tgawsome - 1 month ago

A bit late getting around to this, but thank you for the feed back!

I may make a sequel just depends on how the mood hits.

Goldendevil21 - 1 month ago

Thanks so much for this chapter. While not part of the original series, still loved this Swee Liberty story with clear connections to Helldivers 2. I have not played Helldivers 2 yet but from what everyone is saying, the game is amazing. Firing off nukes, using orbital strikes, launching yourself in drop pods. There are a lot of cool features in the game.

But enough about the game back to this story, can absolutely believe the people who made Helldivers 2 took inspiration from Starship Troopers with how the story reads like a propaganda piece and how Super Earth would absolutely be willing to fund experiments like Chista Moon to see what she can do. There is something to be said for ‘living off the land’ for a military of not needing to ship in rations and just fill that space with more ammo.

And do love how the story gives us some lore on Chista’s body (hope to see her gut in action against larger bugs) about how normal food does not satisfy her cravings anymore. Looking for any chance to stuff it, even with technicians whose greatest crime was watching porn. How it has the same acid power of the biters in the game. Awesome. Am curious how many scavengers, warriors and biters she can fit in her belly and still fight. And if the extra calories acts like an advanced healing unit for her.

Also love the pictures in the story. How her gut is ‘normal’ in the first two pictures but ballons out in the third with two meals. I do feel bad she has to wear a suit. That suit looks like it can get quite tight after a meal. Also, great job on the backgrounds in each picture. Well done.

And did enjoy how Chista thought Democratic Officer Johansson was so cool. Reminds me a little of the horniness in the original Starship Troopers.

Would love to see a sequel to this where we see how many bugs Christa can swallow and if they impact her performance in the field.

Silentlyred - 2 months ago

Speaking of guts I wanna rearrange hers

tgawsome - 2 months ago

That's high praise! I'm glad my detailed disposal hit the mark!

I'll have to show it in some side stories, but with her looks, someone in the crowd is usually willing to ask about companionship. (That's what landed Sofia in Chista's gut after all!) Free "food" offers are a little rare as it is a one-way trip, but I can see it happening. It would be a bit of a struggle for Chista to say no.

tgawsome - 2 months ago

thank ya for the comment.

While I did want a "heroic" character, I don't want Chista to be perfect. It makes for a more interesting character that way.

Glad you enjoyed the story!

Daduke - 2 months ago

Probably one if not the best disposals I've read. I love the detail of what all is inside her colon it makes it sound like her belly is massive moving cavern with various items about. The post officer sounded like he wanted to follow in Sofia's foot steps a bit. Does Chista recieve a lot of offers for companionship or free "food"?

Goldendevil21 - 2 months ago

Thanks for the new forth chapter in the A Bard’s Tale. A fitting end to the four chapter story.
Did really enjoy Anton’s introduction. While the focus is on Christa Moon, do really enjoy how you gave this random background character some development. How he took this job to get a steady salary in the Empire and not that dangerous out in the Frontier. Yet also shows a bit of is bordom where when Christa shows up, he is scared for his life but also excited. This is the biggest woman he has ever seen. Those breasts and belly deserve some attention.

And did enjoy how Chista is so good at knowing how her burbs taste that she can tell the difference between an orc, human, and elf. Getting so used to eating all these different races.

And this is a tone thing but thanks for not making any of these characters perfect. Chista might be getting more attention from this mailman than she wants when she desperately needs to use the bathroom but is not some innocent flower herself with how much she waves belly around and not even giving her unwitting meal a passing glance when exiting the outhouse.

tgawsome - 2 months ago

Chista's got a good grasp of whats going on in her bowels but alas only so many clues can be gleaned through layers of belly fat and piles of shit. Will Chista ever find out who that was? Unsure.

However, a hero can't let a little 'mistake' like that hold them back! They gotta push on and make it count! (Chista rationalization on why its not that bad she doesn't remember who she shat out.)

FRENKI8888 - 2 months ago

ok thanks for clarification.

tgawsome - 2 months ago

I think you misunderstood the purpose of this upload.

This isn't a story; it's a lore doc that explores Christa's digestive system, as laid out in the description; it's just an easy-to-read version of a template I filled out. It's not meant to be an attention-grabbing story piece outside the context that it lays out the mechanical aspects of Chista's predation for anyone new to the character to read through.

Like you said, it's set up like a video game info bio because that's basically what it is. It's a lore dump for someone jumping into my stuff without reading all the stories I've written first.

