Jack - 1 year ago

Fair point regarding Diana and Eva. That's a good reason for sure.

TwrchTwryth - 1 year ago

Respecting boundaries in real life is so important, so I try to have characters with different preferences and limits (y'know, within my own interests). While free use and default permissiveness are two major currents in my stories, this isn't absolute and isn't going to be the same for everyone.

That being said, it is possible that Diana's disinterest in hooking up with Eva has as much to do with not wanting to complicate their friendship as it does with what Eva's packing downstairs.

Jack - 1 year ago

I think a part of what makes these stories appeal to me so much, is that despite all the depravity that is going on, the involved characters still have their limits.

Mary is a bit cautious of the premise of taking Finley's huge cock up her backside, the Hovsepians might fuck their friends but not each other, and Diana here gets along very well with Eva - but won't fuck her, because she's not packing down below. And it's no problem. It still works. They are allowed to have their preferences, without upsetting anyone. That is very neat to read.

TwrchTwryth - 1 year ago

That'll probably show up at some point. It's implied as a possibility in Show Us, but sometime I'll have to make it explicit.

ThreeStrikes - 1 year ago

I had an idea for this series, if you're interested? Have one of the girlfriends CV one of the family members, then cum them into one of the others

TwrchTwryth - 1 year ago

That is one demerit, I suppose, since none of the Hovsepians are vores themselves (that we've seen so far, at least), these tend to start out in my brain as sex stories first, vore second.

You've got it right on general personality so far. Finley's almost got a napoleon complex from being the youngest and the smallest, so she's going to dominate as much as she can. She's not necessarily selfish or cruel, so she can give a bit and also handle push back. She probably watches some BDSM porn.

Val and Ani are generally more permissive than anything, less about domming or subbing and more about having fun. Good fun matters more than anything else. When someone wants to take something (Mary requesting to titfuck them in May I?), they're likely to say okay as long as there's some reciprocity (Val fucking Mary a little harder than normal).

Eva doesn't fit neatly, because she actively and assertively enjoys performing fellatio, which is so often presented and understood as a submissive act. She would be happiest in a free use world where cocks were casually available to be sucked at all times (as well as other sexual fulfillment).

I'm still sketching them all out, but they're a fun group to play with.

Jack - 1 year ago

Sounds like a great thing to look forward to me. While Eva has already starred in most of the stories, giving her the full spotlight in one could be neat.

She seems to be very happy receiving as far as her sexuality is concerned, while Ani and Val might be switches (sub and dom leaning, respectively), and Finley firmly settled in the dominant department. Maybe? We'll see what future stories bring.

I also liked very much that the vore part was not quite as short here.

TwrchTwryth - 1 year ago

Thanks! Process wise, I've got ADD, which means that I get a new concept, I tend to get hyper-focused on it until I burn out. That's how I was able to write 16 KC Barnhart stories (plus start 3 or 4 others, with another half dozen roughly sketched out in my head) between June and February, then haven't touched the character since. I tend to be more productive in summer for whatever reason, so I'm riding that now and we'll see how long it lasts.

Remi and Mary weren't meant to necessarily be recurring characters. I started this story from the idea that Eva is such a fan of delivering fellatio that she'd love to woken up like this, then worked my way backward from there.

I wouldn't be surprised if we see Remi again; at some point, I may start jumping around more in the timeline and not be so constrained to the particular fall and spring we've dealt with so far. At the same time, I also want to expand on just how wide-ranging the promiscuity of the Hovsepians -- especially Eva -- is, so I think the next few stories will explore that.

Freattay - 1 year ago

Would have liked it one of the sisters ate her, but it's good nonetheless.

Jack - 1 year ago

I will be looking forward to that. A lot.

But I am also eager to see what the characters will be up to. Which of the Hovsepians will show up, and which role they will fill. But no spoilers, please. I will gladly wait to find out.

TwrchTwryth - 1 year ago

Thanks! The other major idea for the Hovsepians, which I haven't started writing yet, will involve a predator with a bellyful of family member again.

Jack - 1 year ago

That story was as awesome as the first. Really enjoyed the read.
Having a predator engage in naughtyness with a full belly -and the prey digesting in there being someone the others know on top of that- was very neat.
Good idea, awesome execution. The casual, positive tone fits the scene well.

TwrchTwryth - 1 year ago

Thanks!

Ratdogtwo - 1 year ago

Great Story, Awesome Job.

Jack - 1 year ago

"And hey, I mean, we don't do much with your butt, but I hope it's good and limber, since I guess that's Finley's favorite."

