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Kalia - Hot Spring

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Nobodyman - 3 weeks ago

Thanks! Glad you like it.

I plan to have sketches of Thora and Ashera done as well, but getting an available slot from Aesir takes time.

Nobodyman - 3 weeks ago

LOL, guess I could do that, huh? :P

July 2019 - Request Stream 1

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Nobodyman - 3 weeks ago

Yep. That'd be her :D

Nobodyman - 3 weeks ago

Yep. That'd be here :D

January 2019 - Nobodyman

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Nobodyman - 1 month ago

Okay, I know this is really late, but this is actually my OC Tiama from my story The Five Goddesses, which you can read here.

https://aryion.com/g4/view/361011

Chlora - Sketch

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Nobodyman - 3 months ago

It may take some time, but yes, I do hope to have Aesir draw all of them.

Demi

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Nobodyman - 10 months ago

Thanks! Aesir really did her justice.

FLCL Haruko p2

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Nobodyman - 1 year ago

The word "here" inside a stomach icon. That's...god, that's creative.

Chapter 8






    
Contrary to popular belief, gods are not, strictly speaking, immortal. They are prone to longevity and are exceptionally hard to kill, to be sure, but just like all the things in the universe, they have their time and place and do, eventually, die. Perhaps that was what the Goddess Herra knew, that her time would be coming soon, when she made th

The Five Goddesses: Chapter 08

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Nobodyman - 1 year ago

Hey Elias! Thanks for the review as always! Sorry to hear things aren't going well for you this week. Hope things pick up for you soon.

Anyway, yeah, I agree that Tiama is the most developed of the five goddesses. And that pretty much goes hand-in-hand with the fact that she's the most important goddess, as far as Demi's growth as a character. But I'd like to think the other goddesses at least are well-defined.

As for what happens between Tiama and Kalia, well, yeah, you'll just have to wait and see ;)

Chapter 13


As the rest of the villagers, tightly packed in the Hokage’s office, awoke from their slumber, there was much confusion indeed. Amidst the chaos, Tsunade and the others who were in the know tried to settle them down and explain as much they could. However, they could not allow them to leave just yet as they suspected that Marunomi may be hiding among them in disguise. After carefully examining each of the villagers, they found that this

Naruto - Marunomi's Revenge Ch. 13

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Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Ah, I was wondering if you were going to write a review (not that you're obligated to, of course). Seriously though, sorry to hear what's going on with your sister's ex-boyfriend.

Anyway, yeah, I guess I could have had at least mentioned the villagers that were lost during Marunomi's invasion, but I guess I just forgot about that. Oh well, they're not canon, so who cares? LOL XD

Really though, thank you again so much for taking the time to review and give your thoughts on my story throughout this whole journey. It's really meant a lot to me and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Chapter 12


    
Marunomi rubbed her overstuffed belly in delight as she sensed Hinata slowly climb the stairs, just as her sensei had done before. And, just like her sensei, she would soon join the collection of kunoichi Marunomi had amassed in her stomach. But she would have some fun with her first. This had been a long time coming, after all.


    

Naruto - Marunomi's Revenge Ch. 12

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Nobodyman - 2 years ago

No problem. I hope I didn't come off as defensive, I just wanted to be clear about what I meant. Thanks again!

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

No, I meant I DO have a lot of ideas for monsters they could go up against.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Awesome. Thanks for your review and for sharing your thoughts and ideas.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thanks! Glad to hear things are going better for you and, I have to admit, things are thankfully settling down for me as well.

Anyway, about the herbs. The herbs only purpose was to serve as a chakra conductor. The tags activated the explosion. The human body though is a natural conductor for chakra, so Hinata's body served the purpose of carrying the chakra and then she activated the explosion herself with her own energy.

And yes, I will probably continue my Sailor Moon fanfic at some point as I have a lot more ideas for "Chefs" they could go up against.

And, honestly, it has crossed my mind to commission someone to draw Marunomi. But, like I said, it might be best for everyone to have their own vision of her and, more to the point, I'm just not sure I feel like spending money on that now.

Anyway, glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks again for your reviews!

Chapter 11


    
To better understand their situation and formulate a plan, Hinata and Anko shared everything they knew about their predicament. Anko explained how she had escaped Marunomi’s clutches and that, indeed, she had absorbed Tsunade. In turn, Hinata told Anko about everything they had discovered in the Pebble village and Kurenai’s plan to free everyone from Marunomi’s body.

Naruto - Marunomi's Revenge Ch. 11

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Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thanks for the review as always BlueMarvel.

Have I thought about doing a bio for Marunomi? Eh, not really. I feel like, between this story and the previous one, I've explained everything about her that really needs to be explained. And as for her appearance, honestly, I'm not totally sure what she looks like myself. I'd rather just leave it up to the reader's imagination as for what she looks like.

