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Eve's Apple

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A sudden, vivid horror spiked through her skull.

She was one heart-beat away from being --
-- pulled into his mouth and… 

nephilim - 6 years ago

If you're really looking for a chill, read both chapters back to back of the same name (;

nephilim - 6 years ago

- Your comment
>> My response

- I'm pretty sure lead's toxic. Other than that side note about lead (since this detail may not matter other than for metaphorical reasons), I was like to Aisha, “You're fucked. That's what.” But that might be just my usual analytic self looking down at Aisha condescendingly (because plot reasons).
>> Lead is toxic, but the implication is that the lead is infinitely more dense and more solid than Aisha's tender cheek. And to be frank, I'm surprised at how many people turned on Aisha so quickly -- in contrast to there still being so many die-hard Danny fans. Aisha didn't have a choice in her betrayal (because, plot reasons and intimidation) whereas he has willfully and consciously made every decision while never being under duress.

- As I said in my last comment, the way Aisha had realized that his attack was so precise (and to further insult her later, how effortless his strike was). Part of it has to do with one of my characters blabbering incessantly about another metaphor involving snake biology and deliberateness, and the other part. I'm pretty sure this indicates that Aisha thought he didn't know this much about anatomy, although I can't exactly say //why// I thought Aisha was surprised.
>> Well, that, and /somehow/ it'd be easier to imagine there wasn't such diabolical thought behind his strategic attack. It's as vicious a wound as it is an insult.

-Given this is from Aisha's horror-infused portion, I somehow found the throat peeling open the more disturbing description than the fact she could see the back of his throat itching for her. Did you intend to use the word “peeling” when describing the opening throat to compare it to skin peeling away graphically from a wound?
>> Yes. That is its intended connotation (which is tied into the metaphor used later on, where the throat is /directly/ compared to a wound)

- Like I said in the earlier [comment], this can throw off the atmosphere. However, that's all right since this segment comes from Daniel's POV
>> It's intentional. Recall that from Aisha's point of view that it's a horrific, horrific act; from Daniel's, he views this as something amusing, humorous even. The juxtaposition is absolutely intentional. I knew I risked breaking the atmosphere with that mental 'aside,' but I also knew that it could also /enhance/ the disturbing quality of the atmosphere because of how.... flippant it is.

You can sense that there's more of a dark humor to Daniel's POV, such as his "pithy" "limmerick" on the brother-lover from the same mother line, oh brother. In addition to his use of "good doctor," and "pet."

In a way, Daniel's POV is a respite for the reader (they can take an almost detached view on the situation, because Danny is more relaxed) but then the reader is immediately plunged back into the horror once we return to Aisha; starting it anew.

- These sentences are both disturbing (given how Daniel found the way the wound marred Aisha's complexion intriguing) and humorous.
>> Exactly. It's humorous to him and not in a bruised ribs from laughing sort of way; rather, it's a source of continual amusement for him. He's "playing" with his food as it were.

- THAT is what he calls nips? O_o Wow. Kinda makes one wonder what he thinks a bite is like.
>> ... I didn't wax long on this because it didn't serve a purpose - BUT, canonically, Danny refers to his assault on Aisha as 'nips' because to call them anything other would be an INSULT. It would detract from the severity of what was done to Nita (in his mind). Nita was BITTEN. Aisha was NIPPED. And how "dare" the good doctor put herself in league with what was done to Nita.

- I notice that these're the only cross-mythological (as in decidedly neither Greek nor Hebraic) metaphors here. May come off as a little jarring since Aisha (so far) is the only character to use such metaphors.
>> It was from Aisha's POV. And it is intentional. She would refer to yogic deities such as Kali. Fenrir was lobbed into that sentence as well, because there is some overlap with Norse and yogic mythology (bestial deities; destroyers of worlds)

- Damn it, I want to know how that conversation proceeded with the way you ended it D:. As for Nita's thoughts, the word “us” is of note here. Is Nita using the word “us” to identify herself with every victim Daniel's had?
>> These two, as usual, are speaking in tongues to one another. The transliteration of their conversation would be "Danny, I know what you did. I'm calling you out on it." "Yeah, I know. But it may or may not have been someone you knew, so deal with it."

Not to worry. Their conversation will be continued. There is simply too much left unsaid between them.

And yes -- good eye! The 'us' was intentional. Nita is identifying herself as one of Daniel's victims. She is - in essence - trying to mentally distance herself from him and re-assign herself as a hapless soul that is subjected to his cruel whim. She is trying to exonerate herself from any of her sins as well.

nephilim - 6 years ago

(; Always glad to provide a chill

nephilim - 6 years ago

Oh yes, so very dark (;

nephilim - 6 years ago

Haha, I wouldn't assign moral implications to your reaction one way /or/ the other. However, the dark humor (whatever could /possibly/ be dredged up from such a situation) /was/ intentional. There /is/ a little bit of 'oh, no my face,' floating around xD

Darius1972 - 6 years ago

Holy Jesusmutherfuckker Nephilim!!!!
My poor beloved Aisha is going to end up inside Danny.
I must say the description of the X-ray, the skeletal ghoul that resides in all of us staring out from under our skin with vacant sockets and a lipless grimace. I know, not your words exactly but this was amazing. Then the re-visitation of the skeleton as a separate entity. Beautiful.
Nephilim. Give me moar!

Littledude - 6 years ago

That's a lot of keywords, not sure I saw them all in there, but you definitely have a talent for making the unseen more graphic than the seen. Definitely a horror piece through and through, telling us just enough to leave more questions. Well done.

Damsel - 6 years ago

Neph you've done it again! Beautiful and terrifying as always.

Grimmore - 6 years ago

Yep. Knew it. She's dead as a doornail. It's to be expected when it comes to you,but her death was quite poetic. Not many get that.

ShadyPixels - 6 years ago

Yep,knew it. Goodbye,Doctor. Nice knowing you. You lived a good life.

Shepherd

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He had delivered precise, crippling blows, separating them from the herd. And wounded, they had fallen. In a tangle of limbs they had crawled, desperate to escape, desperate to live. But knowing, always knowing that he was only a few paces behind, that he need only snap his head around and follow the scent -- the rich, cloying scent -- of their wounds to find them.  

Damsel - 6 years ago

I forgot Danny was the villain and then BAM. Holy shit I have no idea what to say besides bravo!

nephilim - 6 years ago

(; It just gets worse from here.
Thank you!

As for giving you shivers. Me too, me too. I got chills when writing it.

PitchBlue89 - 6 years ago

That was pretty damned cool mate.

That ending is giving me shivers...

Well written mate. Bloody well written

nephilim - 6 years ago

Why, thank you! Yes, this chapter is part of a larger body of work that is -- oh Gosh -- three years old now, called Revelations. It's a very layered, serialized drama with a very intricate narrative. Danny is the (complex, charismatic) villain, and Nita is part of the principle cast. I don't ascribe black and white roles to my characters, because my entire tale is a study in gray morality wherein vore is used as a story element for eroticism, symbolism and horror, so I hesitate to call her the 'good guy.'

So while at first blush Nita could be considered the protagonist... she is truly just part of this complex, moving machine.

BASHKO - 6 years ago

This is lovely writing very well composed!

nephilim - 6 years ago

I think we'll see that play out between him and Lucrezia -- and not the way you're thinking (;

Indighost - 6 years ago

Iiiiiinnteresting :) It's fun to learn more about his inner struggle. I can see what you mean, he' not a straight-up villain, while he can be very cruel, he has some desire to connect with women who can be human to him,to engage with them.

Do you think that it might be possible for him to meet someone who would truly be a 'match' for him? Or will he always have the relationship issue of some women being more obsessed with his dark nephilim side and others too afraid of it?

Indighost - 6 years ago

Iiiiiinnteresting :) It's fun to learn more about his inner struggle. I can see what you mean, he' not a straight-up villain, while he can be very cruel, he has some desire to connect with women who can be human to him,to engage with them.

Do you think that it might be possible for him to meet someone who would truly be a 'match' for him? Or will he always have the relationship issue of some women being more obsessed with his dark nephilim side and others too afraid of it?

The Huntress

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She, a goddess receiving his flesh sacrifice, parting her lips. Her head bent forward, threading him into her mouth. (And how he was the effigy of heathen pleasure; his head sinking back, a low moan issuing from his mouth).  

nephilim - 6 years ago

(; Why thank you.
I love writing scenes for these two because they do all the work for me; I simply sit back and watch the insanity unfold.

I /love/ that Nita had him squawking too LOL.

tangent - 6 years ago

"He wrapped his fingers around her chin and drew her face toward him like it were a delicate puff of dandelion upon a stem. (And like a cruel child would he twist it off with a devilish smile?) 'Listen,' he hissed. 'You want to stalk me? Harass me? Stab me? If you think you're gonna be cute playing role reversal here, then you're gonna own the role and give it the respect it's due.'"

Just

I cannot
This has to be one of my favorites, christ. Too fucking good, Neph. Loving this exchange.

Indighost - 6 years ago

I understand now. Wow, this really brings me back to my 5th grade English class. Or at least, an unusually salacious version of it :)

nephilim - 6 years ago

Pretty much all of it; especially the paragraph where she's on her knees for crying out loud (;

And yes, I think it's cruel to squish a dandelion puff (the heck is it called anyway?!) It's so... soft.. and.. cute.. and fluffy ):

Indighost - 6 years ago

Ok, ok. Here's what I've found:

#1: "she looked down again at the offer of his flesh." the offer = somethign to be tasted. his flesh = penis.

#2: " she pressed her lips to his thumb". Thumb sucking as metaphor for cock sucking?

