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Kalia - Hot Spring

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Sketch of a scene from chapter 3 of my story The Five Goddesses. Kalia takes a dip in a hot spring after devouring her sister Minerva. Drawn by Aesir during one of his request streams. https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir 

Darktroll - 3 weeks ago

I would love to see the aftermath of the fights with our favorite dark god and maybe the process of it too if you ever get a slot from Aesir or some other artist.

Nobodyman - 3 weeks ago

Thanks! Glad you like it.

I plan to have sketches of Thora and Ashera done as well, but getting an available slot from Aesir takes time.

Nobodyman - 3 weeks ago

LOL, guess I could do that, huh? :P

BlueMarvel611 - 3 weeks ago

This is really good, NB. This is a seriously nice pic of Kalia after she has one of her meals. Minerva being said meal.

Also out of all of the goddesses, both Chlora and Tiama are my favorites. Mostly as I'm mostly attractive to curvy women with beautiful hair. I hoped to see more like this soon.

Darktroll - 3 weeks ago

Just wondering when you'll upload the art onto your DA profile?

Minerva - Sketch

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A sketch of Minerva, the goddess of fire from my story The Five Goddesses. Drawn by Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir 

Chlora - Sketch

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A sketch of Chlora, the goddess of earth from my story The Five Goddesses. Drawn by Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir 

Darktroll - 3 months ago

I can wait, as the guy/gal has other things to do, but I seriously can't wait to see all five gods in a belly.

Nobodyman - 3 months ago

It may take some time, but yes, I do hope to have Aesir draw all of them.

Darktroll - 3 months ago

Can't wait to see the rest of gods and the end result of them being eaten.

Tiama

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The final colorized version of the water goddess Tiama. Credit goes to Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir 

Tiama - Lineart

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Lineart of Tiama, the water goddess, from my story The Five Goddesses. Credit again goes to Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir

So here we have the finalized version of her design, which, as you can see, doesn't have as much going on and is more simple, but I think it suits her better. I dunno. What do you think?

The final colorized version of Tiama will be posted later. 

Tiama - Sketch

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A sketch of Tiama, the water goddess, from my story The Five Goddesses. Drawn once again by Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir

So this is the original sketch of Tiama that Aesir drew based on my description of her. It's a lovely design, but I personally didn't think it really fit her character.

The adjusted final version of her design can be found here https://aryion.com/g4/view/505922 

Kalia

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And here's the final colorized version of the dark goddess Kalia. As you can see, a few changes were made from the sketch, mainly her hairline and she got some bracelets. Really happy with how it turned out. Credit again goes to Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir 

ChaoskampfNunc - 8 months ago

She's so beautiful, I wanna give her some sacrifices <3

Demi

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And, at last, here's the final colorized version of Demi. Really happy with how this turned out. Once again, huge thanks to Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir 

ItsSongxing - 10 months ago

Aesir's one of the best you can get, so I'm not surprised!

Nobodyman - 10 months ago

Thanks! Aesir really did her justice.

ItsSongxing - 10 months ago

Oh no she's even cuter than I imagined her-

Demi - Lineart

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Meant to upload this a while back, but here's the lineart version of Demi, again done by Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir 

    
Amidst the wreckage of the battle that had just transpired, Haruko sat perched atop a large metal slab. Overall, it had been a considerable victory for her. Not only had she destroyed the Medical Mechanica robot, but she had also bested and devoured her other half, Julia Jinyu, who had been a thorn in her side for far too long. Unfortunately, the victory was ultimately bittersweet as Hidomi Hibajiri, perhaps the greatest factor in her plan, had just turne

Digesting Jinyu

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So I guess it's a bit late to be posting this, but after the incredible fifth episode of FLCL Progressive, which was practically a love letter to us vore fans, I've really been wanting to write a story about it. But...well, for whatever reason, I could just never get in the mood to write it until now.

Anywho, this is basically just a quick vignette, detailing what may have been going through the characters' minds during the events of episode 5. Didn't really take the characters or...
[ Continued ...

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey Nobodyman. Welcome back for it's been a while. Now I already reviewed your pic of Kalia from your awesome story...now to review this one.

Got to say that you really know how to shift character views in this one. From Haruko's thoughts all throughout the event of her digesting her other half to Jinyu who was resisting the best she could. Mostly on Jinyu's thoughts as she was a floating consciousness that's been within Haruko's body resisting the full digestion. It does capture some aspects of the FLCL Alternative episodes that you talked about too. I am so going to rewatch episode 5 for the anime.

All in all you did good work for this short story, NB. I can't wait to see more works like this come from you in the future. Mostly on your other unfinished story series too. So laters and keep up the good work.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Kalia - Sketch

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A sketch of Kalia, the voracious dark goddess from my story The Five Goddesses. Once again drawn by the wonderful Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir

This turned out pretty great, though I do want to make a few changes, particularly to her hair and the symbol on her stomach, in future drawings. 

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey Nobodyman glad to hear from you. Seriously it's nice to see you. Anyways sorry for not being able to respond sooner but lots of things has been going on with me as of late. But now here I am. Now...on with the review for the picture.

Now got to say that your commission from Aesir is good. Mostly NOW I can picture what Kalia is like from your story the Five Goddesses. Though got to say that I honestly expected Kalia to have longer hair but the rest of it does make sense. That said I so like this picture and it truly captures what Kalia is really like in appearance. She's as curvy and domineering as the story pictured her to be. And also the Symbol of Life on her belly is so surprising to me. Now I can't wait to see more future pictures with Kalia having a belly on her...as well as lights on her belly. So glad to have you back NB. Hope to hear from you soon.

Elias Azule

Demi - Sketch

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A sketch of my OC Demi from my story The Five Goddesses. Drawn by the amazingly talented Aesir https://aryion.com/g4/user/Aesir 

Whereaminow27 - 1 year ago

Hope to see more of her ^^

Chapter 13






    
Thousands of years ago, the world was ruled by the dark ones. They were horrible malignant creatures that took joy and fulfillment in the suffering of others. Humanity was subjugated by them, acting as little more than their servants and playthings. And, for thousands of years, it appeared that that was how the world was destined to be; the dar

The Five Goddesses: Chapter 13

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Chapter 13 of the Five Goddesses, in which Kalia obtains the power of all six elements

So to those of who were hoping for Kalia to win, I suppose you could stop reading the story at this chapter and let that be the end of it. To everyone else, well...see you next chapter! 

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Yes seriously I do hope so too. I do not need any more stress in my life. So keep it coming NB.

Nobodyman - 1 year ago

Cool! Glad I was able to surprise you. I hope things go better for you as far as your stress.

Scion - 1 year ago

:p

I just want to see Kalia get stronger - absorb durendal and the dark ones

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey good to see a new chapter up, Nobodyman. Seriously I've been feeling drained mentally through some tough things going through my mind. Reviewing your work along with others helps with easing up on tension within me. That said on with the review!

Wow...you just surprised me with this chapter. Mostly with the first part explaining a bit about the world of Terrania's history with humans being the slaves of the Dark Ones. Not to mention on how Rhaya, the first goddess of Terrania along with the gift of Durendal and an army of humans to fight back against the Dark Ones. Though Rhaya was wise about not wiping out the Dark Ones as they too are part of the world and are needed for balance. This almost reminds me a bit of ancient mythology I studied in high school once.

Next came with the emergence of Kalia in her new form. Though seriously this reminds me of a movie I've watched once. Mostly with Kaila now having grown herself at the size of a Titan. And boy does she show it while not just lifting up the island of Aganon but actually to swallow it whole just to be sure the power of Durendal won't be used against her. Another thing that got my attention was the way of how Demi retaliated against the now giant goddess. It was honestly action packed with how you wrote the fight of a bug sized Demi fighting against Kalia. Though also what caught my eye was how you described Kalia new hunger before she devoured the island. With how as a goddess, she never needed food but now she was relishing in her hunger for anything she could get her hands on.

Kalia definitely proved it as she was finally able to stop Demi's assault with her fingers and tossed her to her mouth. Though you can't fault Demi for trying to fight back as she definitely proved to be an obstacle to Kalia's plan to release the Dark One's into the realm. Not to mention of how she asked for the dark goddess' reasons for causing such havoc only to be answered by a mad rant.

Anyways it's sorta creepy and frightening with how you managed to write about a manifestation of Kalia capturing Demi on her giant form's tongue using dark tendrils! Still it was amazing of how you are able to capture Kalia's sensation of having eaten the human warrior woman. Not to mention of her annoyance at Demi's continued resistance while in her stomach! Though it would not lost for long as she had Demi join the rest inside her main stomach. I would like to see how that turns out...though worried too.

All in all this chapter really brought me to the edge of my seat. Not just that but it makes me want to know what's going on in Kalia's now hungry giant stomach as Demi goes through it. I can't wait to see. Plus would help me with my own nerves too through life. Laters and keep up the good work.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Chapter 11





There didn’t seem to be much to the room. After the doors had closed, the light began to fade and Demi was left standing in a small room with only a circular elevated platform in the middle of it. She stood for a few moments, inspecting the area and waiting for any indication of what to do. When she received none, she decided to walk onto the platform.

“Alright, le

The Five Goddesses: Chapter 11

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Chapter 11 of the Five Goddesses, in which Kalia arrives at Aganon and the clerics do all they can to stop her 

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Great to know. I can't wait to see how they turn out and see where it goes. So looking forward to it, NB.

Nobodyman - 1 year ago

I'd say we've got about four or five chapters left.

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Heh you're welcome Nobodyman. How many more chapters can we expect from this story?

Nobodyman - 1 year ago

Haha, sorry if this chapter left you wanting more, but, hey, that's what they say. Always leave your audience wanting more ;)

Anyway, thanks for the review as always.

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey Nobodyman, good to see this chapter up and running. I'm happy for it as my week's been slow for me and need the cheering up. Especially given that I've been waiting to see how this turns out. Now here comes the review!

Okay things are starting to heat up now as Demi's entered the temple of Durandal in order to get the power needed for her to confront Kalia. Got to say that she put up some attitude up until the light enveloped her. Sounds to me it's only begun for her. Makes me wonder what she would be going through.

Meanwhile, on the outside Kalia is really beating the crap out of the warriors and clerics with no effort at all. Just to get at the element of Creation. Even five unique warriors fighting her had a hard time given her wielding each of the five elements on each of them. After beating them, it was at that moment we see Kalia's hunger began to show. Mostly with how she was hungry for more food as she eats the five up...even though they weren't filling enough for her. Boy is she going on frenzy on this one.

