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The Well


Quiet. It was quiet here. No birds sang outside, and no scurrying of feet echoed off the walls. It was green here. Green and grey and blue and watery. The stony faced temple stood leaning to on side from the mass of trees that threatened every day to push its moss covered bricks over. The roof was gone a century and a day ago, but the reflection pool in the middle and its immediate surroundings looked just as good as they ever had. For it was built before the temple itself. The pool

The Well-F/blob

Uploaded: 15 years ago

Owner: Sycium

Tags: Oral Vore Sex writing

Everything but CV ^^ 

blackop117 - 14 years ago

so weres chapter 2

Sycium - 15 years ago

i appreciate your praise and constructive criticism. chapter two is on its way, and i will try to be more vivid and give the RIGHT details.

soldier148 - 15 years ago

the premise is good, but your writing was very unclear. many times i found myself straining to understand what was hapening and just how everything looked. youve got good ideas, but you definately need to refine your writing skills so you can be more clear in your writing

Sycium - 15 years ago

thanks. i'm not much fro 'grab and gulp' sort of stories, so even if the spellign is off... i try to take my time when i write.

Ragtime - 15 years ago

Ooh, interesting. I like this one. I can't wait to read the rest.