#3: "Slowly, carefully she lowered her head. His hand had not moved. Again she set her lips against it. " --> the "it" is not 100% certain here, it could be the D. and then he says: "Harder." Perhaps this is the blowjob allegory? :3

#4: "And she nestled into his lap, like a feral cat taking to its perch, and began to brush her lips feather-soft against him. He shivered." The lap is indicated, though still the penis is not specified--it's possible.

Any of these close? :D

I also ended up wondering : Is it really cruel for a child to crush a dandelion puff? It's helping the dandelion reproduce by spreading seeds.

Impostor

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And she feels the injection, the calling. The sudden inexplicable surge of --

"Power," she hisses. "Ohhh yesss. I want this power," she grabs a fistful of the dead woman's hair and the moment is so vivid, so complete, that the corpse re-animates, screaming crying -- and at once it is alive and whole again, flushed with life, flushed with spirit. Please no, it says, becoming a soft, simpering woman. Please, don't eat me.
...
[ Continued ...

NezumiNom - 6 years ago

I'd been wondering what happened to Joanne.

Well.
Um. Seems she's gone a tad over.

But really, I like the emotion you dragged out of her to portray more of her character. I knew she was fierce, but not like this. The way she sadistically mimics(plays?) the predatory role is honestly scary. I can't wait to see more of what you have planned with her!

nephilim - 6 years ago

In Joanne's defense, canonically she is re-enacting the crime in an effort to discover where he could have possibly left transfer evidence -- but this requires that she /behave/ like him; and you can see at one point the spirit carries her away and she becomes *too* immersed in the play-act. This is intentional because they are mirror-image characters; Joanne is his antithesis. Though neither of them can admit it, although on opposite sides of the morality spectrum, they are cut from the same cloth. In which case, the lines of morality have certainly been blurred, because Joanne is an extremist, just as Danny is an extremist.

nephilim - 6 years ago

In Joanne's defense, canonically she is re-enacting the crime in an effort to discover where he could have possibly left transfer evidence -- but this requires that she /behave/ like him; and you can see at one point the spirit carries her away and she becomes *too* immersed in the play-act. This is intentional because they are mirror-image characters; Joanne is his antithesis.

Darius1972 - 6 years ago

Absolutely brilliant my dear Nepphie!!! You have made this macabre, monstrous scene into a twisted event of dark grotesque beauty. And good God, Joanne is one sick mutherfucker. I thought this was Danny going back to defile Julie's corpse.....the gloves though...then it came together. Twisted Joanne reliving Danny's vile act.

Marked - 6 years ago

Well that was different. How wonderfully evocative.

Accomplice

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And yet had she not glimpsed something sinister that evening? Something evil?

As his tongue had lapped wetly up the soles of her feet? His lips serving as some horrific noose as he drew her legs into his mouth?

Both.
At the same time. How could it be? It defied logic. She had only the sensation to guide her through that traumatic experience.

He had expertly held her head down to the floor. She had not been permitted to see...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 6 years ago

(; You haven't seen ANYTHING yet.

Darius1972 - 6 years ago

Well, you already know I like the physical Aisha, dark and exotically beautiful. But now this. Yum, Aisha is absolutely delicious. I can't believe the terrible betrayal of doctor/patient trust that is setting up to be broken. Aisha is one sick woman and me likes that a lot!

nephilim - 7 years ago

I do believe the answer is: Yes

(:

Danny does corrupt those he meets (I see him as Luciferian in character) and is is an extension of corruption, so very astute of you! That's why... don't be alarmed if you find him strangely relatable at times; we all have a little bit of a dark side lurking in us! He's my social commentary on what happens when that side is left unchecked.

And, to date, he's the only character in the series that fully accepts himself for who he is, which is why he embraces his failings/obsessions/impulses with such abandon, and passion. Ironically, this makes him the most sincere out of the lot too !

nephilim - 7 years ago

I suppose, then, that's the great irony here, isn't it? Aisha is clinically curious, of that there's no doubt (and in some ways, it's understandable, I think) and that is one of the very subtle twists I had teased people about (;

Marked - 7 years ago

Aisha comes off as possibly even more twisted than Danny is. Sure, he is manipulating her and corrupting her to some extent, butlets face it, she wants to see what will happen next.

Elysium

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An imperious toss of her head threw her long hair back. Wet, black, glistening, sloe-eyed and petite, she looked like as though she had surfaced from the river of lost souls. The water had lacquered her hair into a midnight shine; darkened her skin to an exotic luster.

And his eyes were drawn to her, moving along the sweep of her collar bones, the curves of her shoulders. They lingered over the dusky nipples that pressed shyly up against the silhouette of her blouse. 

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

I suspect not, but it was utterly beautiful in the literary tapestry woven with your words. Spellbinding.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Was it a dream? (;

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

Gorgeous, just gorgeous. The dream sequence was amazing. My god, you are such an amazing writer. I like where this is leading, Nita being intoxicated and possessed by the wolf, to be perhaps led to her slaughter?

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He looked to her. She looked to him. She dare not breathe. The stillness was fragile like glass.

Surreptitiously, she moved her jeweled sandals closer to herself.

Then, there was no movement. Only the rise and fall of her bosom and the darting dance of his pupils.

And those dark pupils moved. They flicked down, pricking the stillness. Down to look at her feet. His tongue dragged slowly over his lip.

She dare not breathe too hard,...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 7 years ago

I also love the Luciferian effect Danny has on Aisha. She is a wonderful woman; despite her one unseemly flaw, which, ironically holds no bearing on her loveliness, which is refined, and sharpened, by her erudite mind.

I love how Danny can exert enough pressure in her most-vulnerable moments, enough to actually rouse her to incredible responses that are incredibly foreign and alien to herself.

He is a terrible, corruptive influence. And it's fascinating to see him draw out her more primal, base side.

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

I just had a stroke, and placing myself in Danny's spot, enjoyed every second of Aisha's succulent toes.
Aisha is absolutely amazing. I really liked Eva, but Aisha is a spectacular character.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Not only did he show his upper hand, but he deliberately held her face down into the floor so that she had no visual reference point to determine if she was shrunken or not; this is so she /truly/ questions if he has the ability. Sometimes masking the talent (and leaving it to one's imagination) can be just as effective, if not more.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Technically, Aisha's flash-back in this chapter happens simultaneously alongside "Aperitif." You could weave those two scenes together, separate yet combined due to the conflicting points of view.

nephilim - 7 years ago

He caaaaan't >_>!

Release

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And she had been powerless to resist him then -- the masterful movement of his tongue (as he had lapped wetly against her ear), his lips (as he had ran them over the tip of her bashful smile, seeking to steal a kiss) and his throat (whispering naughty, naughty things with softly-smoked syllables) -- powerless to resist the trinity of his devilish charm --

Just as she was now.

For those lips, that tongue, that throat was closing around her in a wet, red confusing...
[ Continued ...

DivineDarkEvil - 6 years ago

You're welcome!^^ I do apologize for having been gone for such a lengthy period of time. For awhile there I was without a computer until I saved up enough money for a new one. Once I secured my new laptop however real life stepped in and I just didn't have the time. But now that matters have settled down I'm finally able to start getting back into the swing of things! I'm so glad to be back! I really missed your writings.

I can certainly imagine as to why/how these chapters leave you so exhausted after writing them! It's definitely not easy! And I certainly hear you on needing to be in a particular state of mind in order to turn out chapters such as this...anything else and it will/would turn out different than what you had originally imagined. Been on that end of the stick more times than I would like. XP

Oh I know you designed the slip between the two characters to be intentional and it was absolutely astounding! However what I was getting at was....when it comes to stories that I am able to literally loose myself in...when I loose myself deep enough and my mind enters a different plane you might as well say I endure a reaction that is honestly involuntary but I'm not complaining. I can literally feel every muscle in my own body as I never felt before and as I read I will experience phantom sensations of what the characters are going through physically because mentally I'm so wrapped up in it..it causes a direct effect on my body. Strange but honest. On rare occasions I can become so deeply engraved the sensations I experience are not just phantom but strike me much closer to full force, as if I was going through this myself!

I suppose there is something to be said about having an extremely vivid field of perception no? So far your stories are one of three things I've found thus far in my life capable of pushing me to such an extreme...and I absolutely lavish it!^^

nephilim - 6 years ago

Why thank you (: I had given you up for lost! So glad to see you!

I have to be in a particular mind space when writing "Intimacy." What temporal or spatial form this 'space' takes on, is a mystery to me because the depths to which I go to pen the scenes between Danny and Eva is incredibly draining. I often literally and figuratively walk away from these chapters exhausted.

The idea that you can slip behind either Danny's or Eva's eyes is intentional; this is a merger, an assimilation between two souls that can be viewed from either end of the spectrum and still not be sure just where one begins and the other ends.

Thank you so much for your kind words (:

DivineDarkEvil - 6 years ago

It's been a long time hasn't it? Yes, it certainly has been far too long since I was last able to completely immerse myself into your writings....if anything were ever a drug to me your writings are one of the absolute strongest. There are so many forms of vore and one's own impressions of it out there but this....this is one of the exceedingly few I have discovered thus far capable of matching toe for toe what I view vore as completely.

-chuckles- Have I ever mentioned when reading your works prior I usually find myself literally drooling as the sheer elegance of your descriptions when put into play with my vivid imagination trigger a rather strange sensation. One strong enough that I can easily put myself in either Danny's or Eva's places and feel that rush....

I swear if Danny were to ever meet my creation, Dark...I think the world might explode. O-o; The first time I ever read your stories all I could think of was how the two of them were so alike and yet so different. It's amazing really. I never thought I'd ever come across another character of such a caliber....

This story is absolutely spectacular and I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment!

