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Prey
It's
raining again.
The
world around me is full with the sound of the storm. It falls from
the black sky, dripping through the forest canopy to the soggy land
below. It falls onto my head and rattles in my skull, then it drips
down my fur, crashing gently around me. I shiver in the wet cold and
my fur coat grows thicker. It helps, but I'm still not warm. Some
rain gets into my eye and I blink it out. It's rained for many nights
in a row now. I haven't been able to hunt anything in that time

Mechdragon1k - 7 years ago

Might a dragon having some bird like features have a crop, it be a good way for non-fatal vore to be introduced asides from magic.

maybe the dragon is watching from afar the wolf girl fight for survival, can the wolf girl talk/understand speech.

It is kind of unique, that a prey actually escapes by struggling, normally it is pointless desperation. Great story, you have a lot of talent as a writer and might be able to work professionally as a writer.

Mechdragon1k - 7 years ago

WMG. The whole being both wolfs might be species respect, or maybe they are related somehow. Or he could of just thought she was cute or deserved a break as she would not be very filling anyway. Shipping commence now. Throught while a wolf, wolf dragon relationship would be cute, it might be best as a alternate universe lighter and softer spin off. The merciless fight for survival is quite gripping let the hunger games commence.

MidnightNoon - 7 years ago

He gave up on finding her pretty easily, didn't he?

Mechdragon1k - 7 years ago

I wonder if the wolflike dragon not eating the wolf girl was intentional on the dragons part.

Prey - p2
Searing pain, inside
and out, is the first thing I notice as I awake. My immediate fear is
that I had never escaped my predators at all. Maybe it was all a
dream, and I'm just now waking up, half digested, still gurgling away
in the bird's gut as he sleeps. I try to open my eyes, but they sting
with fluid. I try to take a breath of air. Oh god, I can't breath.
I gasp as hard as I
can, but nothing gets in. There's a heavy pain in my chest, burning
and throbing. My skin stings, my nose

MidnightNoon - 7 years ago

Lol, Sorry again for the vomit, but I'm definitely going to be using it more in the future. But when I do, it'll be central to the scene, so people who aren't into it can just skip that one.

Thank you for your compliments. Honestly, The pelican creature was just pulling things together that I knew would give me a lot to use for the scene.
The paralyzing spider, I almost didn't think of until I re-wrote the section. The mouse though, I always love the thought of feathered mammals.

It's very hard to know when I'm handling things like that well, you want to describe the world, but you don't want to detract from the story. So I'm very glad that you think I'm handling them well.

Kasra - 7 years ago

Powerful, yes, and definitely a scene worth having, but that doesn't make it less gross. Especially when you continue to put this much effort into describing everything with so much detail!

The comparison was also well-delivered. There's a real sense of "the law of the jungle" being applied, and applied properly, and I do like that.

Additionally, I am enjoying the growth of the world as you go along. You seem to have a talent for creating animals and working them appropriately into the story.

Nomdude - 7 years ago

excellent story :) i love the detail yo put into these.

Fatal
vore, Feral Prey, Graphic Digestion, and Graphic Disposal.Stop at
the ~~~ line if you don’t want scat.
Mouse
prey
The
poor mouse quivers in my hands. I hold him cupped inside them,
feeling him wriggle and skitter around, futility scratching at my
fingers. He won't find escape now. In one swift movement I grab him
with my bottom hand, securing his lower body, only his frantic head
and front paws are loose. My stomach gurgles inside me, “groylglgl”.
He hears it, going stiff for a momen

Pred POV: Mouse Prey

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: MidnightNoon

Tags: POV Scat Belly Soft Vore Digestion Mouse Swallowing Animal Unwilling Watersports Humanoid Struggling Unwilling Prey first person Hard Digestion ?/M Size difference graphic Disposal Graphic digestion taunting animal prey laughing Pred POV Cruel Pred Feral Vore feral prey Mouse prey humanoid pred Struggling prey inside Struggling prey ?/animal Swallowing difficulty Prey trouble

This is the first vore story I ever wrote, about a year and a half ago. I was going to re-write and polish this to get it good enough to upload, but the new version's completely different from the original now. So I'm going to upload this version as it is, and the re-write will come out as a different story.

This story is from a predator's pov while they eat a feral mouse, with focus on the effort of swallowing it and the feeling of it wriggling around inside. I tried very hard to...
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Ursa - 4 years ago

i was thinking about writing a similar piece but with the rat and more cruel animal realism but found this and it's really fucking good.

Nevek - 7 years ago

Two Thumbs Up.

