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Beware the Roommate By DjangoUnbrained -- Report

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A dude goes to visit his girlfriend and winds up getting to know her roommate a bit too well.

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Hello all, mega-long time lurker here, finally posting on Eka's. I've explored a bit of writing the last few years, and finally decided to upload one of my stories. I have a couple more nearly done, which I may upload depending on the response to this one.

This story is based on an idea/fantasy that I have had for a long time and eventually decided to expand into a story. Besides real world settings and individuals, the biggest inspiration came from one of my all time favorite vore stories, 'A Tale of Haute Cuisine' https://aryion.com/g4/view/694955 written by wolfSnack (https://aryion.com/g4/user/wolfSnack) for IrateLiterate (https://aryion.com/g4/user/IrateLiterate).

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shlurpay64

Posted by shlurpay64 2 weeks ago Report

This is a great debut for you and you were kind enough to include some scat for us! I feel like a nice alluring ass like Nat's is even better with some digested boyfriend being farted/shat out of it.

I loved Nat's personality as sort of an infectiously sexy mix of lust and affection and appreciated the joke early on about her stealing Claire's boyfriends.

DjangoUnbrained

Posted by DjangoUnbrained 2 weeks ago Report

Thank you so much! F/M leading into scat is my favorite genre on here so I'm glad to be able to contribute!

I'm glad you liked Nat's personality, too. Preds that are kind of flirty/seductive/acting-friendly-about-the-whole-turning-you-into-shit-thing are right up my alley.

shlurpay64

Posted by shlurpay64 2 weeks ago Report

That sounds like good news to me. I feel like an attractive woman taking a dump is one of life's most forbidden pleasures, even more so if it's the remains of a hot vore incident. Do you have any love for farting or weight gain as effects of digestion as well?

Maybe there's a certain balance that can be struck between lustful and affectionate behavior and the inherent fatality. Although overt savage cruelty is quite popular and undeniably hot there's a place for the Nat's of the world who have a more sensual/playful/maybe even sentimental take on vore.

Plus that ass is to die for :)

DjangoUnbrained

Posted by DjangoUnbrained 2 weeks ago Report

I like some weight gain, though its secondary to the disposal for me. Farting not as much. I do like the thought of a prey hearing the pred fart and that being a reminder of their fate as shit. But too much farting can put me off.

Agreed. Don't get me wrong, I love a cruel pred, too. But there's something great about hiding the inherent cruelty behind sweetness.

Keachie

Posted by Keachie 2 weeks ago Report

Great work definitely a good debut that’s for sure

DjangoUnbrained

Posted by DjangoUnbrained 2 weeks ago Report

Much appreciated!

TheAssAssassin69

Posted by TheAssAssassin69 13 days ago Report

Great story with everythjng i like in vore. I do wonder how a skull can get flushed in vore worlds though

DjangoUnbrained

Posted by DjangoUnbrained 13 days ago Report

Thank you! That is a fun question, plumbing must be top notch

NoChewing

Posted by NoChewing 13 days ago Report

Love fatal F/M vore with smaller pred and scat ending, having such a playfully seductive pred makes it even better. Amazing story

DjangoUnbrained

Posted by DjangoUnbrained 13 days ago Report

Yup, everything you described there is directly up my alley. I’m glad you liked it!