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

I was listening to Pietro Locatelli L'arte dell violino op.3 no. 12 Il Labirinto Armonico. Perhaps one of the most diabolically complex pieces of music ever composed. Through all the seemingly impossible phrasing of insanely fast quadruple stopping through the whole range of the poor tortured violin being ravaged by the composer's fingers.....I saw your writing as a direct parallel and was moved to write. To tell you my truest feelings of your amazing skill of horror writing.

nephilim - 7 years ago

I am... speechless. My god, thank you. What a beautiful metaphor you have constructed; and so very humbling, too. Thank you, my friend. Thank you. I will need to plagiarize this metaphor in the near future (;

Aperitif

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He wouldn't even need to chew.

A tangle of sweat-slicked arms, legs, and breasts would slide down his throat as heavenly as a dream.

And it would be an endless procession of soft skin, feathery hair; one would have barely entered the hot pit of his stomach when he'd already be quick at work on another, sending her down his open, aching throat. 

nephilim - 7 years ago

XD LOL Yup. Pretty much!

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

Another exquisitely crafted piece as fine as all the culinary finery presented within. I did laugh out loud at one particular line
"It's food Vittesh, not a unicorn." I can picture the scene, with worldly and sophisticated Vittesh, proud of his wonderful accomplishment and Danny brashly announcing this line, perhaps with his mouth full of food. Excellent. I had a hearty laugh at this.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Also: you can cut the irony with a knife (; Turns out our lovely psychiatrist is in need of counseling, wouldn't you say? And it's a wonder what sexual perversions can do; if it weren't for Vittesh's obsession with his sister, Danny would have NEVER found Aisha. What a tangled web we weave (;

nephilim - 7 years ago

The best twists aren't the ones you didn't see coming; they're the ones that make perfect sense in hindsight (;

And, yes, that conversation between Danny and Vittesh was intriguing wasn't it? I'll leave it up to the reader as to how they will interpret that. What, if any, possibilities could branch off from that...

Chameleonette - 7 years ago

AHHHH, WHAT A TWIST.

No, seriously. I definitely did not see [i]that[/i] coming. And I enjoyed this installment, with getting a little more info on what happened before Danny found Aisha. And the cooking and food wordplay between Vittesh and Danny (their interaction as a whole, really) was interesting.

As always, your writing is a pleasure to read. I'm envious of your vocabulary. Hahaha.

Sunset

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Her breath burned in her throat. But still she ran.

Each heel strike was loud, discordant; it was a slamming -- a banging in her ears -- that echoed inside her head. It was deafening, especially in counter-point to the procession of swift, fleet sounds that were suddenly, terrifyingly coming --

From behind.

Clop clop clop.

The sound of pursuing footfall.

He's chasing me.
 

nephilim - 7 years ago

Aw, thank you!

Yes, I knew going into this that Sunset would be a critical, pivotal moment in this story, so it was penned with the utmost care. (I can't tell you how many times I re-wrote the last scene, including the longest legitimate - !!! - run-on sentence ever known to man kind).

There is a lot planned, not in terms of action, but psychological interplay between Danny and Nita; a lot of interesting developments for sure.

And I blush that you find my characters to be real (: I strive very hard to make them believable. Thank you again !

Rln101Valion - 7 years ago

Wow. I've been following your work for a while, but I have to say that this piece is one of my favourites. Your descriptive talents, the intensity of the plot and the characters' emotions, and the effort that goes into bringing every character to life... they just seem so... real. Your writing is amazing. And it takes serious skill to leave so much up to interpretation without leaving the readers thinking 'What just happened?!' :p Awesome.

Chameleonette - 7 years ago

...Wow, I never realized that throughout the whole thing! It was so easy just to assume that it was him, since like you said, it was entirely from Nita's POV. Bravo. Very well executed.

Chameleonette - 7 years ago

Haha, yes, that's the most difficult part. You've splashed the canvas, and now there's too many different things to see in it! (But hey, that's certainly the mark of a good writer.)

You're phenomenal at you subtleties and imagery, without a doubt. I really enjoy that about your writing. It's not just a flow of words--we become engaged with the story and characters through every nuance like that.

Gosh... now you really have me wondering about that, too. I originally thought it to be her guilt at trying to hide their prior meet-up from Nita, but... it could be so much more than that. I'm really curious about that now.

I'm glad to know I'm not alone in the shipping, at least! (I still feel like I should apologize to Nita for it. Ahahaha. But I just can't help myself!)

PitchBlue89 - 7 years ago

Lovely Nephi, Now I am going to have to wonder what happens next ...

nephilim - 6 years ago

Too right. (Is there such a thing?)
And, yes, the story gets eviler (;

Indighost - 6 years ago

I wonder how right Aisha was in all her pronouncements :)

Indighost - 6 years ago

Very evil story here, great devouring scene, love it!

"...it's the singular defining act that serves no other purpose than to reduce a living, breathing person to a collection of moving parts. To claim the right to their body."
I've never seen a better or more unifying description of what all evil predators love about devouring others :)

" He would not disrespect her womanhood." Interesting thought from our woman-destroying villain Danny. :)

"eating someone you love is a violent metaphor for the dysfunctional practice of human connectedness"
I love this line! This speaks so much about what I love about our whole perverse concept of eating one another because -- it's intimacy, it's bodily penetration.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you (: Yeah; I like to flirt with hard vore (;

Neraciro - 7 years ago

It's a bit harder than I normally go in for, but there's no denying the quality behind the writing. Good job! :3

nephilim - 6 years ago

I liken this chapter and the next to a one-two punch. Aisha absolutely boxes him into a corner and delivers a TKO in the next chapter. You will love it (;

Indighost - 6 years ago

I like how your ladies keep Danny on his toes : ) They are never so waifish as to swoon immediately, they always manage to strike a nerve.

The idea of Danny having multiple versions of himself is very interesting...especially interesting is that he was attracted to a woman's mind first, before even mentioning her body. Unusual.

...Reading this, it's interesting to wonder where he is mocking the whole idea of therapy, and where he is revealing the truth.

Nice ending too :) You've got a very nice talent for tension in your stories.

Grimmore - 7 years ago

Welp...the good doctor is dead.

Silver Spoon

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"Tell me, what's it like." She smiled wickedly at him, her deep red lips parting. "Sadly, I can only imagine," she whispered."It must be so utterly intoxicating. So enervating to take a living, breathing person," she kissed the hollow of his throat, "Inside of you." He groaned. His Adam's apple rippled sensuously under her lips as he swallowed. A dark shiver went through her. 

nephilim - 7 years ago

Hello newcomer! Why thank you! Ah, one day... maybe one day I will try to make this into a mainstream novel (: If Thomas Harris could, then I might be able to introduce the vore concept to the masses (;

DerPyRedCarrot - 7 years ago

This should be a novel. Keep up the amazing work!!!

nephilim - 6 years ago

(; I knew you would enjoy

Indighost - 6 years ago

This story is extremely sexy! Even the very sublte gestures were getting rises out of me all along! :)

"She felt a sudden, burning need to have more of her inside of him. It was always so exotic, so delightfully suffocating. His body could smother her."

I love this line because it is so essentially erotic, such an elemental statement of the allure of devourment that all of us vore fans here can agree with :)

...i love the line where the two characters collapse in an explosion of buttons and belts XD


Love the story. Incredibly sexy :)

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

Holy f*@&ing sh!t, that lovemaking scene was incredible. Lucrezia wanting to be in him, melting into him or swallowed by him....superbly written.

Climax

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His spine arched.

And he was suddenly possessed of the need to do anything -- everything -- at once. He had her, he had her. She was in him, depressing his tongue like a precious dumpling.

He could feel every silken strand of hair (brown, he reminded himself, like the freshly turned earth) every dimple in her skin (pale and beautiful) every toe, every finger, the curve of her spine, the swell of her breasts -- he could feel it all.

Oh...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you (:

kilaa - 7 years ago

Waw hot

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you so much (:
Interesting, then, how vore can be 'beautiful' -- I suppose in a very grotesque, morbidly entrancing way (;

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you so much (:

Dragonic_Wolf - 7 years ago

Good gracious this is so beautiful....

Sweet Kisses

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Her heart started pounding in her chest, her lips parted -

A hand slid over her mouth.

There was a sudden ripple of heat by her ear. "Shhh."

She froze. The voice was decidedly masculine.

And the owner of the voice was standing behind her, his hand draped across her lips.

Armed by an animal instinct, she bit down.
 

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

This idea is amazing. I have always felt a special connection with the mouth. The act of kissing someone puts in intimate proximity the brain and mind of each person while bathing tongue and lips in the others saliva. There is nothing closer two people can encounter. The other person's essence, their mind, is mere centimeters away. What a connection. To see the excision of the soul through these means is simply a malevolent extension of this act. Delicious and evil. I love it.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Ah, yes, the moment of infamy. What -ever- happened to that poor corpse two weeks ago? Now we know. He devoured her soul. I've always been intrigued by soul vore happening through a kiss -- something very natural about it happening by those means. Life and sustenance comes and go through the mouth, so to be able to excise the soul through that same portal simply tickles me.

I also want to take this moment to say I really, really adore Vittesh. And he wouldnt leave my head for WEEKS.

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

OMG Nephilim. That murderous kiss Danny inflicted on Julie was so beautifully written. I read through this, completely entranced by the beauty of your writing, even for something as raw and terrible as the act you conveyed.
I am speechless again.....

Hybristophilia

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"She spends all day grinding little wimpy men under her strappy red shoes. And she's disgusted by how weak they all are. She hates weakness, unless she's the one bein' made weak. She loves pain -- inflicting it -- but she likes it more when she's on the receiving end. And she hates men. It's all a toxic combination..."  

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

You are most welcome my friend.

