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Daddy's
Girl
by
Ryan Drakel
Story
contains: Father/daughter incest, underage, oppai loli, sex, M/F
vore, digestion, masturbation, willing, fatal vore, lactation
“...take
away the 2 divided by 7...” murmurs a male voice followed by a set
of clattering and clicking. On a computer monitor was a spreadsheet
with lots of numbers, equations and the like. The male figure soon
leans back with a sigh, rubbing his head as the outside was pitch
black, being the middle of the night as the moonlight wou

Daddy's Girl

Uploaded: 1 hour ago

Owner: Ryan-Drakel

Tags: Soft Vore Digestion M/F Sex Fatal lactation Incest Underage Prey Female Prey male predator underage sex father/daughter oppai loli

A loving daughter wants to make her father happy one night... and it leads to a whole new world of family love.

Uuughhh okay guys I want to apologize about the lack of contact for... A Couple years now.
I have no excuse save for sheer laziness and mood issues. Most of the time I Haven't been in the mood to write this... but I Have been... pecking at it now and then.

Now, here it is. Fully finished... and given the right inspiration/mood/PRIVACY, I Might be...
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So I heard about an amazing new massage
parlor that popped up a few days back, and apparently everyone that's
gone there says amazing things about it. The only thing is that you
aren't allowed to say anything about what they do there. No
one has ever seen a masseuse leave, and it's impossible to get anyone
to tell you what it's like, it's rather surprising how they've kept
it secret for so long. The service is actually pretty restricted as
well, you have to know someone who's gone to go, so it's

The Snake Den

Uploaded: 4 hours ago

Owner: AegisOfRoses

Tags: Digestion Same Size Fatal Lamia Unwilling Naga Pred

A steamy Bath house opened up, and a mysterious secret has been causing people to disappear if they reveal it. Follow one man as he learns the secret, and takes it to his grave. His tight, acidic grave. 

AegisOfRoses - 53 minutes ago

I'd be glad to oblige, and will be sure to work on it soon! Expect great things, young padawan.

vortexx - 1 hour ago

nice story,i like the story with lamia girl:-)
Continue with charlie or with the white snake girls, with a little scat if possible.

AegisOfRoses - 3 hours ago

Yes, I'm sorry if I wasn't clear, Whoops! XP

FaceInCrowd42 - 3 hours ago

He didn't know he got fake what, exactly? What did that guy forge the ticket or something?

God Of Lust-Chapter 3

Uploaded: 4 hours ago

Owner: AegisOfRoses

Tags: Vore torture GenderBender Underage Pred Clothing Transformation Not Fullmetal Alchemist

So as you may very well know already, this isn't about Brotherhood, and I know that I suck, but at least it's still good, right? Right...? Oh well, maybe I ought to change it... Nah, too lazy. 

God Of Lust-Chapter 2

Uploaded: 4 hours ago

Owner: AegisOfRoses

Tags: Vore Anal Vore Non-Fatal Shrinking Nipple Vore Underage Pred Clothing Transformation

Alright, next chapter, things will begin ramping up, I swear. I will be uploading these in threes, probably, or possibly slow down. Thank you to anyone who reads my stories, it's all I ask, but please comment, it makes the writer feel nice.

I'm begging. 

God Of Lust-Chapter 1

Uploaded: 4 hours ago

Owner: AegisOfRoses

Tags: Vore Unbirth Anal Vore writing Transformation torture Shrinking Nipple Vore Underage Pred mind break Clothing Transformation

God's kinda bored with the Earth, so his Lords and Ladies are free to roam the earth. Take a look at one of the more freaky, Lust. 

RWBY One Shot: Pyrrha Packs it in.
The cafeteria at Beacon Academy was a
loud and raucous place. Rules existed but they were enforced lightly
due to the fact that these students would one day be subjected to a
harsher and crueler life. Until then, they were allowed to behave and
chatter as they saw fit, within reason. Food fights occasionally
broke out, stories and jokes were shared, and good-natured jibes were
said.
One student though had a plan in
motion that wasn’t so good-natured and r

RWBY One Shot: Pyrrha's Plump Belly

Uploaded: 5 hours ago

Owner: Davyjones

Tags: Belly expansion Stuffing Non-Vore belly expansion rwby Pyrrha Nikos

This story is based off of /inspired by a lovely picture done by eyeagain2 over on deviantart. Sadly DA in its infinite wisdom decided to have it taken down so I hope my story describes it in a worthy fashion.

