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Monster Sketch Dump 3

Uploaded: 2 days ago

Owner: JuniperBerry

balanced-guy - 1 day ago

I'd recommend Girl Genius, that comic has some really amazing Steampunk designs.

balanced-guy - 1 day ago

Ah you'd be surprised. I've got a Clockwork Woman, Sexbot, Training Bot and a Robot girl that can plug into almost any device. Mechanical preds are doable, just tricky.

balanced-guy - 1 day ago

It was made out of wood, plaster etc from the house. It was in book 3. I think it's called the Plaster Man and it's pretty horrifying in concept, like going all the way with Monster House, that one horror movie, from years ago. Oh if you want some other cool Monster ideas, check out the film 9.

balanced-guy - 1 day ago

The last one reminds me of the creature guarding the door from the Dark Tower novels. Specifically the one guarding Jake Chambers door.

Necrosaurus Snack Page 8

Uploaded: 5 days ago

Owner: JuniperBerry

balanced-guy - 4 days ago

I'm rooting for CHicory to eventually escape. And take this as a learning experience.

Juniper Sketches

Uploaded: 5 days ago

Owner: JuniperBerry

balanced-guy - 5 days ago

Does she have like a halfway form/Demi-Bat form? Say for like using her bat ears for echolocation or for when she wants to be batty but still have fingers? ^^

A Vampire

Uploaded: 5 days ago

Owner: JuniperBerry

balanced-guy - 5 days ago

I get kind of a cute vampire/goth vibe from her, not the brooding or overly emotionless kind, that's heavily stereotyped. So something to fit that kind of naming convention...

Maybe Heather? Or Victoria/Vicky, Alice, Mellizza, Churi, Fang or Erika. Trying my best to not offer names I've seen used a lot.

balanced-guy - 5 days ago

I like the design, you keep it nice and simple. But visually appealing.

UE-1007 - Sleepy Pred

Uploaded: 9 days ago

Owner: balanced-guy

balanced-guy - 8 days ago

Provided digestion isn't a negative? Then yes.

balanced-guy - 8 days ago

It's a comfy squishy gut =p.

balanced-guy - 8 days ago

Yeah NotNorrin did a great job. ^^

balanced-guy - 8 days ago

Oh she's friendly, she was born and raised inside the Facility. So she's fairly friendly towards the staff, working there.

Salem the witch

Uploaded: 11 days ago

Owner: Twinkle

balanced-guy - 11 days ago

Lovely to see the design fully realised, BlakerOats works fast! I really like all the detail put into her. The little spikes on the Witch hat, prominent canines, purple insides/mouth. And the way her hair looks is just wonderful. Really lovely design and improvement on the classic witch ;3

Hugs gone wrong

Uploaded: 13 days ago

Owner: Twinkle

balanced-guy - 13 days ago

It's even cuter than I first thought possible! OwO

Cobalt - Curiosity of a God 13/15

Uploaded: 13 days ago

Owner: FidchellVore

balanced-guy - 13 days ago

I like Veronica's Robot wing design, heavily reminiscent of Alisa Bosconovitch from the Tekken series.

UE-0350 - Being Wound Up

Uploaded: 2 weeks ago

Owner: balanced-guy

balanced-guy - 2 weeks ago

She enjoys making clock puns. And being a tease.

[Com] Fallout: Guts and Glory Issue 3-13

Uploaded: 3 weeks ago

Owner: SeekGr

balanced-guy - 3 weeks ago

Nothing to apologise for, just looks a bit odd. I only point it out, cause I know you can do better and have done better. =)

balanced-guy - 3 weeks ago

Violet's legs look a bit weird in that last panel.

Chiko Pith Sophie and Durg

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: Shyguy9

balanced-guy - 4 weeks ago

Thanks for the info! I'll download the comics and save the links in February.

balanced-guy - 4 weeks ago

Oh thanks for the info! I'll pick the comics up next month, after February.

balanced-guy - 4 weeks ago

I'd be interested in the comic, but I don't know enough about E-Junkie to be comfortable buying from there. I'm one of those people that once I buy something, I wanna be able to access it again, in case I lose the local data on my own PC etc.

