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HIS
FIRST TIME
by
Bitter
***
It
was the worst sort of inn: the kind that knows you want to leave as
soon as possible and obliges by helping you want to do so. The best
one could say about it was that it did have the essential functions
of a lodging. The rooms contained beds. There was a restroom in the
building, somewhere, if one was brave enough to go looking for it.
The doors possessed locks. If you wanted light, there was a window,
usually. And, best of all, it only cost exactly as much as it

His First Time (?/F, ?/M)

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Digestion Sex Reformation Fatal ?/F ?/M Snake/F snake/m

 Vitcent drew me an avatar to use around less lewd parts of the Internet, so I retaliated by telling the story of how their characters Umami and Nori first met. Among other things that Nori experienced for the first time. 

Bitter - 1 year ago

If it meets your approval, Eve, then I KNOW I got it right.

EveAra - 1 year ago

oooh its nice to see you guys collab! Cute story.
Love the way you wrote these characters, especially Umami, she definitely seems delightfully oddball and out of place in Nori's crapsack world!

NightRoller - 1 year ago

This story was awesome!!!!
As a writer, I would be fangirling over this if I was female. As it is, I can only fanboy, which is slightly less loud and excited.
The way you began this story is absolutely fantastic. Your writer's voice is quite liberal with puns and metaphors, and I absolutely love it! I also liked how you hinted at Umi being quite lovely without stating it flatly.
The one thing I could possibly think to complain about is the explicitness of the sex scene, but that's because I really prefer it to be glossed over or metaphorized, rather than portrayed in such descriptive detail.
Ah, well. I'm glad I saw this in my notifications and stopped by to take a look, because your writing is interesting from the very start. Seriously, you hooked me within the first few paragraphs.

noego - 1 year ago

Excellent story as always. Thanks.

PASSING
by
Bitter
***
John
stood with his palm against a palm tree, looking out over a bush into
the beach beyond, watching a gaggle of young women in swimsuits
enjoying themselves. Some of them were in the water bopping
beach-balls back and forth, a few had taken to the volleyball court,
he could see Karen reading a book through her horn-rimmed glasses,
and Mary was just sunbathing-- a view that fixed John's gaze for
quite a bit longer than the rest, because the way she was lying let
the curvat

Passing (F/M)

Uploaded: 2 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Breasts Belly Soft Vore Expansion Digestion Breast Expansion F/M Trap Fatal Butt Hips Female Pred Femboy Butt Expansion ass expansion trap prey

John wants to learn how to be more like a girl, so he sneaks into an all-female island resort to live among women. He is discovered and things end badly for him. 

ryanshowseason3 - 2 years ago

The digestion scene here is particularly enjoyable and the boy's turn to reluctant but aroused.

TrainerKatrine - 2 years ago

I'm a cookie!

Imagine - 2 years ago

Its just curriosity my friend. It typically gets the best of me

Bitter - 2 years ago

Found someone's cell phone and read their message history?
Overheard someone talking about it who discovered it for themselves?
Tipped off by a wiser elder who felt like making a game of it?

It doesn't really matter how, I feel.

Imagine - 2 years ago

But how did she know how many were left?

Sereena's tail lashed to and fro behind her as she waited for her friend. A distant rumble made the mouse-girl glance up at the darkening, clouded sky again, running a hand through her short, brown hair with a frustrated huff. It looked like it might storm-and Mimin still wasn't here yet! And it would wait to rain until after she'd done all the day's work, wouldn't it? She leaned her back against the fence post on the edge of town, arms crossed-before perking her murine ears up as she spotted so

Be Mine (F/F)

Uploaded: 2 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Digestion F/F Weight Gain Fatal Willing Willing prey

In the happy little fairyland of Pyxacea, Mimin (played by myself) pays a visit to a mousish friend of hers named Sereena (played by  Jahan) to deliver a proposition... 

Bitter - 2 years ago

Your regards have been duly passed on and appreciated!

shabbacabba - 2 years ago

This may be the single most loving and heartfelt vore story I have ever read. It's beautiful and erotic. I'm having trouble actually expressing how much I absolutely adore everything about this ...

Your writing styles complement each other so well that if I hadn't have read the description before the story I would have never guessed it was two different author's taking turns every other paragraph. The imagery and emotion is just fantastic, gah! I could probably gush about this for a good hour if I was allowed to.

Pass my words onto Jahan for me, will you? Really wonderful stuff here, I can't say it enough!

Mount Koto-o-noke,
they call it. A towering volcano, the tallest of any on the ring of
islands. The time of its last proper eruption is mythological, but
the magma still flows beneath it, heating the water beneath the earth
and turning the various depressions that sink low enough to reach the
water table into natural spa baths. One would think that there would
be tourists-- at least, more of them. But the mountain is mostly
untouched by human habitation. Outside of the chirping of birds and
the

Boiled Egg (F/F UB)

Uploaded: 3 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Unbirth Digestion F/F Story Transformation Egg laying Naga Pred Elf prey

Veteran adventurer Yvona ( sansuki) goes vacationing on a mountain famed for its hot springs (yet curiously avoided by the locals...) and has an encounter with a simpleminded naga named Therisse. What happens next might have serious ramifications for the elf... 

TinySMWfail - 2 months ago

Amazing story, i love how this transpired, and the details with which brought it together.

Apostolos - 3 years ago

Please continue it!

vore2412 - 3 years ago

Yvona was an eggcellent adventurer elf to play with, now she's merely an egg waiting to hatch eventually. I didn't even read the story yet but I know how well Sansuki role plays and figure Bitter can't be any worse if they're the partner, will get around to reading it soon though. (( Don't shoot me for the egg pun! ))

Groblek - 3 years ago

Ooh, fun! I loved the jaded adventurer character of Yvona, as well as the drawn-out transformation sequence.

TheBlueOne - 3 years ago

Very much enjoyed this story :D
Any chance of a continuation?

Bakkenelika sat in a
realm far from the reach of humans. All around her was a perpetual
debauch, a massive canvas painted in thrusting flesh, wobbling fat,
and crazed loops of digestive organs connecting the one to the other.
Various imps and lesser devils of Bakkenelika's kind flitted about,
carousing and mating without care for the bizarre worms and maws that
yawned from the earth itself, occasionally catching one or two as
they lay in an incautious torpor between rounds and swallowing them
do

Halloween Hell - Epilogue

Uploaded: 3 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Halloween

The epilogue of Halloween Hell.

Table of Contents:

Chapter 1 - https://aryion.com/g4/view/366913 by  Bitter
Chapter 2 - https://aryion.com/g4/view/366914 by  Halcyon
Chapter 3 - https://aryion.com/g4/view/366916 by  sansuki
Chapter 4 - https://aryion.com/g4/view/366917 by  PimpDaddyPichu
Epilogue - https://aryion.com/g4/view/366918 by  Bitter 

1ring42 - 3 years ago

I would love to contribute next year

Draconatedz - 3 years ago

An appropriately dark end to a tasteful series of stories. I'm sorry I wasn't able to contribute, but I think they all turned out well! Maybe we can continue the tale next year, and I can actually get myself into gear to contribute. Regardless of my shortcomings, truly well done.

In the wearying
frigidity of a cold autumn night, as the land was wreathed in fog, an
inhuman frame lurched through the darkness. It had all the necessary
appendages of the human anatomy, but they attached to an elongated
triad with its point drooping toward the earth. Tumorous bulges on
its front could be glimpsed in silhouette as it moved, its lumpy mass
shifting and tossing its pitiful equilibrium to and fro. It moved
with staggering half-leaps, one leg thrusting out and slamming to the
turf,

Halloween Hell - Chapter 1

Uploaded: 3 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Soul Vore Halloween Unwilling Demoness possession

In a hastily-assembled Halloween party being held in the teachers' facilities of Nyesmith University by a group of delinquents and lowlifes, a spell woven into a decoration as a prank turns out to be far more real than anyone could have believed...


This is a collaborative work with various other writers from Eka's Portal! After finishing this chapter, you should follow the table of contents to the next part of the story.


Table of Contents:
...
[ Continued ...

Draconatedz - 3 years ago

A grand intro. It explains the rules well, while also providing a solid vore scene. The Junko influences in Bakkelika are extremely obvious, and I adore them so. Great job!

Senran
Kagura: Shinobi Vore-sus
Tabletop Combat Rules for Erotic Role-Play Based on Senran Kagura
With a Vorish Twist
Senran Kagura, for the Uninitiated
Note: the following, while it hews closely to the Senran Kagura
canon, contains embellishments of my own design in addition to the
addition of vorish elements. It is not to be taken as a fully
accurate description of the setting by any means.
Since the dawn of man, through times of war and eras of peace, in
feast and famine, bright days and long

Senran Kagura: Shinobi Vore-sus

Uploaded: 3 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Game rules senran kagura

After I put ToMW to bed, I came up with a simplified set of rules for a potential smaller-scope ToMW which I never acted on because the project was still too large. So, instead, since I've been playing Senran Kagura: Shinovi Versus lately, I wound up adapting them to a set of rules for resolving shinobi duels in vorish RP.

Note that these rules aren't extensively play-tested. I did write a program to unintelligently play the game against itself just to make sure that the...
[ Continued ...

