booleanTrue - 2 hours ago

If you've got another one coming down the pipeline you can be sure I'm looking forward to it!

I'm usually hesitant to upload rough draft stuff unless I've hit my creative wall and hit it *hard*. I have a habit of never wanting to look at stuff ever again after I've gone to the trouble of finally uploading it. I definitely know the feeling of being "mentally done" after writing for so long lol.

Bomb_Nom_Nom_Nom - 2 hours ago

I'll fully admit another draft is coming out. I woke up at 6 am being unable to sleep, and didn't edit it and had to end it quickly, I figured I'd rather upload it rough first. I've definitely got to polish it up.

I've been on a few year hiatus, but not without story ideas. Honestly The non-scat ending was a courtesy and not a real ending, but I might just scratch it out. I also had been writing for about 2 hours and was just mentally done.

booleanTrue - 3 hours ago

Wow! This is an amazing read! I love food transformation vore and especially so when it's between two characters that know each other. You really nailed the dichotomy of haplessly transformed prey and a casual pred. I love your descriptions of everything Josh goes through from first transformation to his journey into not just her stomach but intestines too! You strike a good balance between physical and emotional descriptions, never getting too caught up with one or the other. You jump back and forth between the two in a way that's easy to read (not to mention titillating).

On top of that I love the tiny tidbits of world-building and character interaction at play here. I like that there's a reason Samantha chooses to make him a sandwich specifically and that said sandwich has no special properties from an outside perspective. You also show rather than just tell us about their personalities. Samantha has clever if out-there ideas but doesn't have a habit of thinking things through very well yet Josh still trusts her... even when he kinda feels he shouldn't. The bit about her packing him next to her underwear was great. It's not a detail that's "needed" to progress the story but it adds so much.

If I had to complain about anything here it's that at times the pacing is a little rushed, especially at the end and in the "good" ending. That along with your addressing the reader directly breaks the immersion a little bit though not terribly by any means. The prose is rough and unpolished in places with you reusing words and descriptions, but once again not anywhere close to an amount that it would ruin the story. All told a great read and I look forward to seeing more from you!

IvISenpai - 2 hours ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was planning on doing more Sakura games in the near future, I'll probably do Sakura MMO or Sakura Cupid, I haven't decided yet.

Eclipseneko51 - 6 hours ago

I really enjoyed that, I don't think I've ever wanted to read a story so quick in my life, i like how you kept the same characters and relationships between them in the story and how you made mamiko slightly more sadistic then she already was and how azusa was more into it as well, and i do agree there isn't any sakura vore stories especially in the marco/Micro or giantess way I'd love to more of them from all the different sakura games.

Great work

(excuse my lack of grammar and how I've done it I'm not good with grammar)

sweetladyamy - 9 minutes ago

Heh. Ha ha ha ha, lolz
(I pretty much laughed at this whole story; it was a good laugher pop)
Also, 'crescendo', for future reference. (I know a lot of people who get it wrong, and I know many people that don't know how to spell commonly used non-complex words as well - so no worries)

TheTastefulGentlman - 10 hours ago

Not bad, WEIRD, but pretty fun. Plus I really like the playful intimacy the couple has.

anema_sesuna - 13 hours ago

Sarah seems like a smart traveling companion

boomer91 - 7 hours ago

VIcious. Gross. I love it :)

2littlebigcreepers - 18 hours ago

One word. REVENGE!!

Kfhunterguy - 4 hours ago

Just make this a series :V

nnn4463 - 8 hours ago

And now, time to take care of management

NeyNey - 10 hours ago

Hehe. I left it open for later too.

Kfhunterguy - 13 hours ago

I'm ok with this twist

yakux - 8 hours ago

That was awesome!

Aces - 20 hours ago

Fixed.

Razgriz - 21 hours ago

Anya releases Kira. “Sorry...”

think you meant Leyla?

bubbalubber - 21 hours ago

Maybe that was kimi and timi is waiting to ambush layla

CrimsonFangX666 - 23 hours ago

Now we just have to hope this wasn't Kimi, cause I kinda think Kira wants to keep that one. Timi would have come as a package deal, which probably would have wound up with Kira as a dent in a Deep Sea Naga belly.

