pbysteria - 2 hours ago

Vampires really are the best kind of ticks

Indighost - 3 hours ago

Very cute :) Well written too! I love the description of the tropical landscape, Carmilla's chubby butt, and especially towards the end I got a really good impression of that wonderful sick feeling!

Malus - 4 hours ago

I had actually thought about the wolf departing, but I really wanted the bones to end up getting washed into the pond to create a little ossuarium - though a real snake would of course not contribute to that.
I was rather sure that the rounded belly full of human might be too hard to fit into the mouth of a snake, but a wolf should surely not be banking on that. Though, I think neither me nor Kumbartha would have minded to have that mistake immediately turn fatal, I actually really like the idea in general that a snake would catch an unwary predator and devour him.^^
The idea of being fucked by one's would be predator and then watch as he is taken by surprise by something else, having a front row seat to every moment of his whole body, still erect and likely desperately needy for a helping hand to get him off a last time, that is something I definitely mean to write down some day.

As with any vore story, there are always some concessions made in favor of the kinky, like the burping out a pair of glasses or such and being able to pass out a fully intact skull.

I am definitely very happy you enjoyed it and I take it as a compliment that you would even view it under the lens of realistic vore, I mean, things usually are rather stretchy in most vore stories when it comes to realism.^^ ;

Philosoraptor - 4 hours ago

Fun, well written story, with lots of great description. I was a bit surprised though, that the sated wolf decided to sleep off his prey near the big snake that had already swallowed his wolf companion.... as snakes seldom stop eating with a single prey when other easy meals are still about. I recall a biologist finding a bull snake that was literally packed with mice, the last one's tail having to hang out of its mouth until the previous ones digested enough to fully swallow the last one. Real wolves really do swallow some small prey creatures whole and still alive, (no point to waste the time and effort chewing something small enough to swallow whole)though it would take an incredibly large one to swallow even a small person whole, of course. I believe the boy's glasses would have passed far easier through the wolf's small intestines than a much broader, intact skull, but it seems this has become an almost obligatory feature of vore stories involving scat. Thanks for sharing!

Kumbartha - 6 hours ago

looove it

Voraciouswolfy - 4 hours ago

Ah, that's very helpful thanks. I appreciate the feedback and I'll keep it in mind for future writing.

Philosoraptor - 4 hours ago

I thought this was well written, but didn't understand why the werewolf would eat things like indigestible wooden furniture. Stomachs also don't really 'fill up' with acid. Only a relatively small amount is secreted but as the stomach is constantly churning, the acid is still able to completely coat the food items. Thanks for sharing!

Ignoreme79 - 28 minutes ago

aww! now this is just adorable. got the feel good vibes from this one. great job as always!

Brazzel - 13 hours ago

Me too <3

Handsomekingdedede - 14 hours ago

That’s so cute, I honestly think this is the best way to get married with someone in the Vore world~ :3

Groblek - 2 hours ago

Since I’ve definitely enjoyed the stories you’ve done from my requests, I certainly can’t argue with that. :)

marloweny - 4 hours ago

It was fun. The body swap was a request. Seems like requests often turn out well.

Groblek - 6 hours ago

Ooh, fun! Having those two swap bodies is a fun concept. I particularly liked Meeta’s “Are you always this sensitive?” And the subsequent realization of just why Wendy’s auite so focused on sex all the time.

ZeldaNoVorsu - 15 hours ago

(Crap, now he's made me want to write that third one...)

derpsquid42 - 15 hours ago

Oh yeah, dang it's late. I have to get to bed.

ZeldaNoVorsu - 15 hours ago

Apparently the model in brawl was based off an unused design for TP, which would likely apply to 4 as well, so it's enough grounds for me to be lazy. (It's 8/21 now, so it's too late to post a third with some kind of Sheik plot.)

derpsquid42 - 15 hours ago

It's just that technically, Shiek is you-know-who from OoT, and unless I'm mistaken, (s)he hasn't had any major redesign from Melee to Ultimate…

ZeldaNoVorsu - 15 hours ago

Sheik's here. She gets eaten and reborn. I mean sure, they don't transform anymore... But, you-know-who and Sheik are still the same person. Although, I did at one point consider combining these two with Zelda eating, well, Zelda, and Toon Link eating Sheik. I decided not to, however, cause the whole characters being reborn thing would get complicated. It was just better to keep the two separate and have Sheik be implied.

