ZekeAndZoe - 1 year ago

I love it when they eat the feet separately. A delightful story!

MagicianXV - 2 years ago

What a delightful comment! Thank you so much, and I’m very glad you enjoyed the story!

MagicianXV - 2 years ago

To be fair, she was in love. It doth make fools of us all.

cheerfulchef - 2 years ago

Genius! Almost every line in this yummy story squeezes together a play on words, foreshadowing, character development, and a playful tone, while continuing to build up to the big finish--deliciously fun! :)

BardicLasher - 2 years ago

I love stories like this, where the girl gets eaten by her own thickheadedness.

BardicLasher - 2 years ago

Always a pleasure to read your work!

NonBinaryFuta - 2 years ago

what if it's like seahorses, trans men or the movie junior and men have babies too? I admit non fatal makes the maths much easier, but it helps this seems to be rare and special.

TMVore - 2 years ago

As far I could build on the information given, higher age is reached, no litters. My current theory is that the surviving females keep breeding and those in this story were the exception due lack of mentioning a father figure for the girls.

NonBinaryFuta - 2 years ago

it could work, perhaps they breed like rodents in litters or at the least have much faster pregnancy and age faster, even without reformation there's always maths for this, heck I wish I could find that post that uses a theorum of prime numbers to make this work.

MagicianXV - 2 years ago

+555 for awesome reader.

Paddle6364 - 3 years ago

Hi Magician, great work as usual, would there be any chance you might pick up the pen again and finish this great start

MagicianXV - 6 years ago

Thanks for the reply! Yes, I am going to finish it. If you remember "For My Mind", you must have been reading my stories for some time! For this, I ask that you forgive me.

MagicianXV - 6 years ago

Thanks for reading! Yes, I am going to finish it. If you remember "For My Mind", you must have been reading my stories for some time! For this, I ask that you forgive me. ????

hawkeye7513 - 6 years ago

Please say you are going to finish this one. Also, could you PLEASE upload for my mind.

IceCreamStand - 5 years ago

What a fabulous story. I love that, in your work, I never know what the outcome will be. The fact that the monster can lose makes reading your stories so much more enticing.

Your characters are so lively, too. I really enjoyed Aly in particular. Very nice work, thank you for posting it!

Uri - 6 years ago

Haha, very good read. Half the time I couldn't figure out who to root for! Hope to see more:)

LordDantai - 6 years ago

It was a fun read and well written. Just bummed by the ending. Its build up was great but it just ended up feeling like a tease.

MisterEbony - 6 years ago

This was an amazing read. To be honest I'd love to see MacDougal playing a trading card game someday, but i lov how you connected this to some of your prior works.

blockchop - 2 years ago

One of the best stories on the site!

BardicLasher - 6 years ago

Great story! Always good to see your stuff.

BardicLasher - 6 years ago

YOU LIVE!

Uri - 6 years ago

Can't wait to read the next part!

Genericcook - 6 years ago

Damn, really liked this one

Genericcook - 7 years ago

Hoping for more!

dvh123 - 7 years ago

Great story so far! Looking forward to the conclusion.

lorenzo64 - 7 years ago

Any update you'd like to post on the status of Chapter 3 of this very fine story of yours?

Drakira - 7 years ago

I'm really excited for the next part. It seems like the ending will be fantastic based on everything leading up to it.

MagicianXV - 7 years ago

Thank you very much! Chapter 2 will be up next Friday. I hope you enjoy it!

Genericcook - 7 years ago

Great start!

MagicianXV - 7 years ago

That will happen!

BardicLasher - 7 years ago

This story intrigues me and I wish to read more.