R_U_Snacksize - 7 years ago

Your description of characters, their interactions and personal thoughts are up and above most others. I wish I was half as skilled as you.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you for that (:

nephilim - 7 years ago

This means an awful lot to me. I endeavor to create richly vibrant and realistic pieces (the realism juxtaposed by the surrealism of the horror-fantasy elements) that are entrenched in verisimilitude.

I am very glad I was able to transport you to that room. As that was my intent (;

Danny and Joanne arguably have their own chemistry as well. They play off of one another fantastically; and this allows me to play with the subtleties of human interaction, and create nuanced dialogue.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Ahh, one can only dream.]~ That is /quite/ a compliment, truly. The New York Times is /not/ a friendly venue for writers nor thespians; it is often said that a poor review from the NYT is the 'kiss of death.' However, a favorable review is incredibly powerful and many authors have floated on them to the high echelons of success.

The Grime

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It had been a gruesome sight. To see his esophagus smile wetly at her, and the ridge of flesh -- his massive tongue -- push her into the gaping hole in his throat. Even now it was so vivid, so wicked. Her pain was so real, so acute, that the memory had to, had to be just as real. Why couldn't she get her to see?
 

TheGuyWhoKnows - 7 years ago

The gang member's slang... it was beautiful. I want everyone to talk like that.

Silliness aside... mmm. Very, very intriguing. The concept of Danny's childhood is at once disturbing and fascinating - I imagine he was a problem child all the way through - and of course, there's the notion of family, which only gives you more to play with. So much potential...

But red alert now to Aisha: get out while you can. Newly appearing female characters often have the lifespan of red-shirts in these dark times...

Grimmore - 7 years ago

Oh gosh. I can feel the fear and suspense rising like the stink from a corpse. Pun intended.

As I've said before,you've got a way with the words. You almost make me want to delve into the darker, fatal parts of vore. Alas,my conscious will never allow me to do so.

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

Another beautifully written piece. Excellent interplay between Nita and Aisha. This sounds very realistic and believable.
As well Nita and Joanne, very nice interplay here.

Prologue: Bread Crumbs

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Living behind a framework of lies, a traumatized vore-survivor tries to stack the deck in her favor as she works in secret to bring her assailant to justice.

But she risks endangering her life, her sanity -- and the lives of those around her -- for she is the living evidence of his crimes.

And the world is his playground.
 

nephilim - 7 years ago

Speaking of trauma and its effects -- I honestly can't think of another story on the portal that explores the effects of phagophobia; it was just too deliciously ironic to ignore

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you Zeus (:

You are always so kind with your compliments!

As for more dark and intimate scenes? You have NO idea... I have so many dark twists planned. You have no idea (;

TheGuyWhoKnows - 7 years ago

And here we go again. Once more, on a scale grander and more dramatic yet with more potential for dark, intimate scenes than ever before. The saga continues.

Have I ever told you how excellently you write? Because I think I'm about to do it again...

As for the fascinating study of the effects of long-term trauma... well, I'm reading over those parts with a more discerning eye now. It's deeply intriguing.

Well, if Nephilim's stories be the food of Danny, or at least just provide him with such tasty, tormented morsels... write on.

nephilim - 7 years ago

I am just -tickled- that you were inspired enough to comment on my writing! Thank you for taking the time to announce your presence, and give me a 'hello' (:

I don't think I've seen you around before, which is most excellent, because I always wonder just -who-exactly is reading my stuff -- that lurks from the background -- and what they think.

Yes, please, I would like some more in-depth comments; I would be flattered!

Aerys - 7 years ago

Oh, wonderful work! I can't wait to see more!

If you want I can give you some more in-depth comments. (:

nephilim - 7 years ago

*Cackles* So I'm confident you see this, I'll copy and paste a portion of my response to Darius, here:

Too often we are introduced to detectives in writing, and yet we are left wondering exactly -why- they were bestowed with such a lofty title. (As Marked points out so proficiently below).

I wanted to demonstrate with Cat and Mouse and En Passant, that Borelli is crafty, and all kinds of brilliant, and that she's -dangerous- too. She just -barely- walks this tight-rope of moral and amoral. She's also a little unstable as well, marching to the beat of her own drum; but this is a product of being a pawn of the legal system, and how she so-desperately wishes she could operate outside of it. Not for power, though; no, but for justice. (One of the reasons why Borelli and Nita get along so very well).

Oh, and that Danny is really, really, really hard to kill (;
And, to demonstrate how OTHER he is to Joanne, by having him utterly topple her belief system, by dodging a point-blank gunshot. Seeing the evidence that he ate Nita is one thing, but having him do something that Joanne can **understand** (dodge the bullet) THAT, is what will put her under Nita's banner, and force her to realize that he's really, really, really hard to kill.

(And Joanne won't waste her time devising ways to kill him... at least, with more traditional methods (; )

Borelli thirsts for justice just as much as Nita, but different flavors of it, I suppose. Nita wants justice due to some misguided belief in her dogma; and Joanne wants it for fairness and equity. But they are very complimentary characters and a good couple, too, I think.

Ah yes, vore-survivor. I guilty pleasure of mine. (Copy and pasted again).

I love exploring abortive-vore attempts and vore-survival, which is why I was so painstaking with Nita's state of being and appearance. I wanted to set the stage so to speak, because this is quite an obstacle she will have to surpass as she heals. She was EATEN, and SURVIVED. This is what I like to call "kind of a big deal." So we'll see how this affects her mental, physical, emotional and spiritual health (; Should be fun!

(And I have a funny feeling Danny is going to be lurking... )


**The idea of her testifying is both ridiculous and amazing; it reminds me very much of the situation women can find themselves in after rape**
LOL, I know isn't it? It's totally ridiculous and amazing. I can't wait to write the court room drama that will undoubtedly unfold.

And, wow! You're the first to pick up on the allegory! Yes. It is quite like a long-running metaphor to rape. Well done sir (:



nephilim - 7 years ago

Borelli -is- indeed a crafty mutha. LOL. Too often we are introduced to detectives in writing, and yet we are left wondering exactly -why- they were bestowed with such a lofty title. (As Marked points out so proficiently below).

I wanted to demonstrate with Cat and Mouse and En Passant, that Borelli is crafty, and all kinds of brilliant, and that she's -dangerous- too. She just -barely- walks this tight-rope of moral and amoral. She's also a little unstable as well, marching to the beat of her own drum; but this is a product of being a pawn of the legal system, and how she so-desperately wishes she could operate outside of it. Not for power, though; no, but for justice. (One of the reasons why Borelli and Nita get along so very well).

I love exploring abortive-vore attempts and vore-survival, which is why I was so painstaking with Nita's state of being and appearance. I wanted to set the stage so to speak, because this is quite an obstacle she will have to surpass as she heals. She was EATEN, and SURVIVED. This is what I like to call "kind of a big deal." So we'll see how this affects her mental, physical, emotional and spiritual health (; Should be fun!

And what I have planned... that should be good too >:)

Marked - 7 years ago

Re: Cat and Mouse/En Passant

And the plot thickens. You, you had me fooled good, thinking our Danny had bit the bullet, my jaw hit the floor and I couldn't wait to see what would happen next. The back and forth between the cop and killer was exceptional, fully deserving of these titles; which lesser writers seem to ham-fistedly bestow upon more trite plots with some regularity. All I can say is this is amazing work!

The idea of a vore-survivor was quite interesting to get into, and I'm very glad you took on something like this. The idea of her testifying is both ridiculous and amazing; it reminds me very much of the situation women can find themselves in after rape, and as much as I enjoy Danny's character, I would love to see how his guilt will come back to bite him.

Thanks as always for such amazing writing!

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

Nepphie,
This was a great way to explain all the craziness that ensued with Danny/Nita/Borelli, and to close out glass curtain. That Borelli is a crafty mutherfucker isn't she. Unfortunately not crafty enough to hold a Nephilim.
The hospital scene with Nita is fabulous. I can see, hear and smell everything you have written. I can see Nita, gaunt and drawn, like a husk of a once strong vibrant woman. The angry wound on her side, raw and purulent. A terrifying reminder of her time inside Danny and a mark she will carry with her to the grave.
The glimpses of Nita's time inside Danny's throat and stomach. Her battle and loss as she is swallowed and nearly destroyed in his gastric sac.
This is a great ending with the dread of Danny on the loose and Nita's impending struggle to stay alive and out of Danny's stomach.
Fabulous writing again my dear friend.
I can't help but think of poor little Isadora. For me that was the climax of Glass Curtain as she melted inside Danny.
So, what now?
Keep me posted.
Darius

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He had felt her, certainly. As he did so now. As he did with every second it took to slurp her inside, and snag her between his teeth.

But he realized, his eyes flying open, head jerking back in astonishment -

Something was wrong.

 

nephilim - 7 years ago

BWAHAHA. Thank you so much. It means an awful lot knowing I got your approval (; I'm also touched - and humbled - that you have been following my work as long as you have been.

Thank you again Zeus ~

TheGuyWhoKnows - 7 years ago

Jesus Christ. That was... ghgnbhjbhj.

(ghgnbhjbhj: adjective, used to express awe so great that only hitting the keyboard several time's with one's forehead will suffice.)

The tension, the power and sensuality, the red-hot action... god, this climax is one of the best I've ever seen.

Just... write. STOP READING THIS COMMENT and write the epilogue. Write now, right now.

*appaluds*

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you ~

nephilim - 7 years ago

I thought of you, only because you reallly like dominant women. And Borelli is a power house (; Thought you may like it.

Indighost - 7 years ago

Since you asked so nicely, I read this chapter. It was up to your usual quality :) Aside from preferences, there's no too much to say here. Reading your work though, which, if anything, you clearly wrote straight from your own heart's desires, really makes me itch to get back into some delicious vore writing of my own! (Alas, real life etc.)

