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Holly gets help from the forest with her new equine appendage.
Here's a different story, fantasy instead of scifi this time, and cock vore instead of oral vore. More of a mash up based on several other things that I really liked, namely:
"First Day Of Spring" by randomthefox (https://aryion.com/g4/view/1050421) Really great story, recommend checking it out.
Wyld elves from "Corruption of Champions 2" (https://www.fenoxo.com/) Wild blessing is just legally distinct Wyld Marks from the game. Doesn't have vore but it's the best text-based smut game out there.
And basically everything from fairyfud (https://aryion.com/g4/user/fairyfud) Lot of good illustrations showing fairies going where they belong, which is inside someone else.
This took a while, writer's block hits like a brick, didn't realize until I actually started writing... Also probably way too much world building and unnecessary details before the actual vore part which is only like a quarter of the story.
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Posted by Slayerhero90 1 day ago Report
elegantly implementing worldbuilding can be tricky. the urge to explain how everything works in objective detail can be so very tempting, but sometimes you just need to trim away the stuff that isn't immediately relevant
so, like, we don't really need to hear about the uses and rarities of other blessings like wings or claws. fundamentally, the concept of wood elves having animal aspects is not a particularly difficult concept to get across, and this story doesn't do much
ALTERNATIVELY, if you really do want to keep that stuff in, you can work your worldbuilding into holly's thoughts, allowing us to get a little more into her head. does she envy those winged elves? does she wish sometimes that she could have a different one? does she think her blessing is better than some other blessings?
that being said, once this got going, it was really nice! holly's in for a fun surprise when cherry starts multiplying
i also noticed that mention of the sister. certainly intrigued to find out about her horsiness
Posted by Slayerhero90 1 day ago Report
doesn't do much with the concept outside of the central character* sorry i forgot to finish that thought
Posted by kittywumpus 1 day ago Report
Yeah I like to include details so its a bit more interesting when writing but it can get ramble-y real fast. Some are very much deliberate for setting up a potential sequel, like the mentioning the family despite them not showing up. But some is just fluff.
Posted by charlinia777 1 day ago Report
Very cute! Who doesn’t want their girlfriend to be a tiny fairy who lives in your balls.
Posted by kittywumpus 8 hours ago Report
The perfect size for just stashing her away right where she belongs. Love is stored in the balls.