MagicianXV - 7 years ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the encouraging comment!

tonyh1212 - 5 years ago

MagicianX when are you going to add to finsh this store up i love ti see who get cook next and how

tonyh1212 - 6 years ago

please finsh the story

tonyh1212 - 6 years ago

i love to see how u finsh her up

lorenzo64 - 6 years ago

I hope you get back to this one...

tonyh1212 - 7 years ago

i love to read more of Summertime Blues: Remix, by MagicianX do have a new board uyou use

BardicLasher - 7 years ago

Yay more of your stuff! Always happy to see your work.

stefand - 7 years ago

I must admit, as i am not good with words, in too many cases i do not comment, even if i do like a story. I try to think about writing more than just "Nice story", but as i often have difficulties in pointing out, what exactly i like about the story, i finally write nothing.
But, yes, i am aware that comments can be immensely motivating.

MagicianXV - 7 years ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks especially.for taking the time to comment. That really means a lot to writers!

stefand - 7 years ago

That's a cute little Story! Great to have you back.

MagicianXV - 7 years ago

Thank you! I've always enjoyed this style as well. It leaves lots of room to be silly and have fun!

Dilea - 7 years ago

Welcome back! Ive always loved your brand of casual vore!

MagicianXV - 7 years ago

I'm glad you liked it!

stefand - 7 years ago

Thanky, i love these small stories about humans and monster.

MagicianXV - 7 years ago

I am back! This is Chapter 1. This series, "Follies from the Falls", will be self-contained short stories.

lorenzo64 - 7 years ago

I can't come up with an appropriate accolade to lay on your update of this wonderful story so I'll just ask if there are chapters to come?

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

A lot of people are holding their breath out here, waiting to see how big Astrid's moment really is...

BardicLasher - 12 years ago

Wonderful as usual! This story just keeps getting better! I always love your work!

fateshand - 12 years ago

Huzzah! Another amazing chapter!

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

YEA!!!

MagicianXV - 12 years ago

It is on the list.

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

Continuing Remix is at the top of your list I hope...

MagicianXV - 12 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

MagicianXV - 12 years ago

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading in spite of the lack of vore or cannibal content. I know that's what the site is for, and I'll be the first to admit this was a pretty self-indulgent story. I've got some stories coming in the near future that are definitely more on-topic, so please stick around!

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

Oh, I'm not sure I knew that.

So the whole story will be non-vore? I'll have to reread it in that light. Its a great story all by itself but the context you supplied will add to the Remix story.

Great great job!

MagicianXV - 12 years ago

This story is a prequel to Summertime Blues: Remix.

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

Excellent chapter. Maybe JJ will offer herself up to her sister and Olivia since she can't be in the AG program yet. But neither of them are cooks so that wouldn't work.

Oh well, I'll just have to wait and see...

MisterEbony - 12 years ago

AG. another term for making people be their best.... in that special way.

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

Same characters as your Summertime Blues stories with a different theme? Interesting...

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

Great start on a new theme...

ElenaPrey - 5 years ago

Oh my god...very hot story!

MagicianXV - 12 years ago

I have no idea why.

BardicLasher - 12 years ago

Great story, loved it when I saw it first however long ago, bu tquestion... Why do your stories not have word-wrap? I have to download them in order to read them.

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

Hmmm, not sure how I missed this. Really good. Thank you...

Teruyo - 12 years ago

Oh! I remember this one! Still as good as last time.

Genericcook - 12 years ago

Any chance we'll be seeing more of this?

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

Ummm, Magician?

Elf_Sponge - 12 years ago

Powerful writing, and an overall amazing story. You're my favorite writer by far.

BardicLasher - 12 years ago

I feel like I've said this many times before, but I really love this story and I think your work is the best on the site.

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

yea!!!

lorenzo64 - 12 years ago

13 and 14 are especially great updates. They continued right where we wanted them to. Looking forward to the next chapter...

BardicLasher - 12 years ago

This story just... loving it, all of it. Pretty much the best thing on this site.

voremonger - 12 years ago

Very nice, as usual. I like not only how they talk about JJ becoming food right in front of her, but how she is aroused simply by the very prospects--even encouraging the thought by outright asking Marker if he's thought about eating her. As usual, you do a great job about drawing things out and building up the anticipation without letting things become repetitive or become stale. I just hope that somehow a monster gets to sneak in on the action, as I wouldn't mind seeing one of these beauties getting swallowed alive. Anyway, I look forward to the next installment.