By accident Pyrrha gets a massive midsection with quite the consequences.

Also, ARKOS Forever!!

Hope you all enjoy

And as Always
Comments and Criticisms are welcome. 

Vera

Uploaded: 6 hours ago

Owner: AColdDayInHell

Tags: Story F/FFFF f/multiple

Vera's first adventure in vore 

Mommy’s toilet
Evan and his mother
Olivia were sat on the couch watching telly. While most teenage boys
would be up in there room or hanging out with friends, Evan enjoyed
spending time with his mum. Ever since his dad had abandoned them he
felt a need to be supportive to his mother. Their interests were very
similar so talking to her about films felt as natural as talking to a
mate. Olivia was in many ways a child at heart so it wasn’t hard to
see why she got along so well with children rat

Mommy’s toilet (short story)

Uploaded: 11 hours ago

Owner: crime0edge

Tags: Scat Anal F/M Fart pooping Anal Vore Farting Butt Non-Fatal gas fetish Gassy Mother/Son pervert Motherly Vore hyperscat Non-Human pred

This is a story about living shit. You have been warned. 

SonOfDarkness - 1 hour ago

That's exactly what it was. Just reread it if you care enough.

maxpayne98 - 5 hours ago

I am not disturbed and am actually turned on :0

Xenenderson11 - 7 hours ago

Explain further. Like I believe I read something about a lady made of poo???

Chaos - 7 hours ago

A filthy, perverted son gets to have the time of his life and his brain scrambled by his mommy's shitty bowels.

Xenenderson11 - 8 hours ago

I don't even understand what I just read, can someone explain it to me?

Cell's Special Fun

Uploaded: 19 hours ago

Owner: saintheartwing

Tags: F/F Absorption Sex cell F/FF Tail Vore Sexual content Android 18 Dragon Ball Z Chi-Chi Bulma Gohan Cell Vore

Cell's got a hunger deep inside. A hunger he can't...SHE can't hide? Indeed. Absorbing 18 has led to some...verrry interesting changes. A commission I did for SonicV. Hope you all like it! 

Sierra's First Day at BOII (CTF, Ultra Macro)

Uploaded: 23 hours ago

Owner: timic83

Tags: Macro Non-Vore todd universal hyper one Shota alternate Ryo universe CTF Sierra


Two things are infinite: the universe and Todd's cock; and I'm not sure about the universe.  

The following italicized text belongs
to the deviantART user Tavin-Forchune and has not been altered in any
shape or form. I don’t own it at all and I have no intention of
wanting such a horrible excuse for a written work. The following
non-italicized text however belongs to me. Fun little tidbit about
this piece, it’s currently called “So much pokemon vore.” And
yes the period is in the title, I didn’t put it there. Anyway, its
original title from what I recall was something along the

C4 Issue 01

Uploaded: 1 day ago

Owner: DeadStrategicCactus

Tags: Non-Vore humor satire MST3K bad writing critique

This is an experimental piece I decided to whip up after a discussion in a discord server I'm where I learned in the very old days of the internet people used to mock bad fanfiction in a style similar to MST3K. Since I love the show and I happened to know of quite some bad stories, I decided to give it a shot. This is the result and I'm somewhat happy with it.

Some may note that this doesn't really feel at all like an MST3K riffing style, and I must admit that this is in fact the...
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DeadStrategicCactus - 2 hours ago

Yup, that's going to be great whenever that happens.

Cryos - 3 hours ago

Im just hoping the author of that story finds this at some point.

DeadStrategicCactus - 5 hours ago

Surprisingly I haven't received anything negative from this... yet. Granted it has the least amount of favs in my gallery but that's not much of a sign of anything.

Cryos - 9 hours ago

Im am i happy man now that this has been posted. Sometimes its just good to make people cry.

TT Ch3: Panicked Peril

Uploaded: 1 day ago

Owner: Elle

Tags: Digestion jessie captured Unwilling Prey Female Prey Paralysis implied fatality Sydney Infiltration tongue fuck

Characters:
Jessie - http://aryion.com/g4/view/326456
Sydney - http://aryion.com/g4/view/316257

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Sydney wakes in the other world to find that things aren't quite right...

(This novel made as part of NaNoWriMo 2016!)