Now we focus on how you wrote both Erra and Stella's relationship and bond here. Now I know that Stella does not show it fully here but she does sound like a mother to Erra despite traditions. And you definitely did a good job with writing Erra's character here. Despite sounding rather mature and calm, Erra truly is a child deep down, goddess or no. She could even sense the deep darkness of Kalia coming to her despite being a goddess and such. Though it's so heartwarming how you wrote the two sharing a hug before Stella went to fight the intruder herself.

We then get to the nitty gritty when we see both Stella and Kalia fight. Yeah I admit that it was sorta one-sided between the two but got to give Stella credit for lasting longer than her cleric warriors did. Sure she got Kalia by surprise with her sneak attack but it did not last long as the dark goddess got her within her grasp. And torture her with her lightning powers as Stella screamed out enough for Erra to hear. The poor little thing must be scared and worried for her adopted mother to be fighting a monster. You really wrote her character out really well in this one especially when her timing couldn't have been better.

Man things could not be any worse given that Kalia was about to make a meal out of Stella just as she found out about Erra's existence. But boy did the sweet little goddess child made it in time...only for Kalia to turn her sights on her. Oh man good thing that Demi managed to arrive in time just as Kalia was about to win.

So all in all you did good with this chapter but honestly hoped for more. I hoped the next chapter would be able to fill in some gaps of what happened with Demi in the temple. Though also hoped to know what exactly did Kalia see during her time with her mom Herra in the battle field. Anyways back to this chapter, though it was brief it was having me on my seat. Some spelling errors aside, I also was pumped with some action from the Dark Goddess and Stella though hoped for more with the latter. However I know that another battle would await me on the next chapter. So all in all good work, NB!

I hoped to see the next chapter up and running as I look forward to the confrontation between Demi and Kalia. Laters!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Chapter 10






Five Years Ago



    
Demi sat on the stone temple floor alongside the goddess Chlora. It was Demi’s first day of training with the goddesses and thus far it mostly involved her sitting still and silent and “clearing her mind”. Chlora called it meditation.

The Five Goddesses: Chapter 10

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Chapter 10 of The Five Goddesses, in which Demi arrives at the island of Aganon and meets Erra, the goddess of creation. 

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey Nobodyman, glad to see that you've put up another chapter so soon. I honestly was not expecting it to come up so soon. Though I'm happy for the arrival in any case as I've been waiting for it. So here we go with the review.

Nice that we get a flashback with Demi starting her first day of training with Chlora. Mostly in terms of focusing and calming her mind. I can see that Demi was not thrilled with this kind of training. Back to the present on her boat, it would seem that she's grateful for the meditation training. Especially given that it helped her to pass the time on her way to Aganon, resting place of the temple of Durendal and home to the sixth and final goddess, Erra.

Now onto Stella and the residents of Aganon itself. I've got to say that the way you've described the women and their culture here almost reminds me of the typical Amazon archtype. Though from what I see, they also train and meditate in order to prepare for the worse case scenario. Seriously to be a woman in Aganon it must SERIOUSLY take some real commitment. Though it's a very interesting culture for sure though Demi does not seem to be eager in learning about it. Demi's a real smart mouth to Stella here. XD

Though got to say that the moment that Demi first saw Erra, I'd say that she's developed something of a big sister complex. Who can blame her with how you described Erra's appearance and character. You described her as a child yet she sounds mature for her age. Which is very fitting considering she is the child of all five goddesses. Not just that from how you wrote her character, it caused even Demi to not be upset at the girl. Though I can see a sorta sisterly bond growing between the two of them. Mostly after Erra asking what happened to her moms.

Now I can't wait to see what's going to happen as Demi approaches the temple of Durendal and getting the power she needs to beat Kalia...especially given that the goddess is already there!

All in all you did a good job with this chapter, NB. You see this chapter's chalk full of exposition in how Aganon's culture is along with its role in the story. Now I want to see how things with Kalia would be and hoped to see how she'll use the five elements she has. Keep up the good work, man!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Chapter 9



    
It had been seventeen hours since Demi had made her departure. Since then, Tiama had stayed at the temple, waiting patiently and somewhat dreadfully for the arrival of her sister. She stood at the top of the temple where her wading pool was and looked out at Port Valma. She had considered going to the town and visiting all the people there (perhaps for the last time), but she decided aga

The Five Goddesses: Chapter 09

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Chapter 9 of the Five Goddesses, in which Kalia faces Tiama, the last goddess she must consume 

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey Nobodyman, it's good to see this new chapter of yours up and running. It's something that I've been waiting to read up on and is on time too given the stress I've been going through. I know it leads to Demi's part of this story but now lets see how Tiama deals with her mad older sister. So on with the review.

I've got to say that out of five Goddesses, Tiama certainly did not want to make it easy on Kalia. Going as far as unleashing a massive monsoon on Kalia despite the four powers she's gain to creating a massive tidal wave, this sooo kicks major butt. Though unfortunately Kalia was just powering on through just to sock it right at Tiama's face.

But that said Kalia did think that she was on top of the world what with having eaten four of the goddesses and overpowering Tiama. Though got to say that Kalia's character here was especially sadistic especially when it comes before eating the water goddess. Knocking her down on her pride and stripping her while also licking and KISSING her is about sadistic as you'd expect. A bit graphic but fitting considering it's Kalia's way of trying to enjoy the taste of her last meal.

Though Tiama got some payback in the form of her water streams being shoved down Kaila's throat! Though got to admit that it was quite unexpected move for Tiama to do so but a nice move. Forcing Kalia to swallow so much of her water until she bursts was what I THOUGHT but Taima has something else in mind...forcing Kalia to spit out her sisters with her water. Man, was Kalia both surprised and upset at this turn of events. Taima almost had succeeded in her plan if Kalia hasn't countered quickly. Boy after that attack as well as vomiting up gallons of water out of her, Kalia was mad.

Though the following pages near got me thinking of her as a complex character than I thought. Okay first she was power hungry(literal and otherwise), then prideful and confident, then surprised and now livid. Well, angry more like for when she beat up Tiama to a pulp before finally devouring her like the rest of her sisters. After getting the final element, it would seem she would be rather pleased to get the element of Creation...only to find out she never had it. And boy was she really angry then...but soon turned scared.

It got me so interested to think that after her bravdo and confidence in eating all five of her sisters(including being mad at Tiama for her stunt) she would be suddenly scared. That entity that is the black mass seemed to scare her stiff to the point of stopping her rant. From its inaudiable sounds of anger it was enough to send Kalia into a fright. Despite all the great power she's amassed in her belly, she's scared of the creature, whatever that may be. Anyways once settled down, the creature helped her and she seemed back to her usual self once finding out what her sisters had done.

All in all this chapter certainly showed how determined both Kalia and Tiama are. Mostly for the latter in buying time with Demi. It was a fight that sorta reminded me a bit of the classic animation series of Avatar: The Last Airbender. Mostly with how you described Tiama's use of the water. But now I look forward to see what Demi would be doing once she reaches Aganon...and how she'll deal with Kalia when the time comes. I would say this that Kalia would be very hard to beat now that she has all of the elements on her side. So hope to see more of your work then, NB!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Chapter 8






    
Contrary to popular belief, gods are not, strictly speaking, immortal. They are prone to longevity and are exceptionally hard to kill, to be sure, but just like all the things in the universe, they have their time and place and do, eventually, die. Perhaps that was what the Goddess Herra knew, that her time would be coming soon, when she made th

The Five Goddesses: Chapter 08

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Chapter 8 of the Five Goddesses, in which Demi departs from Tiama's temple and reminisces about her year with her. 

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Well, I hoped it won't take long for I look forward to the confrontation between the goddesses. Sure I know how it'll kinda end but can't wait to see how it'll turn out. I'm excited for it.

That said, thanks for the support and kind words and I hoped to hear more like this from you in the future. Let me know when chapter 9 comes out, Nobodyman.

Elias Azule

Nobodyman - 1 year ago

Hey Elias! Thanks for the review as always! Sorry to hear things aren't going well for you this week. Hope things pick up for you soon.

Anyway, yeah, I agree that Tiama is the most developed of the five goddesses. And that pretty much goes hand-in-hand with the fact that she's the most important goddess, as far as Demi's growth as a character. But I'd like to think the other goddesses at least are well-defined.

As for what happens between Tiama and Kalia, well, yeah, you'll just have to wait and see ;)

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey Nobodyman, glad to see another chapter for this fanfiction. I've got to say that I was looking forward to this one for days. It really would help my week as it's been rough on me as of late. This story always cheers me up as it's different from other stories of the theme. Anyways on with the review.

Anyways this chapter really shows a lot of expedition in terms of this story's plot as well as world and characters. Mostly with Tiama telling Demi of the Goddesses' role in Terrania's history and protection. We all now have a grasp of how the six goddesses came to be, which includes Kalia, the story's antagonist. In my opinion it's sad honestly given that despite their shared bond with their mother Herra, Kalia was the odd duck out. Mostly especially given how she likely came to be what she is today. Not just that but how Kalia was not granted the power of Creation as she was originally intended due to her warped thinking. But this at least how the five goddesses that we know of came to be.

Now onto the nitty gritty here. Tiama telling Demi about the 6th Goddess that holds the power of Creation! That was something that I did NOT expect from this story. Though given Kalia's "attacks" on the other four, it's no wonder why they kept her a secret and from the world. That said it also shows how she came to be with how Chlora became the birth mother for said goddess and where she was put in. That said though it's very touching of how Tiama and Demi spoke while they prepared for her to go to the island of Aganon. It also adds to the final part in Demi's flashback.

With said memory it shows just how gentle and human Tiama is when compared to her sisters. Personally? I like Tiama as my favorite female character both in physical and character development. With how she was coming down to the town of Port Valma as it's suffered from a huge tidal wave. She is also modest in the use of her powers and knows her limits, as Demi likely noticed. Speaking of our warrior woman, she's shown good as a character as well. Her taking action in saving the woman's child, Lily, from the wreckage of one of the houses, it shows Demi developing feelings for people around her. With seeing how Tiama was able to comfort a grieving mother loss of her son, it truly shows some emotional growth coming to Demi. Despite now showing it, she really is growing to be caring for people.