That one has to be my favourite single sentence of a story I have read for quite a while. The wording is so on point, the consensus and the characters' playful banter really make it shine.

2good2btru - 1 year ago

Nice, can't wait to see more of her.

TwrchTwryth - 1 year ago

Thanks, I appreciate it! I wanted the Hovsepians to be casual about it, but decided that the rest of the world wouldn't necessarily be, so playing this through Mary's eyes was fun.

Gorgrath177 - 1 year ago

Hope this gal makes a return

doomed - 2 years ago

Awesome, I look forward to seeing it

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

I figure that there are probably a few dozen + vore camgirls in this universe, all competing for clicks and their own piece of the pie. Some of them do gimmicks or characters or something. There are different specializations and overlap with different fetishes. This is what Echo has figured out that works for her and her audience. Other predators will handle things differently.

Echo is almost certainly not the only person doing sexy competitions. I've already got another planned where couples have to pass, otherwise one or both are on the menu. Hopefully I'll get started on that soon.

doomed - 2 years ago

True , if you do as equal to this . You should adjust the rules to make it a bit more balanced .
Like , if they last 1 min they live .
If they last 2 min they can fuck her pussy
If they last 3 min they can do anything they want.

That or have them start out with them try to get her off first as the new challenge . Because I could see this becoming a great series if you wanted
XD

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

High praise, I'm much obliged! This was a lot of fun to write, gonna have to try something else like it again.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks, cheers!

walkingbyself - 2 years ago

This was a fun cute little story.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Glad you're enjoying them, and I really appreciate the feedback. With the KC-verse, I'm trying to make everything fun and light-hearted, while still practicing healthy respect for consent and boundaries. I also want to make them something I enjoy writing about, hoping it'll be something people enjoy reading about.

hornywing - 2 years ago

Wow. Obviously I'm here for the physically impossible and kinky acts but how the heck do you make the characters so much fun to read about? The KC-verse has been my favorite stories in a long time.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Sic transit gloria mundi and all, but my experience is that adding a third is usually more destabilizing than anything else.

Threadzless - 2 years ago

Nothing like a trio of friends boneing! Too bad it didn't work out, but at least it made for good memories

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

HannaLee didn't get to see the everyday grind of the Sophie-Pat relationship, so we didn't really get into it in the story, but there were some problems there that adding additional partners couldn't fix. It was just unsustainable, unfortunately.

That being said, I've got different plans for HannaLee's long-term romantic outlook. She'll be in a good place soon enough.

doomed - 2 years ago

That was so sweet and disappointing in a good way , like you built my hopes up and then cut my foundation out from underneath. Yet in a way that made me glad

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! I eventually plan to do more stories with Chrystal and Bijou transformed in public. Should have one or two in studio done soon though.

mirandascrazydream - 2 years ago

oh this was very fun!

Threadzless - 2 years ago

<3

walkingbyself - 2 years ago

Now that is some quick thinking! And once again boobs save the day. If only boobs could save the day more often!

ExistentialRowlet - 2 years ago

It worked this time

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks. Unfortunately, I have my doubts that we'll see the Shoemaker sisters again. This story was primarily a vehicle for the conversation in the first half, which is why I had that done for a year or so before getting around to introducing Kiveli. If the right idea strikes me, we'll learn more, but haven't had one that I like yet.

ryanshowseason3 - 2 years ago

I feel like a good continuation might be a similar song and dance but finding another like Kirsten. Then a negotiation for lives must take place. Good pair here though.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it. No plans currently for anything else with the Shoemaker sisters. We'll see if I get the inspiration at some point.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! Much obliged.

Plgc - 2 years ago

Love it!

Going to write a sequel? Is the power hereditary?

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! I've got to the point with KC where (like Monica & Harmony, the Kessler triplets, and the Zielinski sisters themselves) I have several stories started and none close to being finished, so I'm trying to take a break and focus on one-offs for a little bit. You should see a few more of those coming out in the near future.

Jack - 2 years ago

That was a very welcome change of pace from the supersized dicks of KC and friends. The Zielinski sisters are always a joy to read about, multiprey is great, and the Halloween theme was a suitable setting for this time of year.
I enjoyed. That was a good read.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Huh, I hadn't consciously decided to do significantly less post-vore, internal stuff, but you're right about it. Gonna have to rectify that. I'm sure no one was fooled by the twist in this one, but I wanted to play it straight, so I kept the narrative with the people on the outside.