Rejectcode - 1 hour ago

You have my vote for the quicksand story, I bet yours would be terrific.

Slimshod - 15 hours ago

This was a fun read. I especially liked the mom's reaction to the whole thing, very nice touch.

As for quicksand, I'd read that. Sinking/quicksand is a natural off-shoot of vore and has peril elements in it which are nice. Yours would probably be willing though. Still, I'd read it.

ZeldaNoVorsu - 14 hours ago

Eh... It's worth the risk.

AnonymousLurker - 15 hours ago

Hey! Pun cAncer is no joke! It only needs to happen once for your life to become a never ending pun fest that will only end when you pour 30 gallons of eye bleach into your eyes or the eventual collapse of your funny bone!

ZeldaNoVorsu - 15 hours ago

I promise, it's a once in a lifetime thing (at least for this pun!).

AnonymousLurker - 15 hours ago

You do realize these kinds of puns can cause cancer you know? I have to ask that you stop this punFoolery or else I'm going to stop giving you a 35% cut.

ZeldaNoVorsu - 15 hours ago

It can only happen once as well!

phantom131 - 13 hours ago

Considering who haruko is, it makes sense that she would trespass into other anime.

Chaos - 16 hours ago

Thanks a lot, I've actually mentioned to SonicV I'm up for having Haruko pop up in other animes.

Nugget1138 - 17 hours ago

Wow, talk about a crossover I never knew I wanted. Awesome story

BizzareBlue - 9 hours ago

I tried to keep the suicide content a little distant from the rest of the story by confining it to a flashback but, yeah, it's definitely not something that should show up in a story without some advance warning. I agree that the tough love is better than none, I just wanted to be careful about the implication that all you have to do is be strict with someone when they are depressed and they'll soon start feeling much better.

There are a few more of my characters who get away with dating predators, and Amina from Heritage seemed on good terms with her roommate, but the odds definitely lean towards the friend becoming food by the end. I may have to do some stories with more trustworthy preds soon.

Glad you enjoyed her hints. I absolutely love dialog with double meanings that the prey don't catch until too late, at least as long as the hints aren't so obvious that the prey really should notice. I also have to admit, while I wanted the scene with her throwing his clothes over the bridge to be deliberately wasteful, I really love the idea of her turning up at the store with her full belly still showing and explaining to the utterly unconvinced staff that 'Tannel asked me to pick up his deposit for him'.

BizzareBlue - 9 hours ago

Glad you liked it.

Kasra - 17 hours ago

You know, the suicide content warning had me worried, but truth be told it was far enough from my own experiences to not start something unpleasant. That said, it's a touchy subject and I do appreciate the forewarning and the resources; that was very thoughtful. That said, while I agree with your statement that you can't rely on somebody to show up at the last minute like some sort of hero, even tough love is better than none at all. Though as with everything in life, it's more complicated than that.

On to the story itself, though, jeez befriending predators never seems to work out! Or, almost never. Takkos and Aira worked out pretty nicely. Really, though, I thought the flashback was pretty pleasantly diffused simply by the image of an angry Denji dragging Tannel home, "finding him if he tried to leave," and then enrolling him in university. I'm a weird guy, but I found those visuals pretty funny.

The transition from celebration to understanding was well done, I enjoyed the hints that Denji dropped and Tannel ALMOST caught on to, particularly regarding her low initial expectations and his own question of "why," right up to that final "you won't need that deposit." Though really, Denji, YOU could have returned the tux and gotten the deposit.

Combat - 18 hours ago

Wow, just wow.

BizzareBlue - 19 hours ago

Yeah, I really like the idea of a predator removing their victim's clothing one piece at a time and, with every item lost, the prey knows that they are that much closer to being eaten. It shows up in quite a few of my stories.