Aponymous - 3 years ago

Ah ok I was just curious since each character has three ninpo attacks with one being the ultimate I wondered how that was handled. I might make a character will probably use Rin. She needs to teach these underclass shinobi how it's done.

Indighost - 3 years ago

This is really cool! I am now kind of interested to spectate one of these battles :)

Bitter - 3 years ago

As it stands, the system does not natively support having different kinds of Hidden Ninpo. But, if you want such a thing to maintain accuracy to an existing character, there are two options I can think of off the top of my head:

1) If you're stuck with standard play, have the "ultimate" Hidden Ninpo simply act as a reskinned regular Hidden Ninpo attack mechanically, and just incorporate the altered state into the description of the attack.

2) As a house-rule, use your Hidden Ninpo charge to make a standard attack (no modifiers, ignoring chip damage) against the user. If it succeeds, then grant them a permanent bonus to either or both of attack power or defense, as appropriate to the character. On failure, the attempt to assume an altered state fizzles and you lose a turn.

Bitter - 3 years ago

However, in the interest of giving a *useful* response, there are two options I can think of off the top of my head:

1) If you're stuck with standard play, have the "ultimate" Hidden Ninpo simply act as a reskinned regular Hidden Ninpo attack mechanically, and just incorporate the altered state into the description of the attack.

2) As a house-rule, use your Hidden Ninpo charge to make a standard attack (no modifiers, ignoring chip damage) against the user. If it succeeds, then grant them a permanent bonus to either or both of attack power or defense, as appropriate to the character. On failure, the attempt to assume an altered state fizzles and you lose a turn.

Bitter - 3 years ago

The Ultimate Ninpo Arts don't are not represented in this system, as it concerns itself more with people who are on the typical power curve than special cases like game heroes.

Much in life is a
matter of perspective. Let us say, for instance, that there exists a
world in which there exist human-like creatures the size of animals
relative to the trees that surround them. That could imply one of two
possibilities about the scale of that world: first, that it was the
same size as ours, and the creatures themselves small by human
standards. The other is that the world itself is fantastically large
and its physics similarly outsized, permitting the well-known
absurdity of

Perspective (M/F)

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Digestion Weight Gain Rabbit M/F Fatal Harpy owl

Just because you all deserve to see something on your watch notifications from Bitter than isn't a ToMW blog post or an already-deleted Livestream notification, an RP log produced by Sansuki and I. A lesson in the way one's perspective changes one's perceptions.  

4ofSwords - 6 years ago

What a fun RP! Thanks for posting.

noego - 6 years ago

Great read, thanks!

It
was a warm summer's day in the kingdom of Agrimethea. A sprawling
land united under the banner of a single king, there were many wild
places still untouched by human hands. That is to say, hemmed in as
they were by the buttons of human cities and the stitches of their
roads, there were vast patches of the land which hardly knew
themselves to be owned. But a lawless place is a rare find indeed,
and it would be better to say that there were a great number of
places that the kingdom simply wasn'

Into the Perfect World (F/M)

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Soul Vore Angel Unbirth Elf F/M Fatal Story faun

The chosen one of a would-be priestess's cult discovers that heaven can be a hell of its own.

Played by post with the masterful  4ofSwords

AndrewLondon - 7 years ago

This story has been creeping into my mind on and off for the past day or so. Got to love a destroying angel. Images that most stuck in my head: Her method of consuming him (very erotic), his confusion as parts are taken from him, and the clear loathing between the two female leads. Having the angel nudge the faun's clothing across the barrier with her foot was a lovely touch.

Thanks for posting!

4ofSwords - 7 years ago

Thanks for posting that! I enjoyed it immensely.

Thanatos2k - 7 years ago

Long start up but good payoff

Jack - 7 years ago

As much as I am waiting for your little project to come alive - good to see that you're still able to enjoy other things besides it.

Was a nice read. Thanks, you two.

A
Sucklingby
Bitter***Somewhere
in the vast tracts of wilderness that blanket the Mystic Wilds, there
was a little place that was known as Alrexa's Favorite Spot. Not many
people knew it by that name; just one, in fact, and that was Alrexa
herself. There was nothing to mark it as such in a way that could be
read by a civilized fey. To the uninitiated, it just looked like
there was a particularly flat-topped rock about as long as a Greater
Fey was tall. And that was exactly why it was Alrexa's fa

A Suckling

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Non-Vore mystic wilds

A Greater Fey gives of herself to a Lesser Fey. Altruism? From a Greater Fey? Well, not entirely... 

4ofSwords - 7 years ago

Both, I suppose. I enjoyed it in your blog, and in honesty didn't read it again (I'm assuming it hasn't undergone significant changes).

Breastfeeding in general isn't something I fixate on, but under the right conditions (particularly, without any hint of the adult baby scenario) there's a luxuriously sensual quality to it. I enjoyed that in your story.

But I'm definitely a sucker for situations where a natural pred and prey interact where they both know that it could turn into a meal if one of them so much as flinches, but it doesn't. It's like all the juicy buildup to vore, but with the chance for a sequel. That's the kind of thing I tried to capture in the little Zach and Alexis vignettes last year.

Bitter - 7 years ago

Yeah. Just sort of wondering what drew a Favorite on it. Was it the lactation/breastfeeding scenario itself, or just the femdom aspects?

4ofSwords - 7 years ago

What do you mean? What do I like about the story?

Bitter - 7 years ago

So, I'm curious: what's the draw?

4ofSwords - 7 years ago

I'm glad you posted it. :)

BOSOM FRIENDS
by
Bitter
***
In an unassuming little
band of equatorial sea, there was an island called Mili'ki Atoll. A
volcanic island in eons past, built from numerous lava flows since
the dawn of time, it had slumped into the sea until only a tiny bump
jutted skyward. Yet all around the peak, the rock had piled up in a
gentle, round swoop, exposing much fertile earth for the nourishment
of life. Out of this grew all manner of fruit-bearing trees, which,
in turn, kept the island's inhabitants

Bosom Friends (F/F)

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Soft Vore Chubby Digestion F/F BBW Oral

When an islander's bosom friend makes a strange revelation, she chooses to follow her heart and is amply rewarded. 

TiffanyIsa - 7 years ago

Wow. That was amazing. And such a nice ending too~

Vegiccolo - 7 years ago

wow... just...wow. I love your writing...

4ofSwords - 7 years ago

You did a great job with the idea!

vintious - 7 years ago

The read was well worth it.

Imrhys - 7 years ago

Mmmm, I like the idea of their goddess "walking amongst them". I just wish we got to see more of Owala's reward. But I'm a freak that way: soul vore, mmmmmm >_>

It's
a lovely day in the forest. There's not a cloud in the sky, and a
cool breeze blows through the trees, offsetting the summer heat.
Imira is making her way through the vegetation on the forest floor;
she's not trying to be particularly stealthy at the moment, as she's
not really on the hunt. Thirty feet of green scaled naga-tail move
through the underbrush with her, but the thick, leafy undergrowth
hides it well...Someone would need to be rather close to realize that
she wasn't just a busty.

Miscalculation (F/F UB)

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Unbirth Digestion F/F Breast Expansion Absorption Naga Cum Fatal Transformation Harpy Willing RP Log

A harpy makes a severe miscalculation.

A quick scene played between myself (Tuwila) and KlinKitty (Imira). 

ryanshowseason3 - 7 years ago

Loved how the juices seduced her!

shabbacabba - 7 years ago

Naga unbirth, something I have trouble finding, and very well written besides! You made my day.

Thanatos2k - 7 years ago

This story is absolutely amazing! I hope you do another like this.

Sergit - 7 years ago

Very good narration. RPing with either of you (Bitter and KlinKitty) must be fun. :)

lostboy - 7 years ago

I love all of your stories, and this one is sweet.

INTO DARKNESS
by Bitter
***
The normally ebon
surfaces of the city's numerous tinted windows were slowly taking on
a ruby hue as the sun neared the horizon. Sunset, the closing of a
day. Following its daily tides, the sea of humanity that flowed in
the city ebbed toward home, receding back toward the points of light
that offered them respite from the encroaching darkness. Freelance
artist Cerulesta Silva was among them, returning home from a tiring
day of filling out applications for stabler emp

Into Darkness (M/F)

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Dark Digestion M/F cerulesta Fatal horror Pain

Dear Cerulesta,

I wrote a story in which you die horribly of being melted in stomach acid. I hope you like it!

Love,

Bitter 

TheGuyWhoKnows - 8 years ago

Awesome idea - great literal twist on that "helpless and alone in the middle of a crowd" idea. You've got a very nice descriptive style, too. I be a'favouriting.

Also, hooray for split-personality preds! I've had few ideas in that direction myself, and this may well inspire me. Thank you!

Imrhys - 8 years ago

Not really my thing in my current nonfatal mood, but this was your usual well written. Short, to the point, and definitely something Cerulesta has shown again and again that they love ^^

Cerulesta - 8 years ago

I THINK I LIKE IT, YES.

... Okay, that's probably an understatement. >__>;

I know that I already babbled to you a little bit about how awesome I think this is, but I'm going to blabber about it some more because I'm just that delighted. I feel the need to state again exactly how great a compliment I consider it that you were compelled to write something on account of my artwork... I can't really say I've had such an honor before, and it was perhaps the nicest shock I've had in a while to get a message from you stating that you were making a story based on my drawing.