Super Gabi Grows - 3

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: kattu

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

Oh that guy's gonna die.

Tori Ruins the Ruins

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: Hookaloof

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

It is a fun one. Ghosts can't be damaged normally, so they're stuck in there instead.

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

How about the 'Hard Mode' Ruins enemies as well? Gotta clear out those ruins thoroughly after all.

[COMM] Plague Girl

Uploaded: 5 months ago

Owner: MagnificentArsehole

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

Love the design <3

Komu the Robot Snake

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: Skeksi

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

Cute Robot Noodle snek ^_^

Ce'Lia Unbirthing Adventure 11/?

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: Skeksi

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

All up to Skeksi, but hey, the more the merrier =p.

Crotch Chow (External)

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: doomfister

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

Aw man I hate people like that! I'm the kind of person who'll pester you for my thing back for years. And if I don't get it, I make sure everybody knows, so you look like an ass.

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

I think we all learned a lesson here, never loan Bug Zapper anything, she'll inevitably shove it up her cooch and crush it.

new old hair

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: LotsOfMoon

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

I love this hairdo, definitely keep it, it adds just that extra little bit of cuteness and personality to Moon. ^^

internal tour [ych]

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: LotsOfMoon

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

This still available? Could be fun. ^^

Before and After

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: LotsOfMoon

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

Yeah I think it might be better to downsize Moon a little. That weight on the last one seems a bit to much. I'd scale Moon back one or two sizes. Those seem to be that kinda goldilocks zone? You could always go bigger for maybe like post-vore/post-stuffing/binging art. But keep her default size as one of the smaller designs.

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

I think my fave designs are Afterer and Aftererer or 3 and 4.

Severe Compulsive Assimilomania

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: Frakass

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

You probably do. Don't worry, there's probably a support group XD.

You are gonna need a bigger boat!

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: Adrena

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

Nice design, really admire how you got all those blue stripes to look so natural. As well as the white underbelly, great job overall.

Subservience - Pg 6

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: HungrySuccubus

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

To be fair, Anabaa isn't really meant to be a good character. By that I mean morally, not how she's portrayed, HS has portrayed Anabaa consistently as someone who controls others through cruel domination and fear. As was the case of the Succubus Crema in the comic 'Scheming'. And of course their are other souls forced into servitude for Anabaa. Though Crema's also an evil conniving demon, so not much sympathy for her, ending up as the thrall of a more powerful demoness.

UE-0400 - Beginnings of a Swarm

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: balanced-guy

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

She's got an uphill battle there, but who knows? Maybe she'll succeed?

UE-0350 - Post Meal Gut

Uploaded: 1 month ago

Owner: balanced-guy

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

She can be quite a sassy pred, known for cranking out plenty of clock related puns and jabs. ^w^

Deimos's preferences

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: von-de-rush

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

So it's fair to say this is made more for you to vent your frustrations? I mean I can't actually recall a lot of art off the top of my head where potential male prey is just killed and tossed aside. But I avoid snuff in general, so there's also that. I can recall a lot of art featuring male and female prey and preds. Maybe it's like you're just unwittingly noticing it a lot more, cause you're looking for it?

Through the Fourth Web

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: GREGOLE

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

You should pursue this goal. It's never too late to start. It's why I keep my NSFW and SFW art profiles separate. So I can pursue both, when I feel up for it.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Yeah it's pretty obscure, it's not my biggest love. But now n then, I enjoy it, if used well.

Intergalactic Butt

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: FireDrake418

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Her design seems to be significantly improved over your designs from The Big Crunch. Lines look far smoother and more appealing and her proportions are great. I like how you've drawn the galaxies, though my only critique there is the lack of colour they seem to have and how they basically all look like spiral galaxies.

Class-F Legal Spiel

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: balanced-guy

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

She chooses not to speak, but can express herself. Nodding or shaking her head, and visibly expressing herself. I.e, smiling, frowning etc.

balanced-guy - 1 month ago

She eats people, if they take her toys too far away from her. She considers this stealing and will endlessly pursue and consume the one responsible.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

You're just being paranoid. *Eyes the hat jealously OoO.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

*Makes sure to note that, for potential future commissions, with a certain beanie wearing dork.*

Thanks for commenting, I love being able to react/interact with commenters and friends =3. Even if I forget to say hi sometimes, for weeks/months.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Glad you enjoyed, List did a great job bringing the comic to fruition. First time List has actually drawn one of the Clowns, but they pulled it off well. (There are 8 clowns, differentiated only by their colours.)

