rockysavannah - 3 days ago
Thank you, and you're welcome.
rockysavannah - 3 days ago
As your first story, this is impressive. I especially love your usage of unique onomatopoeia for the belches and how well you integrate them into the dialogue. This series is bafflingly underutilized in vore content, and I'm glad that you are helping to remedy that. I look forward to more content from you.
rockysavannah - 13 days ago
You still got it, man. This sequence is incredible.
rockysavannah - 1 month ago
Mei gobbled down nine boxes of pizza and four bowls of soup(?). She must've been HUNGRY!
rockysavannah - 2 months ago
That musclegut is top-notch.
rockysavannah - 2 months ago
Alright, here's my pitch:
OC Name: Rebecca "Becky" Bacch
Reference: https://www.f-list.net/c/becky%20bacch
Attitude: Semi-willing.
Requirements: Either safe or reformation.
Vore Type: Oral
Scenario: Zelda appears in a bar, her belly swollen with food, and meets Becky, who is pounding down drinks, getting plastered, and belting out burly belches. Zelda gives vent to some gas from the out of the attic as well, which impresses the raunchy eructating redhead, who also wants to know how Zelda can burp like that. With a smirk, the Hyrulian agrees to reveal the secret to her gastrointestinal talent, on the condition that Becky closes her eyes first and only opens them when given the word to. Spurred by a tummy taut with alcohol, Becky agrees, keeping her eyes shut while Zelda feeds. When Becky slides into the Princess's protruding paunch and opens her eyes, she starts to sense something being amiss. However, Zelda then rips a stunner of a belch, the drunk damsel giggling childishly in response and complimenting the predator on her even better bout of gas. Zelda joins in the laughter and contemplates not permanently disposing of her new meal, in order to have fun with the redhead later on.
rockysavannah - 5 months ago
I love the cheek bulges that you use when the characters belch.
rockysavannah - 6 months ago
Underrated pred.
rockysavannah - 8 months ago
I can't see the pictures.
rockysavannah - 8 months ago
What a Godly belch!
rockysavannah - 9 months ago
Holy fuck, Mei looks adorable as as blobby witch. Happy Halloween!
rockysavannah - 9 months ago
Peach using her tummy noises to make her baby self giggle is adorable too.
rockysavannah - 9 months ago
Seeing someone as girly as Peach having a stuffed tummy and belching is cute, especially when she says 'excuse me!'
rockysavannah - 9 months ago
I like how Dexter’s Mom’s name is just question marks.
rockysavannah - 10 months ago
I didn’t expect you to do this.
rockysavannah - 11 months ago
She looks cute when she belches and excuses herself.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
Those belches are so hot.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
I’m happy to provide.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
That IGN reference was perfect.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
That's still much better productivity than what I have. It can take months just for me to get started writing a story.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
I envy your ability to crank out so much content so quickly.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
The ending when Agrippina and Nero bond over their shared burping talent is really cute.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
They all look adorable as mermaids, and I'm glad to see Gina belching again. Leti appears to be rubbing off on her...
The ear-fins on the three of them are a great detail that fits the underwater theme. The same goes for the new hair bow & starfish bra on Leti, and the oyster bra on Gina. I also like that Leti & Gina keep their bracelet & spiked armband respectively from their human forms. Hiro looking puzzled at his sisters is cute, too.
Plus, I see the mermaid version of you in the background. Pretty subtle.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
This is fantastic! Thank you!
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
In that case, Momo for safe vore, Mineta for fatal vore.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
That depends; is this safe vore, or fatal vore?
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
Not being familiar with the Fate series, I rather enjoyed this story.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
Yes it is.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
That face she makes when she belches is fantastic.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
I like the resigned ‘fuck’ Jill gives before getting eaten. It really shows how little she thinks of her pred.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
The hearts in your eyes are a nice touch.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
It’s cute how a tiny pred can let out a big burp.
rockysavannah - 1 year ago
Rose is standing on the right shoulder of Freecia.
rockysavannah - 2 years ago
Fantastic! Your months of work paid off! And the belches were great, too!
rockysavannah - 2 years ago
Fantastic! Your months of work paid off! And the belches were great, too!
rockysavannah - 2 years ago
Both are underrated predators. It should be easy to write Mavis and Ginormica in vore scenarios but vore fics featuring them are few and far between. It's such a sad waste of potential.
rockysavannah - 2 years ago
Great job. I was rooting for Ginormica, but a big-bellied vampire is fun too.
rockysavannah - 2 years ago
Nice belch.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
Android 21 (Good) is even sweeter than the candy that she binges on.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
The saliva being flung from her tongue and lips by the burp is a nice touch.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
So, in imperial units, the male is 5 feet and 10.86614 inches tall and the female is 8 feet and 9.1181 inches tall. OK.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
How tall are they?
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
Nice burp, Daisy!
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
The thumbs up from the prey is hilarious.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
I see 13 plates and 4 pizza boxes. Her appetite is as inhuman as her fire powers, and just as alluring.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
This image is truly on fire. Great job!
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
So she'll have two meals for the price of one? Sweet deal.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
Is she burping?
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
I love her heart-shaped pupils.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
There is a disturbing lack of Mavis vore. So much potential not utilized often. Good to see that you're filling the vacuum.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
Ok
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
You're welcome!
I've already picked Park Ranger/Wilderness Guide as a career, Modern/Urban Fantasy as a setting, and Gregarious, Curious, & Playful as a personality. How did you like the many names that I suggested?
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
Either way, it still looks great.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
And yet, they fit surprisingly well.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
I can see pubic hair over her vagina. That level of detail is both disgusting, and impressive.
rockysavannah - 3 years ago
Mercy looks nice with her hair down.
rockysavannah - 2 days ago
This is even better than the first part. Seeing Mikasa get fatter and burpier with each meal is very arousing. Armin being flustered and Hange being enamored by her belly and belches are nice inclusions. I hope that you keep up the good work.