It may seem pointless and boring to you, but I had fun making it, and I like rambling on and on about my main OC. Those two things are the most important aspects of creation for me and, ultimately, why I post what I post.

Goldendevil21 - 2 months ago

Do admit, the art for Christa is great. Is so sexy seeing her huge breasts get even bigger but her outfit amazingly still keeps her decent.

Though the part where the story talks about how amazing Christa's digestive system is just got boring. In a video game, this knowledge is extremely important. Letting the player know how powerful a character is and what abilities they can do. But here, because Christa is not being compared to another predator, this feels a bit pointless. We know she is a dangerous predator. Hearing that being spelled out here was boring.

Though granted, did enjoy the extra lore how Christa's body produces a lot more saliva to help swallow her meals.

tgawsome - 2 months ago

Hey thanks for the kind words!

I have sort of dabbled with weight gain but right now its not a main component of my work so I don't tag it. I may dabble with it in the future but right now no real weight gain.

I do appreciate ya asking!

FRENKI8888 - 2 months ago

Hey. i like that you are pretty much the only making illustrated stories. I wanted to ask something doe. Does your shattered realms stuff include weight gain? You see sometimes my brain fogs up and im suddenly really bad at determining volume. It´s not tagged so i assume not however i would like to be sure.

Goldendevil21 - 3 months ago

Yeah, sorry about not picking up the magic Chista absorbed was something her body naturally does and is not done by magical artifacts. The story also never mentioned this was permanent change so thanks for clearing that up.

tgawsome - 3 months ago

Another detailed comment thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed the detail and little clues I put out for the world building and setting. It's always good to see people picking up some of the context clues about the world without having to spell it all out.

I did want to show Chista does try to resolve situations peacefully, though things don't often work out that way, but she's not too dismayed by that considering that usually means a free meal.

I do have to say that her amulet isn't responsible for the magic, and I'm not sure where you got that impression. It was more that her stomach just absorbed the elf's magic and that was then added to Chista's body.

Also the art is really good! Exoperfect does an amazing job as always, and if you look at both images back to back you can see her chest and hips do in fact grow a bit! Thought it was a nice touch.

As for Chista's reaction, I'd say she'd be impressed with the gain but dismayed that it wouldn't last too long considering its a boost from absorbing magic. I plan to show this more in some stories, but eating a magical person or thing adds the excess magic to the predator's person but their bodies will burn the magic off in time. So it's not a permanent gain.

Goldendevil21 - 3 months ago

Thanks for the small chapter. Really enjoyed it.

The first part I enjoyed was how good the worldbuilding is. Chista is showing off her job of pursuing criminals. This is a way she makes a living and makes sense considering how strong and durable she is. Shows us the town of Lunsk that death is common here. How not many people bat an eye of a giant just picking up an elf and eating her right there for everyone to see. Even introduced us to the concept that magic does exist in this world. Backed up later in the story when the elf was able to create a force field around her to protect against acid.

Even showed some characterization from Chista. How she was diplomatic at the start instead of immediately seizing her target. To get her to surrender but once that option was turned down, Chista immediately began to eat her. No longer caring she is going to make 20 Kopniks less. Even the tavern gets some character as while most looked at her belly, a few also looked at her huge boobs where the nipples could be seen in the artwork. Or how the bartender gives the bounty hunter a free drink for her services. Showing a combination of arousal and surprise as well as genuine thanks for dispatching a criminal.

As for the story itself, my favorite part was at the end. We learn that Chista’s amulet is not just pretty jewelry. It really is a magical artifact that can absorb the magic of others. And just loved reading how Chista was so drunk and enjoying her meal so much that she completely missed her butt and breasts growing. With her breasts doubling in size.

The artwork is also excellently done. My favorite was the little white lines in the second drawing around Chista’s breasts. At first I just thought that was them shaking from her movements and burps but was great to read how those breasts doubled in size.

And can see why you were tempted to keep going with this story in your AN. What would Christy's reaction be when she finally notices her transformation?

tgawsome - 4 months ago

Thankya for the kind words! Yes a good map can add so much to astoryand workd at a glance there’s a lot to see and explore out there!

trippy321 - 4 months ago

Fantasy Map! Fantasy Map! Yay!