AegisOfRoses - 1 day ago

I sat and reloaded Eka's until it was available to say it~ I'll get back to you on praise when I read it! >:P

TheVoreEngineer - 1 day ago

Stealing top slot from the commissioner, what insanity is this :P

TheVoreEngineer - 1 day ago

Repeated views require further praise otherwise I remove random words until payment is made, totally.
Glad you enjoyed it bunnii!

sweetbunnii - 1 day ago

thank you again for this, v <3 i'm definitely gonna' come back to this one.

over and over ; D

AegisOfRoses - 1 day ago

First!

sweetladyamy - 1 day ago

Hmmm...
My experiences with Pokémon are not in depth as far as how pokéballs work.

RLord4268 - 1 day ago

Awesome! I can't wait for the rest!

Amberain - 1 day ago

I doubt anyone involved in the project will have this level of dedication to the idea, but it just occured to me that because of the way the HDTF locks your form when it's turned off, you could actually sculpt a person to look like a real pokemon, rather than just have them wearing a costume. They've had the restoration chamber for quite a while now, so once the party was over. They could undo the whole thing, as usual.

ShadesofBlack - 1 day ago

Rewarding as always. And congratz. You have created 2-liter bottle vore.

Adseria - 1 day ago

It's marloweny. Anyone who isn't looking forward to it is the kind of person who can get a good night's sleep! ;)

mechspider - 11 hours ago

Basically a vore Creepypasta. Awesome, combined my two favourite things on the Internet: some sick twisted fetish involving the death of others, and a horror like plot.

linthia - 1 day ago

Really liked it ! Plus.. clothes burping~ <3 And how she teased the original one is awesome !

Ratsu48 - 1 day ago

well damn

Bobrocks - 1 day ago

I wonder what the mirror chick will do to the guy.

NeyNey - 7 hours ago

Left it open on the second one. So maybe.

Alurker - 8 hours ago

Love the twist with sequel still maybe some day we'll get to see an amazing collab :)

NeyNey - 21 hours ago

;)

Kfhunterguy - 1 day ago

it'd be the first voice collab I'd heard of on here. That would be awesome. I think we all have an idea of how this sequel may go :D

NeyNey - 1 day ago

I had a sequel idea in mind, but hm. Maybe one day can do collabs.

Chameleonette - 1 day ago

Ahhh, thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! <3

This... isn't really what was in mind by way 'helping', TO SAY THE VERY LEAST... Could have had some nice soup or something and some proper medicine. Y'know, things actually meant to help with illness. Eating friends is crossing way over the line!

Yeah, that was a subtle play on memories being wiped last time (hence why there was no fear of getting eaten in the first place and only a very vague urge to back away). That's definitely the way that I like to handle reformation scenarios. And I just wanted to add a little nod to it. Since ironically, the first time it happened, I was the one who was fighting sickness. Haha.

DarkShotKino - 1 day ago

Ooohhhhh my god that was amazing to read. Its so cute too! <3

Such a lovely thing for Chammy to do to help Valk feel better while being sick. Poor thing really deserved to get to have his lovely friend curled up and kept forever as pudge~

Though I think one of my favorite little lines in this was the "you said that last time too" which is a very subtle nod to how you like to handle reformation. But who knows, maybe that was just the sickness talking from Valk~ ;3

Karbo - 1 day ago

That was a really fun story :D I really enjoyed the interaction between Zan and O'Cras and how they kept sizing each other up XD great job !

Withania - 22 hours ago

You're gonna owe me a new sofa one of these days. I won't deny that you know which buttons to press with me, but my sofa was in pretty good nick before you came into my life. <3

Withania - 22 hours ago

I honestly don't know what came over me... really didn't expect to be playing predator and then in the heat of the moment it was just... easy <3 ;)

bubbalubber - 1 day ago

Dont worry she will recover ok. Violet's salves are pretty damn good

TheMysteriousSadSack - 1 day ago

Her studio is not going to like this

cocacooler - 1 day ago

Holy Macarony Oo

MOAR :>

Translation:
(Absolutely awesome!)

Razgriz - 1 day ago

For Galya; can she identify if he's under some kind of spell? Talk to him to meet the person before deciding anything. Maybe use your emotional power to try and discern these things. Then, well. Whatever? It'd be far more cruel to let him walk into a succubus.