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I do a lot of die rolls as part of my stories to decide...
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Elle - 17 hours ago

Yeah, this book certainly has more drama than the last two. Don't worry though; later chapters have plenty of vore and sex too~

Elle - 17 hours ago

Guess you'll have to wait and see, huh? ;3

Graywolf18 - 1 day ago

Oh my, and I thought the last chapter was unfortunate. This is down right dire.

Demicus - 1 day ago

...so what happens now? Is that the end for Sydney, entirely?

TT Ch2: Finicky Functions

Uploaded: 1 day ago

Owner: Elle

Tags: Pregnancy Digestion F/F Futanari lactation masturbation Willing H/F Female Prey Female Pred Age regression creampie Sydney pregnant prey Vaginal sex Elle

Characters:
Sydney - http://aryion.com/g4/view/316257
Elle - http://aryion.com/g4/view/314976
http://profile.aryion.com/profile/Elle_Bunny

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Sydney still working on solving the pregnancy issues in her life.

(This novel made as part of NaNoWriMo 2016!)

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I do a lot of...
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Elle - 17 hours ago

Indeed.

Graywolf18 - 1 day ago

That was an unfortunate series of events. :/ Sydney must be kicking herself.

Elle - 1 day ago

Thanks! More to come soon (as long as I can get around to editing! =P).

Forstand - 1 day ago

Woo! I love this series

Ahsoka and the Living Force, Finale

Uploaded: 1 day ago

Owner: saintheartwing

Tags: Oral Vore Sex Tentacle bestiality zoophilia star wars Nexu Jedi Soft oral vore sarlacc Xenophilia Ahsoka Acklay Ahsoka Tano Barriss Sando Aqua Monster

WOW, did I pack everything I could into this finale. Hope you all love the ride this has been. And thanks again to Batfink for their ideas for the tale.  

saintheartwing - 19 hours ago

My pleasure!

BatfinK16 - 21 hours ago

With pleasure my friend. It was a great ride. Maybe I can try on expand on this idea in any RPs I do in chat. Great work and loved working with you :)

Troy stared at the ominous looking human entrance to the colossal building that housed the dining facility. To his right was the entrance for aliens, the titans strolling through the door so casually, as if they had no idea what this restaurant was for exactly, or what it meant to humans like Troy. He looked over to see a pair of turians, two men chatting about something that he couldnt discern over the bustle of the crowd around him. Troy sighed, and looked back to the door. Its ominous mood d

Where will you end up? (commission)

Uploaded: 1 day ago

Owner: Leifkin7

Tags: Food Alien Digestion Consensual restaurant Willing Food play Multiple Prey Preparation Human Prey Turian Mass Effect Varren trash

So 21parrots over on FA had this really cool idea where a human is dished out in a family meal, there are multiple endings. So, I've made it a bit of a game. Pick a number between one and four, as there are four different endings, and read the ending that corresponds to your number, then tell me which you picked in the comments. You can read all of course but this adds a bit of fun.

Anyway, this commission was looooong overdue for the previously mentioned 21parrots This got...
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RespectableLoonitic - 1 hour ago

This was really good! I tried ending 4 first, the resigned nature of the prey was a real treat - even if he didn't get what he expected! ^^

Leifkin7 - 13 hours ago

Ahh thanks for the heads up, I was wondering why it was bugging out whenever I hit submit.

LucifersChef - 1 day ago

This story posted 4 times.

The magic medicine

Uploaded: 1 day ago

Owner: CreativeWriter

Tags: Soul Vore Oral Vore Soft Vore F/F Cooking BBW Jungle witch Macro/Micro Semi-willing Shrinking Multiple Prey Sorceress Potion Human Prey BBW pred tribal Jaguar pred

A commission I did for  Max123.

The young witch Cassandra sneaks into Umbra's castle to get a magic crystal with healing powers to cure her sister who had been cursed. But then the invisibility spell wears off right when she stands in front of Umbra, who felt very hungry at that moment... 

darc22005 - 5 hours ago

Faved to read later, looked good

Paul walked through his home’s front
door and sighed. It'd been a long day at work and all he wanted was
a nice warm shower and to slump into bed with his wife.They'd been
trying for a baby for months but tonight he didn't have the energy
and was very tired of disappointment. He slipped his clothes off on
the way to the bathroom and stopped by the closed door of his
bedroom. He could hear a rhythmic chanting from the other side of
the door… One of which, he was sure was his wife. The othe

At any cost.