All jokes aside, I love seeing fantasy maps, and this one is just perfect, the best kind of maps are the ones that leave you DYING to know about the parts you haven't been able to see or visit yet, amazing work!

tgawsome - 4 months ago

Thank you for the kind words!

A map isn't something you usually see with stories and settings of a more fetish nature but I think a good map will improve any story.

I can sort of see how Shattered Realms can be confused with fallout as they do have a similar post apocalypses vibe, though Shattered Realms is a Post-post apocalypses setting. As in the world ended, but its sense pulled itself back together... I'll def do another lore doc about that side of things soon.

Also glad you nailed the idea of the map being designed from the characters perspective. Leaves the door open for secretes though... if you study the map well enough you might spot a few interesting bits.


As for your questions, I'll do a proper write up on the Tsardom of Markovia, but if you want an idea of the problems they face... think Russian Empire late 1800s. That's where I'm drawing a lot of inspiration for that empire from.

So with that in mind, the answer to all your questions is: Yes.

Again thank ya for the detailed comment!

Goldendevil21 - 4 months ago

Wow. That is a great map. This definitely helps put my worry at ease with getting the Shattered Realms stories confused with the Fallout series. Just having a map is a great way to help the audience feel like this is a different location to New Vegas, West Virginia, and other famous Fallout locations.

And I am okay with this map not being 'set in stone' because that offers more of a mystery of this land that no one has fully explored and mapped it out. The characters in the setting have some idea what the land looks like but not a super detailed one.

And less to do with the map. Am curious about: managing to stay one step ahead of the Baradov's soldiers and local constabulary.
Am curious about this. Is the Tsardom empire at war with another kingdom and cannot send aid/expand in this hostile wilderness? Is the empire corrupt and incompetent? Is the empire simply so large that managing it becomes difficult? The story says these lands are filled with resources so can't be a money problem.

tgawsome - 3 months ago

Thank ya!

Glad to see all the editing and re writes paid off.

Alexios - 3 months ago

Your writing is INSANELY good.

tgawsome - 4 months ago

Thank ya very much! Honestly, we need MORE detailed digestive descriptions.

Tsavo - 4 months ago

I absolutely looove your digestive descriptions.

tgawsome - 4 months ago

I don't know, Dima seems like a clever man. Maybe he'll find a way to get back at Chista? Or maybe he'll accept the lose? Its hard to say with a character like him.


It was fun thinking on how Chista was going to play digestive detective to put together the events of last night, and I'm glad you enjoyed that.


As for our mysterious artifact/McGuffin, maybe Chista will find a clue along the way? Assuming said clue doesn't end up in her gut.

tgawsome - 4 months ago

Thank you!

Its always a blast to write about the deep gurgling bit like this. Gets skimmed over so often

Indighost - 4 months ago

Great writing, it's fun to enjoy a long, relaxing post-vore digestion.

Goldendevil21 - 4 months ago

Thanks so much for responding to my review. And so quickly too.

And yeah, never intended to make Chista the pure villain of the story. Just wanted to show that eating people has consequences. Sometimes good and sometimes bad. And Chista does have a good heart.

About this taking place in Shattered Realms, yeah, going to have to flesh out that setting a little. I thought this was Fallout because Chista speaks the binary language of "The Gods." How the environment feels like it takes place in a world ravaged by something.

And about the children, oh, was not suggesting Chista actually digested them, just ruffed them up a little until getting to safety. But if that is still to extreme, open to other events where Chista swallows someone(s) but lets them out before they die.

tgawsome - 4 months ago

woah this is a big comment! I'll respond to it bit by bit.

First off, I'm glad you are enjoying my story so far! Shows that all my effort and attention to detail is paying off.

Second all the little bits you listed off are among my favorites as well, so I'm glad you caught on to them, and saw the subtle hints in those lines. Especially the bit with Chista figuring out how many people were in her gut, based on how it felt. I figured it was a good way to "show" that Chista's been eating people for a while if she can 'feel' the difference between one or more people in her gut.

Third its always good to see the secondary characters getting some attention! Spent a good amount of time figuring out Veniamin and Dima's whole dynamic and role so I'm glad to see you noticed them.

Forth, I'm with you on a Pred having consequences for their actions. Its too easy to simply have the Pred just walk off into the sunset with a gut full of slush and that be that. True Chista isn't suffering immediate consequences (besides her own remorse for what happened) but we can see how there will be consequences both the expected ones in the "Yellow Slip" and well... no spoilers here!