All in all this chapter is great to read, Nobodyman. I mean, the way you were able to develop both Demi and Tiama's characters is why I come to read your fanfic. That and the amazing world your story is showing here as well as the way how the world of Terrania to the creation of the Goddesses. Like I mentioned before, I love fantasy involving magic. XD

Now I look forward to see how Tiama's battle with Kalia turns out. Though one thought? Would Kalia be able to figure out something was up when she finally gets her fifth meal? I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

Keep up the good work, Nobodyman and hoped to see the next chapter up soon. Laters!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Chapter 7






Two Years Ago



    
Demi attempted to counter and fight back as well as she could, but Ashera’s relentless assaults were too much for her. This had been the third time in a row the two had engaged in combat, presumably to test Demi’s skills, but Demi couldn’t be sure since As

The Five Goddesses: Chapter 07

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Chapter 7 of The Five Goddesses, in which Kalia faces her sister Ashera, the goddess of wind.  

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Yeah, and trust me that I look forward to the next chapter. I'd like to see what happens. And also your grammar and spelling's good as always with some minor details to work out. So keep up the good work. Let me know when it comes out. Laters!

Nobodyman - 1 year ago

Great! Glad you liked it. As always, thanks for your review BlueMarvel.

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey Nobodyman, glad you updated. Seriously I was looking forward to this one as it would have Kalia facing against the Wind Goddess Ashera. I'll do what I can for this one given. But this chapter review won't be as long. So here it goes.

With the flash back of Demi with her training with Ashera. This shows the kind of character that the wind goddess is. Silent and serious like her element too. Though I imagine how tough it was for Demi having to deal with the training of said element too. She never lets Demi get any openings in attacking her straight away. Not to mention that it must've been rough for Demi to be trained like that. Not to mention annoying given how Ashera always stays silent save for that one moment. I must say that it's pretty impressive with how you written Ashera's character during the whole chapter. Mostly with how Ashera was training Demi with his element and surroundings.

Now onto the fight itself. To briefly say I am impressed with how you've written on how the fight between Kalia and Ashera is rather intense. The way you've written the way they've used their powers remind me of the battles of Avatar: The Last Airbender animated series. The description and effort that you've put into the battle was very intense, just like the previous chapters. Though I must say if I had to choose amongst the battles, both Ashera and Minerva's battles with Kalia are the best. And what a way for her to go by speaking in the last moment just before she was swallowed up by Kalia. Though I must say that the way Kalia was able to devour Ashera was rather simple and quick but fitting given. It's good that you did it so that each time Kalia swallows one of her sisters it won't sound redundant. All in all nice.

You really did good on this chapter and I can't wait to see both Tiama and Demi in the next chapter as well as what the former is about tell her. I can't wait to see it. So laters and keep up the good work.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Chapter 6






Fifteen Years Ago



    
Demi was starving. She hadn’t eaten in three days and had subsisted only on fresh water from a river she had been following. It was a mistake going to the Ozavi Mountain Range. There was no civilization for miles and precious little wildlife. She had occasionally

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Chapter 6 of the Five Goddesses, in which Demi reminisces about her old master 

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey Nobodyman, long time no review. Sorry for not being involved with your writing as of late but I had my own things to take care of. Mostly to getting a job settled and applying for it as well. Not to mention a lot of stress to go with it too. Anyways I'd like to make up for it by reviewing your latest chapter here on DA. I hoped that it would be enough as this involves me focuing on your main character Demi. I'll review briefly on the story in general and then the chapter. Here I go!

Okay I got to say man, that I'm surprised that I did not become interested in this story before long. This story's world has gotten me intrigued given how Terrania is like. I guess I sorta loved fantasy stories to the core given how it involves the goddesses and how they use the elements themselves. Not to mention a force of darkness using their oldest overlooked sister Kalia who gave herself to said force...and began make her fellow sisters into meals. It's really something with how she devoured three of the goddesses into her stomach and how she gains their powers. But it's also well thought out given the way you used flashbacks and all. Demi especially was the star for most of the chapters and I can't wait for the next one.

Now onto today's newest chapter. From what I'm seeing this is a rather impressive focus on Demi's past. In chapter 2, I really got a good impression on her character but from her flashbacks with training with Minerva and Thora, to name a few. But this session with Tiama really opens up a lot of things for Demi's character. Like how she was once a very feral character doing what she can to survive. And also how she got knocked out by her master, Qi despite his age. But it also gives us a view of what she's like when she was training under the former swordmaster. We also got a glimpse of who Master Qi was before being a farmer and....his tragic backstory. Hard to imagine a tough guy like him losing his wife and child like that.

What's more is how it helps to develop in Demi's character. As time passes and memories moved on we see just WHY Demi wouldn't open herself up. Having to seen how much Qi suffers from his disease and how she tries to keep up her spirits through it all, it's no wonder. No wonder why she is afraid to open up to love again. Not to mention how she became so stubborn too. But that's kinda understandable given how she grew up surviving in the woods. But glad she was able to open up to love again while being treated by Tiama. Now she's going to listen to the tale of the goddess...with ONE in particular.

All in all I'd like to see how this turns out, NB. I can't wait to see how the next chapter turns out. Your story shows good promise and it got me hooked to see more of its world. Magic and all...XD Keep up the good work!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Chapter 13


As the rest of the villagers, tightly packed in the Hokage’s office, awoke from their slumber, there was much confusion indeed. Amidst the chaos, Tsunade and the others who were in the know tried to settle them down and explain as much they could. However, they could not allow them to leave just yet as they suspected that Marunomi may be hiding among them in disguise. After carefully examining each of the villagers, they found that this

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It appears Marunomi has been defeated and peace has returned to the Leaf village, but where could the gluttonous ninja have vanished to?

Well, this is it. It's been quite a journey, but finally this is the end of the Marunomi's Revenge story. I hope you've all enjoyed reading it and I hope you all are satisfied by the conclusion.

*CHAPTER SPOILERS*

So yeah, I actually totally did not originally plan for Marunomi to go out the way she did here....
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MysteriousPlan - 1 year ago

Gotta agree, an alternate ending with her digesting after being that stuffed would be incredible...

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Ah, I was wondering if you were going to write a review (not that you're obligated to, of course). Seriously though, sorry to hear what's going on with your sister's ex-boyfriend.

Anyway, yeah, I guess I could have had at least mentioned the villagers that were lost during Marunomi's invasion, but I guess I just forgot about that. Oh well, they're not canon, so who cares? LOL XD

Really though, thank you again so much for taking the time to review and give your thoughts on my story throughout this whole journey. It's really meant a lot to me and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Hey Nobodyman, sorry for the long wait for your review but I've been really busy as of late. It's been keeping my mind during some situation at home. Mostly involving my sis' slacker ex-boyfriend. This one's actually shorter than previous reviews so I'll get right to it.

This is a good way to have Marunomi exit the story. Ironic too given she was a hungry predator and she, being malnourished as she is, wouldn't have survived anyways. Given how her body was literally crushed by the snake as well as low on energy and chakra, she would have died either way. Good to know that she won't be a threat to any more villages. Got to say that this is a most ambiguous way to end Marunomi's careers as a hungry ninja. Who's the say that she would somehow find a way to survive through the snake? XD Anyways you did good writing this part for Marunomi.

We go to Konoha as you did well with writing the aftermath. Especially how Tsunade and the ninja pondered upon Marunomi's fate as I mentioned before. Though I feel that they should have had a moment to grieve for their fallen ninja that were digested by Marunomi during her invasion. That's just my opinion on that part. The rest was okay as it seemed to take place within the manga/anime series. Got to say that the kunoichi of not just Konoha and the Hidden Cloud thanked and congratulated Hinata for that daring plan of hers that saved the village. Especially Naruto who she obviously still blushes over considering. Heh, man some things never change do they?
All in all this chapter is the perfect send off for this story and I hoped to see something like this in your other works. Mostly with Sailor Moon. That said, keep up the good work.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

domino142005 - 2 years ago

Can you do an alternate ending where Marunomi wins?

almindore58 - 2 years ago

I call hax on Hinata! Hax! Marunomi won!

Chapter 12


    
Marunomi rubbed her overstuffed belly in delight as she sensed Hinata slowly climb the stairs, just as her sensei had done before. And, just like her sensei, she would soon join the collection of kunoichi Marunomi had amassed in her stomach. But she would have some fun with her first. This had been a long time coming, after all.


    

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With the rest of her teammates devoured, Hinata finally faces off against Marunomi.

Hoo boy! Really went all out with this one. But yeah, it's the last vore scene of the story, so I may as well make it a big one. And with that, there's only one chapter left in this story. Expect it fairly soon as I don't anticipate it to be a long one.

Enjoy! 

Flame14 - 1 year ago

I was actually hoping he'd make an alternate outcome for Hinata vs the Hanabi clone. Really wanted to see Hinata getting slowly swallowed down by her little sister, or at least something that looked just like her. Since Anko was captured by the Tsunade clone shortly after it would have ended in Marunomi's victory. Haven't heard anything about him making such a thing though.

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Yeah but anyways hoped to see your Epilogue soon. So laters and keep up the good work.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

No problem. I hope I didn't come off as defensive, I just wanted to be clear about what I meant. Thanks again!

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

OH! Sorry....I didn't mean to jump the gun on my thoughts like that man. It just sorta happens at times when something unexpected happens to me. Like what happens at my home. But I got too tired. Sorry.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

No, I meant I DO have a lot of ideas for monsters they could go up against.

Chapter 11


    
To better understand their situation and formulate a plan, Hinata and Anko shared everything they knew about their predicament. Anko explained how she had escaped Marunomi’s clutches and that, indeed, she had absorbed Tsunade. In turn, Hinata told Anko about everything they had discovered in the Pebble village and Kurenai’s plan to free everyone from Marunomi’s body.

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Kurenai finally confronts Marunomi, who has already devoured most of her team. Meanwhile, Hinata and Anko devise a plan to defeat Marunomi.

Okay, sorry again if this chapter was a bit late, but once again, I've had a very busy week in that I moved this past weekend. So yeah, the last few days have been very busy and physically exhausting, so I haven't had as much time to devote to writing this story or, heck, even getting in the mood to write it. So yeah, August has just been a...
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BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Okay fair enough. That said hope to see the next chapter but take your time man. Seriously I can sympathize with your hard time. So have a good day.

