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This was not the first time she'd done this, it was pretty standard by now really, he was in fact number 52 on her list. A nearby village had recently come to be aware of the presence of a nearby dragon, and as a group of people often did when confronted with news such as this, they panicked a little bit. She didn't even know if the dragon had done anything wrong at this point in time really, but the fact was that the villagers had sent out a call

The Dragon Slayer

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Classic vore formula, female dragon hunter, male dragon, different style of ending though. Request from FyrreX. 

magresco - 18 years ago

Thank you very much, this is exactly the type of comment I hope to see every day I load up this website. I've been working on the tense thing for a bit now, it's just a really bad habit I've got and need to break. Again, thank you for reading my work.

BerserkerB - 18 years ago

Although the type of vore is not what I like, overall, I think you did a pretty good job.
A few criticisms though:
First off, you might want to double space between paragraphs. It helps the story look less confining.
Secondly, you switch around your tenses too much. I see most of the story has points where you use future tense and then where you use past tense.
An example to fix this (if you want to stay in past tense): Instead of "The dragon would groan," you should say, "The dragon groaned."
You definitely have potential, just practice and keep writing.

FyrreX - 18 years ago

wow you really out did yourself! thank you! *favorites!*

Name: Cerberus
Role: Predator
Different Ages: Puppy and Adult
Puppy: Puppy isn't exactly the right word for Cerberus at any point in time, but in his younger form he's about the size of a fully grown medium sized dog, and is only able to take the his fully wolven form. The intelligence from his demonic side has not yet really settled in at this time, and he's more playful than anything. While being playful, he also has a tendency to be extremely "friendly" and can still put both of his members t

Cerberus

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Profile of character Cerberus. 

magresco - 18 years ago

I did it as a little "I'm bored thing" last night. I've been meaning to put up some kind of information on the characters that will make multiple appearances in my stories and/or make their way into RP's.

Ragtime - 18 years ago

Hm... interesting.

This story was inspired by a post made by muddworg, "horse vs. slime or blob", so if you like this story, then I suggest that you give muddworg and nice little thank you, because without an idea at the moment I was pretty much just sitting on my hands doing nothing. Without further adue, here it goes....
        
She was not at all a bad thing to look at, a nicely shaped female anthro horse, a nice muscular belly, well toned thighs and arms, a slender neck

Taste for horse meat...

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It's been a while since I've thrown something up at all, hasn't it? Short and sweet, inspired by an indirect request, I suppose is the best way to put it. 

magresco - 18 years ago

Thank you very much! Especially for that part about the grammar. I try to keep my spelling, grammar and such in check, I make a few errors I know, but I like to think I'm pretty decent.

Also, I suppose I shall return a compliment with a compliment, I've always loved your work, and you are in fact one of the artists that got me into vore originally (not really the right thing to say I guess, I've always kinda been into vore as far as I can tell, but I think you might kinda know what I mean, probably) so it's really nice to see that you like my work in turn!

unicorn - 18 years ago

Hey, this is pretty nifty, i'm glad to see you got inspired to write it. *loves stories with horses in them... and predatory vore creatures with horses in them, hehe*

It's nice to see writing with very few errors. Like, you could probably pass elementary school (and then some) which i hate to say would be a challenge for many authors of adult furry stories...

I say write more! Especially with equines! -:3

        
It was a rare situation, when two intelligent and equally strong monsters, demons or other infernal creatures really came together without some kind of common goal or enemy, so this situation really wasn't a surprise for Lillith nor her master. Two demon wolf brothers had moved into the woods outside of the labyrinth owned by the minotaur, and had begun to cause problems for them almost immediately. With their first child, Pandora - who was growin

Cerberus Concieved

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Lillith deals with a pair of troublesome wolf demons, and ends up bringing her second child into the world in the process. 

acrylic - 11 years ago

I hope to read more series of Lilith.

shaesullivan - 16 years ago

Will there be anymore from our loveable twoheaded canine this year?

magresco - 18 years ago

That's okay, I'm volun-telling Ragtime to be my new proofreader.

darkmark67 - 18 years ago

very nice, your stories are becoming a favorite of mine rather quickly! kinda what Ragtime said but i really cant talk, my grammer is so much worse. good job and cant wait for more!

Ragtime - 18 years ago

Very nicely written. Grammer could still improve a little bit, but I love the story, and I like the whole scenario that you're setting up with this. I can't wait to hear more of Lilith and her children!

        
A brand new job, working in the Lord's Manor no less! Of course, as optimistic as Lily could be about that, the fact that she got to work where all the politics and play of the nobility in the city happened, she couldn't really shake the feeling of well, she was just a maid, but regardless, it was still not a bad job, a little cleaning, a little fetching, nothing that she couldn't handle, and for a job as a servant girl it paid rather well. A bit

The Lord's Daughter

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The Lord's Daughter takes a bit of time to get acquainted with the new servant girl. 

magresco - 18 years ago

I'll past your tense!::Fist shake::
In all seriousness though, thanks for the tip.

Ragtime - 18 years ago

There story was very good, although you used the conditional tense rather oddly in some places. For a story like this, I would suggest sticking to the past tense, or at the very least, the present.

Yrrsa - 18 years ago

I like it!

Lillith Created
        
In the stories you heard about heroes, they never ended up like this! That's what she thought as she squirmed against the chains that held her to the wall of her new cell, stripped of her armor she'd been given rather meager clothing in replacement, a small animal skin loin cloth that hung down in front of her sex about her waist, and a similarly small top that rested over her breasts at the moment. She'd been asked by the villager

Lillith Created

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The first story in what I hope to make into a long series. 

magresco - 18 years ago

Well, the second story is in the works as it is, a tad different from the first, but I fully intend on keeping up with Lillith as things go. Who knows, maybe she'll even show up in some RP's.

Straxacore - 18 years ago

I loved it. I want more, lots and lots more

Ragtime - 18 years ago

I like it. You've got a lot of potential here.

magresco - 18 years ago

Awww, thank you very much.

brandonflare - 18 years ago

I am just leaving a comment to let you know that there is someone who liked this story.