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you (:

Yes; I love writing their scenes. I feel vested by the power of their chemistry and dynamic, and it just.. .shapes my writing. I cannot help but be swept away by them.

Trust me when I say this isn't over. Yet.

And how correct you are; Danny threatening his own destruction if he does not relent. This has always been the principle backbone of their relationship.

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

I have just sat here motionless and speechless for several minutes since finishing Mr. Mistoffelees. Incredible, breathtaking, mindblowing. Your verse moves along at a breakneck pace, two ancient mortal enemies locked in an ancient battle of predator and prey. Nita is very powerfully written, fighting for her life under Danny's unbending will to destroy her, to consume her.
This is a fantastic battle of will. Danny mentally and physically brutalizing his smaller but very tenacious prey. The bite he takes out of her side to physically and mentally crush her. I can just imagine her flesh yawning open in a sadistic looking smile as her blood vomits from within her. This is an evil wound and yet she continues to fight.
Her toes and feet searching around in the muck of his throat, for anything that might save her.
Nita's growth from within Danny's throat. I can feel the desperation of prey to survive and now the predator threatening his own destruction if he does not submit.
The is ORGASMIC writing. You are a master to whom I again find myself bowing before.
Love it!
More, more!

nephilim - 7 years ago

I LOVED writing it myself xD Mostly because these two have such an awesome dynamic, and their verbal fencing doesn't let up even during some dire circumstances.

I agree; I seldom see authors that employ mental or psychic struggles (Aside from TheGuyWhoKnows; he does this exceptionally well).

I've pretty much always envisioned that Danny shrinks his victims by mental will. And, being that Nita is an enlightened individual (and a Gypsy) she can side-step or counter his abilities, mentally, thereby preserving her size. (As demonstrated in Gypsy Blood).

But this time, he's learned some new tricks during his jaunt in Brazil (;

Oh, and... this is not quite over. Not yet~

Marked - 7 years ago

@ Mister Mistoffelees: Well, that was different and new, and I LOVED every minute of it! First off, I don't see nearly enough stories involving 'psychic' characters having a battle for mental domination, pitting their force of will against each other head-on. Seriously, this idea applied to soul vore would be amazing. The fact that the mental struggle was used for something as novel as controlling the shrinkage, and moreover, the amount of shrinkage, was a stroke of genius.

Often times when a prey is shrunken, their fate is a foregone conclusion and that can kill some of my interest in reading through til the end. Not so with this story; you really know how to throw significant obstacles into a predators path, and let him sweat a little before he gets what he wants. You also did a nice job differentiating each of the sizes and transitioning between them, making for a much more interesting micro vore experience. Well done!

nephilim - 7 years ago

These two have a most-interesting physical dance throughout the life of their relationship it seems. And, yes, I really wanted to capture the realism of what it's like when a 215 lb man tackles a 95 lb woman. It's going to be gruesome.

You did so incredibly well capturing his likeness. It is as you said; he is big, powerful, rugged without a trace of softness, all angular. Definitely "stamped steel" and "braided cord."

I mean, if you look at him in the render with Eva, then I look at the (unreleased) Nita render you created, I actually cringe thinking what it's like when those two bodily collide.

It won't be pretty.

As for the violence; um, it's going to only get worse from here I'm afraid. Especially when the next events unfold following the impetus of the narrative. It's going to get ugly.

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

Yes, Nita finally end up getting physical (and not in a good way) with Danny. Beautiful description of Danny's physical power, being a big powerful man myself, I am always in awe of what physical power can do. Though the violence is beyond the scope of my moral fiber, I can certainly relate to the realism of how he utterly dominates her physically. I had this burned into my mind as I was working with you to develop his 3D likeness. I wanted to see him as big, powerful, rugged, without a trace of softness anywhere, all angular. His lines of stamped steel and braided steel cord. I can envision his had crushing Nita's tiny jaw and grinding her cervical vertebrae as he twists her neck. How he crushes her like an eggshell when he plows into her at the door. Amazing writing.

Once again, I read this through in a few minutes, on the edge of my seat with anticipation. You are an absolute master at creating tension, accelerating it to breakneck speed, then colliding it into a brick wall. And your prowess of the technical side of the writing, your mastery of words and genius of creating stunning visuals. I bow to you again as I am you humble fan greedily awaiting the next literary feast that I can gobble down and satiate my craving for this most masterful of vore writing.

Darius.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you (: I am so touched ~
Yes.... the next few scenes are QUITE fascinating!

Indighost - 7 years ago

The simple fact that your stories have a predator with an internal conflict about his devouring acts puts you in a class above the crowd of vore authors. Write on, and I shall read on! :)

nephilim - 7 years ago

Regarding sin: Ha, no worries! Nita always seems to me to be mouse-like, or even ferret-like. I love drawing those parallels.

Regarding the car: The point of the car - aside from additional character development (what better way to get across such a hedonistic personality that is Danny?) - is that, in some ways, Nita and Danny are similar. She finds herself admiring the car for the same reasons (it's a show of power, wealth, status, and needless indulgence) and feels their fate entwined in that moment: she's marked up his car just as much as he has marked up her soul.

Regarding the dialogue: Danny is a blast to write for. I love the stuff that comes out of his mouth sometimes LOL. And you nailed it - Nita is impulsive and usually stoic, but her emotions are unraveling in her terror. They have strangely-fantastic chemistry, and I love their interactions.

Regarding the ending: Nita is an alpha female. She is a very dominant force that has collided headlong with an even more dominating force. Their continual battle of the wills is the cornerstone of their relationship; in a way, they find themselves dependent on the other.

Regarding Danny's victim: Have you read the original Intimacy? Danny's fated prey was the one woman he truly loved... you'll see it unfold as I write the revised version. Very sad, that. They were such a tragic couple.

Indighost - 7 years ago

Re: "Tick Tock" Here's my thoughts: I hope you'll forgive me the sin of visualizing Nita as a mouse :3 // Wow, I don't even like cars, and you made this one sound almost sexy! // I really like the contrast of Danny's aggressive, ordinary masculine dialogue with nita's flurry of thoughts and emotions. // Ending: Wow! As a lover of dominant females, I loved the contest of wills between Nita and Danny, and her (momentary?) victory at the end. Really cool how she had Danny almost admitted that he cared about one of his victims. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Possession

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Coiled and wanting, he crouched over her like a man possessed. He lowered his head and parted his lips. And with one drag of his tongue across the luscious curves of her body, his entire existence collapsed 

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you (:

PitchBlue89 - 7 years ago

Oh dear god Nephilim, that was so very very ... I don;t even have words I can use to describe that. But it speaks to something very deep inside me.

Very Well done

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

Very nice work with the build-up, all the hot messy licking. I am a crumpled mess on the floor after reading this.

Lack

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A man and a woman. And the tight, gasping space between as their universe unravels. With a featureless backdrop, and narrow focus, these events are re-told through their eyes.

One cannot hope to master the art of vore without first becoming warped by it, and he finds that he is desperate for a different form of intimacy. 

nephilim - 7 years ago

I'm in the midst of re-writing this installment because I have since created an even bigger body of work from "Intimacy," which was supposed to initially be a stand-alone series; but so many people clamored to read more about Danny that I continued it into a full-blown drama.

I have the original if you are desperate to read the rest of "Intimacy" to its conclusion (although it is the older version; the series of events and the ending are the same).

Because I don't have a specific timeline for when I'll update *this* version to its conclusion. Since I'm so busy writing the fourth installment to this epic!

Remiya - 7 years ago

Wow. I can completely relate to the opening scene where Eva hears him come home but waits anxiously in bed for hours. Only to approach him, vulnerably, and have him complain about a light bulb. Been there!

Amazing story, can't wait to see how it turns out.

nephilim - 7 years ago

Ordinary-style dialogue? DO you mean the bickering of a couple? lol. Yes; I'd imagine that to be able to understand Danny's motivations -completely- would require one to be as far removed from the human connection as he is. I can scarcely capture it and get it down on paper sometimes; but I do endeavor to present it so that the reader can intuitively understand it; if not on an intellectual level, then certainly on a more base, emotional one.

I am just the scribe that relays what my characters do (:

And, yes, Eva is stunning. If you haven't seen it, this is the official render of her I had done by Darius: http://aryion.com/g4/view/228845

Indighost - 7 years ago

[I read this for the first time today]. Cool to see you do an extended lover's dispute scene, I haven't read ordinary-style dialogue like this before from you. Not bad at all. ...I really like how you described your perception of vore as possession, this is the best explication of it yet that i've seen. ... I am reminded of my own girlfriend-fights, although this one seems much more dramatic, which is appropriate :3 Overall, as a physical man, I enjoyed the physicality in this story compared to others--the woman is quite beautiful as described :) I found it hard to imagine exactly what the man's attitude was, but it was clear he is seeking an evil kind of pleasure, that he was attempting to resist.

Indighost - 7 years ago

[I read this for the first time]. Cool to see you do an extended lover's dispute scene, I haven't read ordinary-style dialogue like this before from you. Not bad at all. ...I really like how you described your perception of vore as possession, this is the best explication of it yet that i've seen. ... I am reminded of my own girlfriend-fights, although this one seems much more dramatic, which is appropriate :3 Overall, as a physical man, I really enjoyed the increased physicality in this story compared to others--the woman is quite beautiful as described :) I found it hard to imagine exactly what the man's attitude was, but it was clear he is seeking an evil kind of pleasure, that he was attempting to resist.

Memory

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The third tale in the saga Revelations.
One word summary: Vulnerable
~*~

Abroad, religion sends an innocent into the jaws of corruption.

At home, a carefully-constructed reality crumbles.

These parallel stories will build to their separate, stunning conclusions - then violently collide.