Elias Azule

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thanks for the review as always BlueMarvel.

Have I thought about doing a bio for Marunomi? Eh, not really. I feel like, between this story and the previous one, I've explained everything about her that really needs to be explained. And as for her appearance, honestly, I'm not totally sure what she looks like myself. I'd rather just leave it up to the reader's imagination as for what she looks like.

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Hey Nobodyman, glad to see your new chapter up and about. This really helps with my week as it's been improving. Though it's still tough going for me. Sorry to hear how tough you've had it man. Trust me I know how it feels to be overwhelmed with life and all...especially on August. Anyways hang in there man, I know you can pull through. Now onto the show!

Okay from what I've read within this chapter, the story's really reaching its conclusion. Mostly with Marunomi having eaten most of the rescue team and planning to add the remaining kunoichi of Konoha into her stomach. Given how things turned out I'm going to be putting my review with Hinata going first and then Kurenai.

Now with Hinata you really are building up the suspense with her for this one. Especially now that she's teamed up with Anko to take down the ravenous man eater. Glad that Anko was caught up for it would seem they'll both be the only ones left to deal with this. With what's at stake I can't blame Hinata for taking charge with...whatever she's planning on doing at this point. Seems like it's now or never considering that not only she had to leave behind Anko, who's dealing with the Tsunade clone, just to go on face to face with Marunomi. I could tell that you're going to make it very very hard on the Hyuga princess on the next chapter...I honestly can't wait.

Lastly onto Kurenai's part for you really wrote down on how she reacted to seeing Marunomi's current state as well as their battle. Got to say that you really made Kurenai's character really angry with how the rogue ninja absorb/ate her entire village. Not to mention how she saw and reacted to Marunomi's words that cut her...especially the last bit with Hinata. That must've really set her off to go charging in like she did. But part of me also believed that Kurenai had planned that somewhat given that it's to help trap the enormous Marunomi into a genjutsu....only for it to backfire on her. With that, Kurenai in her despair, has become now part of a huge seven course meal of Kunoichi...which would soon become eight with Hinata coming to her.

All in all this battle you made between Marunomi and Kurenai is as impressive as ever. Something that I'd expect from the official anime. Also saw how you developed both Kurenai and Marunomi's characters. Mostly on Marunomi as she seems more and more unhinged here. Especially given how sadistic she was with taunting Kurenai with her lie of eaten Hinata. Shows just how vile she's become and mad with all the meals she's got allowing her hunger to take over.

For this chapter it was really worth the wait. I sure hope to see how things turned out for the next one. Seriously I would love to see how this would turn out for the next chapter. I can't wait to see how it'll end up. Keep up the good work, man and don't worry about taking time on coming up with the next chapter. Just take your time. Laters and keep up the good work.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

P.S.
You ever tried of making a Bio of Marunomi? You know the kind that has details on her from looks to personality to backstory? I'm just curious given.


Deviantfan16 - 2 years ago

Its amping up. Cant wait for the finale

Chapter 10


    
Inside the Hokage’s office, Marunomi rested comfortably, assured of her victory over the invading ninjas. She reclined in her chair as she basked in the fullness of her enormous belly, which had grown a bit since she had sent out her clones. Inside the massive stomach was the Hokage’s assistant Shizune, still alive, but well on her way to being a nutritious soup for Marunomi’s body to

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As Hinata faces off against the clones of her sister Hanabi and cousin Neji, Marunomi has a peculiar meeting with her clones.

Hey guys! So, the vore scene in this chapter is, uh...interesting, to say the least. Hopefully, you guys will still really enjoy it and the chapter. Let me know what you think! 

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Well, if you want another reason, consider this: If they were conscious, they could use jutsu inside her stomach, which could lead to all sorts of problems for Marunomi.

Flame14 - 2 years ago

Then I'll just have to hope the mood for such an alternative strikes you. I'm sure your readers would also enjoy it.

I can see what you mean in terms of making them helpless, but wouldn't it be more throughly conveyed if was awake and struggling inside the stomach? It would show that their struggles are basically pointless, unable to do anything else but make the belly shift and wobble around and give Marunomi or her clones pleasure. It would simply further re-enforce the concept that they are age their captors mercy. It would also be a good opening for some negative self-reflecting on the preys part as they are trapped in a dark, humid, fleshy sack fully knowing that they are going to die a slow and painful death.

But still, to each their own, right. Besides, maybe you can use that later on, or even insert some of that into the Hanabi/Hinata alternative if you ever decide to do it.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

That's the thing about writing stories. Sometimes you have to go with one idea at the cost of another. Something I've actually had to do a few times while writing this. Anyway, in regard to your questions:

The alternate version of Hinata/Hanabi fight you described is pretty cool. Will I write it? Hmm...maybe, if the mood strikes me.

As far as the clones and what happens to them and the originals in Marunomi's stomach, I'll get more into it in the next chapter.

While I definitely see the appeal of depicting a predator with a squirming meal in its stomach, I just kind of prefer the prey to be unconscious (at least in this context). I feel it adds to their helplessness and loss of faculty.

Thanks for the post!

Flame14 - 2 years ago

I have to admit that I am both sad and happy about this chapter. I'm sure you remember my comments about the last chapter and thus may already know why I might feel both sad and happy.

The sad feeling is from half of me hoping to see a Hinata-stuffed Hanabi awkwardly trying to walk with a belly that was clearly far to big for her. While on the subject, I was wondering if you might be willing to give us an alternative version of Hinata's fight with the Hanabi and Neji clone? Just a sort-of what-if type of chapter piece. I'm thinking Hinata gets beaten, then just to add to the poor girl's torment/fright, Hanabi then strips the defenseless girl down to her underwear before slowly eating Hinata from the feet up. The idea of this being to instill further terror into the Hyuga princess as she is forced to watch as her body slowly disappears into her little sisters, only to end up curled tightly in the younger and smaller girl's stomach.

Hmm, is weird how I want to read about such a horrible moment happening to my favorite female character?

Anyway, while I may be sad at the lack of Hyuga-sister-on-Hyuga-sister vore action, I am quite happy to see Hinata stepping up and laying the smack-down on Marunomi, even if it was just a clone. I'm even more stoked at the fact that Hinata is now one of the only two too have avoided capture and that she is now clearly ready to throw down the gauntlet after learning her Naruto is one of Marunomi's captives.

A question about Marunomi and her clones. If Marunomi is digesting the Samui clone, who also was the one to absorb the real Samui, does that mean Marunomi is digesting the real Samui in real-time as she digests the clone, or will the real Samui fill Marunomi's stomach after the clone is digested?

Oh! Could the clones possibly switch out with the real person they are impersonating while in the stomach? Would make it interesting if they could and after Samui or Sakura are expelled from Marunomi's body they find Kauri and Ino inside their own bellies. Could make the victory somewhat bittersweet and possibly lay the seeds for other girls to be taken in by a similar sense of hunger that Marunomi deals with.

Also wanted to know if there was a particular reason you chose to have Marunomi's victims go unconscious once swallowed rather then have then awake and trying to struggle? Marunomi certainly seems like the type who would enjoy feeling her meals pathetic last struggles as she digests them.

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Okay for I'd like to see the original story up...or Survival of the Fittest. Whatever comes to you first. Anyways I forgot to say this in my review before I could have the chance.

I noted one part with Marunomi and that's how you described her stomach. You truly really creep me out with how you made it like a completely different entity of its own. And the fact that it's as hungry as a monster doesn't help...and I like it. You really did good on that paragraph as well as send a chill down my spine on it.

There. Sorry for not reviewing on that part sooner. So hope to see the next chapter up.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Chapter 9


    
Kurenai was well over halfway to the Hokage’s office. She had managed a steady speed while still being cautious; an effective combination from years of experience both in ninjutsu and living in the Leaf village. Still, she found it a little odd that she had seen no sign of any opposing forces thus far. But that was about to change.


    

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As Kurenai faces off against more familiar faces, Karui appears to be facing certain doom at the hands of Marunomi's Tenten clone. Can she escape the confines of her trap, and even if she does, will she stand a chance?

Happy Vore Day everyone! And yeah, sorry that it's been a little while since the last update, but I swear to you I did not deliberately do this so I could upload it on Vore Day. As it so happens, I was out of town this past weekend visiting family, so I really...
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Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Sorry if the level of detail wasn't to your liking, and I do admit those are some good ideas you mentioned. Generally, I try to keep a nice balance, painting a vivid picture of the vore scene while also not dwelling on it too long.

As for your questions, I believe this was mentioned in my previous Marunomi story, but anyone who is eaten by Marunomi is rendered unconscious. And Marunomi absorbs the chakra of anyone she digests, so the same goes for her clones.

Flame14 - 2 years ago

Seems things are getting pretty dire. 3 of Kunoichi are down, one absorbed and the others curled up in a belly. Hopefully Anko's presence can help tip things in the girls favor.

I will admit that I'm most looking forward to seeing what happens with Hinata. A part of me really wants to see Hinata curled up inside Hanabi's stomach (always had a thing for young female preds that went after larger prey) as I'd imagine the size difference would make it quite comical to see. It could also prove a good twist if it was the real Hanabi, who was somehow taught or learned how to swallow people, that are Hinata only to then be eaten by the real Marunomi. Yet another part of me REALLY wants to see Hinata come out the heroine of this story and be the one to defeat Marunomi and free everyone.

I will say that I'm a bit disappointed in the lack of details that went into the swallowing and showing the Samui clone packing Karui into her belly. Do to the clothing she wears you could have gotten away with quite a bit of exposition. Samui's top riding up, or how much her large breasts pressed against her top as Karui slid underneath them. I'm just saying that we are reading about girls eating girls, so it would make some sense to give some greater details of the process and the preds enjoyment.

Also a question. Sakura and Samui now have kunoichi in their guts, but we get no sign that they are even attempting to struggle. Are they unable to once inside the stomach for some reason? And does Marunomi actually get anything out of her clones digesting people?