TootCore - 2 years ago

I like these stories of yours where pretty girls are oblivious or nonplussed by their demise at the jaws of hungry monsters. I miss the post-vore some of your older stories had though. Would have been fun to see their side of the story past the gullet.

SSJBura - 2 years ago

Lol love the name parrot for this conjoinment!

Arfunkel - 2 years ago

I see, I just got confused by the final sentence in your description.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

So the conjoinment that was requested was between Bijou/Chrystal and a guy, which we got in this story. Not normally my cup of ea, but I figured it could be fun. Think I'll mostly stick with girl-girl conjoinment/absorption from here, especially with how dreadfully this story is performing.

Arfunkel - 2 years ago

Personally I am not interested in conjoined sex between the two sisters, so one of the people who requested that would have to comment on how they would want to see it. However, perhaps after the sex scene Bijou could mimic the scene where Chrystal crawls out of Birrani but this time crawls directly into Chrystal from Gary. I like the focus to be on the unique merges myself, for which this series has that potential.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Excellent! Gynophagiox, that's the one. Thanks!

notitthrowaway - 2 years ago

Oh, and I forgot to mention - excellent story, great work as usual. Worthy of its inspiration.

notitthrowaway - 2 years ago

I have to assume the series you mention in the description is the Gynophagiox trio? It's one of my favorites as well. You can find it here: https://web.archive.org/web/20040815142127/http://www.mindspring.com/~gyrodyne/2.htm

If it's some other series by WSD, let me know. I'd be very happy to learn there's something else like this out there, even if it's buried.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! I've got a few other ideas for absorption that I'll try to get to.

mirandascrazydream - 2 years ago

wow my favorite so far! And what a surprise ending.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Nice overlap! I was originally going to just have them go three-in-a-row and dedicate the absorption to a separate episode, but I'm glad I decided to include it as a teaser.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! I think they've got a fun dynamic. I always worry there's not enough vore to upload them, here, but they seem to have a good reception.

Scion - 2 years ago

this is actually an idea I've had for a long time, triple conjoinment, with the middle person being absorbed between the other two!

awesome story

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

KC's had that thought, so that may be in the cards, if she ever gets to spitroast a vore...

Threadzless - 2 years ago

Damn that was hot! Puts a whole new meaning to 'double penetration'. But I think the real question here is can KC cockvore someone while also spitrosting someone else?

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

We'll probably see a contest between hyper herms or predators at some point. It's on my list, but I really haven't developed it any more than just that one idea, so no scenarios or anything. I do have some more plans to do some stuff with all-the-way-through/transversing, but I figured that in this world, while it's not impossible, it's still not a standard sexual practice, even for hyper herms, so I'm trying to be judicious with its use. Still, there should be some more good stuff to look forward to in the KC-verse.

hornywing - 2 years ago

Ha! As someone who's grown up in the Midwest as well (even making that above trip) I agree - you will do a lot to pass the time as the miles drone on.

And I am very glad you have found a muse with these characters and decided to share with the rest of the class. I hope one of those stories involve a playful competition on how many woman they can transverse at one time before the sensations get too much and lose their composure. Otherwise I would have to write it and I am only trusted with crayons. :)

As you see, you have created a fun world to explore. Again, thank you for sharing it.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Man, you've hit the nail on the head. This series is meant to be fun and playful with minimal insecurities and inhibitions. I'm glad you're enjoying it, because KC is keeping me creatively energized like no one else. I've got another story done, waiting to upload, and another three started right now.

As for the geography, Google maps is a godsend. As for 17 hours (relative) -- it only felt like 17 hours because of how achingly dull it is to drive across Kansas (and I say that as someone who grew up in Iowa, so I know dull drives). It really only took a couple hours, it just felt longer. I don't think KC got into any trouble on the bus, but then again, a prehensile cock of that size can be pretty sneaky...

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Ha, thanks! It can be frustrating, but if you have time and the creative juices are flowing, you use what you've got.

hornywing - 2 years ago

I am really enjoying the KC Barnhart stories as ATWT / prehensile themes are rarely treated with this much fun and enjoyment. Even your world building is something I particularly appreciate. I look forward to each new update in this playful world as I am sure most people are.

I really dig the real-world places you pepper in - it makes me smirk as I read that I know or have been to the places you are alluding to. One point struck me though - 140 miles in 17 hours? My mind saw that and immediately tried to fill in a reason for such slow progress. Makes me think there is a tale to tell about why it took them so long to get there and the real reasons for the tape. :)

Also, As someone who's followed your work for years let me take the opportunity to thank you for sharing your works and letting the gears spin a little bit better in my own private fantasy world.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Cheers!