BardicLasher - 12 years ago

There you are! And the story gets better and better with each chapter!

MagicianXV - 12 years ago

On the contrary, I am passionately in favor of that pun.

voremonger - 12 years ago

Very nice bit of 'pan foreplay'. I especially like the part with them reminiscing about the shared memory. I'm looking forward to seeing how this pans out, if you don't mind the pun.

MisterEbony - 12 years ago

My thoughts exactly! HUZZAH!

Teruyo - 12 years ago

Hurrah! You're back!

tomwellspringing - 13 years ago

I just wanted to say that I just got caught up with the series so far and I'm really loving it. I really like the Scott character, and the dynamics between Scott and Celeste are very well done. I await the next chapter with bated breath.

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

I think your loyal, and patient, fans are ready for the next chapter of your latest and wonderful story.

BardicLasher - 13 years ago

What? Don't pause there! No! Next chapter, next chapter!

Drakira - 13 years ago

I must say I have enjoyed reading the series this far... but by far this is the most suspenseful chapter of the bunch. Great work on it.

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Nice, can't wait, of course, for the next chapter...

BardicLasher - 13 years ago

There is nothing I look for on this site more eagerly than more of this story right now.

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Yup, a great update to your backstory. It adds to the context of whats coming, making it more meaningful.

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

A nice, long chapter. Olivia does JJ, and will make her watch. Wow! You've got us chomping at the bit. Can hardly wait for the next chapter...

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Great update while feeding the back story. But so quick, you're going to spoil us...

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

So its going to be JJ first, given her dream. I thought sure it was going to be Astrid. Of course, Scott is interested in Celeste. Hmmm. Yup, you've got me right where you want me...

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Cool. May I add it to my lexicon of idioms.

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

Then yes, it is a heritage thing. Kind of like saying 'skin of his teeth' to refer to a narrow escape.

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Heritage thing? You know, a colloquialism from where you were brought up. Like people in Canada say "eh" at the end of their sentances. I had just never heard 'skin of a second' used before and I'm old...

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

Thank you so much! That's an absolutely wonderful comment to give a writer, and I'm very happy to have earned it.

Teruyo - 13 years ago

I've said it before, but you've got an absolutely wonderful way with words, the ability to create such real characters (well, as real as you can get in such a setting).

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

Just be careful to vary how you use that mechanic. It's a good way to keep a scene moving, but you don't want to use it every single time, or the writing will start to feel stilted and repetitive. On the flip side, don't be afraid of using it, or you'll end up with nothing but long pages of dialogue with no accompanying description or action. (Also known as 'Twilight Syndrome'.)

Elf_Sponge - 13 years ago

I'll be reading this a few times to try and improve my own writing skills. I notice during the exchange of the three its like a sandwich, a statement, followed by a descriptive action, with another statement at the end. Getting back into writing has made me appreciate the stories well written all the more so.

BardicLasher - 13 years ago

Such a good story, though I admit I'm impatiently awaiting more, lets call it 'action.'

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

Thank you very much for such a kind compliment! I'll do my best to keep up with your expectations.

Elf_Sponge - 13 years ago

The character-driven aspects are AMAZING, you're really making them come alive. Its very slice-of-life vantage point.

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Ah, we didn't get to enjoy Astrid's comments as she enjoyed the surfer girl, let alone Blair's and Scott's comments.

Excellent next segment. Keep 'em coming...

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

Heh...well, I DID say it was going to be a longer story. ^_^;

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Wow! Great segment. I can see that you are letting the momentum to build slowly. Did I say slowly? Glacial. But that’s fine. I like character development thru back stories. It means more in a consensual story line of this bent because it adds eroticism to each character’s demise, their dénouement, as it were.