I tried my best to make Chista as "heroic" predator with a grasp on morality (as warped as her hunger makes it). She has her principles and she's gonna stick by them because that's what a hero does!

Fifth I'm happy you noticed the text shifts! I try to add them when I can to help liven up the story and to help show whats going on. Italics for internal thoughts, green for stomach sounds, blue for the sign and so on. Glad to see its doing it's job!

Now as for your suggestions I do have a few things to say about them:

1. this story does not take place in the fallout universe. So no Canada, no rad scorpions, or even a wasteland.

I'm calling this setting the Shattered Realms but I gotta put more effort is making that clear.

So soon I'll work on addressing that. I even got a world map ready to post up.

2. I do have a outline for the wider story set up, and plans to introduce new characters. So don't fear!

3. Sort of personal one here, but I don't do anything involving fetish with children. period. I do get the idea of Chista using her gut for storage space but not gonna use children or any underage characters for that.


I want to again thank you for all your feed back! It really encourages me to keep doing this seeing such interest in people!

Goldendevil21 - 4 months ago

Thanks so much for another great chapter. Have not reviewed your story but wanted to show some comments about the whole story and Chapter 3 itself.

First, really enjoy how each chapter incorporates into the next one. With some other stories with a dozen main and minor characters, this can be a problem as you have to constantly jump around the story. Here, there is only one major character, Christa.

For example, like how this devourment of the singer Sofia felt natural. Sofia was warned both by her boss as well as her own common sense that mingling with a predator from up north full of alcohol was a bad idea. Rather than wait until Christa was no longer drunk, she decided to approach this woman easily twice her body weight and seduce her. Too bad for her that Christa becomes very suggestive under the influence and completely buy she would eat the singer.

And when Christa wakes up, her belly lets her know full well that she ate someone. The line, “At least it was just one person,” shows that Christa is so experienced at eating others that she can identity if she ate more than one person. A great way to show how experience she has become at eating others.

And do like the part where when Christa burps, she lets a metallic locket fly out and on to the ground. Picking it up to hopefully find out who she ate.

Really liked this part; The goop lathered on the bed sheets, sizzled through the soft fabric, and quickly dissolved a hole before seeping into the bed beneath, but that wasn’t a concern for Chista as she examined the locket.
“Guess my guts are getting stronger,” Chista muses as she runs a finger over the tarnished silver finish. There were markings on the back, but it seemed her stomach acids had worn them down to an illegible state.
This felt like a great way to show the audience that Christa’s body, specifically her belly, is getting stronger and stronger at digesting her prey. How even the metallic locket was damaged by her acids and even just the little acid that stuck to the locket burned Christa’s hand and the sheets.

Enjoyed the sexy vore scattered throughout the story. My favorite being; Chista grabbed the sides of her gut as she rolled to her knees, tightening her abdominals mid-way to help control the momentum of her belly as the viscous fluids sloshed about; Really like how this shows her belly hard at work digesting its meal with her stomach so full of acids that you can hear it sloshing around inside.

Even the supporting characters are well done here in this story with Veniamin and Dima both worried about their singer but once Chista’s gut makes its grand entrance, they both accept that Sofia will be jiggling on that woman’s ass for the rest of her life. Also helps show that the Wasteland is dangerous where death can come from anywhere. How even though Venaimin and Dima are devasted, can understand both their points of view where Venaimin does not want to start a fight with the Tsar but Dima is angry. He just lost a close friend and a great singer for his bar. Just really enjoy a story where eating characters actually has consequences for the main character. Read too many vore stories where the heroes can eat whoever they want and never face any repercussions for their actions.

And thanks so much for adding a file Chista fills out about the kill to her order. She really does feel bad for what she did to admit she ate and digest a person rather than push it all under the rug. And just love how her darker side wanted to paint her in a prettier light. How she did not get drunk but stuck to her morals and answered truthfully about being intoxicated.

A small note but thanks for adding some color to the document. The blue for the sign. The green for the burps. The italics for when someone is writing. Nice touches.

If I could make a suggestion on where to take the story (might not work if you already have an outline), give Christy a companion on her travels. He/She could be eaten after getting a little too close to Christy’s mouth but would help making the world feel big. How this person might be a fellow explorer who wants to see the Wasteland, both the good and bad. Or a native to the place Christy is at to help her better navigate the political/military factions she is bound to bump into. Maybe not New California but other factions.

