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Girls rule boys are stool!

Uploaded: 11 days ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 7 days ago

If that was ever a tag it shouldn't have been. It's not in my notes to add either.

"Azula can we call this thing already? This is agonizing" Juri complained loudly.
Azula sneered at her tone and volume everyone within a few dozen feet could hear her and many glanced at them.
"Jennifer told us only one of the brothers was a keeper. You chose the more impulsive one thinking he'd be a better fit for you than the reserved one. We both knew we might end up with a dud tonight" Azula pointed out in a hushed tone.
"Impulsive is one thing but this... WALKING LIBIDO is just... Assump

Digestive Double Date

Uploaded: 13 days ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 11 days ago

Mostly Hivelord's idea. To have them wear collars as a sign of being tied to someone who has some amount of respect/control/affection.

I only extrapolated on it a bit to explore concepts of the the "owner" deciding when their pred could feed and then further exploring levels of collaring. Does it lock? With a key? Or a Combination so the pred really can't get it off even through force? What if it's welded shut? That would make for quite a power exchange. There was more beneath the surface when I paused to consider it. Initially I considered it an afterthought but it made for a thought provoking layer of power exchange in the oral vore realm.

ryanshowseason3 - 13 days ago

Coming up with these lines is one of my favorite parts of this whole gig.

Step nommed

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

Ha yes! The same one. I'm surprised anyone noticed. Same commissioner and the same setting so I figured why not?

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

Ebony just felt way too in the nose. But you're totally right.

Went with Imani for the biblical meanings of "trustworthy" and being entirely counter to that.

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

DEFINITELY not for everyone. Probably a good thing you're uncomfortable with it. That's a good sign!

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

Honestly it's a healthy reaction I don't blame anyone for having.

Overheard

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: Tokaj

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

Well done. Good ending.

Finding a friend's remains

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

A comment got deleted. It was complaining the story had fatal vore in it. When eka deleted it things got messed up.

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

It's 60% of the site. And with this one I would more call it assisted suicide due to the willingness of the people volunteering to die.

But honestly it's like complaining water is wet. The tags are right there if you're trying to avoid fatal.

Girl Next Door Swallows You Whole

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: Sarus

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

Thanks so much for having it made, sharing and making it fav'able!

[SCAT] Post-vore day is gardening day

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: Tasley9

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

Yes to ladies and dumps

"Tanya my daughter where is gender drink?" Anya shouted from the kitchen in her signature thick Russian accent.
"I gave it to Dan already mom!" Tanya called back.
"You have drank yes?" Anya asked Dan who was still looking at the small black bottle on the counter.
Dan offered a hesitant smile as he had definitely not and considered looking into the opaque bottle out of curiosity.
"Drink now and no peek! I watch you swallow!" Anya said.
"Does it really matter if I know or not? I mean I won't get

Widowed at the baby shower

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

Thanks, good to hear!

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

Yup, just the flavor I'm delivering today. Next commission one will be too. Perhaps I'll release one of my other narratives waiting in the wings to counter balance. There's dozens but they don't have manips so they lay dormant.

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

I'm unsure on this point myself. He certainly let's her eat him without resistance. And he never gets to the point of trying to escape himself, just not liking the outcome when delerium hits. It's always her decision for him even if he makes weak attempts to request otherwise, he's leaving it up to her no matter what.


I don't see willingness and reluctance as mutually exclusive. You can be reluctant to do the dishes and still do them willingly without someone forcing you to. I just don't see it as being one or the other necessarily.

I do see willing and unwilling as exclusive though. But unwilling comes with all sorts of associated actions and feelings. Trying to escape or very vocal opposition to the situation, maybe even just mental opposition. He's definitely not unwilling.

There's just a spectrum of willing in my head and reluctance falls into the willing side of things it is just closer to that divide with unwilling.

That's my opinion. I appreciate the criticism though and exploration of the topic.

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

A lot of the time with commissions I'm writing what the person paying me wants to read. In this case I got the sense that a mean spirited attitude towards males was desired and they were satisfied.

I'm just glad to be able to sense the target and hit the mark for the one writing the check here. I could have done better on the tags though to warn of this though admittedly.

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

A lot of the time with commissions I'm writing what the person paying me wants to read. In this case I got the sense that a mean spirited attitude towards males was desired and they were satisfied.