Urielzael2 - 2 years ago

I'm kinda intrested about how Marunomi pace with Chakra usage. I know she could have already devoured most of the village but still using that insane amount of chakra is going to be her undoing.
I'm also glad that you haven't written about Marunomi instantly mastering Kurama (Kyubi/Ninetails) chakra. We have to remeber that even Pain who was close to being demigod thanks to Mararas rinengan wasn't able to do that.
About chapter alone it is going worse for heroines for each time. BTW i wonder why Kurenai haven't give them Lady Fury Herb (one in past arc) that Sakura uses to be expelled - it would make clone uncapable for fight so higher chance of Survival. But I guess it is just to spicy things up so I don't mind it (sometimes heroes and heroines are so reckless that thay forget basic tolls).

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Okay thanks for the info. Hope to see more of the chapter with more excitement. Laters.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Marunomi is Japanese for "swallow whole". Thanks for the review as always!

Chapter 8



    
Karui was making pretty good progress considering she was in unfamiliar territory. The monumental Hokage’s office was getting closer and closer with each turn she made and each road she went down. At this rate, perhaps she really would get to Marunomi before the others.


    
She made some turns around the

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Ino begins her battle with Marunomi's clone who is taking the form of her closest friend, Sakura. But does she stand a chance?

Okay, so yeah, admittedly the last chapter was pretty by-the-numbers (and short to boot). But this one? Ooh, I'm actually really happy with how this one turned out. And while it's still not quite as lengthy as some of the other chapters, I think there's still a good amount of material in it. I hope you guys enjoy reading it as much I enjoyed writing it! 

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Hey Nobodyman, glad to see another chapter of yours up and running. Seriously after the week of craziness and family drama I had to deal with I need it...not to mention it's also affected my mind. Mostly in terms of inspiration. Well, in any event I'd like to get on with your review for your new chapter.

Okay to start off you did really well with starting things up with Karui as she was scouting ahead to the Hokage's office. Though short, I can sorta understand why you written it like you did. All I could say is that the poor girl so got caught by one of the clones Marunomi sent. Hmm...bun-haired clone? I wonder who THAT could be? Could have done well with seeing how Karui been absorbed/eaten though. But for the best given the next part.

Now onto the main dish to which Ino faces off against the clone of her best friend/rival Sakura...which is really a clone which Marunomi controls. Got to admit that it's really nostalgic for me seeing this face off. Reminds me of how they fought when younger in the old series of Naruto. Anyways back on topic the fight scene here was rather intense as well as animated here. And from what I'm seeing you really did some homework for this fight as I noted that you had the Sakura clone use the chakra scalpel and described how deadly it is. You also really went all out with Ino as you had her using both Earth and Water Nature release as well as use a technique with the latter. I'm serious that's good creative thinking there. Not to mention you really brought it home when for at the near end of the fight I almost thought Ino had won this one and would get away with using that Chakra Hair Trap Technique. I'm being honest for you had me going there. But too bad that she had used the Shadow Possession and Expansion Jutsu for that means Ino's now lunch...which is no doubt the most horrifying thing for her. You really described Ino's inner feelings and turmoil as she was being swallowed and devoured into Sakura clone's stomach.

Now going on with Marunomi herself for this one, you really had her be more sadistic and egotistical on this one. Truly the mark of a typical villain but then again Marunomi's anything but typical. Not only allowing Ino to take her own wager that she made but also enjoys playing around with Ino's thoughts and feelings on her situation. Ranging from using Sakura's memories to egg Ino on but also using the techniques of her closest friends and family. Talk about cold and sadistic. But even more so when Marunomi(Sakura) devoured Ino whole and how she enjoys it that you showed her character in this one. Oh man this would prove to be more intense by the second as it would seem hopeless for our heroes.

All in all this chapter here seems rather well written and also worth the wait. Now I'm wanting to see what happens with Hinata and her situation with not just facing the clone of Neji but also that of her sister Hanabi. Makes me wonder HOW Hinata would be able to handle it given her past experience with Marunomi...and being dinner. Will she be able to make it out alive? I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter to see. Keep up the good work and hope to hear from you soon.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Deviantfan16 - 2 years ago

Well things are going from worse to even worse

Chapter 7


    
As a non-native, Samui was not familiar with the layout of the Leaf village. Kurenai had informed her and Karui that the Hokage’s office was towards the center of the village and should be fairly easy to spot. Still, all the little twists and turns, especially when she was trying to stay hidden, proved a bit of a challenge for Samui.


    

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As the invasion begins, Samui encounters a particularly formidable opponent. Will she be able to defeat her foe? 

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Yeah I thought as much. So don't worry about it. I just hope to see more action in the next chapter when it comes up. So I look forward to it. Keep up the good work.

Elias Azule

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Yeah, I admit I kinda was hoping I could do more with Samui. Though, in my defense, I'm not sure there's a whole lot to her character aside from being "cool" as you said.

Scion - 2 years ago

ya know, since she is gaining so many peoples identities and powers, is her own mind intact or is she suffering a sort of ego death having assimilated so many other individuals?

Im really big on asset/trait theft, especially when combined with a kind of "majin buu" style of absorption, where they are still tangibly whole yet still contributing themselves to their host.

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Hey good to see you up with another chapter, Nobodyman. This is exactly what I need after my new job started up again for me. Plus despite it being short I would do my best to given you a good review though it won't be as long as past others. So here we go!

Okay things are really starting to go underway starting with one of my favorite Naruto girls, Samui. You seem to capture a bit of her character really good as she infiltrates the village and confronts the fake Tsunade. Way to keep her...cool. Though you could stand to add more to her character a little bit. But that could be just me talking.

On with the fight scene itself, you really did good with how to describe the movement and actions for both Samui and her opponent. I mean the way you manage the description of their movement such as the way that the clone Tsunade was able to use her original's own abilities and techniques. Especially the Creation Rebirth Technique as Marunomi no doubt was thinking really smart on this fight. And I feel sorry for Samui given that all that hard work with fighting and setting off that bomb that it did not only drained her but also made Samui really vulnerable. Oh boy I this is going to definitely throw a wrench in Kurenai's plan to help release the village...not to mention that Samui would likely be chosen to be digested when all's said and done.

All in all you did good for this short chapter. I also liked to see what happens between Ino and "Sakura" would turn out. I can't wait to see how Marunomi would use Sakura's mind to her advantage. But what about Hinata as well as the rest? I guess I would have to wait and see for the next chapter. Keep up the good work and hoped to hear from you soon.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Deviantfan16 - 2 years ago

Well that was brief

Chapter 6


    
It was the day of reckoning. That is, the day that Hinata and the others would return to the Leaf village and see what fate had in store for them. Perhaps nothing would happen. Perhaps Marunomi had been found out and they would return to their family and friends, safe and sound. But, deep down, none of them truly believed that.


    

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Hinata and the others finally return to the Leaf village. Will they be able to save their home or will they too fall to Marunomi's gullet?

Hmm, surprisingly quick chapter, but now we're getting into the real meat of the story. Hinata, Ino, Kurenai, Samui, and Karui finally confront Marunomi. I won't give it away, but I can assure the results will be quite vorish. Hope to have the next chapter out within the next week. As always, thanks for reading! 

Urielzael2 - 2 years ago

Now it is warming up. If 6 Heroines won't stop Manumori in less than hour Shizune will be gone forever. Also since Marunomi posseses memories and knowledge of absorbed people she would be able to use character weaknesses like Hinatas love to Naruto and so on.

Generally I think that this arc should end happily i.e. Marunomis got defeated everyone being saved, and in next arc I wish Marunomi should got change of Heart. Instead being vicious predator to being avenger gorging on villain ninjas and rogues.

I am curious how series would develop and can't wait to see more of your work as I also like your survival of the fittest series. I also notice that this series will be same long or bit longer than previous Marunomis story arc which is convinient.

Good thing you haven't add ending like english dub DBZ: Will our heroines prevail or will entire Leaf Village end in Marunomis stomach, find out in next Naruto - Marunomis Revange.

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Hey Nobodyman, it's good to see a new chapter from you on this story. Though short, I feel that given what it's building up to, it's worth the wait. Sure it may not be as big as the previous one, this review would help you out a ton. Now on we go!

Nice building up everything starting with the beginning as Kurenai's group managed to get to the village. Especially given that the first paragraph really tells of the group's small fire of hope being extinguished by the reality of their situation. Kurenai having Hinata to scout ahead to see what was happening shows just that. The way you had her reaction towards "Neji" was really good as it sent shivers to my spine. The team of female ninja could only imagine what has happened while they were away. Looks to me that once they entered the village things are going to be wild. More so given that the "Hokage" already gave an order to hunt the group down.

Speaking of Marunomi, she really blended into her role as Tsunade well...especially given she's got a few free meals outta it. Just as she sensed the girls all coming to her web, Shizune arrives. Needless to say that the poor woman ended up as another meal for Marunomi's ever lasting hunger. Her chakra would definitely be what she needs for what she has in store for the girls. Especially given how she announced to the village that four "rogue" ninjas, it would no doubt be truly a beginning for chaos to ensue. And with Anko now coming into the frey, it's only a matter of who would make the first move and who gets who.

All in all this chapter really got me pumped for the next one to come. I would love to see how this began to build up to...and I wonder who would fall or succeed in this one? XD I guess that's what I'll find out. BUT that's why I like about your story for it keeps me in my seat! Keep up the good work!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

darklord42 - 2 years ago

I hope when she is defeated everyone she has eaten is returned

Deviantfan16 - 2 years ago

Well good set up for next time. Hope to see some awesome stuff next time

Chapter 5


    
On the second day of their return to the Leaf village, Hinata and the others stopped at a village to rest and, more importantly, procure some supplies. Kurenai stopped at a few shops to get everything she needed and, once she was done, set to work preparing the weapons they would need. The others huddled around her as she began to work on her materials, which included five small satchels, a pound of herb

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Things take a turn for the dramatic when Marunomi's absorption jutsu begins to take its toll on her. Meanwhile, Hinata make preparations for their upcoming battle.

Well, this is it. I've been uploading chapters of my stories for the past week or so, but I'm afraid this is where it ends. Oh no, that doesn't mean I'm done writing, it's just that, in all likelihood, I won't be uploading a chapter tomorrow. Currently, I'm still writing my way through Marunomi's Revenge so it's pretty...
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Urielzael2 - 2 years ago

I wonder, if both Tsunade and Sakura, which are heads of Medics in Leaf Village got absorbed, why Marunomi won't just make people of village think about that there is epidemic and got absorbing them 1 by 1 since she absorbed whole hospital.

Very nice chapter though, I'm sad that Tsunade fall for something such predictible like using her own student as bait.