And then, of course, you had to go and include pretty much everything I adore in a vore story on top of it all. The overall ominous mood as Ceru's world fades away into monotone shadows, her desperate but inevitably futile attempts to escape, the horrific realization of what will become of her and the gruesome demise that follows... those sorts of dark, eerie elements are some of my absolute favorite things to see these days, and they aren't entirely common themes in a lot of the vore I've seen. Special props, however, must be given to the contrast between the shadow's host and the shadow himself; the fact that the host actually attempted to aid Cerulesta, alongside his disheveled appearance and gloomy attitude, effectively doubled the sense of hopelessness that prevailed throughout the story. It was clear from the way you portrayed him that he had suffered through watching the deaths of more than a few past victims; he seemed tired of it all, an innocent man forcibly manipulated into doing the bidding of a malevolent otherworldly being and doing what little he can to get back at the shadowy parasite plaguing him. It makes me wish I could see more of his experiences... the whole relationship fascinates me. It's a far better interpretation of my picture than I would have ever bothered to come up with, I can say that much.

In summation, you are amazing and this story is also amazing and I doubt I could be happier. Thank you so much. <3

DINNER AT TWILIGHT
by Bitter
***
It was Friday. It
always happens on a Friday; it pretty much has to. I came home from
work with a mixture of excitement and trepidation in my heart. Most
people wouldn't look forward to the situation I was walking into. I
probably wouldn't have thought I would, either, but here I am. I
parked my car, a well-worn used thing I got from a Ford dealer a long
time ago and put even more miles than it already had on it, behind my
girlfriend's, which put it to shame. It

Dinner at Twilight (F/M Vamp)

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Vampire F/M Sex Semi-willing vampirism Blood vore Blood play

I gave blood on Tuesday.

So here's a story about giving blood. 

Imrhys - 8 years ago

Mmmmm, so the style used here is just what is making me scratch my head wondering, hmmmm. Well, at least for all this unusualness, I still like it ^^

Bitter - 8 years ago

It's pretty much just first-person, past-tense. The absence of dialog was a totally unintentional but workable quirk.

Imrhys - 8 years ago

I just realized that there is no dialogue in this thing. Or.. I don't know what narrative mode you used in here. Everything is from his telling us what is going on. Normally telling us would be a bad thing, but you showed us through him... I'm curious what this technique you used is called and how to use it?

Imrhys - 8 years ago

Dude, OMG, this lived up to its billing in our conversation that Tuesday night. Now I am so glad you told me of it, inspiring me to stay up to 4 AM last Sunday morning making sure I got my story in with yours <3 (the rest will be in the review, mwahahaha)

Liz - 8 years ago

I like a good ol Vampire Story - nice work :D

THE LADY'S FAVORITE
by
Bitter
***
Sunlight streamed
through the picture windows of the afternoon lounge, not yet tinged
golden by the advent of dusk. The light was still white, the sky
still blue, and the illumination ideal, for the room had been
designed to receive the sunlight at this hour. There was no need for
a lamp or a candle, but at the same time there was no glare and nor
would the sunlight fall too hotly on the inhabitants; indeed, so long
as one used it at the correct time, there was

The Lady's Favorite (F/M)

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Digestion Elf F/M mystic wilds

The mistress of House D'coco decides to have her favorite submissive for dinner. 

caramelapple7050 - 5 years ago

I don't remember liking anything here *this* much before.
I loved the slow, langourous pace and the wealth of description- but there was something a whole lot more to it that I can't quite articulate.

Incredible stuff. :')

Lizzy - 8 years ago

<3 !

Bitter - 8 years ago

Happy customers make my day too! Glad you enjoyed it.

Lizzy - 8 years ago

Bitter, you just made my day.

Bitter - 8 years ago

Hm... I can't help but wonder if maybe having one paragraph "Kavas" in a field of "Leith" indicates a problem...

But, still, glad you enjoyed it!

GOOD GIRL
by Bitter
***
It's happening. It's
finally happening.
I've been trapping fey
for my big so long that I can tell when he's hungry. I get this
little itch in my puss like I'm sorta horny but not really, not
enough that I want to finger myself. That's how I tell. And I start
dreaming of someone I'd want to fuck, and that's the kind of little
he wants to eat. Sometimes I want someone feisty, sometimes I want
someone easy, and sometimes I want a girl or a boy and sometimes I
just don't care

Good Girl (M/F)

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion Elf M/F Sex Fatal first person mystic wilds tribadism

The ending of a bait-fey.

If you haven't read "Bad Girl" (http://aryion.com/g4/view/198285), to which this is a sequel, I recommend reading that first. Because this is a sequel to that.

A Mystic Wilds story. 

Bookie - 3 years ago

Dear god you make 1rst person intense.

EveAra - 8 years ago

I love how you portray the surrender to desire and fate here. And I certainly agree you ended it in the right place. Once she gained total acceptance of her fate, anything else would have been a bit drawn out! (though it wouldn't stop me from reading whatever wonderful way you'd describe it!) :)

Bitter - 8 years ago

Thanks a lot! The first-person present really allows for an intensity that you don't always get with more distant perspectives. It's not something I'd use often, but it did work out well here.

BardicLasher - 8 years ago

That was incredible. Easily my favorite of your stories.

BREAKFAST IN BED
by Bitter
***
"Hooooneyyy..."
John's voice gently
roused Sandra from an immensely comfortable sleep into a very mildly
peevish wakefulness. None of her fuzzy and muted ire went toward her
husband himself; she could never really be angry at him for
anything. Under any other circumstances the sound of his voice would
have been a sweet caress for her ears. But the fact of the matter was
that she was currently in bed, face down, naked and between
delightfully cool sheets o

Breakfast In Bed (M/F)

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion M/F

He wants breakfast. She wants to stay in bed. They compromise. 

Bitter - 7 years ago

It's a ridiculous time for any reasonable person to be awake and wanting breakfast, isn't it?

turbotails123 - 7 years ago

Why didn't it occur to me that 10:72 doesn't exist?

KinoTheCat - 7 years ago

I absolutely loved this story~
I had to read it twice before I realized what had actually happened. It was exceptionally well done, and I loved every moment of it. <3 When a scene isn't fatal between lovers, it becomes that much more amazing.

You're an amazing writer, Bitter. <3

Draconasaurus - 8 years ago

Not what I'm normally into, but there's just something about this that I love.

French_snack - 8 years ago

Soft, dreamy and quite lovely. :)

It's the middle of summer, and that can only mean one thing: the beach! Surf, sand, and skin as far as the eye can see. The broad swath of gorgeously-swirling sand that sits somewhere on the east coast is absolutely packed today. Everywhere you look, there are people trying to figure out how much skin they can bare for tanning without attracting the eye of a hungry predator. ... but the more genre-savvy of the beachgoers pay no attention to such things, seeing as they'll probably wind up in a be

Babs's Bikini Buster (F/F, F/M)

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion F/F Breast Expansion F/M Fatal Willing

A bit of Fourth of July tomfoolery played out with KlinKitty. Babs is determined to break her bikini, and the crowd is more than willing to help! 

shabbacabba - 7 years ago

Easily the greatest thing I have seen in at least a month.

Kfhunterguy - 8 years ago

I must say i do enjoy stories like this and honestly wish there would be more of them.

Readasaur - 8 years ago

That was pretty incredible.
I especially enjoyed the mouse boy and his lover.

Indighost - 8 years ago

I actually clicked on this because I have seen the Tiny Toons unbirth comic floating around e621.net and rather enjoyed it. Still, good RP.

Entity - 8 years ago

That Was FANTASTIC!!!

CIRCLE'S END


by Bitter


***


Elin listened contentedly to the sound of rain all around him. The pitta-pitta-pitta of the near drops made a wonderfully sharp counterpoint to the vast, smooth hissssssss of the rain taken in total. Rain always gave Elin a sense of wholeness; it was so large, so total. Rain fell on the whole of Aun at once, nourishing the Earth Mother, giving life to all. And as part of Aun, the rain fell on him as well. Little shocks burst over his shoulders and ticklish

Circle's End (?/M)

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Snake Digestion Elf Feral Fatal Unwilling sexual ?/M unwilling to willing

I am still of the opinion that the world needs more stories in which elven prettyboys get eaten by snakes on flimsy pretenses.  

eatmeplease - 4 years ago

I LOVED the descriptions at the very end! They simultaneously reminded me of Terranigma, And The Circle by Blackmore's Night.

EveAra - 8 years ago

One of my favorite concepts about vore, the analogy of prey is to predator as penis is to vagina, is very transparent here. I like it! This is the kind of vore story I'd link to someone open-minded who needed that last bit of understanding as to why vore is so attractive(to me, and others) :)

Bitter - 8 years ago

Right. "Druid" in this continuity really just means "knows nature shit".

Indighost - 8 years ago

Aha, so I guess he isn't the type of druid who can simultaneously summon an entire zoo of animals and transform himself into a weremanbearpig a la d&d or other video games...:)

Bitter - 8 years ago

I don't know, those druidic abilities of his are fairly limited. He can control his own body in some interesting ways, but he can't, say, convince the snake that it actually doesn't want to eat him, nor is there really much you can do once your arms and legs are bound.

But then, as you pointed out, a big part of being a druid is peace with nature... including the part where you wind up as food for something else. Glad you enjoyed it!

