matthewthawes - 5 months ago

if its like all the others either replaced by updated versions of deleted which one discrib it

Nebbie - 5 months ago

What happened to the picture that no longer exists?

Thatvikingguy - 5 months ago

Well if rarity needs a body for maternity wear she now knows who to call to get the proportions.
But maybe put her in the womb if rarity needs to model for a long time.
Good comic.

Spottythedragonwolf - 1 year ago

Awwe that's cute

matthewthawes - 1 year ago

nothing misused the tag

h21it - 1 year ago

What is being spoiled?

matthewthawes - 1 year ago

a casino boss or pit master etc holds children hostage while demanding payment. if the dept isnt paid in full she kepts the little ones for hereslf.

Deigo - 1 year ago

What was the full idea behind this story?

matthewthawes - 1 year ago

ya want it its adoptable

zargein - 1 year ago

I like this

matthewthawes - 1 year ago

Well, the first thing you'll notice is she's covered in silk soft, fluffy white fur. As you get closer, you see she stands on all fours, built like an animal with large padded paws.

Her hips look strong, her legs show thick muscle beneath silk soft fur and her barrel has a lean build

Her tail.
Is long, the same white color of fur covering her form, and ends with a tuft of pink and purple hair like a lion's, only much bigger. You notice it’s prehensile, as it's currently wrapped around her waist. Hiding her dignity.

Barrel and chest
Following up her belly, noticing she seems to be a marsupial as you note, she has a small fold across it. Following up to her chest, you notice her chest is very inviting and looks like it was made of soft clouds. Evident by the large pillow of fluff protruding from it

Meeting her gaze, you meet her bright emerald eyes as they study you. She licked her lips, showing briefly a mix of teeth; she seemed to be omnivorous. Her nose twitched a bit getting your scent and atop her head was a pink and purple mane that wrapped around her from her forehead to the base of her neck. A single horn seems to be aglow with a green-white aura and two rather large fennec fox-like ears flicked a moment. Her bright green eyes blink as she wonders why you're staring.

You ask her what she is. And she frowns and says. “I'm not sure,” she states as she gives a friendly smile, reminding you she’s an omnivore evident by her mix of teeth. “Hmm? Want to snuggle? I don't mind,” she states sweetly, as she seemed to get fluffier.

Spottythedragonwolf - 1 year ago

Ooo okie!

matthewthawes - 1 year ago

she has short story in description now

matthewthawes - 1 year ago

Nova padded silently through the forest, her soft paws barely making a sound on the forest floor. Her large, fluffy ears were perked up, listening for the slightest sound of her prey. She was hunting for small game today, and her keen sense of smell and hearing made her an expert hunter.

As she walked, she spotted a rabbit hopping through the underbrush. She crept closer, her tail held low and her body crouched in a hunting position. She was almost upon the rabbit when it suddenly darted away, but Nova was too quick. She lunged and caught the rabbit in her jaws, her sharp teeth piercing its skin with ease.

Nova held the rabbit in her jaws, savoring the taste of its warm blood. She was an omnivorous creature, and her wide-ranging appetite meant that she would eat almost anything provided it tasted good. She swallowed the rabbit whole, her body quickly digesting the small creature.

She continued to hunt for the rest of the day, her keen senses leading her to a variety of small game. She ate them all whole, her body quickly digesting the creatures and providing her with the energy she needed to continue hunting.

As the sun began to set, Nova made her way back to the burrow she had dug for herself. She curled up inside, her large, fluffy ears twitching as she listened for any sign of danger. She was a curious and explorative creature, and she enjoyed being out in the forest, but she also knew the importance of staying safe and finding a good place to hide.

Nova closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep, her body warm and full from her successful hunting day. She was content and ready to take on whatever the next day would bring.

Spottythedragonwolf - 1 year ago

Hell I love that character overall!

Spottythedragonwolf - 1 year ago

Friendship.

matthewthawes - 3 years ago

still working on punctuation

matthewthawes - 4 years ago

yeah i found an auto reader app that lets me hear where i need to put a coma etc or just attempt to redo a sentence have a better story coming soon

matthewthawes - 4 years ago

i think the transfer fucked up there aren't supposed to be spaces here and there and such

matthewthawes - 5 years ago

if i'm honest I've completely forgotten where there supposed to go but i'm working n it

Firefanatic - 5 years ago

Well at the very least, the format looks better but you still seem to have some trouble with run-on sentences.