Also one more thing, since Marunomis power are conecting to elasticy and devouring why didnt they placed cursed Mark as they did on Naruto in Blood Prison movie? This mark was so powerfull that it even make senjutsu chakra much weaker. Though it is not cannon so maybe you were right since it grants us such delightfull chapter.

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Hey Nobodyman, great to see you with another chapter. Though shame really on not being really able to see another chapter tomorrow but that's fine. But if it means that I look forward to seeing a greatly written chapter from you then I don't mind the waiting...especially given if it means to calm my nerves over my coming job. Enough on my problems in life so on with the review for this chapter.

Okay to begin we shift to Kurenai's group along with those of the Cloud Village as they rested in another village to prepare to face Marunomi. Mostly the mood they were in when discussing the plan of how to dispel the Absorption Jutsu. Hinata looked so hopeful along with Ino for hoping to free the people of the Pebble Village...only to be hit with the reality that it's not possible given what Marunomi did with Kaori in the last chapter. Hinata especially looked dishearten at the news she learned about the fate of the villagers...I still feel sorry for little Kaori. I especially can't wait to see when they arrive back to the Hidden Leaf Village.

Now we shift to the main antagonist of the story, Marunomi herself. From what I'm looking at it would seem that Marunomi was beginning to lose her grip on her absorption jutsu...or what seems to be losing it anyways. To begin she was slipping up in her Sakura guise while doing some healing jutsu exercises while trying to stave off her big hunger which seems to be growing by the minute. Having to hold out on living prey must really be taking it's toll on her when she holds out on lunch. It did come to a head when it turns out that her massive drain on chakra was due to a drink Tsunade gave to her. Got to hand it to the female Hokage given that she's no one's fool as she was able to spot Marunomi's disguise given.

Oh and your fight sequence between Marunomi and Tsunade was totally amazing. Not to mention that it so sounds like something from the manga/anime of the series. Man I got chills up my spine as I was on my seat when Tsunade finally overpowered her. But Marunomi got an ace up her sleeve as she used her first meal, Sakura, unconscious face to get Tsunade off guard and managed to absorb her into her being. Not just that but since becoming the Hokage she now has access to the profile of everyone in the village...which leads to that one girl aide, Yukari, into going into her stomach. Honestly really hot picturing Tsunade with a big vore belly on her. Anyways back to the point, no doubt that from this point, Marunomi's now got access to live meals she can choose from...but how long will that last? No doubt that those jutsus are reaching their limits. I'll just have to wait and see...well, at least WHO would be Marunomi's next meal.

On a final note, you did good with narrating through Anko's perspective as she was able to escape through Marunomi's clutches. You really got her thoughts all into this session of the chapter good. Especially the way she was able to escape into one of Orochimaru's old hidden labs. I really can tell how cautious Anko's being while taking cover in said lab. So that said good job there and can't wait to see how things turn out for her.

All in all a good exciting chapter on this one and you really went all out on this one. I can't wait to see how it goes so go on and take your time with it, Nobodyman. Keep up the good work!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Deviantfan16 - 2 years ago

Well that went from bad to worse quickly.

Ginga - 2 years ago

Will we see her get yugito

Flame14 - 2 years ago

Honestly I had really been hoping to see Marunomi eat Tsunade, but absorbing her simply make too much sense. It's actually quite similar to something I started in an interactive story on Writing.com, though the ones doing the take over were Hinata Shadow Clones intent on being able to live their own lives, but hey, same difference.

So the girls need to activate the 'bomb' and somehow get it inside of Marunomi. Hm, I'm sensing a repeat of what Sakura did the first time coming, but would Marunomi fall for it?

Chapter 3


    
The following day, Tsunade arrived as she always did. As far as she was concerned, it was just another typical day in the Leaf Village. Her day would be filled with paperwork, mission assignment, correspondence, and, of course, some training with her protégé. As if on cue, her door opened and in walked the person Tsunade believed to be Sakura.


 

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Marunomi infiltrates the Leaf village while donning a familiar disguise. Meanwhile, Hinata's team, as well as a squad from the Cloud village, continue their journey to the Pebble village.

So I actually did a bit of re-writing for this chapter. Originally there was more narrative that, personally, I thought gave away too much too soon. I'm sure some of you may hate me for that, but my story, my rules. 

Scion - 2 years ago

I really hope she has the ability to steal some of his techniques or use nine-tails somewhat. :)

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Interesting idea, but no. To Marunomi, Naruto is just another chakra source.

Deviantfan16 - 2 years ago

Yeah its easier to assume she just put Tenten and Sakura in her stomach

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

It should become clear in the next chapter or two. Sorry, I know that part's a bit weird. I probably should've revised it a bit more.

Deviantfan16 - 2 years ago

They whats in her stomach?

Chapter 2


    
Marunomi had wasted no time in making her escape. The staff of the Food Village prison had been completely blind-sided as she stormed her way out in a veritable feeding frenzy. Though the jailer had been refreshing, she was nowhere near enough to sate Marunomi’s massive hunger. On her way out, Marunomi devoured several of the prison staff and even ate another prisoner that was being brought in. Aft

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News spreads of Marunomi's escape and Hinata in particular takes the news pretty hard. But could a mission be the thing to alleviate her of her stress? 

Urielzael2 - 2 years ago

I like this story a lot. I just wonder if Marunomi would master other type of VoreJutsu (?). I also looking forward to maybe intresting plot development. Maybe eating other people will cause her to change her character a bit so after devouring Hinata she would be more compasionate and shy. Can't wait for next chapter and keep up with awesome work.

almindore58 - 2 years ago

I would guess s to how Marunomi is gonna eat the village, but that might lead to spoilers

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Hey Nobodyman, glad to see another chapter from you so soon. I'm so happy to see one from you and especially given the week I had. So you perfectly timed your chapter posting good. Now onto the review.

Okay it's now confirmed that Marunomi's on the rampage...or just taking her time since her prison break three months ago. Though it must be tough on the Konoha ninja girls there to learn as such. Especially for one pretty pearled eyed beauty named Hinata Hyuga. She really must be scarred after the experience of near being food for Marunomi. She seriously remembers being food for that mad woman and as well as the sensation of being trapped within Marunomi's stomach. I got to say that you really know how to bring out Hinata's own inner fears and insecurities to light. Basically makes me wonder what else you have in store for the pretty girl. Hopefully that mission at the "Village Hidden Among the Pebbles" would help on that...but something tells me that it's only the beginning for her anxieties. Given the that the Hidden Cloud Village would be involved, makes me wonder who would be there.

Okay we get to the main event and that would be Sakura's reunion with Marunomi herself. I got to tell you that you really did a good job with the fight sequence between the two. And got to admit you did your homework when it comes to looking up how the ninja techniques of Naruto works. Back on topic I almost sworn that Sakura would have beaten Marunomi a second time easily. Mostly due to how she learned from her past encounter with the hungry ninja...if not for that new ability of hers. It was so graphic while at the same amazing given how Marunomi's new absorption technique works. And boy was Sakura rather scared and off guard as she's pulled into that woman's body and try as she might, even a her great strength wasn't able to save her.

All in all you did good with this chapter, Nobodyman. I'm seriously getting stoked to see what Marunomi would have in mind with her infiltration of Konoha. Mostly with how she would be able to pull something off like that. And how would Hinata handle her mission along with Kurenai and Ino given the current state of things? I can't wait to find out! I would love to see how it goes from here! Please continue with the good work. Laters!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Deviantfan16 - 2 years ago

No i just know how both sides work. I dont care for either though ;)

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Seems I'm dealing with a Sith lord. Still, I'm afraid I must not give in.

Chapter 1


    
It had been one year since Marunomi was locked away. A lot had happened in that time; not that she would know. She wasn’t even sure how long she’d been imprisoned. Time didn’t mean much when you were confined to a dank dark cell day-after-day. But that was her sentence: Life in prison. For the rest of her life (however long that might be) she would be stuck in that prison cell, never ex

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One year after the events of The Hungry Ninja, Marunomi finds herself with a lengthy prison sentence that may not last for long.

Welp, here it is, the sequel to The Hungry Ninja, featuring the voracious Marunomi. Honestly, I always wanted to do a follow-up to it and show Marunomi chowing down on more Kunoichi, but couldn't come up with a coherent plot until fairly recently. And, well, here we are!

The story isn't finished yet, but I will be uploading a few more...
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almindore58 - 2 years ago

Didn't think u had a sequel in mind. Way to go, Dude!

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Awesome! Thanks for the review!

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Hey Nobodyman, long time no see. It's been a long while since I saw you do something with Marunomi. Personally I think that she was my most favorite fan created vore predator ever. Especially given how she was inspired by the Power Rangers monster. That said though seeing you put up a sequel to Marunomi's exploits would be a pleasure for me and others to enjoy. Here comes my review.

Okay I'll be honest for yes there are some spelling and grammar errors I see on some sentences. It was rushed for the most part but from what I'm seeing this is starting to get good. Just keep it slow on your part for the next few chapters and they'll turn out really good for the readers.

Now for the start of the story itself. Wow, just over a year since she was given life imprisonment and Marunomi's literally wasted to nothing save for a few meager meals. In a way I almost can't help but feel sorry for her. Pity even if not for her female jailer. Said jailer so deserves to make Marunomi suffer for devouring her fiance a long while back...but boy would there be a bad case of irony here. To think that Marunomi would be able to escape just by eating a rat would help gain the boost she needed...not just that but Jailer's own case of wanting revenge was also her great opportunity. Got to say that it's really not smart of said Jailer to enter the room just to get a few hits in on Marunomi...for she just ended up as chow for that ninja. Especially one who had long been depraved of a huge feast. To this end, looks to me said Jailer got to be reunited with her husband...in the belly of the beast.

Now that she's free, seems to me she's after revenge at the girls who she nearly ate...I wonder who would be first? Or who she would eat considering this is brand new fanfiction all together. I would like to see how this turns out. Despite it being a first draft I can tell that this would be an amazing fanfiction to read. Keep up the good work, Nobodyman.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

A Brief Respite


    
On board the Gourmet Mothership, Princess Sweet appeared before her Mother, her head bowed in subservience.


    
“WELL, MY DAUGHTER,” Queen Gourmet said. “YOU CAME CLOSE. CLOSER THAN EITHER OF YOUR SISTERS.”