This is another suggestion. Christa is walking through the Wasteland as usual. Gut empty but energy high as she continues her journey through Canada. Only to hear a scream and come rushing towards the source. Finding two kids with similar features being attacked by a swarm of Radscorpians eating two adults. Christa fights them valiantly. Shooting a quarter of them which is about a dozen, but the other three dozen surround Christa and the two kids. She tries to get the kids to safety but ever time she tries to escape, the venomous scorpions attack her and the two children. Her body can take it, but the two human kids are too fragile. Getting desperate, Christa swallows the kids into her belly and breaks off into a sprint. For once her stomach shielding the children inside her from dangerous scorpion bites. Getting them to safety before coughing them up and needing to calm them down before more predators are drawn to the sound of crying. (Just really like the idea of Christa using her belly as a storage space.)

tgawsome - 5 months ago

Thank ya!

As to your prediction... I'd say your got the right idea though may be a little time before we see a pay off for that. Also while I do have a broader story/plan its still fluid so things can change, but we shall see.

Lovingutitis - 5 months ago

Loved this chapter!

*MINOR SPOILER WARNING*
(just in case, not sure this qualifies as spoiler)

I really enjoyed the tension between their diverging expectations, and how, even after Sofia realizes her mistake, she still gets some pleasure out of the situation, despite the other emotions that start to take over. I'm hoping that my prediction about the ultimate conclusion of this incident is correct, at least to some degree, considering the pretty clear foreshadowing that occurs near the end. I really like Sofia, she's a keeper, and I think Chista's gut agrees.

tgawsome - 5 months ago

Sometimes taking the risk just doesn't pan out.

Glad ya liked the story!

TheMysteriousSadSack - 5 months ago

poor girl shouldve listened to her bandmate. At least it made for some awesome descriptions, good stuff man

tgawsome - 5 months ago

This is my first attempt at an internal shot. Lucked out and found the right Mod that actually had something I can use as a stomach environment. Took a bit of tweaking and still not to spec just yet, but I'll work to make it better.

ElJorro - 5 months ago

I do not think we have actually seen internal shots from you before.

tgawsome - 5 months ago

Yep! First time giving internals a try with the fallout 4 stuff, and it turned out pretty good.

Part of the update is a disposal scene that'll probably be a chapter away. (one more chapter, then disposal) at least that is my current plan.

Daduke - 5 months ago

An internal shot? Thats a first no? Loved this story before and I'm loving its update. Did you plan to end it in disposal this time?

tgawsome - 5 months ago

Your welcome! Glad you enjoyed it.

tgawsome - 5 months ago

Thank ya!

I do my best to capture all the dialogue and emotion the stomach can convey. ;)

Tsavo - 5 months ago

I do love your attention to detail with bubbly, noisy stomachs~

tgawsome - 5 months ago

It's here and improved!

trugabuga - 5 months ago

Oooh I was wondering if this would turn up!

tgawsome - 5 months ago

Thank ya!

Welcometocave - 5 months ago

Great work as always

tgawsome - 5 months ago

One day she'll find a toilet that's up to her specifications...

For the lore question, I'm not sure. I know it can be done but Chista hasn't spent much if any time around water she can simply wade through. So I'd don't think she would know how to.

SpookyScarySkeleton - 5 months ago

Chista really shouldn't be surprised about the woefully lacking state of toilets at this point. Oh and a lore question, can Chista still swim by brute force without normal buoyancy?

tgawsome - 5 months ago

It is! I decided to re vist the Bard story so we’ll see a revamped verson with more up to daye pics and writting.

Daduke - 5 months ago

Wait is this a prequel to the bard story? Heh it was love at first sight for Chista's belly if it is.

Welcometocave - 6 months ago

:eyes:

tgawsome - 6 months ago

The stomach had to voice its own opinion on the matter.

In the next part, we will see the disposal of those pesky Hobs.

Welcometocave - 6 months ago

Loved how her stomach kept distracting them. Excited for the next part.

ElJorro - 2 months ago

You have always gone for the more visceral aspects of vore content. Most Excellent.

Staleslice - 7 months ago

If only she could make a large meal of the Angler...

tgawsome - 7 months ago

A curious find indeed. I winder how its goong to come into play?

Lovingutitis - 7 months ago

I'm curious to see what's going on with that amulet.

tgawsome - 8 months ago

You have a good eye as your not too far off from the mark. I took a lot of inspiration from dnd in making this story.