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

UE-0054: The Toybox, she enjoys seeing others playing with the toys she provides. In this case she is playing with the staff member in her containment unit.

UE-2999 - Encounters Sally

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: balanced-guy

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Then.... Win/WIn for everyone? ^^;

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Probably what willing prey look forward to, the most. Though not always the case with my own UE's, since some of them can have quite tight bellies.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Other preds generally XP.

!!!ASK ME ANYTHING!!!

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: Adrena

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Are you okay with Sketch commissions by you, being Inked in by the commissioner or other artists? Same for colouring and shading?

AIFE Profile/Reference Sheet

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: Thorstone

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

I like the design, but just curious if being from Scotland is going to affect her accent. Like are you going for super-heavy accents? Cause even in places like the Highlands that's rare, they're also more sparsely populated. Like sometimes it's just one or two houses, or some really small villages. (I used to go out on drives in the Scottish countryside/highlands when I was a teen, so I can recall a lot of this stuff.) So the whole monster hunting angle works as there's plenty of room out there for em to hide and breed.

I'd recommend going with a lighter Scottish accent or simply slipping some Scottish lingo into her vocabulary. Such as using Aye and yes/yeah interchangably, eejit instead of idiot, whit or whut instead of what, dun instead of don't, tae instead of to etc. Hope this potentially helps!

Terabyte V. 1.01 3/4

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: Nomipolitan

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Seems to be a defective robot, that must be contained and aggressively studied.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Same here. So much variety in their designs, stories abilities etc.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Also funny to see 049-J was a partial inspiration, a fellow SCP fan I see? ^_^

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

I like the design, mask is reminiscent of a Plague Doctor, though specifically the Plague Doctor from Plague Road.

The view from the hill was a postcard, the kind of splendour that betrays something faked. Suspicion, that treasured virtue of any security officer, tempted Captain Melissa Sapiro to pinch herself just to be sure she hadn’t fallen prey to UE-0200’s dream trappings. How uncanny that she never felt like this while relaxing in one of Facility’s recreational VR chambers; as if the digital landscape could present reality better than the great outdoors in flesh. Still, it was nice to

Protocols

Uploaded: 5 months ago

Owner: Stanku

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

So I relaly like how the story has a nice setup to it, you get a sense of the remoteness of the region the Facility is located, I sorta envision one of those frozen forests in like Canada or Alaska.

The difficulty in locating UE-0490 is well shown, plus the level of danger she poses for anyone coming up against her. I really like Sapiro, she was portrayed well, as was UE-0490. Her simple goal of escape continually hindered by the Facility and bad luck. Overall a wonderful read, I enjoyed this story a lot <3.

Ears out in the open or tucked under the cap? Were the shoes really obligatory? And what on earth was she supposed to do with the tail – let it roam free or stuff it down the trouser leg and pray she wouldn’t stomp on it herself? Clear and distinct as the Facility dressing code was, reading it through had revealed to Kayleigh certain key lacks concerning, how did the official jargon put it now… alternative anthropomorphic biologies?
Sighing to herself in the otherwise empty lo

Unusual Sanitation

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: Stanku

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

This was a fun look into what the staff have to go through, keeping the containment units clean and operational. It helps to show how they can vary in design and appearance, to suit the particular entities contained. But it also shows how the entities within can be dangerous and working around them can be a pain. Your portrayal of UE-1950 was exactly what I envisioned, polite, a bit curt and focused on the task at hand. Kayleigh is adorable, a little in over her head at times, but she's already learning. I forsee her having a good future in the Facility, Kayleigh the cleaner, in tales of sanitation XD.

The portrayals of UE-0903, UE-3050 and 3100 are great, you get a good indication of their personalities, the danger they pose and how they all look. Overall super-happy with this story.