    
The Quee

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Having beaten the three princesses, the Sailor Senshi discuss what do when they are met by a quite unexpected visitor.

Sorry. No vore in this one. Just a little breather chapter before the next one, which...hasn't been written yet. So yeah, I'm afraid that's it for now.

The thing, I actually envisioned this to be kind of a long-running episodic series (much like the Sailor Moon anime) where the Sailor Senshi would be cooked and eaten in many different ways. And...
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Alice3hoping - 1 year ago

Hopefully you continue this story. its been a while and i await with bated breath

gundamfanx0000 - 2 years ago

Hope the story wasn't given up I'd like to see it continue I'm hoping for 2 endings bad end sailor scouts get eaten heck maybe even reborn into the gourmet empire and also the expected good end heros defeat villains

MisterEbony - 2 years ago

Shame this is the end for now. This is a great setup. I look forward to the day more is written and in the meantime am enjoying the works you have.

almindore58 - 2 years ago

Just checking

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

LOL, it's bro

Prologue



    
The mothership of the Gourmet Empire floated ominously towards Earth. Onboard were the royal lineage of the empire and their many servants; not to mention stocks and stocks of food. For centuries, the royal family of the Gourmet Empire and its many subjects had traversed the cosmos partaking of the local cuisine of any planets they came across, including any and all denizens of said plane

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Whoops! It's been so long since I wrote this, I actually forgot I wrote a prologue chapter for this series. Well, enjoy 

almindore58 - 2 years ago

No prob, man

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thank you!

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Alright, I think I get the picture. Right now I'm not sure I really have any stories in my mind that I would like to see anyone else write (plus, I'm still writing my own stories), but I'll let you know if I change my mind

MisterEbony - 2 years ago

Each makes a request of the other in a general sense. For example, in the past I did a trade where I made a prep story featuring the Grand Duke of Owls, and in return got one I asked where Panthy from El Arca got a willing buffet. They are meant just for fun and sometimes come out different then expected but I do enjoy them a lot.

almindore58 - 2 years ago

Awesome work

Chef Pastry


    
After returning home to report the news of their encounter, the Sailor Senshi and Luna and Artemis contemplated the next course of action to take.


    
“So this Gourmalien was different from yesterday?” Artemis asked.


    
“Yeah. I

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After narrowly escaping digestion from Salty and Spicy, the Sailor Senshi must now face the last Gourmet princess, Princess Sweet. 

gundamfanx0000 - 7 months ago

I really enjoy reading this hope you get to continue and rewrite it someday

Werewolf-Hero - 2 years ago

I want the Scouts to like turn the tables on it and eat the princesses.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thank you!

MisterEbony - 2 years ago

Being a fan of pastry prep this was a big hit for me. I agree it is a shame Usagi didnt become a meal but this writing is awesome!

I am amazed. I am following your work. You rule.

almindore58 - 2 years ago

My suggestion, rewrite all these chapters, but have the villains win out in every one

Chef Barbecue


    
On board the Gourmet Mothership, Princess Salty, defeated and dejected, had been summoned to appear before her mother.


    
“SO, SALTY…” said Queen Gourmet. “…IT APPEARS YOU HAVE FAILED YOUR TRIAL.”


    
&ldqu

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The Sailor Senshi have defeated Princess Salty, but how will they fair against Princess Spicy? 

almindore58 - 2 years ago

It's fine, just pointing it out

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thanks!

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Yeah, sorry. Like I said, I haven't proofread these

almindore58 - 2 years ago

I did notice u called spicy "salty" by mistake at a point

gosoxtim - 2 years ago

keep this story going i lovei t

Chef Skillet


    
It was half past nine and Usagi was ready to greet the day with a cheerful smile. After all, it was Saturday; a day free from the stresses of school where Usagi could go out and do whatever she wanted. There were so many things one could do on a weekend, but, as it so happened, Usagi had planned a good old fashioned trip to the mall with her friends. She would get dressed, have breakfast, and then be

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The Sailor Senshi meet a new deadly and quite ravenous foe.

So I've had this completed for a while, and I wanted to go back and proofread it, but I never got around to it. Now I'm working on another story and I figure I may as well upload it now or I'll probably never upload it. So here it is, and I apologize for any typos or spelling/grammar mistakes.

Also, in my attempt to keep with continuity of the show, this takes place between the Infinity and Dream arcs (or...
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almindore58 - 2 years ago

It's fine. I just find myself rooting for the villains since the Naruto story u did

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Sorry. This is just how I like to write my stories

almindore58 - 2 years ago

Can't any of these villains win? :(

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Thank you! You can expect the next chapter tomorrow

MisterEbony - 2 years ago

I like this! Please contijue the series. I look foraard to it if you do.

Chapter 4
The worst situation had finally
come to pass. Their sister, Kalia, had given herself to the darkness.
Perhaps there was something they could have done to prevent it, but
now was not the time for regrets.
The situation
was unprecedented. The darkness alone was dangerous, but a goddess
under the influence of the darkness could be catastrophic.
Unfortunately, Kalia was in the Dark Realm now, a foul, evil,
otherworldly place that none of them could enter; nor would any of
them want to. T

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Chapter 4 of The Five Goddesses, in which Demi's history and how she was chosen by the goddesses is revealed.

There's an extra bit of narrative towards the beginning of the chapter. Otherwise, it's pretty much the same as my first draft. Hope you enjoy! 

BlueMarvel611 - 1 year ago

Hey Nobodyman, I was re-reading your story of the Five Goddesses and I stopped to review THIS chapter in particular. It's my way of making up for not being able to review it before. So that said this review is special as it gives me a good look into Demi's character. No seriously a proper view. So here it goes.

I must say that opening it with the five goddesses themselves peering into the Streams of Time was really amazing. Shows just how in bad they need a hero to save their world. Given the previous chapters, it's not wonder they don't fear the consequences of using the Streams of Time. Though got to admit that it's sudden...but it makes sense with Demi.

Speaking of our main heroine of the story, this chapter really gives us all a very good glimpse of what Demi's childhood was like. From losing her parents to living within an orphanage to running away, she's got it rough. I can't blame her for being so strong willed and smart to people. Especially given how she was treated by the bullies in the orphanage as well as the adults there. Who can blame her for being harsh with the goddesses given the way life's treated her. Heck growing up from one harsh environment to another can do that to a child. We also got to how she was able to find her own brand of sword as well as how she met and was taught by her Master Qi. She really has it rough.

But at the same time we really saw her grow up to the warrior woman we see now...err well back then anyways. XD.

Mostly with how she went from hunting to competing in tournaments for a living. Decent for sure given. Heck not to mention how she's eager to face the goddess and tell them off in person despite the odds. You did good with describing the fight that Demi has with the other competitors. Though a few things stood out to me. The first was Demi's actions when it comes to defending a fighter from that giant Gregor's attack. The second part would have to be the interactions between the goddesses in response to it. Sure that Marcus Zirconis was obvious for Minerva but it would seem the others were somewhat in between. Mostly between Tiama and Chlora as they seemed to leaned a bit towards Demi. Given Tiama's argument it'd make sense that in the end that they'd choose Demi over the rest.

But what really sold me was how Demi was able to talk back to the goddesses like regular people. Not like the divine beings they were painted as. Just chew them out for giving her such a crappy life. And if I didn't know any better, I'd say that Minerva was rather impressed with the Demi's forwardness herself inspite of her refusal to see Demi's inner potential. XD But from this part alone, it would seem that the goddesses have found their champion. Though not sure what will happen next.

All in all, from what I've read of the new chapters, it's been rather fun reviewing this chapter. Gave me some more insight of Demi's character and background. I'm ashamed that I did not review this chapter sooner. Anyways I can't wait to see what comes next. So hoped that I get to see chapter 9 up and running. I can't wait to see it. Laters and keep up the good work, Nobodyman.

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

no one - 2 years ago

I've gotta say, I really love this series and hope that you finish soon. Keep up the great work!

Chapter 3
Four Years Ago
“Alright, so all I gotta do is
break that stone apart. Right?” Demi asked.
“As you so bluntly put it,”
said the goddess Minerva, “Your objective is to channel, focus, and
apply your power. Once you have achieved the proper focus, there will
be no defense that you cannot break through.”
“Right, so wail on it as hard as
I can,” Demi replied.
The goddess sighed, correctly
foretelling the fruitless outcome of the exercise.
Immediately, Demi unleashed a
d

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Chapter 3 of The Five Goddesses, in which Kalia confronts her sister Minerva, the goddess of fire. 

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Glad you like the story. If you want to read the rest of it, you can find the first drafts of the remaining chapters on the first post of my writing thread at https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=45374

I plan to upload the remaining chapters to my gallery after I revise them. The story will still be mainly the same, but I plan on adding some extra scenes in some chapters.

Geilomat - 2 years ago

Usually i hate oral vore! i like unbirthing and nipple vore more like oral vore! but in this story its great!! I really like this story and I hope there a new chapter coming!

and sorry for my bad english!

Geilomat - 2 years ago

Usually i hate oral vore! i lioke unbirthing and nipple vore more like oral vore! but in this story its great!! I really like this story and I hope there a new chapter coming!

and sorry for my bad english!

Chapter 8 – The
Conclusion
Back in the Village Hidden Amongst
the Food, things had calmed down a bit. As Lady Sushi had told Sakura
and Hinata, the people who been transformed into chakra orbs were
turning back to normal. However, the people were still understandably
nervous about the events that had transpired. Lady Sushi did her best
to assure the people that everything would be fine, though she wasn’t
entirely sure herself. Her mind intermittently went back to the five
kunoichi, whom she

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The Final Chapter!

Not much to this chapter. Just a quick little resolution to wrap everything. No vore I'm afraid, thought there is a bit of stuffing.

And with that, Naruto: The Hungry Ninja is over! I hope you all enjoyed reading it. I definitely enjoyed writing it. 

emilbootanimefreak - 2 years ago

Nice ending to the story, would love to see this get turned into a comic.

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Super! I'm glad you liked it.

As for the character descriptions, I tried to give people a general idea of what Marunomi looked like, but wanted to leave the details up to their imaginations. Honestly, I'm not totally sure what Marunomi looks like in my mind, myself.

Scion - 2 years ago

Even though she didn't win - I enjoyed this nonetheless. Your descriptions of the action and fight scenes were excellent. Transitions to different parts of the story were smooth.