There will be biblical tales of giants and titans. Excessive, orgy-fests of consumption.
Extensive oral vore. Gratuitous mouth and...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you (: And, yes, I love Joanne too. You're /really/ going to love her over the next few chapters >:) But I won't say anything more!!!

nephilim - 7 years ago

Thank you (:

TheGuyWhoKnows - 7 years ago

Dear god, no Shreddies? America, I thought you were civilised! X3

But yes, it was fascinating to return to the first part of this from a new perspective. I also do think that in some indefinable way, as excellent as you were originally, you've improved even more since. This writing is truly breathtaking.

It does also showcase to some extent the attraction of the observer position in these kind of situations, which is something I've never really understood. The uselessness, the isolation, the pain beyond pain of those you love... ah, you've outdone yourself.

And... I just gotta loove Joaane. She such a tough old girl.

Now then. Next chapter!

Darius1972 - 7 years ago

Do they not have Shreddies in the States!!!!???? Holy crap, they don't! If you are ever in Canada or the UK, buy a box. They are only one of the best cold breakfast cereals ever. They are made of whole wheat, same shape and size as Life cereal. They are slightly sweet with a nice toasted wheat flavor and back notes of caramel, malt. They are very had and crunchy initially but soften in milk.....Like Life Cereal.
I always thought Shreddies came from the US. I was wrong.
Gets out the Shreddies and pours you a big bowl. Look out though, I can't seem to find Darius. If you find him in there don't eat him. LOLOLOLOL

nephilim - 7 years ago

I only have one thing to say after reading your review. What are "Shreddies?" LOL.

But seriously. Thank you. I am glad that all of my major points have hit home: the realism, the horror, and the suspense.

Chapter 7: Restitution

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The third tale in the saga Revelations.
One word summary: Vulnerable
~*~

Abroad, religion sends an innocent into the jaws of corruption.

At home, a carefully-constructed reality crumbles.

These parallel stories will build to their separate, stunning conclusions - then violently collide.

There will be biblical tales of giants and titans. Excessive, orgy-fests of consumption.
Extensive oral vore. Gratuitous mouth and...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 7 years ago

Oh thank you so much! I'm surprised that you like the content of my writing! I'm afraid, though, that Glass Curtain may not make too much sense on its own xD;

But thank you again!!

Indighost - 7 years ago

I've seen you around the site a lot recently and I felt I had to read one of your stories. I have to say i'm really impressed with how professional your writing is! I really envy your ability to vary sentence structures, the whole thing flows very well.

Chapter 5: Hope

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The third tale in the saga Revelations.
One word summary: Vulnerable
~*~

Abroad, religion sends an innocent into the jaws of corruption.

At home, a carefully-constructed reality crumbles.

These parallel stories will build to their separate, stunning conclusions - then violently collide.

There will be tales of giants and titans. Excessive orgy-fests of consumption.
Extensive oral vore. Gratuitous mouth and...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 7 years ago

xD Or just stay away from the guy that has that bad boy aura.

Thanks Tangie n.n

tangent - 7 years ago

Ugh ;-; even more striking than when I first read it. Remember gals, always stay away from blunt objects in which your date may suddenly feel the need to beat you against! :D

nephilim - 7 years ago

I needed a break from all the cute cuddly vore >_> lol.

Warning:
Lots
of very unwilling M/F vore. Hard in some instances. Brief, off-scene
rape.
Giants
Brazil
It
was maddening.
All
of it.
From
word to word, his eyes went; from page to page, his hands turned.
Fwip
fwip fwip.
And his mind, how it raced. His pulse, how it throbbed. It was never
enough. Never fast enough. He could not tear through the pages quick
enough.
But
he was nearing something. He could feel it.
It
was summoning him.
As
he feverishly went through the tome, he trampled over unne

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The third tale in the saga Revelations.
One word summary: Vulnerable
~*~

Abroad, religion sends an innocent into the jaws of corruption.

At home, a carefully-constructed reality crumbles.

These parallel stories will build to their separate, stunning conclusions - then violently collide.

There will be tales of giants and titans. Excessive, orgy-fests of consumption.
Extensive oral vore. Gratuitous mouth and...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 7 years ago

I pride myself on being able to write emotional pieces. I am glad that this resonates with you (:

dragon32078 - 7 years ago

I am sorry for what I am to ask. Do you hear someone or something calling you? Your story resonates with my emotions. The (anti-)hero, may be me.

Church
Brazil

Up
above, from the vertical height of the tree-tops where the heat
condensed so heavily the air shimmered, a small dot was seen moving
across the back of a red serpent. And this moving dot - as one would
venture closer to the ground - took on the emerging form of a shapely
woman. And this woman, on the wind-burnt road, made her way across
the terrain with the determined single-mindedness of a worker bee;
her hips sashayed as she hefted a heavy load of plantains about her

Chapter 1: Church

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The third tale in the saga Revelations.
One word summary: Vulnerable
~*~

Abroad, religion sends an innocent into the jaws of corruption.

At home, a carefully-constructed reality crumbles.

These parallel stories will build to their separate, stunning conclusions - then violently collide.

There will be tales of giants and titans. Excessive, orgy-fests of consumption.
Extensive oral vore. Gratuitous mouth and...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 8 years ago

FATTEN IT. THEN FEAST.

tangent - 8 years ago

Oh you're welcome. You made it into a fat and very beautiful person. xD

nephilim - 8 years ago

I didn't know what 'comic mode' was, so I clicked it and uh.. yeah. :)

nephilim - 8 years ago

Thank you soooo much for the skeleton I had to work with for the Brazil part (:

tangent - 8 years ago

Ooooohhh, this came out beautifully. I'm happy I at least got to collaborate with this first chapter. C:

(Also, new layout for folders? It seems everything's all merged into one format. I like it, but I wish the comments would stay on their respective items. Eeeeekaaaaaa, whyyy)

Time
BREAK
DOWN IN THE HARBOR. Mum's
the word over a series of murders that happened earlier this year at
Mystic Harbor in Hemlock County. "The blame is trickling down
between departments". [...] "There is no excuse. How can
we not have a viable lead in this case? Women - innocent women - are
dead!" [...] "We're too afraid to investigate him just
because he has money and connections? That's an outrage!" [...]
In response to all of these allegations, the accused par

Prologue: Time

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The third tale in the saga Revelations.
One word summary: Vulnerable
~*~

Abroad, religion sends an innocent into the jaws of corruption.

At home, a carefully-constructed reality crumbles.

These parallel stories will build to their separate, stunning conclusions - then violently collide.

There will be tales of giants and titans. Excessive, orgy-fests of consumption.
Extensive oral vore. Gratuitous mouth and...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 7 years ago

D'awwww thank you Mango (:

You're in for a WILD ride with Glass Curtain. You'll love it.

PocketHero - 7 years ago

OK, so it's time to play catch 22 - no fuck that! I'm calling it Catching Nepphie da Vinci's Masterful Work of Masterfulness... and that's not a real word...

...And not a damn was given. READING TIME!

-To this Zoran waves his hand dismissively and smiles. "I can speek very favorably of za man."-

Hey, so can Captain Lance! ... Oh wait, no he can't... he's dead! Hahahahahahahahaha... ha... ooaah...... that wasn't funny, was it? I never was good with interviews...

-But, now he imagined that the comfortable leather-back chair that Zoran had no-doubt been sitting in was now more akin to a hot-seat in the lurid glare of a search-light.-

Please take note here people: every time Nepphie comes up with brilliant, thought out descriptions.... a puppy dies in honor of her masterfulness (shut up, it's now a real word in my book). Therefore, I am now renaming this marathon: Catching the Puppy Apocalypse of Nepphie da Vinci.

nephilim - 8 years ago

Omg, you guys XD

deletedaccount505 - 8 years ago

I know, I know, I know, I want to.

CharlieC - 8 years ago

I'm about to lose control and I think I like it!

End
They came ashore.
Like a great white gull the boat
alighted upon gentler waters, terminating its journey as it nestled
demurely against the docks. A sharp, quick convulsion rocked them as
a thrumming ran through Nita's feet, and then all was still. The
deckhands shouted, racing toward the boat, roping the vessel,
anchoring it, lest the currents of fate take it away.
Danny tucked the key back into his
pocket and gave Nita a quick shove. "C'mon. Get a move on.
Time's a-wastin'."
Nita

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The second tale in the saga Revelations.
One word summary: Pain
~*~

Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women - used like game pieces - begin to suffer in the jaws of insanity.

Sexual, torturous, symbolic and very unwilling vore. Snuff themes, rape....
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 5 years ago

Ha! You are in for one long crazy ride if you've been following the tale (;
Thank you~

RavenousLizard - 5 years ago

Ooooh, how horrifying. I liked it, along with chapter 10.

Marira17 - 8 years ago

Sure thing! :)

nephilim - 8 years ago

I am glad that you enjoyed it! I do strive for macabre (in this tale) so I'm relieved that it translated in the work!

Marira17 - 8 years ago

This was so sadistic and macabre! ...I really enjoyed it! I couldn't stop reading from the moment I started! Great job! ^__^

The Key
[Nephilim]
He looked like a Grecian god emerging
from murky waters: sleek and powerful. The inert muscles in his body
had created solid athletic shapes under smooth olive skin. His dark
hair had wilted about his face, the ends dripping, creating a trail
of perspiration down his broad shoulders. (Which drew attention to a
pleasantly slim waist). His arousal had curved away from his body,
shadowing the flat planes of his stomach.
His stomach.
To think, she was inside.
If he were made of

Chapter 10: The Key

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More of my collaboration with Tangent.
We begin to approach the ending...
-~-

The second tale in the saga Revelations.
One word summary: Pain
~*~

Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women - used like game pieces - begin to suffer in the...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 8 years ago

Thank you so much! Yes, I love having a pervasive vore tone in all of my writing >:)

Glad to know that the changes in perspective doesn't diminish the standing fact here, that Danny is in control.