The Nether Realms! The very bottom of the universe! The place where the worst of all souls go to meet their ultimate fate. For most, it is a place that repays all the horror, dread, and pain that they inflicted on others. Not very pleasant, not very pleasant at all. Not unless you're one of the natives. They get to have all the fun they want at the expense of those weaker than them. Thankfully, most of them are content to stay where they are and feast on the plentiful supply of tainted souls tha

One More For Mimiteh (H/F)

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Soul Vore Succubus Demon Tentacle H/F

Ralmar was ravenous for RP, so Bitter bumbled into obeying. Now you loiterers can leer at the log. 

Ralmar - 8 years ago

Well, Mimiteh gets one. Inkaris, not so much.... still, she is SUCH a pretty toy.

Imrhys - 8 years ago

Next time? hehehehehe

Ralmar - 8 years ago

Well, as stated, it was short and to the point. I don't think either of us had too much time, so we didn't waste any. Next time, though... >:3

Imrhys - 8 years ago

I'd have preferred more detailed soul vore and how it felt for Mimiteh, but that is just the soul vore whore in me. Loved this <3

Ralmar - 8 years ago

I could say something silly like 'First!', but that would be childish and possibly inaccurate. That was a fun little RP, though... short, sweet, and to the point. I really should do more with Mimiteh...

THE ARACHNE'S CONFESSION


by Bitter


***


The first sign that prey was approaching was the noise. Down here in the Deeps, sound is often better than sight; the tunnel's surfaces echo even the softest noises such that you can know exactly what's where and how it's moving, even in total darkness. That was how I knew that prey was on the way. They stumbled and groped at the walls, a clear sign that they were a topsider lost in the Deeps. They were alone, too: brave, foolish, unlucky, or ma

An Arachne's Confession (F/M)

Uploaded: 8 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Digestion Elf drider F/M pheromones Fatal Acid spider Semi-willing Melting Breast Milk Painful

A spider-woman describes her experience trapping and devouring an elf. 

Bitter - 8 years ago

Eh, you might have to page out some mana, but it's nothing a decent luminiferous aether manager from the past couple years couldn't handle.

ryanshowseason3 - 8 years ago

Only a programmer would come up with that kind of explanation lol. Enumerating that many soul addresses I imagine would overflow some kind of buffer!

French_snack - 8 years ago

Aww... Some very nice ideas here. Good story, strangely endearing. You get us into her mind, making her perspective seem very real and natural.

Bitter - 8 years ago

Well, it might not actually be so terrifying. Think of it as running a program that enumerates all possible email addresses; the output set is so huge that a single individual wandering aimlessly through it is unlikely to discover anything of any use. It doesn't necessarily mean he's powerful, just that he has a lot of spare time.

Jacquelope - 8 years ago

Listening in on the thoughts of all souls in a whole realm? That's one HELL of a wizard. I'll pick #2, thankyouverymuch.

TO GROW
by Bitter
***
Peeking out from around
the clouds, the sun cast its light down toward the Mystic Wilds
below. The tight-woven boughs of the canopy of Kale's Forest caught
all that they could, but some light was fortunate enough to make its
way to the surface undevoured. Bright speckles flickered here and
there, offering momentary excitements within the otherwise
undisturbed doldrums of the shade. But even the darkness had its own
intrigue; a gentle breeze made the leaves wag to and fro an

To Grow (F/M)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion Elf F/F F/M Sex Fatal Willing fey Fae mystic wilds

In Kale's Forest, the Bright Eyed Fey are slowly learning what is required, and what it means, to grow.

A Mystic Wilds story. 

Bookie - 3 years ago

You're welcome ! c:

Bitter - 3 years ago

That's very high praise! Thank you very much. Hopefully I can get back into the writing groove soon and make something just as good.

Bookie - 3 years ago

Still one of the. Very best stories on all of Eka's.
A true work of art, in thought, concept and execution.

Bitter - 8 years ago

Of all the stories I've set in the Mystic Wilds, I think this one hews the closest to the setting's ideal tone-- strange, pleasant, and a little sad.

Now that I think about it, that's the tagline from Mother 3...

French_snack - 8 years ago

Again, you give us an alien world, and make its perspectives seem so natural - the glimpses into the fey's world view. The way they behave around one another. Dané's troubled hesitation about Mair's "innovation" (as it were).

There's an inevitable sadness to this story, but peaceful, too; soothing. A sense of loss (through digestion), tempered with a sense of comfort and beauty.

INTERRUPTION


by Bitter


***


Morgan made her way along the thin trail that connected the urban regions of the island of Tanibri to its more rural climes, alone. The sky was clear and the air was windy; the currents were such that there was always a breeze. The only question was how strong the wind blew. Today it was more tolerable than most, only strong enough to ruffle the tassels on her robe. The majority of travelers traversed the pass on a mule or a horse, but Morgan was on foot--

Interruption (?/F, ?/M)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Soft Vore Monster ?/F ?/M castle vore

Some things are just more important than vore. 

AndrewLondon - 8 years ago

Clever story, I liked it a lot. Best bit: the similes when something appeared from nowhere. My favourite is "As if the world had suddenly remembered an important detail, a castle appeared." Wonderfully flat. Great stuff.

AndrewLondon - 8 years ago

Thanks for the additional detail, this was an extremely interesting infodump.

Imrhys - 9 years ago

So in your world magic can create things that did not previously exist. Hmmmm. That is one of those some like/some hate it possibilities to magic. I grew up with few things being real when created purely from magic. They can be dispelled or simply run out of time. Of course some things are permanent, but they are only small things and simple non-complex items.

Bitter - 9 years ago

Magic can change the operation of reality. The facts that have changed will remain after the magic stops. So, if you used magic to create a mountain, the mountain would still be there when the spell ends. (No part of reality says that a giant pile of rock can't possibly exist.) If you use magic to make a mountain levitate, and the magic runs out... the mountain is going to fall. (Reality says gravity pulls things to earth, especially heavy things with no other force operating on them.)

Imrhys - 9 years ago

Another words magic can alter/bend reality but cannot permanently change it? Reality would always reassert itself eventually?

THE RATTLER


by Bitter


***


The year was about 1830, give or take, reckoned since the time when people started keeping track. The old days were long gone, but the modern era hadn't quite arrived. The times were changing quickly, and people couldn't quite change fast enough to keep up. Especially if they weren't human. Humans used to be thought of as the weakest things on the planet. Shrimpy, no fur or scales or claws or any real advantage to speak of. But it turned out that they were c

The Rattler (F/M)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Elf F/M Naga Sex wild west bittersweet realities

Okay, boys, you've each had your turn, and we've heard some pretty interesting tales. Now, let me tell you all a little yarn about a rattler... 

Bright - 8 years ago

I did hear some old western guy talk in my head when I read this.

Nice story too.

Imrhys - 8 years ago

I can't believe I didn't comment to this in its original run. The thing I liked was the strike. How quickly it disabled him, and how contradictory she talks so sweetly to him after "landing" him. Made me wish she'd take a fancy to him and let him recover instead from the poison and befriend him, not make a lunch of him. But that just added to the pleasure of the story, that tension within me.

Not a huge fan of accented dialogue, but when it is done well it is magical.

French_snack - 8 years ago

I seem to have been missing out on some good stories here. I agree with the above; you have some delightful turns of phrase. And I think I know exactly the type of accent you mean. I was able to hear it in my mind when she spoke; quite lovely.

Bitter - 9 years ago

Perhaps it's best to say the accent is meant to approximate the ultra-exaggerated tones used in old Westerns rather than that actually used in the Old West. Never forget to take into account the media poisoning my brain suffers from. XP

Or, for that matter, my tendency to live by the adage "if some is good, more is better".

4ofSwords - 9 years ago

I have to agree with Mr. London - the streets of this story are littered with gold pavers. My particular favorite was:

"Now, there is only one good response to a question like that, and that's to yell "Git her, boys!" and have your posse jump out from behind the rocks..."

with a close second in: "and holstered him with just her hips".

I've never run into no desert naga, neither, and I thought that was a clever stroke.

Now I'm a California native transplanted into Georgia, and I have to say that even in my backwoodsiest journeys I've never run into an accent as difficult to understand as hers was to read, neither in this South or in the Southwest (and I'd reckon those tend to be some different kind of accents as you move from humid to dry), so I'd say there's one place maybe to tune the experiment - maybe just stick with diction, word choice, and phrasing, and let the accent take care of itself in our minds? (Unless you meant for the rattler to be hard for Kenain to be understand, in which case it works since we read it through his point of view.)

Great story, though, no matter how you look at it!

BAD GIRL


by Bitter


***


I'm a bad girl. I'm a bad, bad girl.


In the forest, there are two kinds of fey. There are bigs and there are littles. It's pretty easy to tell who's who... the bigs are a little taller, and you can see their muscles, and they've got these big, sharp teeth. But it's not just that... that's not even the first clue. You can tell the bigs from the littles because the bigs are just more. They're heavier. When there's a big around, you know. You could put one big

Bad Girl (M/F)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion Elf M/F mystic wilds

The confession of a bait-fey.

A mystic wilds story. 

Ruler101 - 7 years ago

Yeah, I'm gonna go and say it. She totally does deserve it. Then again, her and"big" and all his kind probably deserve a knife in the spine as well.

twistedfox - 8 years ago

been reading you a while but this is a fav

French_snack - 8 years ago

Great work. I'm looking for the right word to describe this; somewhere between "vivid" and "touching".