Uploaded: 1 day ago

Owner: Nothinggood

Tags: Vore Unbirth F/M Unwilling Age regression vaginal vore Cuckold genderswap cuck

Please enjoy and let me know what you think.  

Groblek - 1 day ago

You're welcome fo borrow my plotlines anytime, much of storytelling in general involves filing off the identifying bits of existing stories and adding your own take on it. :)

Nothinggood - 1 day ago

Thank you!
Honestly, I do borrow quite a lot of inspiration from your work (pretty obviously sometimes, sorry!)
I may someday write something a bit longer, but I personally just love the short and sweet stories. Mostly because I'm not the strongest writer haha!
Again, thank you!

Groblek - 1 day ago

Ooh, fun! Good to see another story from you, and this one is an interesting twist on a familiar sort of setup. The only complaint I have is that you didn't drag things out longer, which is really just me being greedy for more. :)

Sweet Victory

Uploaded: 2 days ago

Owner: SardonicLemonade

Tags: Oral Vore Human M/M masturbation Macro/Micro Fatal Vore Nudity Male Prey Male Pred Hetalia frottage Axis Powers Hetalia APH Denmark APH Sweden

It seems like Denmark has found a way to end an old rivalry with Sweden once and for all.

Warnings: Micro vore, oral vore, nudity, masturbation, frottage, and implied digestion

First story of the new year! Although truthfully, I’ve been working on and off with it for a while now. It started off with just a ‘what if’ kind of scenario and it snowballed into this monstrosity.

I do not own Axis Powers Hetalia.

Feedback is welcomed! 

Ravenous Succubus Roommate

Uploaded: 2 days ago

Owner: Zwanzik

Tags: Succubus F/F Sex Story Pre-Vore Human Prey Mini Giantess tail sex patreon whoring

A young woman decides to have sex with her succubus roommate instead of getting eaten. Here's an example of how this goes down.

This is just 1 out of 9 pages!

Get the full story by pledging to my Patreon! It will be released in February! 

Zwanzik - 1 day ago

Quite naughty... >:3

deaddanny - 1 day ago

Ooh, naughty tails.

“You
know, now that we have your horse back, we can go to the bay.” Tatl
waited for Link to respond, but, as always, he just kept walking. The
fairy fluttered along after her companion, past the Stock Pot Inn and
into East Clock Town. Trying again, Tatl said, “It's wide open. We
can jump that fence and be there in a flash. Don't you want to see
what strange new adventures await us in the west?” When Link didn't
answer, just looking around East Clock Town, deep in thought, Tatl
tried agai

9. Treasure Chest Game Shop Gal

Uploaded: 2 days ago

Owner: Belloc

Tags: Oral Vore Digestion M/F link Unwilling Prey legend of zelda Post Vore Scat Female Prey disposal goron Male Pred Majora's Mask

Sometimes it's good to take a break from saving the world and enjoy a fun game. Link finds a quaint little game shop right in Clock Town with a cute lady at the counter. Too bad for her, Link isn't much for losing. 

rika - 2 hours ago

That- That was supposed to be a piece of heart...! I would've eaten her too, the crook! Outrageous!

Belloc - 1 day ago

Mmhmm. He's just sharing his disappointment. xD

crushxtreame - 1 day ago

Not so much as losing its more that the shop is kinda cheating and have a shit prize so link gabe her a diferent kind of shit prize

Tor
didn't set her princeling down until she was a comfortable distance
from the town, perhaps a twenty minute ride. She could still feel the
doctor and assistant squirming and pounding in her stomach. They
likely would for quite some time. But their two small bodies alone
did not fill her up. They only wet her appetite. Her stomach growled
around her prey, demanding something more substantive. Eric
heard the noise and shuddered. He couldn't even think about the fact
that he was cradled against

A Charmed Life Ch 7

Uploaded: 2 days ago

Owner: JinxedMyself

Tags: Vore Digestion Stuffing Giantess slow digestion Giantess Vore live prey food and drink

I love it when a predator continues to eat even while they have their prey languishing in their stomachs. I love it even more when it is from the prey's POV as food and drink rain down on them. But, that just doesn't fit in the flow of this story. I may do a side-story from their POV, though.

I'm tagging this with vore due to the fact that Tor's prey is still alive inside of her and it is mentioned in the story. 

Quetzalcoatl part 3

Uploaded: 2 days ago

Owner: SBisME

Tags: Belly Soft Vore M/M Same Size Quetzalcoatl belly bulge

The Day of Prayers can be a very tiring holiday! 