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

I figure this is a point where reasonable minds can disagree. I use the Fatal tag on stories with reformation on the theory that the absorption process was fatal for Rhiannon; she did not bodily return from KC's body. At least, it was fatal for Body #1. It's not permanently fatal, though, since she reforms in Body #2. I can see it going both ways. When the vore is permanent, I usually just stick with Fatal.

seducingangel - 2 years ago

I really enjoy seeing people with wheelchairs or who are blind included in all manner of stories, including erotic ones. Good on you!

ErRynArya - 2 years ago

Glad to see I wasn't the only one thinking this lol. If it's got reformation, then I don't think that counts as fatal because they came back from death. Doesn't fatal vore usually mean they die and don't come back from death in that particular universe?

SiHiUiLiSiEi - 2 years ago

Despite still loving the story, I do have to wonder if you'll have some sort of designation in the tags for stories that are fatal and don't feature reformation? In my mind those two are kinda mutually exclusive.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Much obliged. I'm glad I was able to get this all across.

Junogray - 2 years ago

Early on the place as a whole is given and various character positions are remembered, even when the story moves on from there they keep doing what they were doing off screen and I know for one I at least appreciate that. The internal thoughts of the character we're following and seeing things through are kept simple and relatable. Don't know if that's all of it but they stand out

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Glad you liked it. If you don't me asking, what did you find effective about this story? I appreciate the feedback so I can refine future stories.

Junogray - 2 years ago

Quite the strange feeling finding this story, but I loved it. Don't know how you keep making such effective stories

PlayerXxX - 2 years ago

Great. Thanks for tip. XD

Bradleymiddler - 5 months ago

This is kind of a weird comment to put on a 2-year-old story that doesn't bring the subject up, but I got to wondering the other day if the "woman-eating" preds in your worlds ever go after trans women, and what factors into that.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Much obliged.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! I don't have any plans for more stories with Jerry's, but I'll see what I can come up with.

Randomdude5 - 2 years ago

That was an enjoyable read. I hope that you continue this, because I think it would make a great series. I agree with Apostolos, I want Valerie to stay alive.

TW - 2 years ago

Well done. I have been on an amphibian kick of late, nothing serious, but this was fantastic. Well done.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks!

All vore in the KC Barnhart universe is fatal with reformation. Reformation typically takes a few hours and occurs at public reformer centers. If you have the Rekreatr app, you have some decision over where and when you’ll reform. It’s how KC has eaten Emma and Regina in multiple stories.

lorenzo64 - 2 years ago

Great story lines. And will the new story have no, little, or at least optional reforming?

BaseKing - 2 years ago

Finally the KC mass cock Vore we’ve been waiting for. I can’t wait for the next one

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Much obliged!

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

::taps nose knowingly::

Oh yeah, I'm planning on exactly that. Mayhaps, Regina's family will host a Kennebunkport clam bake, in true New England fashion...

TSaPA - 2 years ago

Now I'm just picturing her at a party where drunk partygoers are practically feeding themselves to her cock to see how long they can make it grow.

SansSeraph - 2 years ago

You're a fucking legend.

willowshat - 2 years ago

https://afro-ami.tumblr.com/post/644590908648701952/how-to-draw-afro-textured-4c-hair-an

Its about drawing, but it talks about a few good things.

Side note, but holy shit "that's such a cis-het guy thing to say" is such a dick move to write, jesus

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Great! I’ll give these a look over. Thanks!

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! As a small town Midwesterner, I don’t have a lot of the vocabulary for specific styles, and googling mostly gives me galleries of images without descriptors. I appreciate the feedback.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Good news! I started a sequel to this one this morning. Unfortunately, KC is one-in-100 million or so, to be a hyperphallic jerk AND have a prehensile dick AND be able to eat people. Regina’s not a predator, but the ubiquity or reformers in this world implies that other people are. We may meet some of them sometime.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

I currently have 3 more KC stories started and two of them involve multiple prey, so hopefully you’ll be finding out sooner than later.

thequietmanno1 - 2 years ago

I miss being able to access Down the hatch
really liked some of the stories on that one, with kate and her girlfriend or such

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Oh yeah, I was on those stories like crazy from like 2003 to 2005, did a lot of contributing around 2004. Didn’t do Teenage Voreaphile much, but was blown away by Throku’s mass vore work on Vore 101.

argdhal - 2 years ago

Wow, CYA on writing.com is how I got vore content before finding eka's portal. I remember Swallower at School too, along with I was a Teenage Voraphile and Down the Hatch

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

And I don't think you are alone, this is one of my more quickly popular stories in a while based on favorites. I'll try to keep pumping them out.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! There should definitely be more incoming.