BardicLasher - 9 years ago

This is wonderful! Bait-fey, wonder a wonderful idea... I want one.

Imrhys - 9 years ago

That mind-rape possibility occurred to me too. It does make you think, hmmm?

AN ANGEL'S MILK


by Bitter


***


It was a day of stillness. The air was hushed and empty. The vast canopy lay at rest; not a single leaf could be heard to brush any other. The clouds above hung thick and without motion, looking like feathers frozen in a glide that would never advance. The sun was visible only as a yellowing of some of these clouds, its sparkling muted by the intervening vapor.


It was a land without a name, like many in the Mystic Wilds. It was neither dead nor fallo

An Angel's Milk (M/F)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Angel Elf M/F Lactation mystic wilds draining

An angel plants the seed of a new civilization.

Be forewarned: this is certainly an abnormal style of vore, save for the fact that some kind of interpersonal eating goes on. Judge for yourself.

A Mystic Wilds story. 

Remiya - 7 years ago

Awesome idea. It's always nice to see some new ideas and a new take on vore.

Imrhys - 9 years ago

I love this "unusual" sort of vore. This is right up my life force/soul vore alley <3

And an interesting way for higher powers to intervene without getting all *que major angelic music and trumpets* on us.

PitchBlue89 - 9 years ago

A very well written story bitter, I love the use of symbolism of change you have worked in.

homelessman - 9 years ago

Another great story Bitter

A DUO'S DUSK


by Bitter


***


"Aaaaaaaaaaah! Fuckin' gorgeous weather!" exclaimed a blond-haired man, throwing his arms apart in a yawning gesture. A woven-reed basket, nearly two feet deep, swung outward by the handle in his grip.


The man beside him ducked out of the basket's arc. "So you keep saying," he said.


"Because the weather is fuckin' gorgeous, Dollo!" said the blond. "The only thing better than a day like this is a night like last nig

A Duo's Dusk (F/M UB)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Unbirth Succubus F/F F/M Absorption Sex Fatal seduction Magic Story Semi-willing Fae Vaginal vore mystic wilds femme fatale

A moment of weakness brings an end to two fey. (Isn't that always how it goes?)

A Mystic Wilds story. 

RenicofVore - 8 years ago

i hope you dont mind me saveing them to my computer, your stories so i can read when i dont have net. ^_^

Sarus - 9 years ago

Awesome read!
I liked the setting, the attention to details is just right.
But hey, I love ManyEyedHydra stories too, and you managed to use the same ingredients, so it's no wonder I love this one too :)

AndrewLondon - 9 years ago

Mindblowing. From the humour of Dollo's reaction to the deeply hot descriptions of sex to the taunting ("and in... you... go") to the weirdly organic process by which they devour their prey. I really, really enjoyed this one.

In retrospect I think the way you communicated the two prey characters is genius. I've got a very clear conception of them and grew quite fond of them. This is astonishing in such a small space of text.

But dang, those Tattooed fey were sexy.

Jacquelope - 9 years ago

Heh. Way to hang a lampshade right on the squelchy and wonderfully awful absorption of Alrin.

I like the way you fashion this universe. The lesser fey know they're wired to be prey. The greater fey win because it's the natural order of things. And they win by using sex, too. What an incredibly smart tactic of evolution!

And yeah, that's now two votes for luring you into the EPWG! :D

Imrhys - 9 years ago

I only wish I could get you to submit this (or pretty much anything else you have posted in these parts) to EPWG.

I'm normally not much for stories where the vore is the vehicle/purpose of the story, but the detail work you put in in both the characterization and climaxes is just so bang on. I won't lie, i have a few artistic differences of option in how you present the vore but if i only wanted to read my own opinion i'd never leave home.

Your take on a "vore is common place" world/setting is most interesting even if not my first preference in vore. And the way you work in a form of absorption with UB is truly creative (okay so I value absorption a bit too much :P ).

AUTUMN


by Bitter


***


Hunger drove me out from my den. It is my sole motivation in autumn; in spring, there is the scent of females in heat to drive us males into the mating frenzy, and in summer there is the raising of the young to occupy our time. But the young have fledged by autumn, and as it is perilous for a naga to keep the company of a larger one for long, they will have gone to make their own dens before the leaves begin to turn. Then there is nothing left but the anticipatio

Autumn (M/MF)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Digestion Elf M/M M/F Naga Sex Fatal Willing instincts breeding

With winter just around the corner, a naga sets out to make sure he's prepared for a long hibernation. 

Rebirth - 9 years ago

Really nice story liked the elf and human difference.

Tempest - 9 years ago

That is one of the best examples of couple vore I've ever seen. I love this story. :D

tangent - 9 years ago

Man I loved the way you described the differences between elves and humans, and the bit about how nature doesn't need language. A wonderful story with more than just vore to it. :D

THE FISHERMAN


by Bitter


***


Once, in the province of Kulloran, there lived an old man who lived by the river Ellix. The Ellix was the single largest river in Kulloran and the world beyond, starting from the mountains in the south and running the entire length of the continent, practically splitting it in half. Tributaries flowed in from tamer regions, but for his own reasons the old man chose to live on the banks of Ellix itself. Privacy was the foremost of these; he had planted the

The Fisherman (M/F)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion Mermaid M/F old man

An old man goes fishing.

Teeeeeechnically a Bittersweet Realities story, but it's pretty much just generic fantasy. 

MidnightRose - 9 years ago

"the old man lifted his arms into the air, shouted, "Yeeeeeee-hyeh-hya-hya-hyaaaaa!", fell backward and died."
ROFLMAO

Very - 9 years ago

*SNORT*

I'm not sure which corners of my brain you've been snooping around but XD
Bizarre setups attract me in a very inexplicable fashion.

That, and I had recently made a fisherman character. (what is personal bias srsly)

Bitter - 9 years ago

I dunno, something about the thought of a character who sits around using dicks to fish for a mermaid seemed like just the kind of bizarre fantasy situation that would drive you to comment. That wasn't the original point, but yes, somewhere between posting it and today, I went "Yeah, that story's Spiderbone bait."

Good to see my intuition in such matters is accurate.

Very - 9 years ago

You KNEW?

I do have to wonder ... XD

Bitter - 9 years ago

hahahahaha yessssss

It was only a matter of time before you showed up. XD

BLACK SHEEP


by Bitter


***


Rellime was in a poor mood. Outwardly, he had no reason to be: the weather was delightful, as it typically was in the realm of Pastoria. Pastoria was a land of plains. It never rose above the height of a man's waist (though the grasses enjoyed tickling people's knees), and extended far further than the eye could see. Its sun was a distant one, and the winds ran free in the absence of trees and tall stones, so there was always a breeze to make the coolness co

Black Sheep (F/M)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion Elf F/M Absorption mystic wilds

An outcast has a change of heart.

A Mystic Wilds story. 

Bright - 9 years ago

I think this story was very well written. I like how you portray the thoughts of the protagonist.

Bitter - 9 years ago

Oh, it's not a trick; it's what they actually believe. That was psychic feedback from her subconscious rather than her conscious (seeing as they don't speak the same language). Unlike a lot of greater fey, the ones in Pastoria don't consider themselves to be "better, so we get to do whatever the hell we want to you". They're aware that everything they have is built on the existence of the lesser fey in exactly their present capacity.

Jacquelope - 9 years ago

Wow. Just... wow. Imrhys said it all. I kinda liked the way the huntress seduced his ego with that "we need you more than you need us" line. Slick, man, slick. Five stars, again.

Imrhys - 9 years ago

Damn. As I read through I found myself at times pushing myself to continue since oral vore and same size are both difficult aspects of the fetish to rationalize. But that ending, the understanding flowing between them from the absorption process co-mingling... I liked that a lot. Very naturalist, fey/elven in nature.

And besides from a couple sticky spots near the beginning, excellent writing quality yet again.

Sarus - 9 years ago

Awesome story :)
That's the first time I see the hunting part that is so well described and enjoyable.
Thanks !

THOSE WHO KISS HONEYSUCKLE


by Bitter


***


The Mystic Wilds, true to its name, is an eternal wilderness whose borders, cultures, and civilizations are ever-changing, eroded from the outside in in the fullness of time. However, now and again the conditions are just right to support a rare bout of prolonged stability and order. Even chaos must contradict itself on occasion. So it was in the region called Carilliny, a tract of the Wilds that was rimmed on all sides by precipitous mountain

Those Who Kiss Honeysuckle (?/M)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Plant Digestion F/M Sex pheromones Fatal Transformation Willing ?/M mystic wilds nectar honeysuckle

In the suburbs of the Mystic Wilds, the lovely smell of honeysuckle draws fey to their doom... and their hearts together.

A Mystic Wilds story. 

Entirely_Logical - 9 years ago

Why, oh why, do I have Megadeth's, "Use the Man," running through my head? Oh, right, because of the "darker theme" that you claim to not have realized you were writing. Another song that comes to mind is Neil Young's, "The Needle and the Damage Done."

