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nervousvampire - 2 days ago

that gave me a good chuckle, thanks

TheMysteriousSadSack - 2 days ago

Mordreds crass nature is so fun to watch in action. Also a special word for Astolfo: stop burning Gudako's five stars! She's not even getting the prisms smh

dealing with traitors to the to time patrol

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Tags: Oral Vore F/F fighting Implied Digestion Unwilling Prey F/FF Female Prey Human Prey Female Pred Original Character Implied Fatality Dragon Ball Z Accidental vore Saiyan pred Super saiyan Younger pred implied masturbation Angry prey Unwilling to Willing prey dragon ball xenoverse Unconscious Prey annoyed pred Child predator saiyan girl Uncaring Pred fight scene Casual pred Time Patroller saiyan prey Underage pred bickering prey

A commission for https://aryion.com/g4/user/Heartless.

My first foray into doing a story using someone else's oc. Lilac is sent to deal with two rouge time patollers out to reshape earth's history and set themselves up as queens by defeating the dreaded king piccolo.

Lilac the saiyan belongs to https://aryion.com/g4/user/Heartless

I had fun writing the fight and tried first person writing style so let me know how it worked.

unrelated but...
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doomed - 4 days ago

Sure

nervousvampire - 4 days ago

ah a kindred soul.
Honestly it's one of the reasons I started vore writing, so I could try to improve my writing, to get to the point where I could even attempt a real book. Be it novel, comic or manga. I don't care how I just want to make it now.

care to pm, I'd love to hear from someone who's gone through the same madness as me

doomed - 4 days ago

Dude I’m the exact same way . I already have an entire universe planned out in detail to the point that I have an entire series worth . . The only problem is that I can’t write stories at all.
ID love to create it but i suck

nervousvampire - 4 days ago

I've been going utterly insane because a friend of mine told me that him and a few others were going to make a manga of their own and he asked if I'd help since I was starting to create characters and species ideas, and I'm much better at it than him. But either he lied or the others bailed so it never happened but I've been thinking up scenes, characters, plots and more for believe five years with no ability to make them come to life since I lack the talent to write a genuine novel, and can't even draw a stick figure.

doomed - 4 days ago

I design characters for comics and mangas that my friends want to make . So I have a character profile outline if you are interested . It msy help you out

A nervous minotaur girl by the name Suu wandered her nearby grocery store just praying no one asked if they could eat her. She reached for a jar of mayonnaise on the top shelf when a voice caught her off guard causing her to almost drop the jar.

"Um, excuse me miss, could-" before the voice could finish, Suu spun round and gave a shaking bow.

"Please don't eat me!" she almost bellowed to the confused catgirl who had tried to

the scared Minotaur and the neko pred

Uploaded: 7 days ago

Owner: nervousvampire

Tags: Cute Non-Vore Neko Pre-Vore minotaur fluff scared Monster girl Demi-Human Neko girl protector protection Safekeeping Trembling Casual vore Casual predator Casual pred minotaur girl

a minotaur who desperately doesn't want to be eaten but meets a friendly neko predator to protect her.


this is a edited version of an old story I've had sitting on my deviant art for months but just never got around to fixing and uploading here 

nervousvampire - 6 days ago

I really don't. if it weren't for grammarly most of what I write would be pure unreadable gibberish.
this reply alone I had the use spell check three times. But your words honor me and certainly give me some extra confidence.

doomed - 6 days ago

I’ve read the majority of the series actually . I’ve been reading all of your works . Which is why I like this . I’ve been on this sight for a while , you’ve got the skills to challenge the vets

nervousvampire - 7 days ago

you're very kind but I still have a long way to go.
have you read more than just the two stories in this series?
the whole ord in it is casual vore as well as casual slavery (but it's seen as desirable rather than evil), but I try to do world building and work on things that bug me in other series/worlds are casual about vore

doomed - 7 days ago

Dude it’s a great story that I wouldn’t mind being explored in deeper context . I’m looking forward to more like this . Don’t doubt how good you are

nervousvampire - 7 days ago

honestly I took this long to post it here because I didn't think it was that good, it wasn't as thought out or developed as the later later installments of the series. didn't do enough world building, but I'm glad I was wrong and people seem to like it. even if the favorite count is only at two

the saint and the trap

Uploaded: 9 days ago

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Tags: M/F Implied Digestion Unwilling Prey Fatal Vore Female Prey Femboy Crossdressing Implied Fatality Male Pred jealousy Angry prey Femboy Pred Trap pred Fate/Grand Order Uncaring Pred Yandere Pred astolfo Jeanne D'arc Fate Grand Order Jealous pred FateGO fourth wall break goddamn it astolfo

a commission from https://aryion.com/g4/user/Heartless

here we have the legendary trap himself Astolfo deciding to make sure jeane doesn't steal another master from him.

this one messed with my head to write because due to his effeminate appearance I kept writing she/ her/ ect. Goddamn it astolfo!  

boomerangfish - 3 days ago

I’m just saying the usage of the term itself is bad for trans people. You can just call Astolfo a boy, that’s what he is

nervousvampire - 4 days ago

to be fair astolfo is NOT transgender, he a transvestite at best. He doesn't see himself as a woman, doesn't refer to himself as such. He just wears womens clothing because it's cute, his bio even confirms that. Hell he took pride in being mistake for a woman by jeanne so it can be assumed he would wear the title of trap like a crown

boomerangfish - 4 days ago

It’s ok, I understand. I used to use it myself but it’s seen as hurtful to trans folks. Either way, looking to see more from you

nervousvampire - 4 days ago

it's the term I've always heard associated with him and character like him, if it's now seen as offensive I was not aware.

boomerangfish - 4 days ago

I’d love to see Astolfo in more outfits! Not too big on the use of “trap” though

Mash ran as fast as her legs could carry her, her joints burning with every step having long been overworked, her breathing deep, and rasping, her body burned but she didn't stop, she couldn't stop yet.