CrimsonFangX666 - 3 hours ago

Oh, most likely. There's no possible way America would have knowledge of OTFs and NOT experiment on them, so it's very likely TOP Secret Clearance that won't get you court-marshaled for revealing or exploiting it, it'll get you shot. Or crapped out of an OTF at 30,000 feet.

Philosoraptor - 4 hours ago

It seems that this scenario is kind of like the knowledge of extraterrestrial visitors in the Men in Black movie franchise. People high in government ore work with them in the Armed Forces are aware of their existence but the general public are kept unaware of the existence of dragons to prevent possible panic given the fact they are large carnivores with many legends of human predation. I imagine everyone involved with OTFs have a Top Secret clearance.

CrimsonFangX666 - 20 hours ago

Hisone and Masotan meet America. And don't immediately get stuffed into a laboratory to get experimented on. I like it. How many Americans are gonna get gulped by an OTF? Are there any non-Japanese OTFs? We will (maybe) find out. Next time on... "Dragon Pilot: Red Flag". << Announcer from DBZ voice.

GeneralUrist - 20 hours ago

That was fun! Captures the lighthearted humor of the original anime well, and in general I'm glad to see a Hisone and Masotan fanfic.

I hope your creative drive keeps up, this looks like it could be a very good story.

Aces - 21 hours ago

Don't you worry. I HAVE PLANS FOR THIS. :U

simalst - 8 hours ago

my son Chuck a real sibling, a brother. >> isn't Lucia female?

DodongoQueen3 - 1 day ago

I hope you get plenty of favs buddy, sorry for taking abit long to upload, and to tell it was okay to use my thumbnail..... hopefully in time im not this lazy. Good work

DodongoQueen3 - 1 day ago

I hope you get plenty of favs buddy, sorry for taking abit long to upload, and to tell it was okay to use my thumbnail..... hopefully in time im not this lazy. Good work

Oniric - 20 hours ago

Aww, thank you so much, that's very kind of you! :)

WideVariety - 21 hours ago

Always love your stuff!! Deserves far more attention than it gets!

Apex - 11 hours ago

Really? Wow. I mean, I was going for heartfelt but apparently, I really nailed it. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!

dimon - 14 hours ago

I teared up a little at the end there.

Apex - 19 hours ago

Haha, it may have been well written but I still managed to screw up. Hjarta's actually not an anthro. She's a, what is it, a demi? Human but with wolf ears, a tail, and fur from her elbows to fingertips and knees to toes. I can see how it's confusing; any hints to that were super subtle.

I'll try to be more clear on that in the future, though I'm glad it's apparently good enough to cover my mistakes.

wisecrack3 - 22 hours ago

She's not the only one with trouble walking after, well done! Im not a fan of wolf anthro sex due to the confusion as to what a nude wolf anthro would look like but the story was very well written and dispelled any doubta near immediately

Apex - 1 day ago

I'm glad you enjoy my work. It's comments like this that make me feel like I might actually be talented at this or something.

marloweny - 1 hour ago

Aw poop. (Though, if you read the next installment, you'll understand my self-confusion)

FoxGamer - 2 hours ago

In the final section, you replaced Meeta's name with Wendy's for one of her lines.

marloweny - 4 hours ago

Hopefully you like where it goes!

testpilot24 - 1 day ago

It will be interesting, if next ritual will turn Tammer it futasuccubusfox. permanetly. without usual side effects of that succubus.

HungryAL - 1 day ago

Ooh, it's been a while since we've seen this crew. I'm looking forward to where you take this.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 1 day ago

nice follow up, glad to see that out tiny isn't mush yet. Here's to hoping it stays that way.

Fantasia - 1 day ago

Awesome stuff~

Bigmouth - 1 day ago

Thanks mate!

Altimos - 1 day ago

This is pretty damn good... you've earned a follow <3

dddddd2 - 1 hour ago

Love the pacing and details!
Amazing mares, so dominating and chubby~

Tricks - 17 hours ago

As far as I'm aware based on some quick searches, it's ambiguous as to what the actual plural is. I'll keep it in mind, though.