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm very glad you're enjoying the story. The next chapter will be up this Thursday.

tomwellspringing - 13 years ago

I just read these three chapters and I have enjoyed them immensely. This is my favorite story of yours so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

The part about no one getting to eat her is also a fallacy. Give it another chapter or two. ^_~

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Bummer!!!

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

Sadly, no one got to eat her. Scott left the stove on too high and his house burned down. (That is a fallacy. His house is fine.)

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Eagerly sticking with you to see where/how this goes...

BardicLasher - 13 years ago

Eagerly awaiting more of this story!

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

More of an alternate-universe sequel, actually. Just stick with me for now. I'll clear up the ambiguity as the story progresses.

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Caught me by surprise, vis-a-vie JJ and Cara. So this great update of yours is a prequel to your first Summertime Blues story? Or a stand alone with the same characters? Either way, a great next chapter. I can hardly wait for the rest...

voremonger - 13 years ago

Ah, nice to revisit the old 'million dollar crunch'! I really like where this story is headed...

BardicLasher - 13 years ago

Love seeing more from you! I'm having some issues with the formatting, though. Thinner colums would let it be more easily read on Eka'swithout having to be downloaded.

Elf_Sponge - 13 years ago

You already have :)

MisterEbony - 13 years ago

Glad to see you writing again. Still hope someday to see more Horatio and Mrs. Guass, but that is me.

MagicianXV - 13 years ago

I do love music, and I love incorporating it into my work. I'm not sure if that will be consistent across everything I write, but it's certainly a primary characteristic in the Summertime Blues stories.

lorenzo64 - 13 years ago

Oh, count on it. I am such a fan of all your stories, past and now, present. Your last effort, Summertime Blues, that your loyal fans loved of course, I thought was your swan song, your Aeschylus' Agamemnon, as it were given the musical nature of the piece. But now I sense a theme. Is there a theme now and of contributions yet to come? A Summertime Blues theme?

iwillnomu - 14 years ago

There couldve been much more detail in the eating at the end. But other then that, great story.

Elf_Sponge - 14 years ago

Another great story! I do agree that more detail in the eating would've been good, but overall this was fantastic.

Nipper - 14 years ago

Great story, really enjoyed it! I like the characters, and great build-up, but almost anti-climactic at the end?

I think there could have been more detail in the eating, although it was nicely story-book.

Drakira - 14 years ago

Great story. It did a great job with the idea of contests, but I did find it a bit unfair that the monsters all won at the end. I mean it would have been nice if a few of the girls wound up lunch prematurely.

LSWaffle - 1 year ago

You just made me the happiest waffle in the world (˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)

MagicianXV - 1 year ago

I would be quite the fool to be angry. I think I am more likely to swoon. You have my humble gratitude and blessings.

LSWaffle - 1 year ago

Oh, please. How beautiful!!
Charismatic characters, a perfectly executed situation, irony everywhere.
It's simply a masterpiece.

I adore Maggie. I wish I could have been there to taste her (>\\\<)

If I decided to make a comic about this, would you get angry? O\\\O

Rando84 - 14 years ago

This is one of my favorites, thanks for posting!

BardicLasher - 14 years ago

What she said.

Elf_Sponge - 15 years ago

Truly an epic tale. A big thanks on behalf of myself and everyone who should have said thank you but didn't :)

Teruyo - 15 years ago

A wonderful end to a wonderful story. Not my favorite of yours (that title still goes to "Broken Window"), but still quite good.

Bartaugh - 15 years ago

Typically, "consentual" vore does not interest me. This story is not only an exception, but it is one of my favorite stories ever.

SummerSun - 15 years ago

Amazing is an understatement to say the least. Hats off to a superb story. Keep the good work coming.

BardicLasher - 15 years ago

That was amazing all around! I love your work, and this is just the best of your stories by far!

lorenzo64 - 15 years ago

Looking forward to your final chapter. I'm sure it is difficult one to write when you become attached to the characters as you might have in this case. Good luck with the ending and remember, the girls are going to enjoy the paring down of their bodies and their eventual cooking demise...