"Please don't die senpai, please," she whimpered to herself. On her back was the limp bleeding body of Gudako Fujimaru. She glanced back to find that she had outrun her enemy, but she didn't stop for fear they would catch up if she slowed down for even a second.

nervousvampire - 10 days ago

mash is the only god of chaldea

TheMysteriousSadSack - 10 days ago

Mash is too good for us

nervousvampire - 10 days ago

glad you liked it.
no
and no! i don't do rebirth or anything like that and I make it clear a homunculus body is filling for her after she revives and that a proper body is being grown. no rebirth

nervousvampire - 10 days ago

HAHAHA! Those are dead of heart know how to draw pain with their words for if it can hurt my dead heart none shall withstand it

awdx11551515 - 10 days ago

Gudako's devouring is amazing!
Did her gain strength from it?
Maybe she can rebirth Mash by becoming Mash's mother?

nervousvampire - 11 days ago

I'm not one for hentai or porn so I ca't vouch if it is good but it served to lead to some ideas

https://nhentai.net/g/294330/

SwordkingX5 - 11 days ago

Now I'm interested in this hentai.

nervousvampire - 11 days ago

funnily enough the commissioner used a hentai were that happens as inspiration for this story.

as for why she doesn't how rude and disgusting, she would never do that with her son.

SwordkingX5 - 11 days ago

I was honestly expecting her to have sex with Ritsuka.
But this was a really good story well done.

nervousvampire - 11 days ago

the god of hecken cute milfs has arrived indeed. And given how fun she was to write for may come again

Seras and the vampire hunters

Uploaded: 2 weeks ago

Owner: nervousvampire

Tags: Soul Vore F/F Absorption Fatal ?/F Unwilling Prey Fatality hellsing shadow vore Female Prey Dragon pred Demon pred Female Pred Bayonetta Absorption Vore Seras Victoria Vampirella bloodrayne Buffy the vampire slayer familiar Cruel Pred Fast Digestion rayne Helpless prey vampire pred gomorrah Uncaring Pred Terrified Prey angry pred vampire prey soul absorption Buffy Summers disembodied hands hellsing ultimate Integra Hellsing trapped soul Integra Fairbrook Wingates Hellsing familiar pred Demon dragon

Seras ends up picking up a certain big boobed dhampir who seems all to happy to feed her but before her, integra and their new toy can get home they stumble across two more vampire hunters. Vampirella and Buffy summers. How will seras handle this?

Fun fact the whole wooden stake and silver kill or harm vampires is complete bs. wooden stakes paralyzed vampires so you could kill them and silver has nothing to do with vampires. dracula is even described as holding a silver lantern...
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nervousvampire - 9 days ago

a threat, someone who she is being ordered to eliminate due to their danger. In the case of juliet starling in part 1 it was because zombie outbreaks happen to follow her.
bayonetta was in the middle of a war between heaven hell and her which caused a ton of collateral damage.

only one in the series did she just cave to hunger and even than the prey went along with it.
the full on going series is at the top if you click on Seras's hunt. that will take you to the folder

MasterGryph - 9 days ago

...What definition of Target is she using?

MasterGryph - 9 days ago

Buffyverse vampires are sociopathic demons who inherited the memories of their body's former owners. The original souls passed on at death, and the replacements have little reason not to kill whoever and whenever they want.

nervousvampire - 12 days ago

Yes, this is part 5 of an on going series. It's why her and integra are together as a couple, the list of nommed monster girls at the start though the maids and horror hostesses were in between stories and why she has bayonetta's demons at her beck and call

doomed - 12 days ago

There are more parts !!!!! Holy shit that’s awesome !!!

"Hello, sis," a chipper rosey voice followed the sound of a door opening. The voice belonged to a tall ebony skinned four tail Kitsune with long white hair that matched her kimono but contrasted her skin. Her long white and gold kimono hugged her curvaceous body, a long white cloak with a golden trim hung around her shoulders, a pair of gold-framed glasses sat on her delicate-looking face which she gently pushed up with one of her long delicate fingers.

"O

having a niece for dinner

Uploaded: 3 weeks ago

Owner: nervousvampire

Tags: Digestion F/F Consensual Fatal Lesbian Incest Willing Pred Female Prey Female Pred Consensual vore Dragon Girl Older Pred young prey family vore Incestual Vore Tail slurp Fast Digestion loli prey older/younger aunt/niece Quick Digestion Casual vore caught in the act Willing prey kitsune pred Tanuki girl casual incest Kitsune girl Underage Underage prey

yet another idea I couldn't get out of my head and had to write.
I liked the idea of a family where it's just extremely common for the aunt to seduce and eat her niece or nieces much to the mother's growing anger.

Oh and don't give me that wyverns are not dragons bs it's like saying a shih tzo is not a dog. most famous dragons don't meet the dumb standards d&d made so none of that crap.

as for the names they are all based on Japanese mythology.

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nervousvampire - 2 weeks ago

glad to hear that.

doomed - 2 weeks ago

Not a problem at all, just because I didn’t see what you wanted doesn’t mean that I didn’t like it .i love your works

nervousvampire - 2 weeks ago

I do appreciate the feed back. So thank you for your thoughts

doomed - 2 weeks ago

I get that dude . The story was great regardless . I’m just special hehehe

nervousvampire - 2 weeks ago

fair enough. my logic was if they were preds they would make it to adulthood which is what the mother wanted.If they got eaten after that it wasn't as bad because they did grow up.

My lovely wife, how I long for you, every night I think about devouring you completely and utterly. You have no idea that every night you sleep next to one who wants nothing more than to digest you into themself. Or perhaps you do, and you do it to taunt me, dare me into devouring your soft skin, to suckle one final time on your lovely breasts, to tuck you away forever. It takes all my strength not to digest you anytime I eat you after sex or to cuddle, but I know that one day, I won't hold back

an Oni's hungry love

Uploaded: 3 weeks ago

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Tags: Non-Vore Neko Lesbian Implied Vore gentle Oni loving heartbreak Neko girl Unaware Prey lesbian lovers Pre-Vore? Gentle Pred Oni girl Wanting Predator wife/wife Oni pred Debate confliction wholesome conflicting emotions Conflicted Pred distressed pred wholesome lesbian stuff contemplation vore contemplating vore devastated debating vore

A tired Oni wonders weather she should give into her urges and devour her favorite wife who means the world to her. But the idea of not having her wife breaks the Oni's heart yet she can think of nothing better than ending her beloved wife.