Jacquelope - 9 years ago

You could also have the nectar leech into the water supply, giving everyone a disposition against killing the thing once they realize what it does. There is a real life basis for this, in that certain parasites get into mice and make them less fearful of cats. Wow. I could expand on this a lot. The fey eat older weaker plants, the healthy adult plants eat them, the nectar only builds up to sufficient amounts to inspire a "feed myself to the plant" instinct when they get old or really sick... oh snap. Dude, you inspired me again! :D

Bitter - 9 years ago

As for the question you actually asked... the overall design (many versions of the same thing in different sizes, all connected to the same organism) is a configuration I've been using for tentacle monsters for quite a while (though never in a published story). The notion of the tiered addiction grew organically out of that, given the way Carilliny's set up. "Okay, so it has a big feeder flower and a bunch of small ones, why is that? ... well, because it can't very well eat fey quickly, or they'd destroy it, so it would have to do it so slowly that they didn't notice or didn't care."

Bitter - 9 years ago

Oh, the fey get vernacular as hell at times. Carilliny's culture is, as mentioned, a very sheltered one which is not, like most of the other societies of the Mystic Wilds, routinely knocked down by destabilizing forces and therefore not necessarily locked in a tribal, medieval, or renaissance era like most others. So, they act at lot like modern American suburbanites-- they wear jeans, they go to a boring day job, and they say things like "Just chillin'."

The Mystic Wilds is nothing if not wildly inconsistent.

Jacquelope - 9 years ago

"Just chillin'" - Yula. ? Hmmmm... not sure if that fits in with a "fey" setting. That's about all I could find odd with the story. I just wanted to point out that you do a good job with creating the proper relationship between humanoids and their vorish predators than... other vore universes. This species is designed from the ground up to accept this relationship, at least in this case. That and a flower that eats by making larger prey addicted to its nectar until it gets to a flower big enough to eat them... where do you come up with that? You're good at surprises, I gotta give you that.

ARRANGEMENTS


by Bitter


***


It was the perfect kind of day for a vacation. The sun shone bright in a sapphire sky, momentarily concealed now and again by a passing cloud. Serpentine shadows wound around the grassy ground, painting the rolling landscape in shades of green. The knee-high grasses shuffled and danced in a consistent southerly breeze that cooled what heat the sun sent down. This same panorama played out for miles in each direction, a roil of emerald extended all the way to

Arrangements (F/F)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: vore if you squint mystic wilds

The Duchess of Adel has an unusual problem. Fortunately, the Countess of Prelie has an answer.

A Mystic Wilds story. 

French_snack - 8 years ago

I can but echo what the others have said. A most interesting and successful experiment.

BBulb22 - 8 years ago

Holy mother of god this is amazing.

Bitter - 9 years ago

Jane MOTHERFUCKIN' Austen!

oldman40k2003 - 9 years ago

Worth reading for the author's comments alone. :D

sansuki - 9 years ago

Ennui in a Vorish World: A two-character play in one act. I like it.

REPERCUSSIONS


by Bitter


***


It all started with a perfectly normal Isharan scene.


Then, it ended too soon.


Much later, it all started again... with another perfectly normal Isharan scene.


There was a small patch of land somewhere in the northern regions of an Isharan peninsula which was, to put it simply, ugly as sin. It was as though the creator of everything had, at some point in the artistic process of world-smithing, had an attack of indigestion that had left his mood

Repercussions (F/F)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Soft Vore F/F Ishara The Long Way Home

Nobody ever thinks about the background characters.

... until it's too late.

This is more The Long Way Home fanfiction! Go to Sansuki's user page and read the whole thing first! 

Readasaur - 9 years ago

Alright, I understand now.
Thank you.

Bitter - 9 years ago

Really, the point was just to have an Isharan echo of "Kill the bitch!" from the very first chapter. It was all an elaborate setup to a joke.

Every so often, a story just doesn't have a point.

Readasaur - 9 years ago

Okay, then... what was the point?
Did she at least learn not to burn people alive, so that their agonized spirits remember the pain clearly enough to come after her?

sansuki - 9 years ago

That would rather neatly solve my issues with finishing the damned thing, of course. :X

Bitter - 9 years ago

It's The Long Way Home fanfic. I can't very well kill off the main character.

THE SHORTCUT


by Bitter


***


It was a beautiful day somewhere in the wilderness that shadowed a third-rate city on a fourth-rate world in the plane called Ishara. The bright sunlight, subtle cloud cover, and perfect temperature did wonders for the mood of a woman named Rynoc, who was currently making her way home to a local Ironbelly outpost. She was headed back from the mines where her tribe harvested a kind of mushroom that was a staple food source for their lower class. It had absol

The Shortcut (F/F)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore F/F Naga Failvore Fail vore Ishara The Long Way Home

Nobody ever thinks about the background characters.

This is The Long Way Home fanfiction! You should go to Sansuki's user page and read that first! 

Jacquelope - 9 years ago

I've got one thing to say to this...

M-M-M-MONSTER KILL!!!
(x 100,000)

:D

Shriven - 9 years ago

Outstanding work as per usual, your attention to detail in such short stories never ceases to astound me: Most people will go short story, short description.

Brilliant.

Imrhys - 9 years ago

Ahahahah, the background characters, hehehe. Oh loved this ^^

Bitter - 9 years ago

Hey, you fired first. This is just the return salvo.

sansuki - 9 years ago

I might be able to comment intelligently on this when I'm not convulsively laughing

SOMETHING TO LIVE FOR


by Bitter


***


It was a dark age in the Land of Seven Suns. Millennia of prosperity came to an abrupt close as the celestial play fell from its script. The seven suns that gave that region its name were now reduced to one. Kazathoth, the Red Sun, the Blood Star, the Lord of Evil, had spun from his course. One by one he set upon the other gods and devoured them, becoming stronger and larger until none remained but him. Kazathoth's victory was the Land's demise, f

Something to Live For (M/F)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion Elf M/F Trap mystic wilds

In a region of the Mystic Wilds seared by a raging sun, beset with famine and plagued by war, it might seem like there's no reason left to go on. But in a run-down theater, a local celebrity teaches his audience that this is not necessarily true.

A Mystic Wilds story. 

Bitter - 7 years ago

It's never too late for a comment, especially one as glowingly praising as that. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

GREGOLE - 7 years ago

Okay, so, this story has been around for a while(by comment standards), but... dagnabbit, I could never live with myself if I didn't say anything.

This is... well, as far as erotica goes, it's *powerful*. It does a little more telling than showing in places, but it has a dramatic flare that really brings it to life. It focuses a LOT on the moment, and a lot on the emotions, and is all the better for it.

I really do love the way it's consensual, yet fatal, yet HIGHLY romanticized. Some stories try that, and they fall flat. This one tried that and exploded. It's the most passionate vore story I've read, and.... well, I guess I'm a sucker for the dramatic.

Plus "quick as it takes to say it" is just a grand expression I learned from this piece.

nephilim - 9 years ago

FUCKING AWESOME

Bitter - 9 years ago

The pelvic thrust is a time-honored dance step, I'll have you know. XP Glad you enjoyed it.

MidnightRose - 9 years ago

"He humped at the air"
I laughed there. The mental image was lulzy. XD

Straight traps FTW. Amazing piece of work once again. You never disappoint me.

MEET THE ANURA
 
by Bitter
 
 
Hello!
 
Please do not be alarmed. I'm a fey, just like you. Or, rather, I used to be. Right now, I'm... what would be a good way to put it? Ex-fey. A fey in the past tense. Dead. Quite thoroughly dead, in fact; you needn't worry. I know what it looks like, and... well, you probably aren't comfortable just taking my word for it, but I promise you my word is all I have to give. This isn't my real spark, and it can't do all the horrible things

Meet the Anura (F/F)

Uploaded: 9 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Digestion Elf mystic wilds

Even in a completely different universe, a luckless researcher still can't meet the frog-woman she's looking for without getting digested.

Based on Sansuki's "Meet the Frimbo" (http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=184793)

A Mystic Wilds story. 

Bitter - 8 years ago

My apologies in advance to anyone who came back to this expecting a new story. This is the first time I've made a revision that wound up affecting the title of a story, and hopefully it'll be the last time as well. If there were any occasion for the silent reupload, this would be it.

Bitter - 9 years ago

Boy is that ever an important detail to drop! I'll type up an edit tomorrow, but as a type of fey, they're pretty much just elves. Mud-loving elves.

prisoner - 9 years ago

Yeah well that's fine. I imagine that one would act differently once they're not on trial and even moreso in the face of certain demise. One other question...I searched "lissam" on Google and in the search bar above and only this story came up. What does the predator look like? >.<

Bitter - 9 years ago

No, you're quite right. If I had to offer an explanation, it's the slow change in context as she's telling her story. At the start, she's having to explain herself for her present form. She is essentially a disembodied soul in some kind of diabolical machine-- her first priority is to ensure that whoever she's sensed doesn't do anything rash. Later, as it becomes clear that they're going to stay and listen, she loosens up and assumes a more natural demeanor.

prisoner - 9 years ago

Your interpretation of the transition from conscious thought to the afterlife is descriptive and somewhat thought-provoking. Whatever elements you attempted to add must have worked. However, I feel like the main (fey) character's personality changed at the point where she was being swallowed. Though it is understandable that she would act differently--in the beginning her phrasing is defensive whereas later on she is more empathic. But nobody else has mentioned this and I'm sure it's something you would be conscious of as a (the?) writer, so maybe it's just me.