Chapter 10


    
Inside the Hokage’s office, Marunomi rested comfortably, assured of her victory over the invading ninjas. She reclined in her chair as she basked in the fullness of her enormous belly, which had grown a bit since she had sent out her clones. Inside the massive stomach was the Hokage’s assistant Shizune, still alive, but well on her way to being a nutritious soup for Marunomi’s body to

Naruto - Marunomi's Revenge Ch. 10

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Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Well, if you want another reason, consider this: If they were conscious, they could use jutsu inside her stomach, which could lead to all sorts of problems for Marunomi.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

That's the thing about writing stories. Sometimes you have to go with one idea at the cost of another. Something I've actually had to do a few times while writing this. Anyway, in regard to your questions:

The alternate version of Hinata/Hanabi fight you described is pretty cool. Will I write it? Hmm...maybe, if the mood strikes me.

As far as the clones and what happens to them and the originals in Marunomi's stomach, I'll get more into it in the next chapter.

While I definitely see the appeal of depicting a predator with a squirming meal in its stomach, I just kind of prefer the prey to be unconscious (at least in this context). I feel it adds to their helplessness and loss of faculty.

Thanks for the post!

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thanks for the review as always BlueMarvel. And sorry to hear your having a rough week.

Anyway, yes, I definitely have more story ideas bubbling around in my mind, but which one I write next and when I'll do it I'm not sure. I could go back to my Sailor Moon or Survival of the Fittest story, but I think more likely I'll do an original story. But it all depends on how I feel.

Oh, and thanks again for the watch!

Chapter 9


    
Kurenai was well over halfway to the Hokage’s office. She had managed a steady speed while still being cautious; an effective combination from years of experience both in ninjutsu and living in the Leaf village. Still, she found it a little odd that she had seen no sign of any opposing forces thus far. But that was about to change.


    

Naruto - Marunomi's Revenge Ch. 9

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Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Sorry if the level of detail wasn't to your liking, and I do admit those are some good ideas you mentioned. Generally, I try to keep a nice balance, painting a vivid picture of the vore scene while also not dwelling on it too long.

As for your questions, I believe this was mentioned in my previous Marunomi story, but anyone who is eaten by Marunomi is rendered unconscious. And Marunomi absorbs the chakra of anyone she digests, so the same goes for her clones.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Marunomi is Japanese for "swallow whole". Thanks for the review as always!

Chapter 3


    
The following day, Tsunade arrived as she always did. As far as she was concerned, it was just another typical day in the Leaf Village. Her day would be filled with paperwork, mission assignment, correspondence, and, of course, some training with her protégé. As if on cue, her door opened and in walked the person Tsunade believed to be Sakura.


 

Naruto - Marunomi's Revenge Ch. 3

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Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Interesting idea, but no. To Marunomi, Naruto is just another chakra source.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

It should become clear in the next chapter or two. Sorry, I know that part's a bit weird. I probably should've revised it a bit more.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Well, two of my greatest loves are vore and shonen battle series. So, in a way, it makes that I'd combine the two (hell, I think Japan is largely responsible for igniting my vore fetish). And yes, with that comes the power aspect.

Anyway, glad you're enjoying my work!

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thanks BlueMarvel! You're detailed reviews are always a delight to read. Anyway, to answer your questions:

Yeah, admittedly, I was kinda nervous that that last part with Marunomi's belly expanding could come off as confusing. But, also, I haven't given you guys all the information yet. At this point, I meant for it to invoke intrigue (how did she do that? what/who are these "extra meals" in her body?). So wait and read the next chapter or two and see if it doesn't make more sense in retrospect.

As for the length of this story? Well, it still isn't done yet, but I'd anticipated maybe 12 chapters in total, give or take.

Thanks again!

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

No, she isn't digesting them now. She only absorbed them.

Prologue



    
The mothership of the Gourmet Empire floated ominously towards Earth. Onboard were the royal lineage of the empire and their many servants; not to mention stocks and stocks of food. For centuries, the royal family of the Gourmet Empire and its many subjects had traversed the cosmos partaking of the local cuisine of any planets they came across, including any and all denizens of said plane

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thank you!

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Alright, I think I get the picture. Right now I'm not sure I really have any stories in my mind that I would like to see anyone else write (plus, I'm still writing my own stories), but I'll let you know if I change my mind

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

So how does it work exactly? Do we each just write up a story or does the story we write have to meet some criteria?

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Trade? For what exactly?

Chapter 3
Four Years Ago
“Alright, so all I gotta do is
break that stone apart. Right?” Demi asked.
“As you so bluntly put it,”
said the goddess Minerva, “Your objective is to channel, focus, and
apply your power. Once you have achieved the proper focus, there will
be no defense that you cannot break through.”
“Right, so wail on it as hard as
I can,” Demi replied.
The goddess sighed, correctly
foretelling the fruitless outcome of the exercise.
Immediately, Demi unleashed a
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The Five Goddesses: Chapter 03

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Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Glad you like the story. If you want to read the rest of it, you can find the first drafts of the remaining chapters on the first post of my writing thread at https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=45374

I plan to upload the remaining chapters to my gallery after I revise them. The story will still be mainly the same, but I plan on adding some extra scenes in some chapters.

Princess Gourmet's First Meal

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Nobodyman - 5 years ago

There is a scene in the game where she eats two of the player characters, after which they must journey through and escape from her stomach. Unfortunately, this is a pretty obscure game, so it was never brought over to the States. You can probably a SNES ROM of it, but as far as I know, no English patch exists.

Daeva´s new work 07

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Nobodyman - 6 years ago

Is the kid in this one a boy or a girl?