I've had this in mind for a few days now but was working on bloodstained first then pharaoh proves herself so I just made it. I tried a different style and kept it short since there is no actual vore in this one but I thought it was interesting....
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nervousvampire - 3 weeks ago

THANK YOU! someone appreciates it. This one has so far tanked so it's good to at least someone likes it other than me.

It's a shame it's never touched on, I like preds being casual about vore but on the other hand you are killing, and in a case like this you're killing someone you love, someone who means the world to you. casual vore or not it would destroy them mentally

TheMysteriousSadSack - 3 weeks ago

Reading about that whole internal struggle against her instincts and her heart is interesting. Its a dillema that I rarely see get touched on. Whenever I do see it the realationship in question just dissolves and the pred moves on like "whatever". I like the idea of the pred being devastated when they eat their lovers so this little snippet is pretty good.

bloodstained: feast of the bunny girl demons

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Tags: Oral Vore Digestion F/F Absorption Domination Fatal Demoness Lesbian Willing Bunny girl Breast Vore Fatality Fatal Vore Vorgy Willing Pred Cleavage Vore Female Prey Demon pred Female Pred consentual f/multiple Human Pred multiple endings Belly bulge submissive belly dancer Playboy Bunny demon prey happy prey Pred turned prey Voreception milk transformation Dominating Predator rapid digestion discarded clothing Tug-o-Vore Quick Digestion Casual vore Pred to prey human/demoness demon/demon Two Endings Miriam Disregard of Life submissive prey instant digestion Multiple Preys Power absorption Bunny girl prey Willing prey Demoness/human bloodstained ritual of the night Lustful pred Lesbian vore lustful prey bloodstained willing slave

I've wanted to do Bloodstained for a while but kept putting it off until now. i saw miriam and knew she just had to get gobbled up by someone or something but if only there was a castle full of (wo)man eating demons.........oh wait.

I tried something different and gave this one two endings you can chose from. One were Miriam wins and one were she loses.

This was not meant to be this long! n meant for this to be a short story but it ended up being just slightly...
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nervousvampire - 3 weeks ago

thank you for the kind words

Odang77 - 3 weeks ago

Very good story, keep up the good work

Sato Kazuma muttered to himself bitterly as he heard Aqua screaming something as loud as ever, it would be annoying at the best of times but Kazuma was trying to sleep. It was even more annoying since her whining cries sounded like moaning from hentai rather than her just being drunk. How was it possible he lived in the same house with two busty attractive women (and Megumin) yet he still had his V card he'd had back in his own world yet even with all these beautiful big breasted women he still

Kazuma's virgin killer plan

Uploaded: 1 month ago

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Tags: M/F Cock Vore Reformation Rape darkness Semi-willing Willing Pred Female Prey implied sex resurrection molestation Kazuma Implied Rape Male Pred masochism implied masturbation Uncaring Pred konosuba Willing prey Wiz Satou Kazuma Lalatina Dustiness Ford excited prey Dustiness Ford Lalatina Excited pred gropeing semi fatal

Kazuma comes up with a plan to get rid of his virginity though a new skill he has does something he didn't expect.

apparently forgot how to write in the week or two my laptop was in for repairs so if this doesn't read or feel right let me know and I apologize  

nervousvampire - 1 month ago

it's a comedy, light echci isekai where the main character Kazuma goes to video game style world complete with levels and skills abilities to defeat the demon lord. He even brings a straight up goddess with him (against her will).
the selling point is that the characters are all the dumbest pieces of trash masquerading as humans who just happen to screw up successfully.
example, the goddess cleanses a graveyard so the dead won't raise in it, but she really just stopped the dead from going there so they haunted a nearby mansion instead. They end up getting the mansion for free but only because the goddess caused the problem in the first place.It's pretty good. if you want to get a good jist for it the youtube channel anime america did a review of it which sold me on the series

Tahg - 1 month ago

It reads absolutely fine. I feel like as usual I'm missing the backstory/context of the fandom, but that's not your fault. Nor is it needed really for the story.

nervousvampire - 1 month ago

it's what she's best at and for

FeiFei - 1 month ago

roasted,abused,raped and a lot more lol

nervousvampire - 1 month ago

she was born to be digested

Happy birthday mash

Uploaded: 2 months ago

Owner: nervousvampire

Tags: F/M Non-Fatal romance birthday gift Male Prey Female Pred romantic birthday present Cute pred Endosoma happy pred tickling Happy Birthday happy prey Romantic vore Endo vore safevore chocolate coated Loving pred Fate/Grand Order Teasing Pred Ritsuka Fujimaru birthday vore birthday girl loving prey Mash Kyrielight Mashu Kyrielight Fate Grand Order wholesome FateGO wholesome noms best kohai Ticklish prey birthday girl pred happy birthday Mash

This was supposed to come out on july 25th (Mash's real birthday) but my laptop decided go screwy on me so I missed it despite having this ready to post for over a month.
But it's up now so let's all pretend this did come out on time and wish everyone's favorite hungry kohai eggplant a happy birthday.


the thumbnail is by https://aryion.com/g4/user/Artist-san with permission

this is my first major male prey and was an idea I had for quite a while...
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nervousvampire - 3 weeks ago

I'm a sucker for wholesome nomming. Honestly are are some really sweet and cute vore stuff on the site but I like to believe I'm one who really goes for it. Nothing says vore has to be cruel or smutty, it can be just pure sweet affection.

Cactaur98 - 3 weeks ago

It’s bazaar how heartfelt this was. Who knew vore could be so... romantic!

nervousvampire - 2 months ago

nope! I don't do scat/full tour even implied. mentioned a one use teleport

awdx11551515 - 2 months ago

Maybe Guda can follow Mash's intestines and come out from behind Mash?

nervousvampire - 2 months ago

well it's not the birthday I was aiming for but happy birthday.

Gad you liked the story

nervousvampire - 4 weeks ago

I agree, the prey can be just as dominating sometimes.