SEVEN OVERALL
 
by Bitter
 
 
It was a room of such beauty that it must have been one of the chambers of Heaven. Yet this bedroom was not divine; exquisite, but not divine. Its existence, however awe-inspiring, was explicable. Adrift above the clouds that hung in the skies of the Mystic Wilds, there was an island called Arielanei. Arielanei was an island by its purest definition: a mass of land well and truly removed from all others, not merely a sunken mountain but its own cont

Seven Overall (F/F)

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Angel Digestion F/F mystic wilds

Among the Winged Ones, every friend is a lover. But for those closest to each other's hearts, there exists an even deeper intimacy...

A Mystic Wilds story. 

Cuthla - 9 years ago

holy....
now you may have some reservations about how you wrote this. but what you put out is awesome to behold.
I give props to you for this story. it's what consensual vore should be. a act of love and yearning to be truly together.
my thanks to you for such a wonderful tale.

dragon32078 - 9 years ago

This story was truly amazing. It was fluid and thorough. I do understand why you believe the relationship between Erinai and Parri was not fleshed out enough, but I believe it was. I loved how you combined the sexual intensities of the others in the room when Erinai finally digested Parri. This is easily one of the better stories I have read on this site, if not one of the best. Very well done!!!!

Thank you,

Kevin

Valorie - 10 years ago

i love it.

sansuki - 10 years ago

Ah, I see. Personally, I can't stand editing one of my works after I've put it out in public, but that is a personal hangup...

I have decided after a decade writing in any seriousness that it is far, far harder to be a good writer who can work to a set schedule or one who only takes as much time as she thinks she needs than it is to be a great writer who can finish whenever the devil they like. Producing art to a timetable, however loose, is a wonderfully tricky thing.

SkyLark - 10 years ago

I'd better fave this one. It's not very often I find something that's quality, lucid - and manages to tick all the right boxes. Hate it when characters are made to suffer or otherwise not enjoy the experience.

Willing Prey is the way to go! And this is probably one of the finest examples of it on Ekas.

Chaos. It's... well, as unimaginative as it sounds, it's chaotic. Energies and colors whirl beyond the rim, the endless drop off of reality, with winds and rocks hurtling through the air, often crashing together with stunninf effect. The sky is ever shifting between colors, and presently is blue, as Fari sits on the edge of the Rim, outside her home away from home... her little mansion away from the Ways. She's fishing, oddly enough... having gotten a prmonition that something would be coming th

Heretic (F/F UB)

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Unbirth F/F Absorption Role Play

When an elf named Karina is hurled into the bowels of Chaos as punishment for the crime of heresy, her punishment turns out to be more pleasant than obedience ever was.

A role-play log from the chat room, cleaned up. My partner was Ralmar, from the forums, as Fari; I played the role of Karina. 

Ralmar - 8 years ago

Bravo, sir! You get a cookie for recognizing a rather obscure reference.

thatothersting - 8 years ago

That setting wouldn't happen to be Amber, would it?

Ralmar - 8 years ago

Considering the setting I based Fari on, Chaos is more like Hell, but neither side actually is. It's all complicated.

Bitter - 9 years ago

Each is as a Hell to the other.

Jacquelope - 9 years ago

Okay... so between Law and Chaos... which side is actually hell?

FUbN WORLD INFORMATION
or
THIS SPACE INTENTIONALLY LEFT BLANK
 
Expository Document by Bitter
 
 
In a recent private message exchange with another Eka's Portal poster, I asserted that FUbN has no real canon. I then went and ate lunch, at which point I realized that this is an incredibly stupid statement to make and a perfect way to make sure that even the most fundamental aspects of your creation get distorted as everyone imposes their own private version of reality on it. So

FUbN

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: writing

For the interested, a short series of notes on the setting in which FUbN takes place. 

Neoninja - 6 years ago

Alex likes cats huh? >.> pfft hehehe

Royal_Starlord - 7 years ago

°⌂° Interesting...

Liz - 10 years ago

Its very very addictive :S

I played from start to finish until i clocked it - i found their was a hard mode so i though meh bed time due to i had work the next day.

Good to read up on the characters - the first princess is my favorite - Innocent but still deadly :P

Bitter - 10 years ago

Well, it certainly won't get done if you don't start.

Houyo - 10 years ago

I have seriously become obsessed over this dang game. :P Was thinking of making fanfiction or fanart, but I'd probably just end up procrastinating and it'd never get done.

THE KAEIN
 
by Bitter
 
 
The music pounded in Eria's ears as she circumnavigated the dance floor. It was the kind of music that pounded no matter how loud or how softly you played it. The heavy synthetic drum went THOOM, THOOM, THOOM, THOOM-BA-THOOM, THOOM, THOOM in the cadence of a heartbeat; it was the pulse of the entire club. The same rhythm flowed through everything. It wavered in the air, it pounded in the dancers, it throbbed in the heart of the girl in the corner and th

The Kaein (F/F UB)

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Unbirth Digestion F/F Absorption Story

In the far reaches of space, in a club called "Ataraxia", a hedonist searches for pleasure and finds more than she could ever have wanted... 

Jahan - 8 years ago

I have no idea how I'd missed this, but this is amazing. o.o

I admit I had also thought of the ideas of a psychic either 'riding' the prey (or making/letting the prey 'ride' them) in a wonderful wash of hedonism, but the idea may have come from someone who'd read this story. XD

Regardless, this is incredible. =)

Jacquelope - 10 years ago

Hmmmmm. The initial feeling of an expanding consciousness during absorption. That caught my eye more than anything else. As your story was inspired by Nitro Titan (and damn if you could ever find many better inspirations than that), I was a bit inspired by this too. That and your description of the heavy beat at the start of the story. :D The sheer vibrant imagery in your story reminds me of just how much more I need to learn to master this part of story writing.

One would imagine that exo-symbiosis in my story would result in an expanded consciousness for those yielding and receiving memories. It gets even more complicated considering the prey comes back out alive. Hmmmm. Yeah. Time for some alterations to the codex.

BTW I have about a few hours break here at home now. :D

Demihunger - 10 years ago

I have to agree with Ralmar on everything he said about this story.

Valorie - 10 years ago

This is a great story. Thanks!

Imrhys - 10 years ago

The way the Kaein seems to take advantage of Eria, possibly even psionically/empathically luring Eria back to her is *shivers*. Like a pleasure based empathic/psionic spider at the center of a huge web... i can even imagine the Kaein having others out in the club feeling just like Eria but they have just not acted upon "those feelings" yet.

But what I really loved is absorption and how you had them merge/melt together as one because of how the Kaein opens the psionic barriers between them. I love mutualism even if one is subsumed for the dominate "partner".

Of course now that I know what your inspiration was for this story, and that it had also inspired me... tentative to present my version from this inspiration hehehe

NINE AND ONE
 
by Bitter
 
 
I have heard it said that the simplest disproof of an intelligent and loving creator is a cursory evaluation of the bottom of the Earth's ocean. There you may find creatures that baffle the landlocked human expectations of proper animal design: creatures whose bodies are filled with light-emitting diodes designed to snare prey, creatures whose composition strays upward of seventy percent teeth, and creatures whose flesh is entirely transparent. To wi

Nine And One (M/F)

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Soft Vore M/F noin

In the strange land of Ei Teita, a young woman named Erehdys tires of her provincial life in the village of Tylsa. But as it turns out, leaving her home behind will prove to be a dreadful mistake... 

Cerulesta - 8 years ago

This is absolutely wonderfully done. While I was reading through it, it didn't feel like it was specifically focused around being a "vore" story in the least; it was incredibly engaging, all of the quirks and curious traits of the world managed to be charming, amusing, and unnerving all at once, and the characters developed in such a manner that I couldn't help but grow attached.

All of that build-up only served to make the actual instance of predation that much more powerful and convincing, in my opinion. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this from beginning to end, and it makes me regret not having read your stories more faithfully up until this point. Because they're damn good.

Jitoru - 10 years ago

Do love <3

Entirely_Logical - 10 years ago

My thoughts exactly! Except I still haven't finished the trilogy of five... Oh wait. It's six now. I need to find copies of Mostly Harmless and And Another Thing. By the way, how well does the author of Artemis Fowl stand up to Adams' previous work?

EveAra - 10 years ago

So very quirky! You are wonderfully talented. X3

Bitter - 10 years ago

EXACTLY! When I write comedy, that's always how it comes out. If someone noticed independently, I must be pretty close to the mark. High praise! Thank you very much.

BY THE OASIS
 
by Bitter
 
 
In the desert known as Auluroch, a fey stooped to take a drink. He had happened upon an oasis, one of those rare spots where the sands sank close enough to the underlying rock to hold water, and wisely decided to refill his body's reservoirs. The fey of that region had long since adapted to life in the dry heat of the Auluroch; at times when other fey would have collapsed of thirst, the Aulurochi fey would barely have begun to think of water. Protect

By the Oasis (F/M TV)

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Elf F/M Absorption Story Tail Vore mystic wilds

If you ever happen to find an oasis in the Mystic Wilds, for God's sake LOOK BEHIND YOU.

AND BELOW YOU.

AND ABOVE YOU.

AND MAKE SURE IT'S ACTUALLY A REAL OASIS. 