SBisME - 1 day ago

Yesss! Thank you! I'm glad you think so! :D

SBisME - 1 day ago

I think I've got about 3-5 more chapters worth left! So glad you like it!

dangochao - 1 day ago

man that story was hot hot HOT!

Bud - 1 day ago

Please tell me you are going to continue this, like write 10 more chapters? This is just too good.

Hyper Jae: Stroke! Part 1 (Non-Vore, Gay)

Uploaded: 2 days ago

Owner: Xulali

Tags: Non-Vore Gay Cum Hyperphallic Interracial hyper cock Gay sex hyper balls hyper cum Jae-Sun Kyoung

Jae helps the Southblade Pastry Club win their rowing race.

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Expect hyper cock (significantly larger than Jae himself), hyper balls, epic jizz-storms, boat racing, and of course a bunch of gayness.

***

You can find THE DONGSTAR on Literotica and Hentai Foundry.

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Xulali - 2 days ago

That was at least five words

headhunter732 - 2 days ago

Two words: Woah

The
egg protector.
This story contains
: F/Egg, F/Multiple Egg, Heavy belly, Belly ache, Indigestion,
Mentions of Birthing eggs, Some burping, belly bloating, A heist
situation, minimal mentions of scat, and mentions of weaponary.
Vendez encounters a
dragon who layed a clucth of eggs, but a certain gangster of people
attempt to take it, and vendez has to find a way to make sure these
eggs don’t fall into the wrong hands, one war or another,
‘Ah,
the city in the morning is so quiet.’ Vendez

The Egg Protector

Uploaded: 2 days ago

Owner: Downyago

Tags: Vore Swallowing Non-Fatal Centauress Multiple Prey Big Belly stomach ache indigestible belly bulge Object Vore Belly ache Safekeeping tummy ache bloating heavy belly belly bloat Egg Vore

My first ever story on Eka's. You can call it my Debut (?). A very VERY long one I wrote while on holiday. It's my first ever attempt at a vore-related story, so be nice with me please.

If I made any mistakes, sorry. If any of my characters have any similarities to someone else's, I'm not copyrighting, it is purely coincidence XD.

Enjoy it!! 

Downyago - 1 day ago

It will come, but I have other plans in mind XD. Thanks for commenting

t4capt - 2 days ago

A great start! I would love to read a sequel with the metal dragon mother finding her and helping Vez lay those eggs

The goddess Lucerna's deadly trial

Uploaded: 3 days ago

Owner: scottypilgrim

Tags: F/F Giantess Goddess roleplay Macro/Micro teasing taunting Vanille Role Play Logs Roleplay logs

Vanille was deemed a pervert during a fun little roleplay with a friend. The roleplay was a dice game that ended with one of us being perma'd for 2 weeks. I decided to rewrite it as a story and post it here in pieces ^_^ Hope you enjoy the ride! This was posted with the permission of Lucerna's player 

Janice Wenton looked up from her
roll to the blank faces of the second grade class. It was smaller
than an average class, only eight students. Apparently there had been
an incident not too long ago, but the principal had been vague on the
details. She took a deep breath to steady her nerves. It was after
all, her first time subbing at this school. She wanted to start off
on the right foot and had taken great care to appear professional.
Her large DD-sized breasts were modestly stuffed beneath a

Substitute

Uploaded: 3 days ago

Owner: Tyslan03

Tags: Oral Vore Scat Digestion F/F F/M Sex Unwilling Prey Multiple Prey Underage Prey f/multiple Teacher/Student teacher pred student prey Casual vore

Request for Newtonne. The request was a little vague so I drew inspiration from his gallery (check it out if you haven't). I really liked his Ms. Khan character but didn't want to use her directly for fear of botching the character. So I made *ahem* a substitute. 

SonOfDarkness - 12 hours ago

Cool story, bro.
It's nice to see a story with a Pred that isn't always dominant during sex. Femdom vore is a good combo, I guess, but it's pretty overused. Submissive preds ftw.

Junogray - 2 days ago

A smash hit, little longer than I normally go for but very worth it

Bags - 2 days ago

You've done it again! This was an amazing story!

Newtonne - 3 days ago

This is AMAZING. I love the way you described the teacher's belly as it took in its meal. I also love how well written your work is. I didn't find any mistakes in the grammar and the pace of the story was consistent. A+ This is wonderful.

bela - 3 days ago

Janice might engulf Jonathon during their honeymoon.