MidnightNoon - 7 years ago

I'm glad to hear that. I personally consider this to be less polished than other stuff I put out, but that's not to say it's less enjoyable. I'm most fond of the writing in the midnight wolf series, though the fox's meal story is probably a better vore experience.

But it's very hard to tell what's good writing while you're writing it, this one may very well be the best experience out of all of them, even with less polish, or perhaps because of that.

Regardless, I'm trying out all different kinds of stories, and I hope they all match your expectations, and continue to be enjoyable.

TETRO - 7 years ago

If this is what you consider your less polished work, your polished work must be incredible.

onemantroupe - 7 years ago

I really like that you omitted the gender of they prey. It still reads very well, and leaves it open to interpretation. Well done!

Prey
It's raining again.
The world around me is
full with the sound of the storm. It falls from the black sky,
dripping through the forest canopy to the soggy land below. It falls
onto my head and rattles in my skull, then it drips down my fur,
crashing gently around me. I shiver in the wet cold and my fur coat
grows thicker. It helps, but I'm still not warm. Some rain gets into
my eye and I blink it out. It's rained for many nights in a row now.
I haven't been able to hunt anything in that time

Deegdumdoodilly - 7 years ago

Looking forward to whatever you decide to do next. Don't worry about overdoing detail; in a vore story, we call that good writing :)

MidnightNoon - 7 years ago

I have ideas to use the predators encountered in this for one-off stories, where the prey doesn't get away. There's a very fun idea involving someone having to wait in the bird's crop for their turn while someone digests in the stomachs.

I may at some point still do the bad end for the wolf here, but I feel like I've explored too much of this encounter here for a full part on that, so it might just be made as a mini-piece. Though, I do get carried away with detail. It may end up longer than anticipated.

Regardless, there will be plenty of bad ends for other prey. I can't use the wolf as prey too much, or it'll get boring fast, though I could do non-cannon stories with her.

Deegdumdoodilly - 7 years ago

Excellent writing, and a very unique situation that I haven't seen before. I was a bit surprised to see the prey escape, though. A 'bad end' would certainly be appreciated.

Deegdumdoodilly - 7 years ago

Excellent writing, and a very unique situation that I haven't seen before. I was a bit surprised to see the prey escape, though. A 'bad end' would certainly be appreciated.

Kasra - 7 years ago

Well, it's a bit more realistic, isn't it? The adult, sure, it can handle its food. And that scene was very well done for all us vore lovers. But when it transitioned into the child, well, all bets were off. Though they may have been off from the start, given that you said in the description that you wanted it to be "the first part." It was either an escape, or reformation. I think you chose and executed well.

Can't help you with a name, though. I'm terrible at names.

Fatal
vore, Feral Pred, Graphic Digestion, and Graphic Disposal.Stop at
the ~~~ line if you don’t want scat.
Fox's Meal
She's found me. I sit
staring paralysed at her face looking down on me. Her bright green
eyes looking down on my frozen form. She looks over her meal before
lowering her wet, black nose to my fur and sniffing hard. She
considers my scent for a moment before poking out her tongue and
dragging it over my body. Her rough tongue pushes over me like a wet
blanket, dampening me and

Fox's Meal

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Owner: MidnightNoon

Tags: POV Oral Vore Scat Belly Soft Vore Fox Digestion Vixen Burp Feral Fart Mouse Female F/? Fatal Animal Story Farting Bloat Rodent Gas Bloated Watersports Licking Hard Digestion Belly rubs stomach ache Female Pred Prey POV fatal digestion Disposal indigestion Burping Graphic digestion Gassy animal pred full digestion bloated belly Feral Pred Detailed Fox Pred Feral Predator Mouse prey Belly Rubbing Vixen Pred rodent prey Detailed Digestion Belly Licking

A tiny creature is walking through a forest, when a fox decides to make a meal of it.

My first vore story going on this site. It features a feral predator with a gassy stomach, an ambiguous prey, so that you can decide what it is, and some belly rubs from a friend.

Stop at the squiggly line to skip the disposal.

Let me know what you think! 

silverspec - 4 years ago

Still the best story I've ever read.

Speedyblupi - 4 years ago

I really love seeing more "natural" style vore and disposal with feral predators. I'm usually disappointed when I try to look for it, but this story is exactly the sort of thing I like.

Nikkidafox - 4 years ago

This has got to be one of my favorites.

Mechdragon1k - 5 years ago

I also agree and I love it.

BizzareBlue - 5 years ago

Amazing descriptions. I absolutely loved this story.