Drakira - 15 years ago

Great work on this part. I can't wait till the next. I wish you luck on it.

MagicianXV - 15 years ago

Thank you very much for the kind compliment. And I have some great news -- you CAN write as well as I do, and better. Just keep practicing and working. That's the only reason I'm any good. ^_~

Bartaugh - 15 years ago

Your writing style is quite professional. I only wish that I could write as well as you do.

BardicLasher - 15 years ago

Quite delightful! Eagerly awaiting the rest of the story!

Bartaugh - 15 years ago

I am looking forward to the next installment.

BardicLasher - 15 years ago

This story just keeps getting better and better!

Elf_Sponge - 15 years ago

And the plot thickens! Whenever a writer takes the time to develop their characters, part of me starts to not want them to be cooked/ eaten, but if they are, there's a twinge of guilt after wards.

5 more parts to go, I can hardly wait :)

Drakira - 15 years ago

Awesome, If the other chapters are as good as this then It will be great.

MagicianXV - 15 years ago

Thanks for the comments! I'll keep posting a new chapter every other day. (There are eight.)

Drakira - 15 years ago

Great Story Magician, I can't wait to see where it goes.

BardicLasher - 15 years ago

Definitely enjoying these, and definitely eager for more. I love your work, always.

Elf_Sponge - 15 years ago

It was kind of sad that the monster didn't get to enojy his meal longer, but otherwise an enjoyable story :)

MagicianXV - 15 years ago

Your wish is my command.

BardicLasher - 15 years ago

Romy and Emmit are back! Yay! Also, I'm enjoying this story and eagerly await more of it.

MagicianXV - 15 years ago

That's a huge compliment, and I thank you for it. One of the reasons I love to write is that it allows me to create (I hope) interesting characters. Being able to put them into a setting like Michigan Falls is a bonus.

Teruyo - 15 years ago

The story continues!

I really like your characters. It's an odd thing to say, but you really do make them human. I look forward to the next chapter.

MagicianXV - 15 years ago

Thanks for the read and review! I'll be posting new chapters every other day until the conclusion, so please come back for the next installment!

MagicianXV - 15 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it! The next part will be up tomorrow. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Elf_Sponge - 15 years ago

So far looks good, glad to see you posting a new story :)

Kamelagram - 15 years ago

Heh, cute beginning. Can't wait to read more.

Teruyo - 15 years ago

You certainly flesh out your characters and settings more than most people in this community.

MagicianXV - 15 years ago

Thanks for the comments! I know this one didn't have any actual vore, but it's nice to develop the setting. Glad you enjoyed that aspect of it, Lunalis! There was a point long ago when I hoped other authors would want to write in Michigan Falls, but it never came to pass. I've had fun with it though.

Teruyo - 15 years ago

That was sweet. You've got a nice little setting here, with Michigan Falls.

Drakira - 15 years ago

Great story, even if there wasn't any vore. Hmm, maybe they will have some kids one day to eat though. Never know with all the possibilities.

kitzlig - 5 years ago

I have never read this. Amazing story! I loved it!

sevensix - 9 years ago

Why was this posted after "Work Ethic II"? Is it an updated version?

IceCreamStand - 11 years ago

Had to post in the 'looking for' thread to find this one again. I read it years ago, and it left an impression. Wonderful work; your characters are fun and believable, and the world you paint is just close enough to be real.

MagicianXV - 1 year ago

It's an idea I've always liked, but I think the time for me to write it has passed. I bequeath it to you if you'd like to play.

macfinn99 - 1 year ago

I love the concept of a Dolcett restaurant with a comestible MF wait staff. Have you ever considered returning to this world scenario from a different angle such as a farm, butcher shop, dairy or supermarket theme?

MagicianXV - 8 years ago

It's always a toss-up between willing and reluctant prey!

IceCreamStand - 8 years ago

I keep coming back to re-read this one. I'm not usually one for willing prey, but this blend of cooperative-yet-unwilling is wonderful.