F1reDem0n - 4 months ago

All I can say to this is just...wow. This was a amazing and well worth the wait ending to this series.

I know some will be annoyed that you kept Billy alive but I want to say I am glad you did. In fact using the neighbor as a alternative meal was a interesting idea and I feel like you took some of the feedback from others and weaved it into the story in your own way. Which really makes it all the better.

As much as I want there to be more of these two, I also know sometimes leaving the imagination to wander is more rewarding them telling it all. As is any good and strong story.

JackNoName - 4 months ago

Thanks! I too love fatal vore. Safe vore often feels like an easy cop-out, but I wanted to let her son meet a truly destructive and gluttonous stomach and still let his mother, despite her duality, find the will power to make him come out alive. I hope it turned out well.

bellylov3rs - 4 months ago

I'm so glad it ended well for them, honestly I love fatal vote and all but it's nice for once to see a mother/son story end sweetly instead, this site needed that badly <3

JackNoName - 4 months ago

If I*d ever continue their story, the duality of her alter ego and herself would probably be a focus point.

Thanks for the compliments ^^

JackNoName - 4 months ago

Possibly, but likely not anytime soon ;)

JackNoName - 1 month ago

I'm happy you enjoyed it so much!

I do have other stories within the same universe which you might like, and a few more coming up too. Here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/335845
And even an entire multi-part series with a rather big pred here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/361073

HMDVore - 1 month ago

Where to even start...
This story has the perfect elements of a cruel but delusional predator. The emphasis on killing those kids as lessons, turning them into mush in front of their friends is done so well in this story.

The part where Melanie debates whether or not she should swallow that girl when she gets the last question wrong is brilliant, and I love how the girl is able to really say what the rest of the students are thinking right as the teacher polishes her off.

And to end it off, enjoying the feeling of the girl in her final moments in front of her boyfriend, the one that loved her unconditionally, just melt away in his hands...there is something truely special about the way this was written. Cruel. Evil. Devious. Delusional morally thrown in. This story will stick with me for a while.

HMDVore - 1 month ago

awesome!

JackNoName - 5 months ago

Thanks a bunch! ^^

Kroton68 - 5 months ago

This was a favourite of mine when it came out, and it's still a cracker. It'd be great to see more of Melanie...

JackNoName - 5 months ago

Thanks :) what was the loveliest part?

Tafillia - 5 months ago

Lovely~<3

JackNoName - 5 months ago

Thanks a bunch! :D

DoctorLucy - 5 months ago

Another quality read from our favourate nameless Jack!

JackNoName - 7 months ago

I explained it in a bit more detail on my blog
https://aryion.com/forum/blog/JackNoName/some_thoughts_on_the_matter._b-42661.html

JackNoName - 7 months ago

Sorry, that won't happen.

Anon2727 - 7 months ago

Aww you rewrote it :(

Will you post the original once everything calms back down? :D

MrQuarantine - 7 months ago

Trolled hard...I thought it was a new chapter ;__;

MrQuarantine - 7 months ago

Trolled hard...I thought it was a new chapter ;__;

shortprey20 - 7 months ago

2 chapter updates in a day?! I must be dreaming =p

shortprey20 - 7 months ago

Good to see more stories Jack! While the cooking part is not my thing i still enjoyed the heck out of the story and cant wait for more =D

Slimshod - 7 months ago

I had a lot of fun reading this. You above and beyond my expectations, thank you!

Vmaster608 - 7 months ago

Nice story.

Bright - 8 months ago

Nice story. I enjoyed reading it.

DoctorLucy - 8 months ago

She's a fast learner, figuring out friend from food in less than a day. Almost makes me a little jelly.

yepthatsavore - 8 months ago

This was really good. Please tell me there is going to bw a part 2

SpokleArt - 8 months ago

Ohh killer little tale! Love how the intoxicating allure of her overwrites the farmers need to protect other people from her. Good stuff

Slimshod - 9 months ago

My thoughts exactly

ryanshowseason3 - 11 months ago

They're probably served as some type of menu item. Especially if they are that mentally broken. Which kind of suggests our main heroine might not make it to college, heh.