Tricks - 17 hours ago

Thanks a lot for the compliment; I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Higuain - 19 hours ago

Top fucking unffff.
That was amazing~

ShinMegamiDerpy - 1 day ago

The plural term for Succubus is Succubi.

Brazzel - 15 hours ago

Well you just made my day. Thanks Kabei, it always makes me unimaginably happy when someone tells me that they like my work.

Kabei - 16 hours ago

woman eating a man's partner is still one of my favorites to read. Always enjoyable to read Brazzel!

Brazzel - 18 hours ago

I appreciate it! I love your avatar, btw.

torontofan - 19 hours ago

Love the burps <3. Perfectly placed. And the detail of her stomach's appearance was also fantastic!

torontofan - 19 hours ago

Love the burps man. Perfectly placed. And the detail of her stomach's appearance was also fantastic!

maxpayne98 - 1 day ago

Please make a big habit of it 0w0

Altimos - 1 day ago

Loved it, a great alternate ending... Some taunting during and after absorption would've been icing on this delicious cake XD

Apostolos - 1 day ago

Ohoh part 1? Great news!

Nightmare49 - 2 days ago

i love the start.

tgawsome - 19 hours ago

I guess how silly it got would be if they met as enemiesor friends. The shrouds hamyness vs Chista's poor since of humor. Such a conflict would be something legends are made off.

TheMysteriousSadSack - 1 day ago

How silly would it be if Chista ran into the silver shroud? That would be a grade-A misunderstanding.

tgawsome - 1 day ago

Glade you are enjoying the story so far. Don't worry this story is far from over. It might take some time to work out some of the screenshots. (posing and what not) But I'll keep you guys informed on if there will be a delay on the blog.

Urielzael2 - 1 day ago

I like fallout RPs. To be fair I made one for one of friend from eka's using knowledge of all fallouts (from 1 - 4). Anyway I hope you will continu as those stories of yours are neat.

tgawsome - 1 day ago

Remember don't eat synths there not organic and give you horrible indigestion. As for the fur well thats not helping things in there.

Gutswimmer - 2 days ago

Man, I wish this were a bot longer and more detailed. It was over before I could blink!

Bookie - 20 hours ago

I am so glad to see a sequel to that previous story I very much enjoyed. This conclusion of sorts brings forth happy feelings, for Cyagnus and Gavin make a really nice pair and an interesting relationship.

DrakeZephyr - 1 day ago

Unless my arm gets twisted again, I'm not intending to write these two again... but the surge of interest has got me thinking about writing something new, in the same world, with the two temples in the focus... seeing as the concept seems to have been, well liked.

Kasra - 2 days ago

Now this is a blast from the past! Great to see that Cyagnus and Gavin are getting along nicely, and interesting to see Cyagnus join the conspiracy.

Though he still hasn't figured out exactly how they do it. Guess he'll have to come back.

ZeldaNoVorsu - 1 day ago

It's a secret to everyone.

linkever - 1 day ago

The Siren probably gonna pop up at the end of Skyward Sword or during it as you said you were gonna make ZND:SS soon and the reason why to explain the origin right now as a way to be able to integrate it in the story. Did I guess right?

ZeldaNoVorsu - 1 day ago

Because Zelda No Vorsu is not his (my) real name, so the brackets represent the fact that it is a pen name.

derpsquid42 - 1 day ago

Ah, that makes sense. Why do you use brackets every time you mention him?

ZeldaNoVorsu - 1 day ago

He's writing the story in the present. In the past, he's working a different job for the Goddesses at first. He started off researching the multiverse. I like that Nintendo left the creation story rather vague, it gave me a lot of room to stretch my creative muscles.