EloquentOrc - 4 weeks ago

I do enjoy stories where the prey talks the pred into eating them :) .

nervousvampire - 2 months ago

damn right she is, though "big tiddy" is not something that really fit's tae. at least not until she digests Ann.

Jazzyjoe94 - 2 months ago

Big tiddy Goth pred. TAE is always BAE.

nervousvampire - 2 months ago

I'm inclined to agree, she seems high on the list of characters in the game who might be a voreaphile/pred yet she seems to end up as prey more.

also thank you for the complement, I'm glad you liked it

nervousvampire - 2 months ago

glad you enjoyed it, I doubt I would have thought of it were it not for the commissioner.

Blaze32202 - 2 months ago

I just love futaba as a pred, there just isn't enough stories with her in that role. Thanks for writing this.

Ox King and Nurse's journey to stomach

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Tags: Oral Vore F/F Milf Lesbian Implied Digestion Incest F/FF Female Prey Female Pred nightingale transgender Motherly Incestual Vore daughter/mother regretful predator Son/Mother Daughter/Father Fate/Grand Order milf prey son/father Willing prey royal prey guilty predator Gentle prey Casual prey Willing to unwilling pred Fate series King prey boob sucking loving prey Mordred Fate Grand Order nurse prey Artoria Pendragon Lancer Alter FateGO Artoria Lancer Alter fatel florence nightingale uncaring prey King Arthur groping boobs Mother I'd like to vore encouragement

Mordred gets and idea for her latest rebellion idea as well as getting handsy with her hot moms/ mom and dad.

Honestly of all the servant x servant ships that exist alter and nightingale is probably my favorite

if you are new to fate and wondering why I keep referring to Alter and Mordred as Father and son respectively it's because they use those terms them selves but also seem to identify solely as female so I used female pronouns but kept their title as father...
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nervousvampire - 2 months ago

yep, nightingale isn't even a great healer if you have iri or medea lily and she sure isn't the best berserker with vlad, cu and raikou running around

TheMysteriousSadSack - 2 months ago

I guess Lalter is the more valuable unit for farming. You right, you is really right

nervousvampire - 2 months ago

I mean I'd be more upset over losing lancer. Gudako is probably safer without nightingale

TheMysteriousSadSack - 2 months ago

Gudako is not gonna like a missing 5 star

nervousvampire - 2 months ago

pardon?

the queen and the painter. Da Vinci route

Uploaded: 3 months ago

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Tags: Oral Vore F/F Consensual Non-Fatal Lesbian Implied Digestion Female Prey Female Pred Consensual vore caster SPOILERS!!!!!! jealousy Loving pred Fate/Grand Order Willing prey royal prey Sheba loving prey Fate Grand Order Fate GO Implied Resurrection gropeing Jealous prey Leonardo Da Vinci Da Vinci-chan Da Vinci queen of Sheba depressed prey

this is going to be different as this is a two part story where both parts are the ending but who fills the role of pred and prey swaps. in this case Da Vinci eats up the queen of Sheba.

there will be the Sheba ending soon (hopefully) and when it's posted I will include a link here for it 

nervousvampire - 3 weeks ago

thank you for your kind words. Have you read the whole series already?

Cactaur98 - 3 weeks ago

This was the best one yet! The Vore was excellent!

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

no I'll most likely have the story wrapped long before 2020 comes to its end.
and pardoru will get no love from me, but she may get a shovel to the head

BroTato - 3 months ago

End of the series and Kiara? Oh this I have to see

The last disaster of 2020 before the padoru month would be Kiara then?

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

oh boy am I. But she won't be until near the end of the series

Integra's secret

Uploaded: 3 months ago

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Tags: F/F Vampire Consensual Non-Fatal hellsing Willing Pred Female Prey Female Pred Vore story teasing Human Pred Consensual vore Alucard Seras Victoria Endosoma vampire prey Willing prey embarassed pred excited prey hellsing ultimate Integra Hellsing Dominating pred Integra Fairbrook Wingates Hellsing

Integra has spent years hiding her voraphilia but discovers that her favorite vore author may be someone she knows personally.

I wanted to do Integra as a pred this time just to mix it up

this one seemed a bit off to me so let me know if it's just me being overly critical or if it did feel off to any of you.  

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

I always imagination them glaring at each other than casually remarking "Nice hat/gun ect" or something of the like but yours works too

Night5Gaming - 3 months ago

Alucard (TFS) meeting the original anime voice would be summed up as “DRAMA KIIIIIING”

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

ya i love krispen freemen (his English actor) but I was thinking tfs for his teasing so I think it bled through.

Night5Gaming - 3 months ago

I usually just reference TeamFourStars Alucard voice / bit of personality, whenever reading stuff about him, and safe to say you nailed it lol

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

I like being meta.
for example one of my favorite lines to date is in the report

"A world with nothing but mostly monster women that eat each other and reproduce via magic it all sounds like some shitty fetish writer made this up!"

Salome waited patiently for her client, unlike some people she was quite proud of her profession, she was owner and merchandise for one of the biggest brothels in the country. She knew her clients well, what they needed, what they wanted, the lines to cross, the lines not to cross, predator, prey, there wasn't much she couldn't do. She glanced at the clock on the wall, she knew that her favourite client would be over in twenty minutes as she always did every week on the dot at six-thirty pm on F

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

ya I liked the idea of the prostitute just befriending the client then falling hopelessly for her. The story as a whole was about role reversals, prey to pred and pred to prey is the other.

I came up with her being a jiangshi but given I've set humans as a rarer species for this world it made sense for her not to be so I opted for a bunny girl instead. Plus that gives the image of a tiny undead buuny and her towering cowgirl girlfriend and that's just fun to think about

TheMysteriousSadSack - 3 months ago

jiangshi's are so rarely, if ever used, its nice to see one here and a hybrid one no less. Also interesting role reversal with the prostitute falling for the client rather than the other way around.