Indighost - 8 months ago

Pretty cool, this is similar to a lot of the solo vore adventure roleplay I've done.

tgawsome - 7 months ago

Towers and Relaxations was over a year ago now I think.

Glad to hear it stands up to the test of time!

Hopefully I can match that energy with this series and with future stories.

trugabuga - 8 months ago

I still think towers and relaxations is one of the best stories you've made, and this story definitely had the potential to be as great.

tgawsome - 8 months ago

Thank you for the encouragement!

I'll admit I am taking a step away from 'tradition' going for a more monstrous prey type, but I'm glad my writing was able to carry that!

While I'll be exploring more monsterous prey in this story/setting, It won't be the main staple for every story/adventure. Plenty of tasty humans, elves, goblins, gnomes, hobbits, demi humans and much more to be sampled!

trugabuga - 8 months ago

Really enjoying this story so far. Not the biggest fan of hobgoblin preys, but your writing is always worth it. Keep going!

tgawsome - 8 months ago

Thank you! Wont have to wait too long for the next section.

Lovingutitis - 8 months ago

It seems like a good start. I'm looking forward to what's next!

IddlerItaler - 2 months ago

No problem! I know how motivating a good comment can be and I've been on a similar boat in the past.

Re:hobs I see. Nothing wrong with adding new creatures to your setting rather than reusing the classic ones, especially if you want sapient non-mook goblins later on. I imagine there'll be a proper explanation about hobs in the next chapter assuming Chista runs into them.

tgawsome - 2 months ago

Hey thank ya for the comment!

I'm glad the intro caught your eye, might be some foreshadowing for events later on there. About the name thing, Its supposed to be Lyosha, but It seems a few mistakes slipped past me.


And Hobs are not hobgoblins. I'm taking more inspiration from Hobs in the Fable games, where there small chaotic evil little gremlins, but in hindsight I probably should have just used Goblins. I was trying to avoid using the term goblins, but in hindsight should have just stuck with the tried and true fantasy monster minion that is the goblin.

I'm glad the screen shots and pic work! Its always a balancing act of having proper visuals and story. I assure you later on it gets much more refined.

Again I thank ya for taking the time to comment. Really helps motivate me to keep making these!

IddlerItaler - 2 months ago

Nice story, Chista's confident personality seems fun and the prelude with the magi and his overlord caught my eye. Just I'm not sure if the name is meant to be Lyosha or Loyosha, as both are used repeatedly.

Are hobs meant to be hobgoblins? If so I'm a bit surprised at Chista's disregard for them. Hobgoblins can be as a strong as orcs and very well-coordinated in battle. Then again, there's more than one way to depict them.

Speaking of pictures, the cleavage art was a most pleasant addition. And the screenshots help set the mood.

tgawsome - 9 months ago

Thats... wow... I think your right.

For once we see a Pred suffering some sort of consequences for eating someone.

Daduke - 9 months ago

This is fun. I dont think Ive ever seen a pred get arrested before.

tgawsome - 11 months ago

I know! CompleteAlienation did a fantastic job with this.

Welcometocave - 11 months ago

thats sick!

Lilykitty - 1 year ago

So cute, especially while shitting x3

Joeycnab - 1 year ago

I wanna feed her <3 Cute as hell gal!

IMAWESOME123 - 1 year ago

You right.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Well to be fair its DnD abilities that I've tweaked a little.

IMAWESOME123 - 1 year ago

I'm actually pleasantly surprised you gave Christa all of these abilities. Not in a bad way, it's cool seeing what your imagination can come up with without too many constraints.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

It is!

IMAWESOME123 - 1 year ago

aww yeah, it's all coming together.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Its a strong possibility

DeerlyDigested - 1 year ago

I’d be interested in seeing this story continued

IMAWESOME123 - 1 year ago

Life be like that sometimes, I appreciate the good reading experience.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

the least I could do after such a long drought of content on my end.

IMAWESOME123 - 1 year ago

The final piece came out really well, and thank you for blessing us with this holy literature.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

That's a good point. Thank ya for the feedback I'll make sure they see this.

tummytrouble - 1 year ago

i think if they wanted to use the thicker lines like picture A, they should use a (imaginary or otherwise) light source to help find consistency! it can really make a picture pop! so if the light source was from straight up, all the thicker likes should be where the shadows would be! it will come off as less cluttered and less random! i hope that makes sense ^^;

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Thank you for the feedback. I'll make sure they see this.