JackNoName - 11 months ago

Thanks, it was a lot of fun to write for sure.
What do you think happens to them?

ryanshowseason3 - 11 months ago

I wonder what happens to "broken" shakers in the end once they are useless. That's the one loose end I'd have liked to see resolved. Otherwise fantastic job.

anonymousexperiment - 11 months ago

Just a matter of taste

yepthatsavore - 8 months ago

Dude, this series is stupid good. So well thought out and written. First of read of this kind. Man ill be heart broken if she digest her son. Im sure eve will be to. But it is what is is like ylu stated in an earlier comment. Can't wait for the next part

JackNoName - 9 months ago

The 4th {final) chapter is still coming ^^

Konkak - 9 months ago

Did you forsake this project or you're still working on it? :P

Konkak - 11 months ago

I agree with you JackNoName. I prefer digestion much more, especially unwilling, but willing stuff is okay too imo - it makes vore stuff more about domination, which is really appealing. And it's even more appealing in the incestious type of this stuff, when there's some kind of "betreyal stuff" (I don't know how to call this) when predator is actually a really close person to the prey, but it's going to eat and digest its prey anyway. It's also about rejecting everything and throwing someone's life away which also makes this kind of stuff more interesting. Both prey and predator must pay the highest price for the game they are playing.

Vore without digestion doesn't have the domination feature and doesn't show the ultimate cost of this kind of "fun". It's kinda boring imo - it ends the same way it has began, everybody's alive, everybody's happy and nothing really changes. And I think that I'm not the only one who thinks that "bad endings" are usually more interesting than happy ones :)

As I said, that's just my opinion, but you may consider making alternative ending to satisfy all the people :)

TongueCuddlingLouse - 11 months ago

Great job man! :D

JackNoName - 7 months ago

That's one hell of a compliment :') THanks!

voredrawing - 7 months ago

This is the best vore story series I have ever read! XD I can’t wait for the next part/s!

yepthatsavore - 8 months ago

Man, this story had me deep in it. This was 10/10.loved the part where aly gets crazy and the thought of so many concert goers are in her belly is hot af!

kain009 - 10 months ago

love this story! cant wait to read more of it if there is going to be a next chapter. :)

JackNoName - 11 months ago

There are other motives playing here ;) Its easy to make the wrong decisions when your perspective is skewed.

Potatomaximus - 5 months ago

One of my favorite chapters. That boy was so rude disturbing a girls meal like that. He earned his place in her tummy. He’ll look good on her booty :3.

cruddneck - 1 year ago

Excited for next one! Soon?

JackNoName - 1 year ago

I am so sorry. At this point I can't make any promises, but maybe I can put some work in this weekend and finally finish something. Knowing that people are waiting is often a motivator, so thanks :)

SpokleArt - 1 year ago

I eagerly await your next work, checking back every 3 days or so.

JackNoName - 1 year ago

You sure do keep me sharp ^^

anyany - 1 year ago

Cough Cough...Oh sorry don't mind me i'm just sitting here covered in dust ;-;

Bellyful - 2 years ago

Can't wait for the next part it's a great story

JackNoName - 2 years ago

Hard to say, within the next two months probably. I am working on many other projects. ATM writing a horror/vore story, which is quite different than i'm used to but interesting :)

anyany - 2 years ago

looking forward to it do you perhaps have an ETA? >.>

JackNoName - 2 years ago

Thanks for the compliment ^^ next chapter will be the final one and is going o be quite intense...

JackNoName - 11 months ago

Hehe ;)

Mettra - 11 months ago

What an "unlucky" guy lol

SpokleArt - 1 year ago

I can't promise anything, but its not out of the question. You paint a strong mental image with your stories!

JackNoName - 1 year ago

Thanks a bunch! Its always great to hear I can hit a few snares in people by my writing. Its a huge confidence boost and motivator.

I just checked your art on Deviant art and I have to say, I'm a big fan already. If my work inspires you, I'd love to see the result of that :D

SpokleArt - 1 year ago

Ok

OK

SO!

I've lurked here on Eka's off and on for a few years. I make fetish (giantess/size) art but only occassionally vore stuff so I never bothered making an account, only bookmarking a few people.

A little under a week ago I found your stuff while browsing thanks to the BigBig illustration hooking me in. My god, this voress AU concept (and particularly this chapter) made me realize I need to get off my ass, be a proper fan of artworks like I am elsewhere, and let the artists/writers know when I like their work.

This whole story is interesting, each Voress story has been a freaky pleasure, and this chapter in particular knocked me on my ass and filled my head with images. Good shit, hope you get as much out of it as I am getting out of it, and look to more good stuff in the future!

shortprey20 - 1 year ago

Lol well my research (grad school) kept me plenty busy. Sadly when (in the rare case) i had downtime i was lookong forward to playing skyrim for the 360 after lending it to a friend for a year, but she returned it in poor condition so in answer to your qiestion not really xD

And woot! I was hopong you were alive, hadnt heard from ya in a bit but happy to see ya live :p

JackNoName - 1 year ago

(4 months later with still no new chapter) Did you end up finding anything? xD

I am happy to say that the wait is not much loger. Chapter 4 will be a bit shorter but it will be ready in a week or 2 :) maybe sooner.

mthekiller362 - 8 months ago

I know it’s been more than a year since this was posted, but I figured I’d write something. This was a great story, absolutely loved it. Love the futa/male as well. I always look to find more stories like that. It’s too bad that it isn’t/won’t be continued, it had a great setting and pace.