I'm just glad to be able to sense the target and hit the mark for the one writing the check here. I could have done better on the tags though too warn of this though admittedly.

“So how is it going since you made your throuple official?” Ruby asked.
“Well there's never enough room on the bed, it's only queen size after all” Mary said.
“Oh going to buy a new one?” Ruby asked.
“Absolutely not!” Joya responded to which her sister Ruby raised an eyebrow and Mary giggled.
“We routinely solve this issue by having one of us devour another one” Mary explained.
“Which is usually me...” Aki grumbled.
"You ne

El muerte de Ruby

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

Hey thanks a lot. It's the highest praise that you made an account to post that. I'll keep trying to improve, for me the floor is lava and i just can't stop doing new things i hope are interesting to everyone.

Cheers

ryanshowseason3 - 2 months ago

It's kinda like that writing them too. Been with these characters a while. It's like visiting an old haunt and seeing how it's doing.

Skewered

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 3 months ago

Fun fact that part of the story is true, I owe her a week of chastity.

On the Receiving End
By TwrchTwryth
Junior Year
“Are you telling me you’ve never gone all the way through?” Regina DeWeis scoffed.
KC Barnhart shrugged and blushed a little, setting down her coffee. "No, I -- I mean, yeah, I've done it to other people before, but no, no one's ever all the way'd me."
"God, that's the most cis-het guy thing I've ever heard," Regina laughed. KC cocked her head, so Regina explained herself. "How many times have you been with a guy that wants you to

On the Receiving End

Uploaded: 3 months ago

Owner: TwrchTwryth

ryanshowseason3 - 3 months ago

This coming from a black man. Fyi

ryanshowseason3 - 3 months ago

The hair section is good. Curly is always good or just describe the shape of the strands, "springy spirals strands layered with one another in the hundreds atop her head and bounced when she moved"

In general just don't use anything with negative connotation like nappy or matted.

Being her Belly

Uploaded: 4 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 4 months ago

??? I dunno, it was a throw away line. I considered taking out the judeo Christian stuff too and just leaving it at afterlife in the paragraph before that. Really it's just pondering on his part where he is because he'd never come back in this manner before and it felt like nothing else. He doesn't really know what comes after for a fact, just surmising.

Never Have I Ever - 3

Uploaded: 4 months ago

Owner: XiaoRenzhe

ryanshowseason3 - 4 months ago

Great concept for a narrative, just mad I didn't think of it first.

45 Minutes

Uploaded: 6 months ago

Owner: Raggy

ryanshowseason3 - 4 months ago

Ditto on digestion time. Also an epilogue with the friend finding her remains would've been cool. Perhaps a qr code on the condom to find the particular pred who snuffed her. Perhaps the friend is tempted to do the same. Don't mind me just brainstorming here. Could have an entire story really with just a friend finding remains.

The "Fritz"

Uploaded: 5 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 5 months ago

Dammit just sparked an idea. A plot of land with a well on it important to the surrounding community. Inexplicably whenever it starts to go dry a gut slut from a certain family line needs to be cummed into it and it produces again.

Fast forward to the future and science explains why it replenishes the well but determines that they do in fact need this family line of gut sluts. So the practice continues.

ryanshowseason3 - 5 months ago

I like the idea but haven't come up with a good way to tie an anthology story like that together yet. Some day though...

ryanshowseason3 - 5 months ago

Totally agree. This was mostly made for the fritz club concept. Also I limited myself to 3 hours writing 2 hours manipping. I needed a break from a huge commission that's novel length so I let loose on this for short while. If I had the time i would have detailed their trip through club and their respective digestions. Probably from the perspective of Becky reforming and looking for them then only finding the preds they ended up on.

ryanshowseason3 - 5 months ago

Intentionally unfair heh. I have as many good as bad ends to keep any of my readers from knowing how things will turn out in my stories. I like to not have a reputation heh.

ryanshowseason3 - 5 months ago

In this story's world no. The pred has to be present and alive. In another setting yeah could happen.

