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And she had been powerless to resist him then -- the masterful movement of his tongue (as he had lapped wetly against her ear), his lips (as he had ran them over the tip of her bashful smile, seeking to steal a kiss) and his throat (whispering naughty, naughty things with softly-smoked syllables) -- powerless to resist the trinity of his devilish charm --

Just as she was now.

For those lips, that tongue, that throat was closing around her in a wet, red confusing...
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DivineDarkEvil - 6 years ago

You're welcome!^^ I do apologize for having been gone for such a lengthy period of time. For awhile there I was without a computer until I saved up enough money for a new one. Once I secured my new laptop however real life stepped in and I just didn't have the time. But now that matters have settled down I'm finally able to start getting back into the swing of things! I'm so glad to be back! I really missed your writings.

I can certainly imagine as to why/how these chapters leave you so exhausted after writing them! It's definitely not easy! And I certainly hear you on needing to be in a particular state of mind in order to turn out chapters such as this...anything else and it will/would turn out different than what you had originally imagined. Been on that end of the stick more times than I would like. XP

Oh I know you designed the slip between the two characters to be intentional and it was absolutely astounding! However what I was getting at was....when it comes to stories that I am able to literally loose myself in...when I loose myself deep enough and my mind enters a different plane you might as well say I endure a reaction that is honestly involuntary but I'm not complaining. I can literally feel every muscle in my own body as I never felt before and as I read I will experience phantom sensations of what the characters are going through physically because mentally I'm so wrapped up in it..it causes a direct effect on my body. Strange but honest. On rare occasions I can become so deeply engraved the sensations I experience are not just phantom but strike me much closer to full force, as if I was going through this myself!

I suppose there is something to be said about having an extremely vivid field of perception no? So far your stories are one of three things I've found thus far in my life capable of pushing me to such an extreme...and I absolutely lavish it!^^

nephilim - 6 years ago

Why thank you (: I had given you up for lost! So glad to see you!

I have to be in a particular mind space when writing "Intimacy." What temporal or spatial form this 'space' takes on, is a mystery to me because the depths to which I go to pen the scenes between Danny and Eva is incredibly draining. I often literally and figuratively walk away from these chapters exhausted.

The idea that you can slip behind either Danny's or Eva's eyes is intentional; this is a merger, an assimilation between two souls that can be viewed from either end of the spectrum and still not be sure just where one begins and the other ends.

Thank you so much for your kind words (:

DivineDarkEvil - 6 years ago

It's been a long time hasn't it? Yes, it certainly has been far too long since I was last able to completely immerse myself into your writings....if anything were ever a drug to me your writings are one of the absolute strongest. There are so many forms of vore and one's own impressions of it out there but this....this is one of the exceedingly few I have discovered thus far capable of matching toe for toe what I view vore as completely.

-chuckles- Have I ever mentioned when reading your works prior I usually find myself literally drooling as the sheer elegance of your descriptions when put into play with my vivid imagination trigger a rather strange sensation. One strong enough that I can easily put myself in either Danny's or Eva's places and feel that rush....

I swear if Danny were to ever meet my creation, Dark...I think the world might explode. O-o; The first time I ever read your stories all I could think of was how the two of them were so alike and yet so different. It's amazing really. I never thought I'd ever come across another character of such a caliber....

This story is absolutely spectacular and I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment!

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

I was listening to Pietro Locatelli L'arte dell violino op.3 no. 12 Il Labirinto Armonico. Perhaps one of the most diabolically complex pieces of music ever composed. Through all the seemingly impossible phrasing of insanely fast quadruple stopping through the whole range of the poor tortured violin being ravaged by the composer's fingers.....I saw your writing as a direct parallel and was moved to write. To tell you my truest feelings of your amazing skill of horror writing.

nephilim - 7 years ago

I am... speechless. My god, thank you. What a beautiful metaphor you have constructed; and so very humbling, too. Thank you, my friend. Thank you. I will need to plagiarize this metaphor in the near future (;

Climax

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His spine arched.