Sira - 2 years ago

Very romantic!

Mechdragon1k - 2 years ago

Wife and husband deliberately uniting in a gut is not a thing you see often cool

Throku - 2 years ago

Part of my problem was that in order to know who was speaking (Since if you don't you get disassociated) I had to excessivly use the gameshow host's habit of using eachother's name. I guess one was around that is for them to have various gimmicks, or probably better yet that one spells out what they are actually saying and giving them different dialects, since that's the closest way to actually hear them. I'm guessing with your linguistics expertice, that is something you could pull off.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! I did think about having the story told entirely in the commentators' voices, but I decided that wouldn't be quite descriptive enough. I still think that this might have been a work (a scripted event), but like I said, it's meant to be ambiguous.

Throku - 2 years ago

Really liked this one, felt somewhat like a wrestling match but more serious and that insread of the fakery of real wrestling that they were just that much tougher.

I've tried to dabble with vore wrestling before but I scrapped that project way back... 2006 I think... heh.
More recently like only five years ago I tried to do a commentator story and wrote a couple but never published them.
Thought of that when you mentioned not getting the flow with elaborated descriptions. What I did was just write the dialogue of the commentators, nothing else apert maybe for an intro, but I think I let the commentators take care of that when they welcome the audience.
I bet you'd do a much better job of it though ^^

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! You always need one heel-ish commentator to downplay the bad guy's misconduct.

averyhillpeak - 2 years ago

Fun little short, liked how the one commentator was more concerned with how she's going to defend a tag team title xD

asuburb - 2 years ago

I especially like the munchies story. Melting giantesses sounds really hot.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! Body morphs/transformations are my other major paraphilia, so it's fun to combine them.

asuburb - 2 years ago

Omg these story ideas are really unique and hot ♡

RLord4268 - 2 years ago

Someone get turned into a fleshy donut!

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Oh come on now I want to do another one in this series but I have literally 75 other stories started and...well, that’s going on the idea chart

Alienraptor - 2 years ago

Yes please!! More please!!

Vmaster608 - 2 years ago

Cool.

Throku - 2 years ago

Heh, sounds like the scouts.
I got this badge "the newb" for eating my first unwilling, the "Hungry enough to eat a horse" for eating a centaur with a rider... Then there's the "Hungry hippo"...
...Still missing the "Clean house" though, you need to get a whole sorority for that one.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

I think we're going to see something similar in the third installment (and you inadvertently referenced another planned vignette in there). I've plotted out 6 more vignettes and have written one, so hopefully it won't be too much longer on the rest.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

That could be a fun bonding activity for the Consumer's Club. I'll keep that in mind.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it! Lot more in the sequels. Dana and Allison, though...sorry.

Threadzless - 2 years ago

Fluidification is certainly a new type of erotic device for me, and a pleasant one at that. Very fun story Danna and Allisons relationship is so cute <3

KrasnyiKoiot - 2 years ago

Yip, dropped a space there... gotta' love mobile!

KrasnyiKoiot - 2 years ago

Ambiguity is fine, to be sure! Fantastic work as ever,TwrchTwryth.

Sira - 2 years ago

Oh to be in such an orgy. Seems worth the risk~

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! I'll try to get back to them sometime soon.

mirandascrazydream - 2 years ago

a very fun read. Love these two characters.

walkingbyself - 2 years ago

I was half expecting Gary to Cock her at some point during the tit fuck. Still a good showing!

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Thanks! They'll definitely stay primarily F/F, but I have a couple stories with male conjoinment in mind. There's been some interest in that, though it certainly won't be the usual.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

I've got plans for Gary to join them in the future, but today he was just there to be introduced and provide some meat for the bonus content.

TwrchTwryth - 2 years ago

Nice! I'm a big fan of pulling up random prehistoric predators. I'll have to see if I can find the post.

Hagglesmite - 2 years ago

I did a post on the forums about prehistoric predators a while back and Daeodon was one of the beasties mentioned. Glad it got some love :)

TheDarkTraveler - 2 years ago

I would have gone all out on the groping, going to die anyway

corrbear - 3 years ago

Very fun!