For the main vote: I imagine you'd have to use water or fire against this thing if you went option A, but we don't know how strong it is against an individual opponent - we could stay up the tree and blast it from above.

With it being so fast, B would be the safest...? But then how would Vasha catch up to the others? She'd have to attack it when it caught up to the others. Which would make it 2v1 at least, but they'd get little warning about it unless you shouted it all out when it got near enough. Though if she can just stealth by it to rejoin the others - that would work, too. Maybe our hunky lycan can make a quick trap for it.

Leading it in the wrong direction is risky. Do we know it has Stamina? It could simply run faster and longer than us.. I don't really like C.

So, if it were my vote. I'd go B. We did promise not to take unnessicary risks, afterall.

Graywolf18 - 1 day ago

I don't much like any of these choices... Arik could smell the thing so that implies that the wind it going in his direction, but that also raises the question of how the thing is following our party if not by smell. And attacking it could be tragic as the thing is completely unknown. It could be magic proof or spit acid for all we know. And leading it away is tricky since the thing is moving with some amount of haste to catch up with us. Hmm... I quite like Vasha but I'm not super attached to her yet, so I'm okay with the lesser of the 3 choices, C - Lead the beastie astray. Maybe give it a few peltings of magic to test its resistances.

As for Galya, obvious trap is obvious. Valguuz is clearly just trying to darken Galya soul with evil deeds. Stating in the letter how 'pure' his soul is should be at least a warning sign of such. Play along and learn his intentions, learn of the happenings in the rest of the townhship and decide his fate at the last moment. If his allegiance lies with the demons then eat him, but if he's really just a love struck kitten in a den of wolves then he should be... fuck... Beats me. Good luck Galya. :D

(personally, I doubt he's legit. Probably coerced into this by the demons in exchange for not being eaten... or raped to death... THEN eaten. But then again I've probably just forgotten if they've had previous interactions.)

vore2412 - 1 day ago

I'd want her to be able to report to Arik somehow, either through magical means or getting back to him quickly. However, the latter would be difficult, so if she's capable of the former, I'd definitely say use magic to let Arik know what's pursuing them. I suppose this might be a modified B in that she'd be able to coordinate a pincer maneuver with more accuracy and information in place.

As far as our fair Galya goes, I'm definitely in favor of seeing her train our poor stable boy into being a good pet, one that can be used over and over again until he pads somebodies body~.

Lerkur - 1 day ago

On one hand, option B sounds like it has the best shot of working, but we probably have to pass a stealth-based challenge to track it unnoticed, and if we fail, we'll have to deal with a predator and Vasha's delicious nature. On the other hand, while a surprise attack might draw some attention, it involves using what Vasha's good at, magic. So unless this thing can resist magic(which we can't really confirm or deny anyway), It seems like Option A is our best shot.

As for Galya's present, it seems like an obvious trap, either she get's shamed for letting the boy lose his soul, or she either breaks his spirit or ends his life. Regardless of which is the lesser evil, Valguuz will try to make it feel like it was the worst thing Galya could have done. As for possible solutions, maybe go for transparency and info gathering. Find out what's been going on while she's been locked up, then let the guy know he might only have a week to live if they can't bust out, and find out if they want to go out fighting, go out gently, or live no matter what.

If he want's to give up, Galya can double check to make sure they aren't under any sort of influence, then see if they want to help her train in ways that would give her a better chance of breaking out before time runs out and give them the end that's sounds more pleasing. If he want's to fight, see if he can be made to resist a demon's mental advances just long enough to jam an improvised shiv, or whatever's closest. through their devourer's neck. The boy would die no matter what, but losing one demon to a supposedly subservient human would send a message. If they just want to live, Galya could explain how the letter states they'll only live through subservience and what it means, and if they're okay with that, then she would do what she had to to to save the kid that just wants to live, while practicing your new abilities.

Regardless of success, it shows more defiance against Valguuz by refusing to play her games, and takes the choice out of Galya's hands by putting it in the stable boy's. Any questionable choices we make will be thrown back at Galya's face, likely in front of potential allies.

Of course, that's all the strategic side of things(and my own ideas for strategy at that). A "training" montage with a potentially eager prey might be a more interesting read if this isn't really supposed to be a big choice.