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

centorea as a pred, that might be a bit hard due to her strict herbivore nature but on the other hand we know liminals like kii exist so I might be able to think up something. getting it to feel in character would be an interesting challenge.

oral vore yes, breast or cleavage vores yes, anal or unbirth no

samblackborn - 3 months ago

Dude great read do you think you could do a centorea pred oral or anal vore one

nervousvampire - 4 months ago

Yay comment. Also yes she is perfect for vore especially with Rachnera as the pred because you know she would tease the hell out of mero before hand.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 4 months ago

Mero really was made for this lol

I looked at my watch wondering where she was I was sitting in a nice restaurant waiting for my date to arrive.

"A refill Ms?" a polite lizard woman waiter asked with a smile.

"Ah, ah no thank you," I stuttered really not having noticed she was there. She nodded before leaving to help other customers.

"I'm so sorry I got lost and ended up in the wrong place, I'm so sorry," a gasping neko woma

A demon and neko dinner date

Uploaded: 4 months ago

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Tags: Catgirl Oral Vore F/F Consensual Milf Fatal Neko Demoness Lesbian Yuri Willing BDSM romance Implied Digestion Female Prey Female Pred Neko girl ghost girl Comforting Older woman demon prey Older Prey Younger pred Reluctant Pred Casual vore Romantic vore dominant prey submissive pred Neko Pred Loving pred milf prey Willing prey loving prey wholesome wholesome noms wholesome lesbian stuff

A demon asks out a cute neko employee of hers on a date with one end in mind for how the night will end.

this was very new to me in both style of writing due to trying first person but also the fact that I lightly used bdsm (something I had little to no knowledge in before writing this) so if I got the bdsm angle wrong please inform me and I apologize
also found the idea of a dominant prey and submissive pred to fun a concept but still wanted to keep it at least...
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nervousvampire - 4 months ago

well I know there is certainly one way to do it wrong and that would be something like ignoring after care which I made sure to include. Sadly the famous "bdsm book" fifty shades doesn't.

I hope it was at least enjoyable

Tahg - 4 months ago

I haven't read much bdsm but I'm not sure there's a "wrong" way, at least in fiction, and this site has conditioned me to not really find any sort of situation surprising anymore. Someone with more, or actual, experience with it might disagree.

First person was fine, used consistently, and I think it worked well for the story. (I personally only don't like second person, or stories that randomly switch between the 3.)

nervousvampire - 4 months ago

oh I have plans for that

SmaxTheDestroyer - 4 months ago

I know! :-) am eagerly awaiting mero’s turn~

nervousvampire - 4 months ago

Hey nothing says I can't do more monster musume stuff

SmaxTheDestroyer - 4 months ago

Awww... oh well... :)

nervousvampire - 4 months ago

not in this series. This is just the main harem

beauty and the beast girl, love to horror

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Tags: Digestion F/F Fatal Lesbian Yuri nightmare Unwilling Prey beast girl Monster girl Female Prey Female Pred cruelty terrified lesbian lovers Painful Digestion Neji Cruel Pred dream vore Helpless prey painful death wife prey scared prey monster girl pred wife pred wife/wife blind prey blind girl Terrified Prey lesbian couple Girlfriend/Girlfriend agressive pred nightmare vore Beauty and the Beast girl Heath the beast girl Lily blind

an idea I had and decided to write out. A much shorter one than my recent stuff but wanted a shorter one for a change.

if you have a better name feel free to suggest it
also if anyone can find a picture of angry heath with no text that would be greatly appreciated  

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

I do hope you enjoy the series.

Gorgrath177 - 4 months ago

Thanks

nervousvampire - 4 months ago

https://manganelo.com/manga/vj917571

the author specializes in cute yuri manga's.

Gorgrath177 - 4 months ago

Sauce?

nervousvampire - 4 months ago

ya it is written from her perspective but the idea of Heath having such a horrible nightmare that gives her such fear was to good to pass up, it could be seen that Heath is experiencing the nightmare from Lily's point of view

nervousvampire - 4 months ago

as do I.

1971575041 - 4 months ago

I'm really looking forward to the next story。

nervousvampire - 4 months ago

still new to digestion for the most part so I don't take it as far as some and I don't like scat so I never include that so the toilet is off limits.
But glad you enjoyed it regardless.

nervousvampire - 4 months ago

and Miyu

Xinoz2 - 4 months ago

And now only Chloe and Illya remain. Looking forward to the final part of this series.

Getting even with Suzumiya

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Tags: Implied Digestion Semi-willing Mikuru Female Prey Female Pred Implied Fatality Kyon Haruhi Suzumiya observer revenge vore goddess prey god prey masterbating Uncaring Pred semi-unwilling prey The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya Mikuru Asahina Itsuki Koizumi

I'm going to be honest I, hated haruhi and the way she treated Mikuru so I had the urge to write something of Mikuru getting something good and Haruhi getting what she deserved. 

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

okay thank you, I'll have to re read through it to try and find the problems to fix them

awakener - 5 months ago

Both and phrasing. There were several sentences where I had to reread them to make sure that I wasn’t crazy and they didn’t. There were fewer punctuation problems than anything else though. I think I saw 1, maybe 2 commas instead of a period to end a sentence.

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

soon she may well be stronger than her father if she isn't already.
glad you enjoyed it

TheMysteriousSadSack - 5 months ago

Seras absorbed a whole harem of monster girls with powerful abilities, shes becoming too op lol. Lots of fun to be had by all, really enjoyed it and I cant wait for more

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

bad punctuation or word mistakes?

Yoko slithered through town her mind wandering before suddenly being pulled back as she bumped into something,

"Ah, I'm sorry I wasn't paying attention to my surroundings," the naga hissed out of reflex not even looking to what or who she had bumped into, a young-sounding voice replied to her.

"It's fine it happens all the time," Yoko looked down to see the owner of the voice before her was a short Asian harpy with black wings

Attending a party

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Owner: nervousvampire

Tags: Oral Vore Slime F/F party Naga Milf Fatal Lamia Harpy Lesbian Post-Vore Slimegirl Bunny girl Implied Digestion Incest alcohol Female Prey Female Pred f/multiple teenage prey Naga Pred pregnant prey texting Asian prey happy prey pleasurable death Casual vore selfie pleasurable digestion harpy prey Food Coma Drunk pred Uncaring Pred milf prey Bunny girl prey Willing prey Assistance Uncaring Observers lap pillow excited prey casual incest disregard for life Flirting prey Mother I'd like to vore jealous observer

a naga eats a young harpy and inadvertently get invited to her birthday party (not that anyone minds that she just ate the birthday girl.)

the first half of this came to me rather easy but I hit a wall for the last half so I hope it still came out well. Also cameos!

