foreword
Imagine if you will, a world ravaged by darkness. I know it sound clich�, but in all truth, this world has been pointlessly assaulted by just that…the darkness. Now again, I ask you to imagine a ravaged world-and by that I mean a place where everything good has been damaged beyond repair. Even the simple joys over daily life have been stripped away for the people you are about to read about. Inficity was once a prosperous metropolitan area with plenty of trees and wildlife
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Uploaded: 15 years ago
Owner: Sycium
What would happen ina world where the apacolypse... was a fluke in time.
The Well
Quiet. It was quiet here. No birds sang outside, and no scurrying of feet echoed off the walls. It was green here. Green and grey and blue and watery. The stony faced temple stood leaning to on side from the mass of trees that threatened every day to push its moss covered bricks over. The roof was gone a century and a day ago, but the reflection pool in the middle and its immediate surroundings looked just as good as they ever had. For it was built before the temple itself. The pool
Sycium - 15 years ago
i appreciate your praise and constructive criticism. chapter two is on its way, and i will try to be more vivid and give the RIGHT details.
soldier148 - 15 years ago
the premise is good, but your writing was very unclear. many times i found myself straining to understand what was hapening and just how everything looked. youve got good ideas, but you definately need to refine your writing skills so you can be more clear in your writing
Sycium - 15 years ago
thanks. i'm not much fro 'grab and gulp' sort of stories, so even if the spellign is off... i try to take my time when i write.
Ragtime - 15 years ago
Ooh, interesting. I like this one. I can't wait to read the rest.
blackop117 - 14 years ago
so weres chapter 2