Fallout: Guts and Glory - Chapter 47

Uploaded: 3 days ago

Owner: Aces

Tags: Stuffing violence Drama Domestic Violence Deathclaw Slice of Life Deathclaw Hybrid

-- Please support my work! --

Help turn this writing series into a comic by supporting me on Patreon! I need help commissioning artists to draw chapters of the series.

https://www.patreon.com/Aces

Derp, I lied (or forgot). This is the end of the arc, so now I start my hiatus. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Also, what's this? Could it be? Diana is developing as a character into someone kinda sorta...
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Aces - 2 days ago

All of them, I am afraid. I have had a terrible case of writer's block on damn well everything as of late. Plus, I need time to catch up. I plan on still writing, but I have no buffer zone between what chapters I am actively writing verses what I have published.

For example, in Guts and Glory, I have written up to chapter 51, but I keep scrapping everything and starting over because I am having trouble with the new arc.

Aces - 2 days ago

I'm a complete idiot who just noticed now that I have to log into the tip jar account to use it. There's like $50 just sitting there collecting dust.

But thank you. ^^

bubbalubber - 3 days ago

Is the hiatus just this story or all of them?

Kaoru - 3 days ago

You know, I thought the last chapter was a decent place to leave off, but this is way better. Satisfying, delightful full of character development and character moments. Great use of the cast and great show of contrasting attitudes. I hope you continue on with the other two series while figuring out where to take this, but ether way - you've left us in a good spot.

+tip

anyany - 3 days ago

will you do spin offs now of characters getting digested??

Nxtguystories - 1 day ago

Thanks for fixing the tags!

Seblennon - 3 days ago

Your welcome

Nxtguystories - 3 days ago

Sure thing! Thanks for reading my story

Seblennon - 3 days ago

Just Blanc not being the prey and just want my story to be the same as this one

Nxtguystories - 3 days ago

Expect it in about a week or two. Is there anything you don't want in the story i.e. Scat or domination etc

Little Lion Learns to Vore! (MAGNUS Part 2)

Uploaded: 4 days ago

Owner: AllICanEatFox

Tags: Furry Wolf Soft Vore Male Chubby Fat Inflation M/M Lion Cum creature Boyfriend forced forced vore part 2 filthy live prey Story Vore

Yay! Part 2 is finally here! hope you guys like this short series! ^_^ Part 1 can be found hear: https://aryion.com/g4/view/375886 

Vikali
groaned a bit as they woke up, tangled up in their bed, and squeezed
their eyes shut. Their head was pounding from the night before, and
they did not want to be awake right now.
A snore coming someone next to them, however, reminded them that
they still had guests. With another groan, they started to get up-
only to realize that their arms were under someone.
Well, three someones.
With a sigh, Vikali finally forced their eyes open to look at the
other occupants of the bed, only to immedia

Morning Coffee

Uploaded: 4 days ago

Owner: CurioHeart

Tags: Futanari Futa Unwilling Prey Multiple Prey Underage Prey Female Prey Male Prey Underage Pred implied sex Unaware Prey sleeping prey Herm Pred Hermaphrodite futa pred Casual vore Vikali genderqueer pred implied orgy

Living by themself, Vikali loves to throw parties. They also love to get intoxicated, whether it's by getting high or drinking.

They also love their morning coffee- especially when they have a hangover.

Don't get between Vikali and their morning coffee- unless you want to be eaten, of course. 

CurioHeart - 3 days ago

I will! Thanks for the tip!

princessziva - 3 days ago

If thats the case then maybe keep a note down. Write down your main plot points and write "chapters" not litteral ones just divide the story into the splot segments and find ways to merge them together. Like that you dont lose your main plot and you get to spend time on the story as a whole. I used to write my own little stories (never published them though) and i found that if you do what i do above you generally cant go wrong. Give it a whirl next time you have an idea for a short story.

CurioHeart - 3 days ago

Thanks for the feedback! I usually try to describe it at least a [i]bit[/i] more than what I did here, but I was in a bit of a rush to get the idea put down before I forgot it. I'll see about updating it soon with some extra detail in those parts.

princessziva - 4 days ago

As much as i enjoyed reading this i got a bit of feedback.
Though this story was obviously meant as a short one try and let the vore stand out a little prolong the scene add a bit of extra detail.
You may not think it but the difference would be night and day.
Anyway still a good read!