Fun fact I suck at names so the names I use a theme for names. The harpies Papi and Filo share their names with papi the harpy of monster musume and filo the filolial (but that's probably obvious) Yoko...
[ Continued ...

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

very greedy naga especially since she'll be digesting them for at least a week, probably more with that many.

I'm glad someone appreciated the cameos

TheMysteriousSadSack - 5 months ago

What a greedy naga, four prey in one day plus breakfast. Filo mustve got around to have such a wide spread of cameos. Nice to see that theyre doing well

Nejire Hado introduced herself along with two other students know as U.A high's big three her mind racing as she bounced from student to student with questions on their appearance, abilities or anything else that popped into her head. Her fellow student Mirio Togata brought the younger class under rein though even that fell flat, as he blabbered about internships and being a hero Nejire's attention was focusing more with each second on a single girl in the class. A girl by the name of Mina Ashid

Nejire’s Acidic Question

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Tags: Soft Vore F/F Non-Fatal heroine Female Prey Female Pred Semi-unwilling Superheroine test subject distraction safevore Boku no Hero Academia Annoyed Prey Mina Ashido My Hero Academia Nejire Hado Delayed reaction hyperactive pred

A request for Robotdocter.
I have never seen my hero, so if this does not capture the spirit, style or personality of the characters or show that's on me.

https://aryion.com/g4/user/Robotdocter 

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

it was requested to be non fatal and since I have not seen/read my hero nor do I intend to I will have to say no for any my hero stuff.

CoCoDu111 - 5 months ago

I would have liked Mina to be digested and for you to describe digestion but otherwise I liked ^^. Nejire and one of my favorite characters and she is too sexy ^^ so if you can do other history with her as a pred it would be great ^^

You walk through the mostly abandoned streets of town, ignoring the few people who ran around to escape the pouring rain as it soaked through your coat. You stop for a moment to check the time on your phone but a faint sound catches your ear it was a faint sobbing that barely passed over the rain. For some reason, even you're not sure of you follow the faint sound to find a young Asian woman who was sobbing on the ground not seeming to notice the pouring rain.

"Are

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

ya the point of view was what I was referring to and I can fully see why someone might not like it.

Tahg - 5 months ago

I find stories written in second person harder to read, (I guess the POV tag implies Reader's?) so if that's the something different you had in mind it's not my favorite. Other than that, I think it's as good as anything else you've written. I always prefer non-fatal but I try not to let that bias my thoughts on whether a story is good or not.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 6 months ago

Glad you enjoyed it, always happy to dish out some recommendations

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

I thank you for that manga, it was a nice read. I will have to keep an eye on it for new chapters

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

thank you

"Damn it Seras! We had an agreement if you ate another woman you were supposed to invite me," Integra hollered as she pulled Seras's cheeks forcefully with a scowl.

"I would have but she couldn't even stand, I didn't want her to change her mind," Seras whined through the pained pulling of her boss turned lover.

"You didn't just eat her, you seduced her as well! If you brought her back I wouldn't have minded as much but n

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

will probably do more cleavage vore at a later date. As for weight gain, I don't tend to describe it, I might at a later story but for the moment I don't.
i am glad to hear you enjoyed it though.

Night5Gaming - 6 months ago

Awesome story and references tho lol

Night5Gaming - 6 months ago

More cleavage vore please, sidenote kinda sad there wasn't weight gain described. I dont know much about bayo or fate tho.

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

I see what you mean about the music not part, I will try to fix that

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

I realized the relation mistake today but i like the name so I may just ignore it.

Yes those are supposed to be music notes (I assume you are referring to the hey Micky part.) I was not aware they may not show up.

And as for the angel typo (slams head on my desk) I did it again, so I thank you for pointing that out.

"I hate the cold!" Mina whined "It plays hell with my body," The naga wiped the sleep from her dark blue eyes. Mina was a naga, short by naga standards but still clocked in at close to twenty feet long. Her hair was a light oak brown, unlike most naga's her tail didn't match her long tail which had large black and red stripes around it. Like any naga, her body slowed down to the point of hibernation any time it got cold.

"Stupid boss, won't let m

A warm place for a naga to pass the winter

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Owner: nervousvampire

Tags: Micro Macro F/F Naga Consensual Lamia Micro/Macro Non-Fatal Non-digestion Monster girl Female Prey Female Pred teasing prey bet freindship pixy tired prey Naga girl Naga Prey Macro Prey Micro pred Hammerspace Belly breast squeeze friendly pred Casual vore Tiny pred friendly prey Hammerspace Caring pred regretful pred pixy pred pained pred

a request from Heimko, I made a few minor changes but the general gist stays the same. Hope you like it.

It was originally for a fairy pred but that is a very broad term with a lot of nightmarish monsters (like goblins, spriggans or Baobhan sith and more) but since the description was more like a modern fairy so I went with a pixy instead (because I am that pedantic).
I use the same logic for naga as opposed to lamia.

https://aryion.com/g4/user/Heimko is...
[ Continued ...

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

it was requested for non fatal so it shall remain non fatal (sorry)

and I too would love to see a picture of a bloated pixy with a naga in her belly, alas I can't draw to save my life.

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

it was requested for non fatal so it shall remain non fatal (sorry)

and I too would love to see a picture of a bloated pixy with a naga in her belly, alas I can't draw to save my life.

R4d6 - 5 months ago

Now I want a picture of after the act and a follow-up.

And maybe a version where the fairy end up digesting the naga.