Oh yes, something about being helpless in a belly is so much fun to write.

I am glad you find our writing gorgeous. Sadly, this is our last collaboration together ): Our schedules conflict too much to do anything in the immediate future together...

And I'm glad you can appreciate the contrast of how Danny is so vulgar and the descriptions are poetic - I do that intentionally (:

Haha, 'BOAT' indeed.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 8 years ago

Ah, the glorious vorishness continues. I love the detached, in-shock moments of Nita and poor little Amber. It really emphasises Danny's control.

ANd I adore Amber's helplessness in the belly of the beast. I'm really getting into unwilling endosoma, so it's a delight. Well done indeed.

As usual the writing is gorgeous. You are such a talented duo. I love love love the contrast between Danny's drawling, somewhat coarse words and the pure poeticism of the description. Beautiful. :')

Also, you evil cliffhanger-er. Dat ring... will it be returned? Or no? TELL USSSSS.... D:

And finally.... BOAT!

(I just wanted Danny to start singing "I'm on a boat!" there. XP)

Nimbus
(Censored)
Author Nepphie's Note: This is
the censored version.
[Nephilim]
But he wasn’t done with her yet.
He told her so, whispering it in her
ear. Danny flicked his tongue out, dragging her earlobe into his
mouth. When he released it, he began to whisper terrible, awful
things to her. His voice was like a terrible caress inside her skull.
I’m gonna eat you up.
Ember writhed weakly now, her breasts
and belly sweat-slicked between them. He was pressing on her so-hard.
She could feel

Chapter 9: Nimbus (censored)

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This is Chapter 9 in its altered, censored format.
There is only implied sex in this version.
The original can be found here: http://aryion.com/g4/view/223129

Nimbus: (Origin, Latin) Dark cloud.
-*-
This is part of our collaborative works. Tangent and I wrote this scene together.
-~-
Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities,...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 8 years ago

Oh wow, thank you for the feed-back! I have to respect my audience, and I am glad that you were able to enjoy the censored version as well! Thank you!

divineBeast - 8 years ago

i appreciate this censored version. the last chapter i ended up skimming through most of it.
but i still love the way you write and i will always continue to read your work!

Nimbus
(Original)
Warnings: Graphic sex, fetishized rape,
and sexual brutality.
Author Nepphie's Note: This is
the original content, uncensored.
[Both]
Ember desperately searched for his eyes
as he sheathed her body with his own, but he was not seeing. Ember
desperately begged him with quick, shouted pleas, but he was not
hearing. She had tried, tried so desperately to, to - but her back
collided with the floor and - this is it - he was upon her,
his hands slamming her to the ground - sealing h

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Nimbus: (Origin, Latin) Dark cloud.
-*-
This is part of our collaborative works. Tangent and I wrote this scene together.
-~-
Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy tempts a demon...
[ Continued ...

tangent - 8 years ago

CC:
Glad you likee~

nephilim - 8 years ago

113 views total for both (: Thanks!
And glad that people are taking advantage of the censored version.

nephilim - 8 years ago

Word-smithing is so much fun. If Shakespeare could do it >.>

PocketHero - 8 years ago

Yeah, I hear that... I always try to find some way of changing things up in stories and roleplays... and it tests the imagination, which is a good thing~ Although, I'll admit... sometimes I tend to invent a few "unofficial" words... in my desire to seek new sound effects. :p

nephilim - 8 years ago

It's always le tits ~

Glad that the vore scene was so riveting (;
I love writing vore scenes. It's always a challenge to see how I can make each one /different/.

Size Matters
Warnings: This part incorporates
pervasive snuff themes. Including fetishized rape and graphic, sexual
sadism. Skipping this part will not impair your ability to enjoy the
rest of the story.
[Both]
Ember reeled, looking at Nita. She felt
so damp - so heavy - under Danny’s eldritch embrace.
(Her heart pounded with fear, all her
wishes – all the signals, all the commands she was so desperately
trying to give her brain: to yell, to cry, to fight, to ask Nita why
–! All of it was

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Well! When you keep building up to such a climax and promising such depravity - you really /do/ have to deliver.

... and sometimes those darn characters just get away from you, running off and causing all sorts of trouble.

Rest assured, dear reader, I do not anticipate I'll be writing in this vein again so soon. It was strangely enjoyable (I like rape, what can I say) - but very, very exhausting to write.


This is the third of our...
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 8 years ago

*looks at the title* What? WHAAAAAT? Oh noooooooo, you seriously USED that!? Oh my gawd... LOL! That's like one of the oldest pun titles ever! XD
-------------
Yes >.> We used it. Because it's also referring to her size-play hehe.

nephilim - 8 years ago

OMG LMFAO. I was giggling at all of your comments, then I got to this: ...Sorry, thought you might be a "furry" or something...

HAHA! That was GOLD xD

Yes. We like rape '-'

PocketHero - 8 years ago

Well that was once again a vividly well written piece. You two certainly know how to pound in some powerful imagery into the noggin, kudos.

Rape stuff doesn't really do anything for me, but nevertheless I've been glad to keep up with the story. The writing alone honestly is enough to keep me coming back for more, hahahaha!

Yeah, that's just how good it is~

PocketHero - 8 years ago

[b]How deep, his mind wondered, teasing him with a devilish little snicker. How deep would he go? Would he stop at her belly? Her ribs?

How would that feel?[/b]

... Mr. Owl, how many licks of hardcore oral sex does it take to get your cock to the center of a -

Mr. Owl: Holy shit kid, what the fuck are you asking!? The fuck kind of sick question is that!? I'm an owl! An owl goddammit, what the FUCK would I know about raping people!? I eat lolipops you dumb shit!

...Sorry, thought you might be a "furry" or something...

[b]He screamed. (Or was that someone else?)[/b]

*looks around* ... Whoops, sorry... that was me... saw a spider. Don't mind me, carry on. *waves*

[b]Nita's fingernails went screeching down the inside of his skull. Amber's insides knotted around him. He sighed a pleasured moan, continuing in mindless, heathen pleasure, in and out, in and out, in and out. An aura of wickedness surrounded him, hot and hazy.[/b]

So is this why they call them pleasure cruises? Granted, I don't think everyone is finding this cruise very pleasurable... Aw hell, we'll just blame the dead captain~

PocketHero - 8 years ago

*looks at the title* What? WHAAAAAT? Oh noooooooo, you seriously USED that!? Oh my gawd... LOL! That's like one of the oldest pun titles ever! XD

[b]He wrenched it off in one violent motion (surely the first of many).[/b]

I feel as though this is trying to tell me something...

[b]A quick, whispery sound of amusement came from him, a breathless heh.[/b]

Heh = "Oh, you said please, I guess I should just stop - PAH, NO! Silly bitch, I'mma rape you now!"

Sweet
Sin
Warnings: This
part incorporates 3,000 words of pervasive snuff themes. Including
intense sexual assault. The victim does not interpret her
circumstances as remotely pleasurable. Read on at your own risk.
[Tangent]
Danny cocked his
head in an almost compassionate gesture, but all original meaning
was lost when Ember took in the expression on his face. It was of a
wolf, waiting. She was as still as a deer in headlights. A cold
sweat broke out on her palms. She clutched the table.
Dan

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This is the second of our collaborative works. Tangent and I wrote this scene together.
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Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women - used like game pieces - begin to suffer in the jaws of insanity.

Sexual, torturous, symbolic and very unwilling vore. Snuff...
[ Continued ...

Indighost - 6 years ago

This one got a rise out of me

nephilim - 8 years ago

(; Ha, yes, yes indeed.

tangent - 8 years ago

God I feel like I'm just complimenting myself but this is hot. We make a hot couple.

That is all.

nephilim - 8 years ago

I let Danny write himself. He's a lost cause rofl. I open his iron box, crack the whip, and he takes off. I have absolutely NO control over him. I somehow force him into the narrative... but, seriously... he's his own force.

PocketHero - 8 years ago

Ya know, I ask myself that every time I imagine myself as a cruel, coldblooded, cannibalistic character in my role plays~

Oh, but this is rich to me, I LOVE IT! The author is on her own victim's side! Even after everything you're putting her through... ah, such lovely... irony? Something like that~

Two if by Sea
[Tangent]
Brackish water lapped at the boat’s
white surface as it rocked gently in the harbor. A small woman
appeared, fixing her newly made hair; an elegant braid spiraling down
her back, as she stepped onto the boarding planks. She picked
tediously at the humid-damp, frayed ends, a deep and dark feeling
storming in the periphery of her mind. She shooed it away.
She turned round:
“Need anything else?” she called to
someone hidden inside.
“Noo, just the Chardonnay!” sang

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The first of our collaborative works. Tangent and I wrote this scene together. I give you the first of many, dear reader.

But as all good things, we must slowly build toward the climax.
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Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women - used like game pieces - begin to...
[ Continued ...

Indighost - 6 years ago

Haha, you were right, that situation turned for the worse very quickly : )

Indighost - 6 years ago

I am looking forward to reading this : )

nephilim - 8 years ago

xD More puns.

nephilim - 8 years ago

xD More puns.

tangent - 8 years ago

Hahahahahahh Lance.
I'll be perfectly honest: I was just waiting to get to the smut. Fuck the captain! xD

Titan
He watched.
He watched her slender fingers clasp
the long-neck of the champagne glass. He watched her womanly lips
open and press to the rim in a coy kiss. He watched her blond hair
fall down her slender back like a chaff of summer wheat. And he
watched her chin tip up.
The movement, the poetic curve of her
long elegant neck, made him think of his own parched throat. A flush
of bile went through his veins. He pressed his tongue to the roof of
his mouth reflexively.
Her thighs were tucked u

Chapter 5: Titan

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(This is my written lead-in that prefaces the collaboration with Tangent).

Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy - blessed by arcane magic - tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women - used like game pieces - begin to suffer in the jaws of insanity.

Sexual, torturous, symbolic and very unwilling vore....
[ Continued ...

nephilim - 8 years ago

NO! *stabs him with DS stylus pen*
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This is what sent me over the edge. LOL.

PocketHero - 8 years ago

*jaw drops in surprise* There was a new chapter... 6 days ago!? *grabs gallery messenger* Y U NO TELL ME DIS?

Messenger: The same reason I ate half of the PMs you were supposed to get - I'm absolutely flawless! :D

...

Messenger: :D

... No! *stabs him with a SpongeBob Pen*

Ahem... *turns to story* mmmmmmmmm... *rubs chin* ... *blows bubbles* Mmmmhmmmm...

*raises finger of approval* Yes!

Messenger: Yes?

No! *stabs him with a Scooby Doo pen*

*turns back to the story* ... This - is poetically epic!

Powerful image-provoking description gift wrapped with lines incredibly "deep" dialogue and shampooed with passionate characterization.

Need I say that I want to see moar?

Messenger: Yes?

NO! *stabs him with DS stylus pen*

tangent - 8 years ago

Will do. :D

tangent - 8 years ago

:D

Yes. Clever, silly and sadistic. Sounds like a perfect person. xD Hmmm. Well... if you don't ever want to or have all the ideas to write an entire origin tale, remember that you can always hand us little snippets - hints of things that've happened in the past. And we can drool over them and frantically try to piece them together. Hehehe.

I just wonder about simple things. Is he immortal? How much can he manipulate others and the world around him? Wtf were his parents/his upbringing like?

...you don't have to answer those, though. c;

nephilim - 8 years ago

OMG rofl. Yes, draw her if you like >:) In fact, if you ever want to draw anything from this series - please do! That would be so cool!

Stormy Waters
"You lie," she hissed.
"Did I?" He asked oh-so
innocently, fluttering his eyelashes.
With great care - every movement
deliberate - Nita rose to her feet. She was a queen, rallying her
mental faculties about her like banner men, preparing to go to war
and reclaim her throne.
Her voice was worn and tired, but still
she conveyed her utter disgust, her thin lips twisting as though
trying to stomach an awful after-taste. "She was alive
when you... you savaged

Chapter 4: Storm

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Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy - blessed by arcane magic - tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women begin to suffer in the jaws of vore. 

nephilim - 8 years ago

>:)

tangent - 8 years ago

.......... <.>

Oh

tangent - 8 years ago

Ahhhhhh yes I see, I see! I can't wait to get to that point. And I'm even more excited that I'm helping it alonggg~ c:

nephilim - 8 years ago

Thank you Mango!
Yes, somehow, the vore almost became incidental. But it will be resurfacing again soon enough (;

And I thank you for the review on the dialogue. I pride myself on writing authentic, engaging speech. Glad to know I'm doing something right!

PocketHero - 8 years ago

Hmmm... very good. This story wraps itself in a cloak of beautiful fantasy and mind games (and yes, the vore). The dialogue is also, quite authentic looking.

Oh, and I love meaningful names too - I always spend hours looking up names with specific meanings.

Merciful
In an explosion of movement, he was
gone.
No!
And Nita ran. She ran for the counter,
heart-pounding. Her entire focus, her entire existence narrowed to
the pale white figure trembling on the counter. She ran. She ran to
Leigh. She had to make it there before him. Absolutely had
to.
But the gypsy knew she could not
outmatch him. He was too strong. Impossibly fast. At least, not
physically. Instead, mid-stride, she flexed the muscle of her mind.
In the tremulous tick between the
second

Chapter 3: Merciful

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Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy - blessed by arcane magic - tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women - used like game pieces - begin to suffer in the jaws of vore. 

nephilim - 8 years ago

And to see you respond to Nita as you do, that's great too! Like really getting invested in a character on TV.

nephilim - 8 years ago

Then I've done my job *cackle*

tangent - 8 years ago

.......Ooooowwwwwwwwww. ;~;
God, Nita, you dumb bitch...

*ahem*
Fantastic as always. I felt her bones break.

PocketHero - 8 years ago

Oh yes, that does make perfect sense. I mean, when I think about my character's dialogue, I look back and think about how I talk in public and to others... sometimes I stutter, or say the wrong thing altogether, so I reflect that with some of my characters. :)

I'll be thinking of this story and how to contribute to your sharing thread you posted.

nephilim - 8 years ago

I -love- writing dialogue between characters. I think you can divine so much from spoken exchanges. Especially -how- they speak. And what is said. I really endeavor to make the dialogue realistic too. (If that makes sense?) Like, there are TWO people talking here, and they are interacting (:

Evil
Wub-lub.

The energy pulsed pleasantly through
the unseen channels like a ticking metronome, smooth and steady.
Wub-lub. And then, violently, in a clench of blackness - it
stopped.
Pain lanced through her. She coughed in
great, big, heaving convulsions. Belatedly, she realized, lungs that
were not her own were desperately trying to breathe. Nita endeavored
to extricate herself, to bring herself back, but it was like
slogging through quick-sand.
She cried out.
Then the blessed nothing i

Chapter 2: Evil

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Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy - blessed by arcane magic - tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women - used like game pieces - begin to suffer in the jaws of vore. 

tangent - 8 years ago

Oh I know. But all the less pity I will feel for her when her end comes. c:

nephilim - 8 years ago

I was wondering about that. If the "mental sparring" was coming off too abstract, or made sense in a strange visceral way (: thanks!

Btw, just so we can have a place to congregate - http://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=31417

PocketHero - 8 years ago

Yes, from the beginning with the bird scene, to this recent nightmare, it gave off a very demonic vibe there. :) Also, how you describe those intense mental scenes, those come off as pretty powerful in their own right. We're not just getting into their minds, we're seeing them spar with them. Very cool.

nephilim - 8 years ago

I am -so- glad it comes across that way. "Devilish" really is what I was getting at. And I am so glad that you feel immersed too! I have really met my goal (:

PocketHero - 8 years ago

This is deliciously devilish. Your art of description works so wonderfully to immerse one in the world of this tale. I look forward to seeing more~

Chapter 1
Wub-lub.

The energy pulsed pleasantly through
the unseen channels like a ticking metronome, smooth and steady.
Wub-lub. And then, violently, in a clench of blackness - it
stopped.
Pain lanced through her. She coughed in
great, big, heaving convulsions. Belatedly, she realized, lungs that
were not her own were desperately trying to breathe. Nita endeavored
to extricate herself, to bring herself back, but it was like
slogging through quick-sand.
She cried out.
Then the blessed noth

Chapter 1: Appraisal

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Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy - blessed by arcane magic - tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women - used like game pieces - begin to suffer in the jaws of vore. 

nephilim - 8 years ago

Thank you, Guy!

Yes, sadistic puns are a guilty pleasure of mine. And, as for the events and consequences after a vorarephilic situation: I agree, it is so seldom explored.

That is a pet peeve of mine; that so many stories treat the event like it happened in a vacuum. But revisiting it, and exploring it from the angle of the bereft friends and family, does add a whole now dimension of emotion... and possibility.

Glad I could inspire you (:

This is a slow build-up, I know, but the next chapter will not disappoint.

TheGuyWhoKnows - 8 years ago

Danny shrugged casually, "Well you know how it is," his voice dropped low, "I guess you could say she fell apart into a million little pieces." He scooped the ring back up into his hand.

I LOVE sadistic puns like that. This is very, very good indeed - and one thing I greatly approve of is that, as happens so rarely, you're thinking about the aftermath of a vorarephilic situation. The prey left behind family members, friends, a life. It's a magnificent emotional concept, and so far you are performing it just as well as Nita runs her jewellery shop. Indeed, I can imagine Finn's next escapade being somewhat inspired by this... so in short, very well done indeed.

nephilim - 8 years ago

LOL. Danny is too much fun to write for sometimes, I swear. I definitely try to avoid having him as a one-dimensional character and give him a sense of *realism* by including non-sequiturs like that (:

tangent - 8 years ago

For a brief, absurd moment he wanted to blurt 'to rule them all.''

Ugh, neph, I love you

Corvus
The protest rang out high and shrill.
It was the sound of a mother's
desperation; the universal cry of a wounded parent.
And the world would not care, it would
not take notice. Except for an audience of one.
Danny sat, watching.
His lips parted.
He leaned up against the glass. Ah, how he felt a kinship to this
black brother. This dark messenger on dark wings feasting upon the
innocent. He couldn't look away. Not from this shadowy figure driving
its beak into the blue shell, nor from the

Preface: Corvus

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Between the shadows of a beautiful coastal village, a dark universe - unseen, unknown - hovers on the cusp. It is the intersecting point of two realities, where a talented gypsy - blessed by arcane magic - tempts a demon into a most dangerous game.

And women - used like game pieces - begin to suffer in the jaws of vore. 

nephilim - 8 years ago

You shall see! (Very good instinct though!)

tangent - 8 years ago

Ohhh this is going to be lovely. I love Danny so much. I can't wait to see how he deals with her and how much damage she can do before he does. Poor Eva, leaving behind suspicious friends and maybe family destined for a horrible fate.

But Danny hates her so much, I can't imagine him eating her...... ;D

nephilim - 8 years ago

I am having SO much fun with this. It gets so twisted, so intense, that I just blasted through the next two parts. I can't wait to share (;

TheGuyWhoKnows - 8 years ago

Well,well, well... This is shaping out to be delightfully fun. You've certainly managed to put Nita as an intellectual equal to Danny. I look forward to when the real duelling begins...