This is an intriguing story. I haven't seen someone write a story about dominance and submission quite like this before. At least, not anywhere on Eka's. Esmerelda is a character completely in control of herself and her surroundings. And yet, she has a very strong erotic streak, which she uses to the hilt. You used that to great effect, specifically with the way you paced the story. You made it a natural progression, growing steadily over time until a final release (in a literal way as well). Esmerelda seemed to draw it out for her own pleasure as well, making sure everything happened when SHE wanted them to. You know how to focus the story through the main character, and you did an excellent job with it here.
Well, glad to see you're back. I also liked the flow of your story. I must say, Esmerelda is a very unique character compared to what I've seen from most vore stories. She seems to dominate her prey like no other pred I've seen before! Please, do more stories with her! : )
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Posted by TW 19 years ago Report
Conn Very good story, flowed well from start to finish! (reposted by me since I had to make that one change...)
Posted by Jurodan 19 years ago Report
This is an intriguing story. I haven't seen someone write a story about dominance and submission quite like this before. At least, not anywhere on Eka's. Esmerelda is a character completely in control of herself and her surroundings. And yet, she has a very strong erotic streak, which she uses to the hilt. You used that to great effect, specifically with the way you paced the story. You made it a natural progression, growing steadily over time until a final release (in a literal way as well). Esmerelda seemed to draw it out for her own pleasure as well, making sure everything happened when SHE wanted them to. You know how to focus the story through the main character, and you did an excellent job with it here.
Posted by Tai 19 years ago Report
Well, glad to see you're back. I also liked the flow of your story. I must say, Esmerelda is a very unique character compared to what I've seen from most vore stories. She seems to dominate her prey like no other pred I've seen before! Please, do more stories with her! : )
Posted by Rich 16 years ago Report
What about the other meals? Any pictures with this one?