Barranquilla Bonanza
By TwrchTwrtyh
The city was vibrant, loud, thriving, and thronging even after the parade. Barranquilla boasts the second largest carnival parade in the world, but for many of the residents, it is only the beginning of a night of festivities.
Paola Santa Cruz and Viviana Ruíz were two such revelers. By 1 am, they had already fucked in an alley during the parade, and were at their third party. Young libertines, the alley had been their only encounter with just each othe

Barranquilla Bonanza

Uploaded: 6 months ago

Owner: TwrchTwryth

ryanshowseason3 - 5 months ago

I ended up writing that idea: https://aryion.com/g4/view/692483

ryanshowseason3 - 5 months ago

This gives me an idea for a story where a club is notorious for their broken down, on the fritz reformers. It's all accidental but people show up for the thrill of not knowing if they'll be back in a couple hours, days or bouncing on someone for good. Your line about the reformers being on again sparked it.

STONKS!

Uploaded: 7 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 7 months ago

It's honestly one of my favorite plot devices, adapting very unsexy topics into sexy ones. My wife and I have been discussing another topic to turn into fetish fuel: BDSM HOA

That's piqued my interest as of late.

ryanshowseason3 - 7 months ago

I needed a bunch of female names and the song just started playing in my head so I went with it!

Mosquito Bite Delight (Story)

Uploaded: 8 months ago

Owner: Jamjo

ryanshowseason3 - 7 months ago

I love it.

HISSSSS
POP
Sarah opened her eyes to the fog around her and sucked in a breath. Her toes clenched, finger grasped and body jerked as if she'd been startled awake. Reviving always felt rather abrupt.
“Home sweet home” Sarah said sarcastically.
She was already wondering when she could get herself dead again. The last one was pretty ok, the post disposal interesting but the digestion could've been better. She hoped to find someone else more talkative next time, she would take teasing

Meet the Millers

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 7 months ago

Whenever I'm working with someone else's original characters I prefer to get permission from them about others using them. I'll ask them and I don't expect they'll be disagreeable.

Cost is dependent almost entirely on the length. And I can work within a budget. 1500 words/ $10 USD.

ryanshowseason3 - 7 months ago

Unfortunately not. I think the commissioner wants to go in different directions for their next story actually.

Pokemon sketches 1

Uploaded: 8 months ago

Owner: Lampton

ryanshowseason3 - 7 months ago

Pixel ones are great tbh. Love the concept

29 days of denial

Uploaded: 8 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 8 months ago

Quite boring origins really, met in college. Got stuck together during a snow storm so she shacked up with me for the weekend to wait out the 4 feet of snow. Ended up fooling around quite a bit and showed her my porn folder that weekend. She asked to see it. Once she knew I was into facesitting she was over every weekend lol.

ryanshowseason3 - 8 months ago

Yeah the next update after that adds Carrie who by tutoring her you can get paige off your back because I thought she got to be a bit too much too.

ryanshowseason3 - 8 months ago

It's crossed my mind a collab fell through at one point (my fault) and I've got two other projects on backburner. One a very short form vore game and another that is actually a vore typing game where you have to type fast to avoid being permanently digested. Been busy with commissions though lately.

ryanshowseason3 - 8 months ago

None, I think I googled pawg gif and then picked the first thing that resembled my personal experience.

Pope's Phallic folly

Uploaded: 9 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 9 months ago

Lore wise altered items are not necessarily objects of power so she wouldn't get anything from it. But it's an idea to chew on for the commissioner should they want to do a sequel in the future.

AHEM!
The chatter around the table went silent as the buxom Asian girl at the head of the table stood, her chest bouncing inside a shirt that read “I don't just wipe parties... I flush them too”.
“Before we go any further I think I need to make one thing clear.” Carla said and adjusted her glasses.
“No matter if you're my friend, not my friend or even a fuck buddy when I run D&D it's for keeps.” she said and scanned the faces around her.
“That mea

Carla's Campaign

Uploaded: 10 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 10 months ago

Bianca is a manager calling "Christian" Karen in all reality, these are just her good days.

And for some reason the Karen winning is sort of hot...

ryanshowseason3 - 10 months ago

Depends on who is DM. Carla makes challenging encounters but none are unfair technically. She's just a clever player and DM. Gabby though she'll use whatever technicality she can and rules lawyer to win if she has to. Most DMs wouldn't let some of Gabby's shenanigans go.

Fair DM? Carla. If Gabby could seduce the DM though...