Bitter - 9 years ago

I resubmitted it. From the author's comments:

"12/19/10: Canon changed necessitated the alteration of one phrase."

I take my canon seriously.

temporos - 9 years ago

Why is this just now showing up in my "New Submissions" list? O_o;

frostedfire - 9 years ago

possibly in relation to crafting moods in dwarf fortress. Why do they keep asking for blue diamonds and demon parts when I don't have any :(

AndrewLondon - 9 years ago

Hah, I can't believe I'd forgotten about this story. It's burned into my mind now. Wonderful stuff.

twistedfox - 10 years ago

I love the idea of someone being drained orgasmically dry and you really brought it to life here. Good work!

CONTROL
 
by Bitter
 
 
She is in control. Though every indicator screams to the contrary, her command over the situation is absolute. The wilderness is, by its very definition, untamed and free, but this thicket of trees is her court and this sun-soaked rock is her throne. Despite its rough and knottled texture, she lies upon it as if it were a bed with satin sheets, perfectly at ease, even smiling as the sun slowly bakes her naked body. There is no clothing to be seen, neither

Control (?/F)

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Snake Digestion Fatal ?/F

A woman. A snake. A story. 

Jacquelope - 10 years ago

Indeed, her name did not matter any more than the name of the cow that came to my plate last week as a juicy rib eye steak. I hate to say that but that's basically what this woman was playing the role of.

As for Favorites? Well it's like this, people read profiles on here and they see what others have Fave'd, and often they will go take a look. So by Fave'ing you I'm saying hey, this was well written, if you're into Snake/F vore you ought to take a look. I don't always fave stuff that's outside of my interests, of course, but in this case I did. In short: I came, I read, I recommended. ^_^

Bitter - 10 years ago

Nah, just an idea that went through my head that I decided to act on. That bit of philosophizing on names was entirely genuine-- in an "image" piece like this one, a lot of otherwise necessary details can actually be safely omitted. Granted, it takes all of maybe a sentence or so to give primary agent a name, but the question is whether it really matters. Funnily enough, it doesn't.

As an aside, I still can't predict which of my works is going to draw a Favorite from you.

Jacquelope - 10 years ago

Interesting take on the concept of willing prey. And you did a bang up job with the unnamed protagonist thing, too. I take it this was a sort of challenge for you?

Imrhys - 10 years ago

Personally the not naming her left her as nothing more then just prey. Its not easy to make unnamed characters work, but congrats you did it <3

Bitter - 10 years ago

Well, I certainly haven't given up on the concept of names altogether! XP For this one story, though, just a simple snake-meets-woman yarn, it was interesting to see how many details I could leave out (without descending into that stupid "a very short vore story" joke).

THE MYSTIC WILDS
 
Expository Document by Bitter
 
LATEST UPDATE: 11/20/11
- Landscape: New information on the area between worlds.
- Pixie Lords: Added a new capability.
- Animus: New revelations on the nature of monsters and their relationship with fey.
 
 
PURPOSE
 
The Mystic Wilds is a setting I recently invented to serve as a backdrop for "The Way of the Wilds" (which, in point of fact, was not actually given that title until later). As often happe

The Mystic Wilds

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: writing

Information about the Mystic Wilds, the world made of magic where the Fey live and digest.

(World data article.)

If this document has been re-uploaded, you can find newly-added information by searching for {*}. The {&} symbol concludes segments of new information.

Last Update: 6/15/2011 

Jahan - 8 years ago

Oh, wow, I'm honestly.. wow. =) Thanks!
I need to get back to that series. Story 2 is actually written, but it needed some major reworking (a huge chunk of it was.. really clunky), so I went and got very distracted by other things.
I look forward to seeing what monsters you come up with!

Bitter - 8 years ago

Say, that reminds me. For as much as I've talked up the role of monsters in the Mystic Wilds, I've never actually documented any. At least one of them needs to be some kind of alraune based on the Ivysaur from "Field Research". That was a good story.

Bitter - 8 years ago

Ha! I love worldfluff, too. It's a shame that that doesn't translate into more stories... I could probably double the size of my gallery just by writing one story for every major concept outlined here.

Good to hear that this was an entertaining read! I figure if you're going to subject your audience to a document whose sole purpose is to store a bunch of rarefied info, it ought to at least be worth their time to sit through it.

Jahan - 8 years ago

Man, I needed to read this sooner.
First: You mentioned Magicant. YAY! Bonus points*
Second: This setting is amazing. The attention to detail, the bits you've worked out, the different species... this is fantastic. Then again, I love worldfluff.
Third: You have a really, really good sense of humor, which made this a treat to read.

*Bonus points are not redemable.

dannny25 - 9 years ago

lol bittersweet refering yourself in there bitter?

THE WAY OF THE WILDS
 
by Bitter
 
 
The bright sunlight of an enchanted noon shone down upon the Mystic Wilds, the land beyond reality where all creatures of magic live. A colossal forest, finite perhaps but large beyond the comprehension of mortals, covered the earth for intractable miles in all directions. In this forest, huge yet but a fraction of the Wilds, there lived a race of creatures known as the Lesser Fey. The Lesser Fey, despite their name, were among the highest of

The Way of the Wilds (M/M)

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Soft Vore Digestion Elf M/M Absorption Mana Fatal Yaoi Oral Magic faerie Fairy Blowjob fey Semi-willing Fae mystic wilds unwilling to willing

It's an elf-eat-elf world out there in the Mystic Wilds. Witness here a perfectly typical example of what can happen to a Lesser Fey if they haven't the cunning or the strength to defend themselves. 

sevensix - 1 year ago

Never mind; it was "Yaoi".

sevensix - 1 year ago

This shows up as "Blacklisted" for me, but I just went through the tags and none of them seems to be the reason. Weird.

GiantToby - 10 years ago

Wonderful. Best digestion scene I've ever read.

Amalia - 10 years ago

This was fantastic!

Bitter - 10 years ago

That's usually how it goes in my stories. Glad you liked it!

MEETING HER MATCH
 
by Bitter
 
 
In the deserts of the land of Sorja, near the mouth of the river Eripides, there exists a city called Senzorca where the naga live. Like the naga themselves, Senzorca was built low to the ground, with single-story buildings predominantly made of mud brick and sandstone, with one exception: the grand colliseum that towered over all else. But the colliseum was empty at this time of year, when the harvests were still being pulled in from the rare t

Meeting Her Match (M/F)

Uploaded: 10 years ago

Owner: Bitter

Tags: Soft Vore Digestion M/F Naga Oral

Kisarin, a naga from the city of Senzorca, is determined to win the love of the Warrior's Guild's finest, Sarek. But a Warrior's love is a dangerous thing... 

Bitter - 8 years ago

One of my biggest pet peeves with the use of elements of fantasy is an insufficient separation from a human mindset. The whole reason you would have a character who isn't human, from a narrative function standpoint, is because their non-human aspects give them non-human thought, which allows us to reflect on what it means to be human. All this to say: that response was very much my intent, and I'm glad to hear it.

Cerulesta - 8 years ago

I genuinely loved the tone of this story. I will admit that more often than not, I prefer vore to refrain from being explicitly sexual, but the manner in which the couple reacted and threatened and teased one another seemed intriguing and believable to the extent that it didn't bother me in the least. In fact, it wasn't at all difficult for me to imagine these sorts of practices taking place between nagas, and getting to explore the differences between their species and humanity while reading this was really quite something. I'm also a big fan of the prey experiencing characteristics of both willingness and unwillingness in any ratio, which is not something I see done terribly often; even though Kisarin was certainly more willing than not in the end, her initial anxieties didn't give away any clues as to her eventual mindset, so it was tough to guess how she'd decide to interpret what was happening to her. And I liked that. ... If that makes any sense.

Excellently done, at any rate. <3

Imrhys - 9 years ago

Well now that was interesting, hmmm...

That is the first time I have ever read of a naga prey, and the detail with which you went into it, whew. Excellent work up to the climax. Even knowing the conclusion I read it just to see how you would describe it. Not my usual, but a most engrossing read.

Bitter - 10 years ago

There are only so many ways you can throw vowels and consonants together to make names, y'know.

Jacquelope - 10 years ago

Sarek was also the name of a prominent Vulcan. :)

Hahah, just messing with ya!

BITTER'S WRITING METHODS, EPISODE 6: PUBLICATION
 
by Bitter
 
 
Greetings, dear readers, and welcome to the sixth and final episode of Bitter's Writing Methods. Your story is now well and truly complete (except for a few bits and bobs, but we'll get to that in a moment) and you're (almost) ready to put it on public display. However, presentation can be a perilous step: there are ways to make your story look worse than it actually is. Imagine having spent all this time and effor

Episode 6: Publication

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Owner: Bitter

Tags: writing

It's time to let everyone see your story! 

Indighost - 9 years ago

Well done, Bitter! I really appreciate all the effort you put into this series. And it's good to know that shameless plugs are OK at Eka's :)!

Jacquelope - 10 years ago

Well done. Especially the part about participating in the community and giving others comments and such. Reciprocation is key to one getting exposure for their works here.

I can certainly attest to the fact that this advice works. It's super important that artists participate in the community and mingle with other artists. Don't be afraid to do a little social networking.

Oh and you wouldn't believe how many times I almost plugged my story in someone else's gallery, only to delete the text because I felt uneasy about it. Thank goodness I followed my gut feeling!