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

It's a girl eat girl world, it's to be expected, plus she's having to deal with the cold, any reptile monster girl is going to be upset.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 6 months ago

I suppose its Mina's nature to be callous but poor Fila wouldve been dusted had she not gotten through 20ft of scales. Wheres the love for the bffs. Cute ending though, big ups

Mash's biblical meal

Uploaded: 6 months ago

Owner: nervousvampire

Tags: Soft Vore Digestion F/F Reformation ears Non-Fatal Lesbian Unwilling Prey Melting Crying Female Prey Feet first Female Pred teasing caster taunting groping boob squish assisted vore Belly Rubbing Helpless prey melting digestion crying prey Medea assistant Bribary Fate/Grand Order Uncaring Pred Queen prey royal prey melting prey Ritsuka Fujimaru Mash Kyrielight Mashu Kyrielight Fate Grand Order FateGO ear play bargaining prey groping boobs best kohai Paralyzed prey queen of Sheba soft chewing

Mash, Ritsuka and their angry to have been forgotten ally Medea seek out to find Mash her next tasty meal, they settle on a certain fluffy biblical queen.

side note does anyone know what those hip/ass capes are called? I see them all the time on characters and they look cool but what the hell are they called? 

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

oh ya, plenty more fate to come, I'm not sure that font will shut.

TryMeIke - 6 months ago

fair enough. but I do look forward to more fate noms from ya.

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

I had an idea similar to what you would have probably suggested with the Atalante story (a caring parental nomming) but as for the others I can't say they did, sorry. the ccc cast are just duds for me. My thoughts on Nero for example can be seen with my comment of hit her with a shovel. Ely and Nero I intend to use later, but the tomamo I might use but I'm not sure.

TryMeIke - 6 months ago

understood. any of my ideas you think you would want to use, just out of curiosity?

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

For me I tend to go with characters I either love, hate or just left an impression on me they make it easier to wright if I've got some feeling for the character be it love, hate or just a wtf attitude.

Anonymouslion - 1 month ago

Ye

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

ah.

Anonymouslion - 3 months ago

She needs to be savored more! And raise her ticklish stat to the max so she squirms whenever we lick her ticklish spots! XD

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

on her side for what? though I can agree that I bet a different outfit would bring out her taste more.

Anonymouslion - 3 months ago

We got royally cucked. I’m on natsuki’s side! That said I’d prefer to eat her in something more… revealing than her uniform. Plus I hate the taste of fabric.

nervousvampire - 2 months ago

I hadn't planned to but that is a good idea so I may in the future

softvarelover - 2 months ago

will you make a part 2 to this where Demon King swallows Nio to show her love?

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

than I count this as a win, I also highly recommend Neji's other series as well.
I hope you enjoyed the story none the less

rotta287 - 3 months ago

Favorited if only for the link to this extremely cute mange I'd never encountered before.

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

Neji almost instantly became one of my favorite manga creators yet sadly seems to be rather obscure, so I take great pride in being the first to do any fan stuff based on her works.

Kuro roamed the halls of Chaldea bored and slightly exhausted from numerous XP gathering missions

"Master was a slave driver today And what was with that big belly of his? No mash either, ugh today was weird I need a nice magical snack Or a nice meal. I wonder if Illya is still in her room?" the archer grinned mischievously as she thought of her sister's lips and magical energy. She took a step and teleported in front of Illya's room, she opened her hand and c

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

ya I wrote this when fate go added her interlude, she literally refers to every girl she meets in it as food, desert, main course and the like. I just had to after that.

I may well do more Kuro stuff. She play's a large part it the Shirou's buffet series but more as an assistant than pred but i'm sure I could find someone to fill her stomach.

TryMeIke - 6 months ago

more kuro noms please. this looks adorable and I want more.

Kurumu paced around her room grumbling to herself, since the defeat of Alucard Tsukune and Moka had been almost inseparable as well as dating. It was driving the succubus mad, she needed Tsukune to love her, at least a little, especially with her birthday tomorrow. Fang Fang had suggested a polygamous life but Moka had ruined that rather fast.

"I need to find a way to be with Tsukune in some way, but how." she flopped onto her bed in frustration. As she moved

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

I'm still relatively new to doing digestion so not many of my stories have it yet. Plus this was an upload of an old one from deviant art, back before I started doing digestion. But I may well do more Rosario Vampire stories.

CoCoDu111 - 6 months ago

I would have liked digestion to be more detailed and that we can see Tsukune after Kurume is digested to see it with the powers of Kurume, but otherwise I loved it and I hope you will do other stories of "rosario vampire" (I love inner Moka (white hair) so if you can do another story with inner Moka who eats girls and you can detail the digestion it will be really GREAT ^^)

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

Yay, I'm very glad to hear that, especially from someone as skilled as you.

also yes the manga is way darker and serious than anything the anime does. It's really worth a read.

PhantomWolf - 6 months ago

Damn that IS fucked up, Also great job on this story you've improved

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

it's implied that she is going to slowly and painfully die because succubi live on love (which is bs in mythology) and since Tsukunue doesn't love her she is slowly dying.

A Mash a day keeps the nurse away

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Tags: M/F Consensual Non-Fatal Female Prey Endosoma Male Pred unaware pred Gentle Vore Sleeping pred Gentle Pred safevore Fate/Grand Order sick pred Willing prey Gentle prey Caring prey Ritsuka Fujimaru loving prey Mash Kyrielight Mashu Kyrielight Fate Grand Order FateGO wholesome noms best kohai

Mash looks after a sick ritsuka, she soon discovers something that may be far more helpful than chicken soup.

I realized there were a few stories on my deviant art that I had not brought over, this was one of them.
 

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

dude you do this every time, and every time it's no.

awdx11551515 - 6 months ago

If guda can eat his servant, he will absorb the servant and gain the ability

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

glad you enjoyed it.
Mash is very vore sexual for her senpai in my stuff, weather she's pred or prey she's happy to help.

MugenNoSaga - 6 months ago

Mashu being pro vore sexual for her Master is so good setting. Thanks for the stories.

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

nope.
I'm not a big fan of painful digestions so I tend to lean towards pleasant digestion.

Xinoz2 - 6 months ago

So out of curiosity/impatience will Kuro regret becoming food when it's her turn as it's not at all what she expected and rather than a pleasurable digestion it is extremely painful?