The Greatest Story Never Told

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: VaguenessIncoming

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

So what I enjoy about this story is the protagonist herself, you've got a knack for writing interesting characters. You establish early on, her dislike of physical contact and maintain it as one of her main character traits. You also make her quite stubborn and aggressive in her demeanour, particularly with how she reactsto other staff members. Her interaction with UE-1280 was a good example of all of these, since the entity basically made her experience her worst fears essentially, without malicious intent of course.

The ending's a downer, but it does work for this story. Although I think the next story I commission is going to be a bit more lighthearted. It's not always doom n gloom, working in the Facility. Dr. Flores is certainly a character I'd be happy to use/see again in the setting.

Something I only recently noticed, that needed a small fix is near the end: Level 1-class, which should be Threat Level 1, as she's only a direct threat to singular individuals at a time. I'd also change her Designation to Beta for her willingness to be contained. And I think a creative moniker, maybe one she made herself, like Reluctant Time Jumper? Or the Reluctant Predatory Time Traveller?

Party 19

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: valecity

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

She even has Feline eyes like Killer Queen! It's totally an intentional or unintentional Jojo's reference XP.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

All that's needed is some Jojo's menacing Kanji to complete the final panel XD.

Squishy Remains

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: HipHugger

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Anomalous entity sighted, assemble recovery teams to begin study and capture.

Joking side, nice art of Amber. A lot of partially digested bellies sadly just look like round or oblong orbs. The way she's holding it, gives the gut some nice heft/weight, also emphasising there's still some firmness/mass in there and that it's soft enough that she can deform and shape it, in her hands.

Bloops For Sale. (Not lewd)

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: mirrormind101

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

How many would you need to keep, to keep said Bloops happy or content? Still in the early concept stage, but thinking maybe a dozen?

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Well I would create Bloops specifically for the UE-Facility, rather than use existing ones. I'll credit you for the creation of the species itself. I'm fairly fond of your own take on the species, so I probably wouldn't change too much.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Oh you wouldn't mind Bloops appearing as UE's within the setting? Could be fun to try, not the first time I've incorporated or done my own variation on an existing species.

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

Heh that comic also gave me an idea or two of my own. Nothing major yet, also sad to see why these bloops are in the store, but also good that they'll find a new home. They'd likely just end up in my own UE Facility setting if they were actually for sale XD.

ATTENTION WHORE

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: Adrena

balanced-guy - 2 months ago

I like the way you draw characters, it's a very distinct bodytype that is hard to mistake for someone else's. Having your own very unique and distinct look is brilliant, it'll help you stick in the memory of potential customers and general art fans.

Ooky spooky

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: Twinkle

balanced-guy - 3 months ago

Very nice! Looks great! Ghost Jade is great, I like the glowing effect added to her. ^_^

UE-1031 - Full-Bellied with Cats

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: balanced-guy

balanced-guy - 3 months ago

I do my best, and other artists really bring them to life X3.

balanced-guy - 3 months ago

Thank you, glad you like her. ^_^

That kind of Night

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: JCA

balanced-guy - 3 months ago

Nicely done, I like this height difference more than the larger sizes I've seen you do a lot in the past. Also that cat's internal monologue/thoughts XD.

Unexpected Swift - 7

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: SeekGr

balanced-guy - 3 months ago

Plot twist 2: She expected this might happen, and we're about to get a "You activated my Trap Card' moment XD

Tori Shop RESTOCKED

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: Hookaloof

balanced-guy - 3 months ago

Nah she should be able to keep wearing them, magically stretching to keep fitting her XD

Unexpected Swift - 4

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: SeekGr

balanced-guy - 3 months ago

Quite the roomy home, and the pet is already being passive aggressive, oh dear. Then again the owner was aware of the 'doffoculties' of keeping her, os hopefully she knows what she's doing. She seems so pure n innocent! Hopefully not naive! T_T

Unexpected Swift - 3

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: SeekGr

balanced-guy - 3 months ago

She's very well prepared, methinks she's got some experience in keeping monstergirls?

Unexpected Swift - 2

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: SeekGr

balanced-guy - 3 months ago

Oh that's clever, a bracelet to track them if they escape or are stolen. Love the monochrome, really brings out the shine effects <3