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After where the last story left off, Cleona decides to give her device a try. Teleportation across anywhere, even between worlds, the possibilities are endless. But first she needs to stop somewhere. No moron, she understands things could get dangerous. Might as well grab someone who can fix up the damage, and teach her everything there is to know about this thing. That way she can make her dreams a reality.
Luckily, in the form of the old scientists, assistant, she finds her mechanic. But there's one problem. With others soon to arrive, she needs to get out of there. Still to inexperienced with the device, and unable to teleport two seperate people at once, how is she supposed to smuggle out her newfound genius out of there with her.
This is a long one. Kinda like DragonBall where a single scene takes a long time, but hey fast forward if you want. The more detail the better I say. Through in Chapters. Share your thoughts and all.
Image credit to https://www.furaffinity.net/user/markstr/ for letting me borrow this one.
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Posted by Nightcrawler99 1 month ago Report
This was actually very interesting for me! Usually not into anthro stuff but this was well done. Some minor spelling issues.. nothing that a few read throughs wont fix and it Could have gone without the descriptive disposal stuff and gas passing... other than that was really fun and I want to see a sequel!^^ maybe she becomes prego with him for real and he gets out the normal way. but like... there's a time limit to the unbirth pregnancy and how ong it lasts... like between a week or two. Would be interesting to see them develop a relationship in her world after that, and her become very protective over him trying to keep him a secret form her world by making him stay at her place or go back in for another week long stay.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 1 month ago Report
Glad to hear it! I have a short epilogue in mind but that will likely be the end of this series for the time being.
Posted by Ascendingcard9 1 month ago Report
yes! i have been waiting for a continuation of this series, have not read it yet but knowing how the first 2 were I know its gonna be great.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 1 month ago Report
Awesome glad you're excited! Double checked and I saw your old comment on the last one again. Without spoiling much, I'm optimistic you'll like this one haha.
Posted by Ascendingcard9 1 month ago Report
yeah it was good, A sequel where he becomes her sexual partner unwillingly while she goes in a rampage would be a perfect endcap to the story. him finding out where his boss went as he fucks the assets he became while she slowly breaks him down mentally (chefs kiss).
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 1 month ago Report
Maybe something like that could work. I have a short epilogue in mind but not much after. I could see parts of that happening.
Posted by Indighost 1 month ago Report
Amazing descriptions, love it! Especially those lovely scents.
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 1 month ago Report
Awesome to hear! Scents as in that final part when lying in the bed or something else?
Posted by Indighost 1 month ago Report
I like the description of Cleona's musky, dirty and sweaty scents from the start to the end of the story. I hope for more butt related stuff with Cleona soon!
Posted by qazxswedcxswqaz31 1 month ago Report
Ah got ya nice. I have a nice short scene in mind for the epilogue (for when she finally takes a shower), but after which I’m not to sure. Honestly might end the series somewhere around there.
Posted by Indighost 1 month ago Report
Sounds good. All good things come to an end.