliment.
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Every day? :0 Damn, sorry for the wait!
Glad it was worth it.
JackNoName - 4 months ago
It does have a nice open end, doesn’t it? ^^
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Thanks! I don't like it took so long, so I hope it was worth it. ^^
JackNoName - 1 month ago
I'm happy you enjoyed it so much!
I do have other stories within the same universe which you might like, and a few more coming up too. Here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/335845
And even an entire multi-part series with a rather big pred here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/361073
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Thanks a bunch! ^^
JackNoName - 4 months ago
I usually like to mostly leave it up to the readers imagination instead of spelling it all out for them, but sure, a bit more would have sufficed
JackNoName - 4 months ago
A heart of gold, but a tummy that boils ;)
Thanks!
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Sure! I'm re-releasing all stories that got expunged within the next weeks. I'll make that the next one ^^
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Oh everyone loves her, really, she's truly the best teacher.
JackNoName - 4 months ago
Aw damn, did I? Thanks I'll fix it.
JackNoName - 4 months ago
You and me both ;)
JackNoName - 5 months ago
Cant wait ^^
JackNoName - 5 months ago
It came out really well! You planning to add shadows too? That would really make the curves, belly and bulges pop.
A blushing orc sure is cute tho. @[email protected]
JackNoName - 5 months ago
Oh damn, looks like quite the space adventure :0
JackNoName - 5 months ago
Thanks :) what was the loveliest part?
JackNoName - 5 months ago
Thanks a bunch! :D
JackNoName - 5 months ago
Merry christmas!
JackNoName - 5 months ago
Jeebus! That girl in the back, thats my expression to this. :0
JackNoName - 6 months ago
Fantastic! You really keep impressing me. How long did it take to create it?
Also, can we expect some of the ladies of St. Engorgiana to get a fully animated film somewhere in the future? Miss Engorginana herself perhaps?
JackNoName - 6 months ago
Could be an epic darkspuls boss!
JackNoName - 6 months ago
I explained it in a bit more detail on my blog
https://aryion.com/forum/blog/JackNoName/some_thoughts_on_the_matter._b-42661.html
JackNoName - 6 months ago
Sorry, that won't happen.
JackNoName - 6 months ago
I mean, its a reasonable question...
JackNoName - 7 months ago
Your work is amazing. Love your style.
JackNoName - 7 months ago
Oh man, that was real fucking good !
JackNoName - 8 months ago
Thats petty fucking good!
JackNoName - 8 months ago
Thanks! And that is definitely the plan :)
JackNoName - 9 months ago
Bravo, congrats on 30 days of vore and what a finale. Lets make that 356 days of vore :D.
But seriously, I've enjoyed everything you put out the last month, including the comic. It must have been hard work, so thanks.
JackNoName - 9 months ago
Damn, those be some big ol tiddies
JackNoName - 10 months ago
She's pretty casual about it, lol.
JackNoName - 10 months ago
Why'd you imagine anyone would still go to this school? Seems like nobody every leaves the school as a graduate alive :P
JackNoName - 10 months ago
Thats awesome bro. This belongs in a museum
JackNoName - 10 months ago
Guess here
JackNoName - 10 months ago
Thanks, it was a lot of fun to write for sure.
What do you think happens to them?
JackNoName - 10 months ago
That’s fine. Myself though, I think this piece is written much better. I like to see the improvement I made as a writer since the original.
On top of that I try to write something new each time. Different characters, motivations and story. It makes writing something as simple as vore a lot more interesting when you start to explore all the different possibilities instead of doing the same over and over again.
But thanks for the imput, anything I could have done different in your oppinion or was it just a matter of taste?
JackNoName - 10 months ago
Haha, very likely ;)
JackNoName - 10 months ago
Thanks a bunch! What are some of the things you enjoyed?
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Oh man, thats one big booty...
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Love the irony of it all. Great job dude.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
I concur, that's a lot of jelly belly.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Fucking genius.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
This girl looks so damn cute! Really well drawn, your style fits so well at home in vore.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
That gives me some great ideas for a story to write. Leveling and gaining power by vore.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Ahhh, so he keeps "sacrificing" his useless minions to level up that girl? That's damn pretty hot for a vore scenario.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
None of the desctiption makes any sense to me, but the pic is hot af so I really don’t care either.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
I think we clearly have a different perspective on what "making sense" means. :P
Dont think too much about it ;)
JackNoName - 11 months ago
And how does that make sense? :p
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Great piece! Futa moms make no sense but they are freaking hot!
JackNoName - 9 months ago
The 4th {final) chapter is still coming ^^
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Isn't that the thrill of vore though? This fetish is a dangerous game and if you give yourself up willingly, well, you are leaving your life in the hands of your devourer. I guess that's just the appeal of it, not knowing if you'd ever come out again or if you're just going to be a helpless snack...
This doesn't answer anything :P I know. But I am flattered that you care. Usually in vore stories people just want to see the preds stuffed as much as possible, but if I can write it so that you actually care about the prey too, then I think I did my job ^^ Thank you.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Thank you so much ^^ That makes me very happy.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
It has a lot of all of those, doesn't it :P
Anyway, the next and last chapter will focus only on the main event ^^
JackNoName - 6 months ago
That's one hell of a compliment :') THanks!
JackNoName - 11 months ago
There are other motives playing here ;) Its easy to make the wrong decisions when your perspective is skewed.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Yeah I loved how it turned out myself too :) details like those make the world feel a lot more alive. The world is bigger than just the story we are following.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Thanks for breaking it down. The question of why Sandra was there in the first place is a very good one ;) and I will leave it at that.
What I do want to talk about is the reason why things with Aly didn't work out as expected. Life is not made up of numbers, and people arn't made of rules. There is no exact rule book how to deal with people and definitely not Voresses. You just can't truly predict how something goes. This is what I wanted to show with Aly's scene.
This moment was important for Jake's future developments, which would have gone in a different direction if his approach would have worked...
Hope that answers a few of your questions.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
She be like: https://memegenerator.net/img/instances/40554596/uh-uh-girl.jpg that snack be mine.
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Couldn't wish for a better compliment :) Thanks!
JackNoName - 11 months ago
Its next on the chopping block ^^
JackNoName - 1 day ago
It doesn't make her a pred, rather a very responsible woman recycling all that prey-cum that'd else just go to waste!
For the prey it's a rather nice (or horrifying) double dipping.