Raesetsu - 1 year ago

B definitely looks better. Looks cleaner.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Thanks for the comment! I'll pass your feed back along to them.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Thank ya kindly! Its a fun/cute little trait for Preds to have.

IMAWESOME123 - 1 year ago

Preds talking to their stomachs' like a sentient being is S tier work. Even in your smaller works you never fail to impress.

Tincan - 1 year ago

Marvelous!

Can't wait to read 'em!

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Thank ya! I put waaay too much thought into making vore 'logical' in the setting, but I think it helps make the stories more coherent if there's a reason for such a bizarre phenomenon.

It also opens the door to concept like the Hunger. Predators can be nice and kind in this world but that Hunger is always there lurking and waiting in the shadow of their mind. One slip up is all it will take and you're nice pred friend is sizing you up like the meat you are.

We'll probably see stories about that.

Tincan - 1 year ago

I love your world-building. It's always fun to see a fictional universe with structure an explanations for the sexy, sexy vore.

One thing that piques my interest is the horror hunger-esque aspects of, well, the Hunger. It's kind of a turn-on of mine to see a predator lose control of their appetite.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

I'm glad my mad ramblings were entertaining and hopefully informative.

ElJorro - 1 year ago

The images you create drew me in but what keeps me in is your wonderful writing!

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Hahaha! Im not so sure he wants to trade with anyone!

Blue5y - 1 year ago

Anyway I can trade places with Sam?

tgawsome - 1 year ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Ah thank ya!

AlexanderTheGreat - 1 year ago

Always a treat to see you writing again!

tgawsome - 1 year ago

thank you! its good to get back into the swing of things.

Blue5y - 1 year ago

A nicely drawn picture and an awesome story to go with it. Glad to see you're getting back into the swing of things!

tgawsome - 1 year ago

I’m glad this little bit is holding you over. I’ve put an update on how things are going on my blog that can give you an idea on when we’ll see more long form content.

Raesetsu - 1 year ago

Damn, I've missed your stories. Particularly the ones were you went into in depth digestive detail, with disposal mixed in <3. This is like water to a man dying of thirst, thank you

tgawsome - 1 year ago

thank ya!

The K - 1 year ago

Love the foul smelling belches in your .

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Thank you! Took a bit of a gamble going down a unexpected route but I think it turned out well.

Blue5y - 1 year ago

Huh, hat vore. You don't see that very often. Very interesting concept

tgawsome - 1 year ago

I'm fully aware of the impending update. I've taken all the precautions I can and backed everything up and made sure steam will not auto-update my game.

Worst case scenario I'll have to roll back to the previous version and reinstall if needed. It'll be inconvenient but not the end of things.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

It's good to be back! I do allow fan art and if you need references just DM me and I'll see what I can do.

somethingsomething2077 - 1 year ago

Hey TGA
I must warn you the vore.mod may brake next year with the Fallout 4 update they'll drop

Blue5y - 1 year ago

Glad to see that you're back! Can't wait to see what comes next. If I may ask, do you allow fan art of your characters?

Gage73t - 1 year ago

I enjoyed it an the pictures go well ^⁠_⁠^

I do hope to read more an I'd love to see more gurgles an burps lol

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Thank ya! It may be smut but dam it! doesn't mean we can't have quality grammar, and some plot!

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Thanks for the kind words. I'll be sure to keep working on things! Not sure what direction I'm gonna go but its going somewhere.

IMAWESOME123 - 1 year ago

Yeah, thanks for making them. Your stories are some of my favorites, mainly due to the amount of detail and diction you use in them. It's obvious you put a good amount of time into them and I am glad you are still writing. I wish you all the best and don't feel pressured to make anything.

Rionew - 1 year ago

I'm just happy that you're posting again so definitely take your time. I look forward to the next big chunk!

tgawsome - 1 year ago

Thanks! No disposal ( for now ) the story isn't necessarily over just this section. My plan is to release things in big chunks, and chop up my bigger stories. I don't have a set upload date or schedule but I do have plans to keep making stuff.

tgawsome - 1 year ago

I might do more with this story idea. Probably come back at a future time with a few more chapters with digestion and stuff. I don’t have a set schedule or time frame for that though.

Raesetsu - 1 year ago

I've missed your stories so much! Glad to see you back. Also, are you planning on going into the digestion bits in this one? Those were my favorites from you.