Nixy - 2 days ago

hello i really enjoyed this story if you could make a sequal that would be fantastic keep up the good work!

doomfister - 48 minutes ago

all the better to bulge their throats, on the short ride down.

doomfister - 49 minutes ago

it is fun things to think about, i am a animal scientist specialising in entomology and herpetology is my second love, so when it comes to digestion and other factors i have a much wider understanding of the field then is probably healthy.

from the got cannon, it is pretty savage when season 7 dragons start feasting, if you read a world of ice and fire they actually hint and mention things like the logistics of such things. i have a snake vore commission coming up in the very near future, and i am going to ask how far the buyer wants me to go in realism. so in the next few weeks its very possible i might put out a snake vore story with full realistic vore, unlike the watered down version with fantasy elements that is more common. its going to be full tour, attack, swallow, digestion disposal, so its going to be a good little expedition into snake biology, a bit to intimate for the girl involved, but hey, adventure is for the brave, and the dead ;).

alexanderrea7 - 20 hours ago

that dragon likes big butts :) then ...

Philosoraptor - 21 hours ago

I mention such things as I have kept reptiles of all types for many years and therefor very familiar with the digestive processes of many different species. Some writers do appreciate authentic details, but I didn't realize that you were already quite familiar yourself. Probably the most efficient of all reptilian digesters are the crocodilians (which in truth are more closely related to bird, than they are other reptiles), which even grind down keratin fur, hooves, claws and horns to unidentifiable paste, but this is with the help of a gizzard like stomach containing stones and the occasional metal object inadvertently swallowed along with occasional human prey. I agree that if scientifically classified, dragons would be archosaurs, the 'high reptiles', like the dinosaurs, pterosaurs, crocodilians and birds, but being flyers, would need to digest food a lot faster than crocs, so probably not quite as efficiently. It would be interesting to speculate in a future story the staggering amount of humans and/or livestock it would take to 'fuel' Dany's dragons in their awesome, 'Season 7' size, while on campaign far from the ocean where they seem to normally feed the most. A shame they never showed such a thing in the show, which would be quite unforgettable if they dared to do so.

doomfister - 2 days ago

I wrote it accurately for the most part. I made a few changes based on my own head cannon and what I wanted to do with the story. for example, I imagine dragon digestion is more efficient then lesser reptiles. I didn't explicitly say it can digest hair it just does a good job at ruining it in deer and other beasties, so it partially digests it, but not sufficiently to lose its form, hence the tickling back door remark on its normal exit. also depending on who you ask some snakes can digest keratin, so I went with the safe middle ground and did a mixture of both as the plot allowed for it.

in regard to lack of teeth and nails in the turd, that was a stylistic choice. I wanted Drogon to strip any of her everything, her new body being nothing like the hot woman who had taken the one-way trip, not a single remnant of her former form passing through his conveyor system of a gastrointestinal tract, hence the lack of straggling hairs as well. there was no jewelry in the turd because I based it off a scene from the show, where she was only wearing a necklace and bracelet, so no shiny rings to leave in the droppings. the same reason why I failed to mention the uric pellets, as I have done so in the past with a few of my snake stories, I debated adding it, but in my mind, I think the sopping wet turds is a more powerful image, then a hodgepodge of assorted waste products.

I am very glad you enjoyed it enough to leave such a long and thought out comment, if you like realistic digestion, I tackle it primarily with my snake stories. and am sure to write more stories with this sort of digestion style in the future.

Groblek - 2 days ago

This was a fun scene, though you should have given us the name for the first woman earlier, I had trouble figuring out which woman was which.

Whereaminow27 - 2 days ago

I really did enjoy this story :)

Snookums - 1 day ago

Lovely hippo pred!

HisashiHinata - 19 hours ago

Thanks! And yeah, at some point, I switched from third to first perspective. I probably should've clarified that. Thanks for the comment though!

LordDantai - 19 hours ago

It was a fun read, I will always enjoy a good ~Son noms Mom~ story. The RP style did however make it a bit hard to follow sometimes.

maxpayne98 - 1 day ago

You beautiful person ^w^

AssImilate - 1 day ago

Both haha.

AlchemillasFinest - 1 day ago

I know!;p Still love your work though that was a random and strange coincidence.

AlisaBlueBird - 1 day ago

No, I'm just messing with you~

AlchemillasFinest - 1 day ago

We know each other!? O_O

wolfen89 - 3 days ago

Oh wow this was amazing! Simply loved everything Bout it