Though I would love to see it when they were just starting out, how they both looked and interacted before how they got now.

JackNoName - 2 years ago

Haha, thanks man. It was somewhat different to write about these hyper sexualized characters, had to really write the world around it. It was a lot of fun but a sequal is up to Scion, which he was interested in.

Things are only going to ramp up from here :)

D3adZ3d - 2 years ago

That was great! BBW/Futa/mini GTS/Vore/Domination hit almost all of my favorites all in one! Looking forward to more of this.

anyany - 2 years ago

plans for a part 2?

JackNoName - 2 years ago

Hooolllyyy shiit, you made my day!

SpaceHump - 2 years ago

Getting a slight "Anal Dildo fun" from Nitro_Titan vibe.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/245057

JackNoName - 2 years ago

Me too, my friend, me too. :)

Scion - 2 years ago

This is awesome!


Just love women who are just huge lol!

Larkspurdiblock - 2 years ago

Daphne's totally gonna become a pred, isn't she?

D3adZ3d - 2 years ago

Great second chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

JackNoName - 2 years ago

It's both a gift and a curse I often think. It can sometimes get a little long-winded and have to cut and rephrase a lot. I'd like to believe I just cater to people who'd like a more elaborate piece, there is enough short stories to go around.

ironman362 - 2 years ago

brilliant work, super detailed :)

JackNoName - 2 years ago

Glad you liked it, keep your eyes out for the next chapter :)

EvangelineSkypaw - 1 year ago

Please tell me his girlfriend doesn't get eaten. ;w;

JackNoName - 1 year ago

I am sorry for my late comment, but thank you for your kind words. What you say is exactly the kind of response I am looking for from my readers.

Let me know if you do decide to continue, I am still working on the 4th chapter and it won't be too much longer for its release. ^^

EvangelineSkypaw - 1 year ago

....I-I don't know how to feel...

I really don't. Like, I love the relationship he has with his girlfriend, and the way the larger girl's personality shifted into something resembling kindness for a bit was relieving...

It's just... I kinda feel the same as the main character about those two girls... They seemed kinda cute, and...

...I want to keep reading, but I don't know if I should. >w<

JackNoName - 2 years ago

Thanks :) send it by pm ;)

Neznamy - 2 years ago

This was good. When I'm done with work today I'll review the next one for you.

JackNoName - 4 months ago

I'd love that and I wouldn't mind hearing more of what you're planning. Do send me a PM about it ^^

Thanks for the compliment.

findlebob - 4 months ago

This is without a doubt my favorite series ever. I really wish their had been more to this as it felt like their is a lot more to discover. Would you mind if I use the rough basis of this to write my own story with you credited of course.

Slimshod - 1 year ago

Controversy just means you struck the right cords yo :)

JackNoName - 1 year ago

Haha, thanks ^^ No worries, I know how messed up it is. It got a lot of controversy over on another site, but I am still really happy how it turned out.

Slimshod - 1 year ago

Holy fuck nuts that got dark, and I mean that in a good way. Good lord you wrote that mother really well and had a good amount of the main character's thoughts/feelings to play with. That was one helluva ride dude. Nice.

Kooshmeister - 2 months ago

Alas. :(

JackNoName - 2 months ago

I did...

Kooshmeister - 2 months ago

You changed it...

Slimshod - 1 year ago

This was a really fun and exciting story. Very nice.

VoreLover9012 - 3 years ago

Very nice, the image of this was very erotic and I loved it.

Junogray - 3 years ago

The lurkers await this conclusion
good stuff so far

UBSquirting96 - 3 years ago

LOVE IT!!! That last sentence made me squeal in delight! :)

UBSquirting96 - 3 years ago

LOVE IT!!! That last sentence made me squeal in delight! :)

Lition - 3 years ago

This is seriously amazing, and hits all the right kinks for me. I really hope you make more parts!

DoctorLucy - 2 years ago

Oh my ggod you need to finish this! It's amazing! What happens next???!? Come on, all this build up and you leave me hanging on for the next day?! Please just one moar!

bigboy1992 - 3 years ago

Will you continue this story?