"Damn it, damn it!" Elizabeth muttered to herself, her heart jackhammering in her chest "Why now? Why did this have to happen?" she stammered. Her head felt light, her limbs simultaneously weighing a ton and feeling like they might pop off at any moment, her small delicate hands held her steering wheel in a vice grip as she tried to keep her mind in enough control as to not cause a traffic accident. Unlike most of the world, she had no desire to participate in vore in any sha

nervousvampire - 7 days ago

vore is inherently goofy and I love sweet stories so I do my best to combine that.

doomed - 7 days ago

This story is both goofy and sweet . I LOVE IT

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

semi but mostly intentional I started it with her as a harpy but screwed up and realized "Wait I can make a joke using my user name."

TheMysteriousSadSack - 6 months ago

Also i was kinda wondering, is it coincidence that there is a nervous vampire and the writer is a nervousevampire

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

I don't know if I will do more with these two but i'm glad you enjoyed it

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

no promises, I need inspiration to hit for a story. We wouldn't want it to be bad now would we?

ReiREND - 5 months ago

i am waiting for this. But only do it fast please.

nervousvampire - 5 months ago

sorry, wanted to try something different with this one. Maybe I'll do another Tanya the evil story in the future.

ReiREND - 5 months ago

owwww :C. i wanted to see she eating tanya.

Wanderingspirit1333 - 6 months ago

Interesting

Kimihito gathered all the girls who lived with him to inform them of Rachnera and his engagement along with the fact that Miia had fed herself to his fiance

"Last night Miia passed away, she overheard that I was going to ask Rachnera to marry me and decided to feed herself to Rachnee san in an attempt to still be my lover. She has been digested." he looked at Rachnera's larger than normal thorax "Mostly digested." he quickly added.

Monster musume. spider vs dullahan

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Tags: Soft Vore Digestion F/F Consensual Fatal Implied Digestion Arachne Spider Woman Monster girl Female Prey Female Pred lala happy prey pleasurable death Casual vore pleasurable digestion dullahan Monster Musume no Iru Nichijou monster musume rachnera detachable head Centorea Shianus Willing prey excited prey Rachnera Arachnera observers Dullahan prey

So I ended up making a sequel to one of the first stories I ever wrote. Fun fact in the monster musume anthology Lala displays a fascination with vore. another part even hints at her wanting to be prey so I ran with that

Rachnera finds a second prey who is even more willing then miia. 

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

yep that house will be far roomier soon

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

i'm shocked how little there is of her in general,she has so much pred potential.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 6 months ago

Its only a matter of time before horse waifu is on the chopping block. Nice unexpected sequel

SmaxTheDestroyer - 6 months ago

Yay for more monster musume! Spider Waifu is such a great Pred!

Nekonome caches mice

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Owner: nervousvampire

Tags: Breasts Digestion F/F Vampire Fatal Neko Implied Digestion Unwilling Prey F/FF Female Prey Female Pred Student rosario+vampire Teacher/Student teacher pred student prey Neko Pred succubus prey kurumu kurono vampire prey shizuka nekonome boob sucking Moka akashiya Nekonome Paralyzed prey Nekonome sensei

i'm amazed no one has used nekonome from rosario vampire in vore before. she try's to get Moka to turn into a mouse presumably so she can eat Moka, she loves all kinds of fish in a school that has mermaids, she get's handsy with Moka and I believe Kurumu. and that just the stuff I can think of, how is she not more used?  

nervousvampire - 3 months ago

well first you have to be a monster, second go to yokai academy in japan, third be a sexy girl with mouse or fish traits, four enjoy.

TanookiBoy12 - 3 months ago

I loved this so much! How do I get a teacher like that??

TanookiBoy12 - 3 months ago

I loved this so much! How do I get a teacher like that??

nervousvampire - 6 months ago

more series for THIS in particular no, for rosario in general yes.
Funny you mention Nekonome sleeping with Tskune as I considered a post digestion bit of Nekonome suddenly wanting to bag him but I decided against it.

Apostolos - 6 months ago

Ah well, even if there’s no escape a cat that stuffed is bound to get frisky, maybe she’ll sleep with Tsukune afterwards. Did you happen to consider writing anymore characters from the series a story? Maybe the lamia math teacher gets possessive and unbirths tsukune or one of the others to keep as her own, been a while can’t remember most of the names

Audio report from ambassador Braz Williams.

About a month and a half ago a portal opened that led to another world, one full of beautiful women of varying species and races, something that made most men and lesbians excited beyond words but most lost their joy when we found out a bit about their word most notably they indulge in a form of cannibalism called vore. The difference between it and my world's cannibalism is that they swallow each other whole and alive often fo

the report

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Tags: Slime F/F Naga Lamia Harpy Macro/Micro Slimegirl Micro Prey Female Prey Female Pred Ambassador M/ff Male Pred Fainting Inexperienced Pred Naga Prey Centaur pred Casual vore dullahan tiny prey unwilling to willing pred drinking vore interdimensional travel Peer pressure Encouraged Liminals

trying something very different for me so I want to hear feedback even more than normal.
While I never said it in the descriptions most of my non fanfic one offs take place in the same world, I decided to have a story that kind of explored the world a bit  

nervousvampire - 7 months ago

Ya that was my guess, rather a shame. Glad to hear at least one person liked it.

nervousvampire - 7 months ago

Ya that was my guess, rather a shame. Glad to hear at least one person liked it.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 7 months ago

My best guess as for its popularity is because its more world building than anything. I quite like that but ultimately to each their own

nervousvampire - 7 months ago

I had considered the rigorous element but ended up just forgetting it flat out, as for his enjoyment I did intend for him to go from hating it to being more open to it more by accident but open to it none the less while playing that he doesn't for his report since as most people know vore is seen as one of if not the most evil/inhuman ect fetish in the world for some reason.

sadly given the flop this one turned out to be I don't think I'll be doing more of it.
I just wish I knew what made it my worst post so I would know how to avoid that in the future.
sorry if this is long.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 7 months ago

Id say it wouldve been more ambassador-like to dive into any potential religious beliefs. Also, it wouldve been more interesting to log Braz's feelings a bit more in depth rather than flat out denying his enjoyment. I have a few more things that come to mind but ill wait for any (maybe) future installments. Nice story regardless