I really enjoyed the imagery and foreshadowing of her rubbery ability, especially being used after her artifact was destroyed.

My only complaint/critiscm I guess are the few character descriptions, I had to reread a few sections to get a full image of what she looked like.


Flame14 - 2 years ago

Nice ending. Hope to see more Naruto related vore from you. Maybe next time we can see some of the girls partaking of some live meals themselves. Would love to see that, especially for Hinata.

Chapter 7 – The
Solution
Marunomi walked towards Sakura. Her
belly, full of Sakura’s fallen comrades, bounced with each step.
She was quite keen to finish things up and partake of the girl’s
delicious body, but wondered if perhaps she could have some fun with
her first. After all, she had already eaten the Byakugan girl and now
there was no one who could stop her.
Sakura, meanwhile, was totally
stunned. Faced with the hopelessness of the situation, she was
suffering a panic attack. She w

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Sakura is the only one left to oppose Marunomi. Does she stand a chance against her enormous power and appetite? 

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Heh you're welcome for hope to see it until then. Keep up the good work. Laters.

Elias Azule

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Wow! Thank you so much for the long in-depth review. I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story.

And yes, there actually is one more chapter after this one. I'll probably post it tomorrow.

Thanks again!

almindore58 - 2 years ago

Please let Marunomi win next chapter

BlueMarvel611 - 2 years ago

Hey Nobodyman, I've just finished reading all of your chapters for the Hungry Ninja and I got to say you did really well using the elements from Power Rangers' Terror Toad for it. This is very clever of you to put those elements into your story as you did. But I would get to it in a bit for it would be in the review. Now on with the show.

Now as I said before, you really created your OC villainess Marunomi good in terms of playing the part of the antagonist. Though must say you really were trying to be creative in setting up the place for such a villian for this story. I mean, yeah it makes sense for this story's theme that the village would be named "Village Hidden Amongst the Food" though it would have sounded better in Japanese. That's just my opinion. Anyways, you did a good job with adding some background to your village created for the story like how its culture worked as well as how it worked. It did give me a few laughs too in the first chapter from seeing the fat villagers eating to seeing the head of the village, Lady Sushi, herself. It really does sound so funny...up until meeting Marunomi where the serious stuff begins.

Onto more of Marunomi herself for there are some points I'd like to point out on how you did and create her character. Mostly with how crazed you made her once she took the artifact. The Behemoth's Tongue that you written about seems to almost sound like something from western culture but I can't blame you given how hard it would be to translation words to Japanese. That and the way you created Marunomi's Melting Pot Jutsu, for despite the name, you really did a good job in being creative on it as well as her ninja abilities. Heck never expected for you to make Marunomi's chakra infused body into that of rubber. Very clever given her background and how she turned into the mad character as she is today. And the way you managed to have her eat her "meals" was also clever to put into the story. The way of how the Behemoth's Tongue as well as her devouring Terumi, Hinata, and Sakura, I was reminded of the Terror Toad. So you did good in making use of such an idea from the Power Rangers monster. That and how it worked for her devouring her meals' chakra.

Now onto the review of your latest chapter that you put up. I must say that you really got Sakura to shine through here. Despite seeing both Terumi and Hinata devoured one by one, she's not going to give in. Even through Marunomi's hungry taunts won't put her down as she was pulled by her long tongue and tossed around like a doll. That said, her time came as she found a way to escape and stabbed her tongue...really smart there. Good of you to keep Sakura going despite the immense power of the chakra she took from her meals. Of course to be honest, I was surprised that when Sakura confronted Marunomi and ALLOWED herself to be devoured by the crazed rogue ninja. I honestly thought it was the end...up until she threw up not just Sakura but the rest of the girls as well. I was surprised and glad that Sakura was able to use the herbs called Lady's Fury, the do it. Glad that each of the girls got their way of getting payback at Marunomi for making them her meals. Good way to end a chapter by the way.

All in all you really did a good job NM. I can't wait to see if you would put a final chapter for this one. What would happen with Marunomi as well as the five ninja girls? I'd like to see how it would end for that would be nice to see. So keep up the good work. And again sorry for not reviewing all your other chapters. Laters!

Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel

Chapter 6 – The
Fear
Sakura and Hinata stared at their
opponent intensely, and Marunomi stared right back at them. As they
tried to think of a strategy, Sakura and Hinata’s eyes were
intermittently drawn to Maruomi’s outstretched stomach; the
enormous blob that had already taken their friends and now threatened
to consume them as well.
“Foolish
little girls,” Marunomi said abruptly. “You should’ve run away
when you had the chance. Now you’re just going to be two more meals
for m

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With their team leader gone, Sakura and Hinata are the only ones left to take on Marunomi. But do they stand a chance?

So I actually ended re-writing and adding a lot to this chapter. Maybe I was just hitting writing fatigue, but, while the initial draft wasn't bad, I felt like more could have been done with it. Overall, I'm happy with the new version, and I hope you enjoy it. 

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Well, you'll just have to wait and see. And as of now, no, I do not do commissions. But I'll let you know if that changes.

And I'm all for TF. If I ever thought of a way to incorporate it into a story I would definitely use it.

Scion - 2 years ago

So I doubt that Marunomi will win in the end - do you do commissions?

Also what are your thoughts toward TF? As in the predator gains slight attributes or traits from those she's absorbed? Like highlights, body shape, markings etc

Chapter 5 – The
Loss
Temari was starting to run out of
chakra. Even while trying to conserve it, she found she had to use up
a good amount of chakra just to fend off Marunomi’s attacks. Even
worse, she had no idea when or even if Sakura and Hinata would come,
but she had hold out hope that they would arrive soon. And then, of
course, there was the matter of the Behemoth’s Tongue. She wasn’t
sure of the exact timing, but it had been at least a few minutes
since Marunomi had last used, so

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Sakura and Hinata finally arrive on the scene, but how will they fair against Marunomi.

So yeah, in case you haven't guessed yet, this story (or at least the whole battle with Marunomi) is lifted pretty much straight from the Terror Toad/Dora Boogaranan episode from Power Rangers/Zyuranger. I don't know, it's just one of my favorite vore scenes and I wanted to adapt it in kind of a new way and...well, here we are. Hope you're liking it. 

Ginga - 2 years ago

Ok thx anyway and am looking forward to seeing how it goes

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Story's already finished, I'm afraid. It's just a matter of me revising and reviewing the remaining chapters for grammar, spelling, diction, etc. But thank you for your input.

Ginga - 2 years ago

Could I ask for the mizukage to join the fight

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

Go right ahead

Scion - 2 years ago

Nice! Are you going to do those belly tattoos?

Chapter 1 – The
Mission
It had been a
while since Sakura had received a mission. Day-to-day training with
Tsunade and studying healing jutsu was fine and all, but Sakura was
really itching for an opportunity to stretch her legs and put her
jutsu to good use. For days she had begged Tsunade for a mission,
but, aside from some D-rank missions, which would have been a waste
of her talents, there just wasn’t anything coming through. Until,
finally, it seemed Sakura’s prayers had been answered.

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Sakura and her kunoichi friends are tasked with a very important and unusual mission.

So I've been meaning to write a story like this for a while now and, just a few weeks ago, it suddenly came to life in my mind and I just had to write it down.

The story's finished now, it's only eight chapters, so now I'm just proofreading the rest of them. The rest of the story will be uploaded soon.

No vore in the first chapter, I'm afraid, though there is some...
[ Continued ...

Neznamy - 2 years ago

This is actually a really good first chapter. It's got a good plot to it as well.

Day 2 – Part 1
Upon waking from her second
two-hour nap session, Roxanne had observed that her formerly bulging
belly had reverted back to its usual flat shape. She also observed
that she had to take a rather large bowel movement; an occurrence
that she correctly believed she would have to get used to if she
continued to eat people. She stepped outside to relieve herself and
then returned to the cave. Remembering the rules of the tournament,
and with Tina asleep, Roxanne attempted to use the

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It's Day Two of the Survival of Fittest Tournament and Roxanne is one ability stronger. What will be in store for her and Tina on the second day? 

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

I didn't make a list because the day isn't over yet. Note that this is Day 2 "PART 1". And nope, I haven't run out of name ideas. I've got a whole list of them.

Scion - 2 years ago

nice, :)

Squall - 2 years ago

You didn't make a list like you did in the other one. Did you run out of name ideas? You should look up a name generator and just come up with 100 names, powers and backstories. This is an example of good writing.

Chapter 1
This is the land of
Terrania. It is a land marked by great mountains, valleys, oceans,
forests, monuments, and cities where the people live in relative
peace and prosperity. The land is protected by the five goddesses,
Chlora, Minerva, Thora, Ashera, and Tiama, who hold the five elements
of Earth, Fire, Thunder, Air, and Water in balance, keeping the world
in harmony.
However, there is a
darkness that exists within this world. A dark realm that, while
usually kept at bay, is in constan

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In the land of Terrania, the five Goddesses rule the land in peace and harmony. But that is all about to change.

So after sharing this story in the forum, I'm finally uploading it to my gallery. And there are a few changes! Mostly grammar and spelling fixes and changing or removing some sentences that sounded weird, but I've also added a few new things! I'll continue to revise and post the other chapters in due time. In the meantime, I hope you enjoy! 

Blahblahbum - 2 years ago

Oh neat! Really loved your work on the forums, nice to see you uploading your pieces to the writings archive.

Day
1
As her body was
elevated inside the cramped metal tube, she began to stir awake. She
could feel the motion of the elevator moving her, but, more than
that, her entire body felt sore; especially her legs, which were
crouched and pushed up against her. Barely able to open her eyes, the
motion eventually stopped, and she lied there for several minutes,
like sardines packed in a crushed tin box. While she waited, she
tried to recall where she had been before she lost consciousness, and
the la

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My first vore story upload to my gallery!

In a dystopian future, a girl named Roxanne is thrown into a battle for her life with a very vorish twist! 

Nobodyman - 2 years ago

I might if I feel it's relevant. For now, you can just assume that they were all ambushed like Roxanne.

Squall - 2 years ago

Will you be going into how the others got caught?

Jamie263 - 3 years ago

What a brilliant concept. I look forward to reading more of it.

dragodragoon - 3 years ago

Hehehehe its like a voric version of the Hunger Games. ^.^

Godeater - 3 years ago

Now this is what a can a power eat people and gaon power. Awesome story cant wait to see what happens next.