Scion - 1 day ago

++Awesome :D

will need to cut the length on any future ones lmao

Vanthony - 1 day ago

Another great story from Tyslan! Keep it up dude, love ya! :)

Altimos - 1 day ago

As expected, another GREAT story... Accidental Vore is arguably the best kind of vore for me <3 <3 <3

Assimilation - 2 days ago

"I'm not scared, just uncomfortable." That was the moment that the turn occurred and drew me in. Your writing is impeccable, Tyslan.

Anon2727 - 2 days ago

I love the idea of a small girl accidentally digesting her hero! óuó

Bright - 2 days ago

Todd is an ass.

TheVoreEngineer - 1 day ago

No problems, glad you enjoyed it.

MidNightOwlArt - 1 day ago

Much much better!
I love the story now!
Thank you for updating this it much more enjoyable for me now.
Hope everyone else to! ^__^

MidNightOwlArt - 2 days ago

I read it now.
I have to say for a quick story it was really great read.
Though Zoe could of been describe a bit better a few lines that could of been changed to make her sound more nicer but i’m not bothered by this.
You took what i wrote and made it your own.
For what it is i love it! ^__^
Thank you for making this.

MidNightOwlArt - 2 days ago

(BEFORE READING IT)
O__O
I don’t know if i should be mad or happy about this.
Mad: that you took my character without permission and/or possibly make my character inaccurate.
Happy: that you actually MADE THIS by the inspiration of the comic and my Mini-story.

Either way I won’t be mad at you for making this, it a quick story afterall.
Thank you for doing this i’m excited to read it!

Niku - 11 hours ago

heheh, thanks. And the lab will always have more fun things to discover and do there!

Withania - 1 day ago

thank you <3
Big fan of your work as well... don't think I'd ever leave Nova Labs, so many 'things to do' there ;)

Niku - 1 day ago

Really well done with the story, love Twi's personality here along with Moondancer's change from hesitant to willing. And goo pony unbirth into tf? Really good stuff~!

dragonvenom - 1 day ago

Where is the Drawlloween pic of Silvia?

GeneralUrist - 2 days ago

So, the mystery of the American OTF program begins to be revealed. Poor thing, what happened to Ursa. And looks like we've learnt what Area 51 is really hiding :P

Poor Ace. Goes to show that just like any real animal or aircraft, the ORFs don't have infinite durability and under heavy stress sooner or later something will go wrong. I hope Ace learns a lesson about stubbornness from this though.

Squiggly - 2 days ago

Kira's sister more or less is a human with naga powers pretty sure.

Graywolf18 - 2 days ago

Oh good, another visit to the super safe haven of the ladies changing room. Kira had better remember her last visit.

TheVoreyeur - 2 days ago

...And for the next course, stuffed naga!

Gabriel0813 - 2 days ago

So the full bloods are the one with snake tongue where half blood like Kiria are sorta a crap shoot on if they get snake tongue or human tongues. That interesting make me wonder if other half bloods get a sometimes don't come out as naga but get their naga ability's.

Aces - 2 days ago

Full-bloods, snake tongue. Half-bloods, it varies.

RexLou - 3 days ago

This was super fun to do with you man, I'm glad we did this together!

selfrog - 2 days ago

I'm proud of this idea, heh heh

zince - 3 days ago

that's one way to get rid of a ghost.

Valtron - 1 day ago

Please release more wonderful stories. I really love your work

io1908 - 1 day ago

Very nice story, simple and enjoyable

Littledude - 3 days ago

You’re a better writer than you claim to be. I have enjoyed your stories immensely.

drbob69 - 3 days ago

Earth Prime Superman vs Goku

DeadStrategicCactus - 2 days ago

Good, you should. It's a highly underrated combination that not too many do. It's never a bad thing to carve out a niche for yourself. Also thanks, hoping to keep getting fans of my literary works.

AllRightAllNight - 2 days ago

Thanks, glad you liked it!

AllRightAllNight - 2 days ago

Thanks! I hope to write more of this sort of thing in the future. Your stories are really good too :)

DeadStrategicCactus - 3 days ago

Object transformation AND vore? An absolutely great combination you've brought up here. I think I've only done one or two stories with it. I do hope to see more of this from you in the future.

Superwedgie - 3 days ago

Great story!

And another really interesting idea.