Digestive Ritual (Animated)

Uploaded: 11 months ago

Owner: AbsoluteVL

ryanshowseason3 - 10 months ago

One of the best things I've seen all year

Disposal Proposal

Uploaded: 10 months ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 10 months ago

Yup, the consequences of writing, producing an entire "thing" manips and all in a few hours. I'll reupload with a correction soon.

ryanshowseason3 - 10 months ago

Yup, the consequences of writing, producing an entire "thing" manips and all in a few hours. I'll reupload with a correction soon.

ryanshowseason3 - 10 months ago

Found via searching for Chastity key pictures. The wife has a similar chain and necklace and wanted to imitate that.

https://i.pinimg.com/originals/67/7d/06/677d06b18bdecfa7358f003f38017e72.jpg

Are you there Diane? It's me, Haley

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: SansSeraph

ryanshowseason3 - 11 months ago

That's an interesting format. It worked.

Things got a little weird for my taste but I'd say it's well executed.

Tinder Date

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: GayArtemis

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

It's short, it's basic and it doesn't do anything we haven't seen in vore lit before. But it's also right to the point and gets to the meat real quick. For some reason I like it.

One critique is it could use paragraphs to break it up. It's all one big block of text.

Time Patrol Discipline

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: hamilton4

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

Awesome, my wife loves it too. Totally writing that on her butt in Henna so it lasts a couple weeks <3

GirlGrub App

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=53382

Here it is

A Young Witch's Lesson in Creative Thinking
by Thecheese01
She was doing it. She was actually doing it!
Brilliant, shimmering light reflected off Nissa's eyes, bright white contrasting with deep green. Her vision swam as she forced herself to look directly into her fragile, if blinding creation. The orb of pure, white light hung tenuously in the air, it's edges shifting and wobbling, as if they could give at any moment. They probably would, but it didn't matter. This only needed to last for a se

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

Very good. Would have liked one last section from luci's perspective but hard digesting isn't for all.

I'm also imagining a similar story but with the twist ending that the impossible task was a test to weed out those that would turn to killing as a solution and then are in turn devoured themselves. Or have the souls switch places if the victim would not have sunken to such depravity. Your resolution is pretty nice too though!

The Naga's Game 5

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: glitch0077

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

Looking forward to seeing the rest of this one.

Life in Sizzle: Introduction

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: EllaMiller

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

What is it with Ohio and voraphiles huh?

A Private Showing 1

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: VoraciousArtistry

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

I hate cg stuff most often but this? Excellent. Good opening lines to draw attention in.

Vijounne Mouth Scribble

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: Nope

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

I came here for this comment.

Like Family

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: bettamin

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

I liked it, you've got a knack for this. Just wanted to say that before a tidbit of criticism.

In the beginning you could've used a bit of show and not tell. While explaining how reformation works in this world it's more powerful to use examples. Like mentioning how a friend or family member never came back or how someone even chose not to let some sentient fat go. Maybe a short argument with the twins and bringing up how their cousin didn't come back from their own mother devouring them. It helps set the stage for how real the possibility is that you might not come back.

But otherwise this was easily one of the better stories I've read all month. Top 5.

I could imagine exploring the possibilities of a relationship deteriorating and the reformation stopping, perhaps older siblings drifted apart.

#LastSnapChallenge

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: ryanshowseason3

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

Couple reasons. I'm spending some time developing my patreon game since it's been ignored close to a year.

On top of that recently my wife and I were assaulted by a group of people near our home. We're both a bit shaken, it's hard to focus. It's possible they know where we live and the police haven't been much help. It occupies my head and I haven't been able to stay in the creating mood for long because of it.

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

Maybe not a challenge but been thinking about the #JustGirlThings and doing more with that concept. Turning it into #JustPredThings or #JustPreyThings

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

The text placement sometimes is to hide imperfections in the manip. The problem areas i don't know what to do with. A lot of sound effects cover bridge zones in my manips where I can't seem to make it look right.

Smoke and mirrors.

ryanshowseason3 - 1 year ago

I really should have put this in my manip shorts folder to reflect on that tbh.

Sometimes I like to just do a manip story, some with a tad of plot. Traditionally those have stayed on the manip forum but I've been wanting to give them exposure just like my other work. So they'll be in my gallery through short snippets like this.

I still fully intend on making full length stories with my usual not reliable regularity.

I anticipate them being a bit sparse though as I delve back into my game project again tho.