And he was suddenly possessed of the need to do anything -- everything -- at once. He had her, he had her. She was in him, depressing his tongue like a precious dumpling.

He could feel every silken strand of hair (brown, he reminded himself, like the freshly turned earth) every dimple in her skin (pale and beautiful) every toe, every finger, the curve of her spine, the swell of her breasts -- he could feel it all.

Oh...
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nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you (:

kilaa - 7 years ago

Waw hot

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you so much (:
Interesting, then, how vore can be 'beautiful' -- I suppose in a very grotesque, morbidly entrancing way (;

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you so much (:

Dragonic_Wolf - 7 years ago

Good gracious this is so beautiful....

Possession

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Coiled and wanting, he crouched over her like a man possessed. He lowered his head and parted his lips. And with one drag of his tongue across the luscious curves of her body, his entire existence collapsed 

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you (:

PitchBlue89 - 7 years ago

Oh dear god Nephilim, that was so very very ... I don;t even have words I can use to describe that. But it speaks to something very deep inside me.

Very Well done

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

Very nice work with the build-up, all the hot messy licking. I am a crumpled mess on the floor after reading this.

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A man and a woman. And the tight, gasping space between as their universe unravels. With a featureless backdrop, and narrow focus, these events are re-told through their eyes.

One cannot hope to master the art of vore without first becoming warped by it, and he finds that he is desperate for a different form of intimacy. 

nephilim - 7 years ago

I'm in the midst of re-writing this installment because I have since created an even bigger body of work from "Intimacy," which was supposed to initially be a stand-alone series; but so many people clamored to read more about Danny that I continued it into a full-blown drama.

I have the original if you are desperate to read the rest of "Intimacy" to its conclusion (although it is the older version; the series of events and the ending are the same).

Because I don't have a specific timeline for when I'll update *this* version to its conclusion. Since I'm so busy writing the fourth installment to this epic!

Remiya - 7 years ago

Wow. I can completely relate to the opening scene where Eva hears him come home but waits anxiously in bed for hours. Only to approach him, vulnerably, and have him complain about a light bulb. Been there!

Amazing story, can't wait to see how it turns out.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Ordinary-style dialogue? DO you mean the bickering of a couple? lol. Yes; I'd imagine that to be able to understand Danny's motivations -completely- would require one to be as far removed from the human connection as he is. I can scarcely capture it and get it down on paper sometimes; but I do endeavor to present it so that the reader can intuitively understand it; if not on an intellectual level, then certainly on a more base, emotional one.

I am just the scribe that relays what my characters do (:

And, yes, Eva is stunning. If you haven't seen it, this is the official render of her I had done by Darius: http://aryion.com/g4/view/228845

Indighost - 7 years ago

[I read this for the first time today]. Cool to see you do an extended lover's dispute scene, I haven't read ordinary-style dialogue like this before from you. Not bad at all. ...I really like how you described your perception of vore as possession, this is the best explication of it yet that i've seen. ... I am reminded of my own girlfriend-fights, although this one seems much more dramatic, which is appropriate :3 Overall, as a physical man, I enjoyed the physicality in this story compared to others--the woman is quite beautiful as described :) I found it hard to imagine exactly what the man's attitude was, but it was clear he is seeking an evil kind of pleasure, that he was attempting to resist.

Indighost - 7 years ago

[I read this for the first time]. Cool to see you do an extended lover's dispute scene, I haven't read ordinary-style dialogue like this before from you. Not bad at all. ...I really like how you described your perception of vore as possession, this is the best explication of it yet that i've seen. ... I am reminded of my own girlfriend-fights, although this one seems much more dramatic, which is appropriate :3 Overall, as a physical man, I really enjoyed the increased physicality in this story compared to others--the woman is quite beautiful as described :) I found it hard to imagine exactly what the man's attitude was, but it was clear he is seeking an evil kind of pleasure, that he was attempting to resist.