Her Deadly Curiosity
By iliketoread -- Report
After witnessing her best friend Hazel swallow a Mini alive, Erika was left in a state of confusion and shock. As much as she tried to rationalize Hazel's morbid deed, Erika couldn't help but gain a sense of wonder about what her friend had done. Before getting a chance to properly interrogate Hazel about it, they catch two Minis with potentially malicious motives hiding in Hazel's bedroom. Will Erika prevent Hazel from punishing the two intruders or will her curiosity get the better of her?
edit: "The Incident" is something that I have not written about that takes place in the future. It does not refer to anything in this story or the previous. Hope that makes sense.
This story is the third part in a series I have dubbed 'the Miniverse'. You do not need to read the previous stories to enjoy this one but it is highly recommended. (I strongly recommend reading Her Deadly Desire before this) This story contains multiple preds, one partially unaware, the other aware. The disposal in this story is explicitly marked. All characters in the story are 18+
So this story was written and posted way later than I planned, considering the previous part was posted a year ago. Anyway, this story turned out okay I think. My technical goals for this story were to keep it below 20k words and not spend too much time leading up to the good stuff. Personally I think I accomplished those goals. As for the actual narrative part, I'm not super happy with what I came up with but I think its rather fun. I think its enjoyable to read. I already know this is one of those stories where readers may say that I should have emphasized certain aspects more. SPOILER AHEAD: Such as describing Heather Fischer as more of a milf and fetishizing her motherhood/age. Or making the scene at the end with Hazel and Erika more gay. Of course I could be making those arguments up in my head but my editor did also make those comments. Also for those who enjoy disposal, I hope you like this one ;)
This story is 18,000 words. Please enjoy and if you have any feedback or comments, please let me know below or dm me! Ideas for future installments is appreciated as well. Cheers!
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Posted by dclover2025 1 year ago Report
another great story! and i’m ngl, i’m gonna need some more stories with hazel’s mom, heather lol. but all in all, another great entry to the series.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Damn, Hazel's mom has got it going on.
Thanks!
Posted by GGO 1 year ago Report
Great job! This is going into the favorites for sure!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
:D
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 1 year ago Report
Yay! Another one of your amazing giantess vore stories! Really excited to read your unaware giantess vore story. This is new!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Hope you enjoyed it even if the unaware part wasn't the focal point of the story, cheers!
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 1 year ago Report
This still was a great unaware giantess vore story to me! Hazel’s mom thinking that a tiny little thing in her stomach is nothing more than a little fish was certainly magnificent. Sometimes, unaware vores really hit the spot even when it is not unaware of something that the giantess ate, but what/who exactly is that something. Now Hazel’s mom will never know she digested a tiny little girl into a log of browns, thought she might (if she care enough) recall that one fun time with the fish. What a beautiful story this is. Hazel and Erika are great giantess preds too! Really loved all the character dynamics and disposal scenes for Hazel’s mom (Heather—I don’t know why but I am just keep calling her Hazel’s mom lol), Hazel, and Erika. This was a great read! Hope to see more like this!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Yeah I do feel bad tagging this story as unaware considering it is sort of unaware, but like, its not at the same time? Regardless, hopefully the mom part managed to 'feel' at least some what unaware even though it wasn't purely unaware. A lot of people seem to really like the idea of a mom pred character, it is something I really need to take note of lol. And happy to know that you enjoyed the story as a whole!
Cheers!
Posted by koradile 1 year ago Report
Omgggg I am in love with this one!!
Okay first off, love the dynamic between Hazel and Erika. I always love the stories with the bad influences, it’s probably one of the most entertaining dynamics in my eyes. Just having a person more malicious being a little devil on the shoulder is always gonna be great to me.
Loveddd both vore sequences! I love the unaware teasing and just how casually the unaware vore was done. All the emphasis you put on Hazel being disgusted that she’s getting turned on from her own mom eating Sophia, and trying not to be to the point where she had to get away from her was also an amazing detail that was really enjoyable. And Heather teasing Sophia unaware on the outside was such a cherry on top. Sophia just being covered in swallowed food from Heather was very entertaining.
Hazel teasing Maya with Erika’s body was nice, and the fact Hazel was pretty much begging her to do certain things. Maya got so teased and toyed with. And yeah, it could’ve been even more gay, nothing beats poorly concealed homoeroticism. it still was great how it was… I will not be greedy.
Thought the disposal scenes were really good as well. I definitely think it’s a good thing you didn’t just choose one of them to do. You honestly held off doing disposal in your stories for a while, but I’m sure it catches up to everyone eventually, haha!
Heather was absolutely fantastic also! She was such a great pred. We finally get a mother pred from you… I’m with the other commenter, you would certainly see zero complaints from me if she ever returned.
In general, you wrote Hazel to be such a complete perv and weirdo in the best, most entertaining way possible LOL.
Sorry if I added a lot, but loved the story, great work as always!
Good luck on whatever your next work is!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Glad you loved the dynamic between Hazel and Erika, I definitely found that part of the story to be the hardest part to write. Still sorta feel like I made Erika far too willing to do such a terrible deed but oh well, we need to suspend our disbelief somewhat in stories where tiny people are getting swallowed alive lol.
Also happy to hear you enjoyed both vore scenes. I had a lot of trouble trying to balance them between another, as in I wanted the Erika one to be the climax so I made sure to tone down the Heather one. But like I still wanted the Heather one to be impactful and fun to read... if that makes sense.
Yeah I feel like I blue-balled a few readers with the previous few stories I've written with the lack of disposal scenes. Hopefully they forgive me and accept these three scenes as compensation lol.
Damn... Heather has two comments already. Maybe I do need to start investing in mother preds...
Nah long comments are the best, no better way to know how people feel about what I wrote. I'm always trying to improve! Thanks for the great comment and also can't wait to see what your next work is!
Posted by urbanfunkraider 1 year ago Report
Loved this! Cruel in all the best ways. Excited to see this story continue
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by ProbablyNine 1 year ago Report
This is amazing! I'd been so eager for the followup to the last one, and this didn't disappoint. You write vore so well, it's nuts. Hazel and Erika getting the sole focus this chapter was great, too. Their relationship is honestly really sweet, and contrasts great against the morbid nature of what they've done.
Really well done! I can't wait to see what's next!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Thanks! Yeah the Hazel and Erika part was definitely a highlight for me to write. Pretty fun dynamic to write for sure. Cheers!
Posted by Drakovyr 1 year ago Report
Your story definitely never disappoint!
Your writing is so good that's probably the first time I actually enjoy unaware vore so much !
As usual your mouth and swallow descriptions are perfect, it lasts the right amount of time, the swallows might feel a bit too easy for me, but that's just me being nitpicky :D
As you said in an earlier comment maybe Erika accepted to kill someone a bit too easily, but hey, it's a tradeoff I'm willing to read if it means she'll get to swallow a tiny !
Hazel's mom is definitely a great surprise, I don't think I ever saw that kind of character in another story of yours ? (Apart maybe from roleplaying for tinies, but the character treatment was different and i wasn't a fan of the fact that swallowing tinies was so casual)
All in all, 10/10 story,
100% would put tinies in hazel purse again
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Lol, yeah I admit that this time around I didn't make the preds struggle as much with swallowing as I normally do. Especially with Erika who was probably swallowing something that big for the first time ever. Yet I think I did it because I didn't want to slow down the pace of the scene. Felt like I needed to stay on track with Hazel's pleasure and Erika's reactions. But of course I understand your feelings about it.
Yeeeeaaaahhhh... Erika maybe convinced herself too easily to do it but like you said, if it means getting to read about a tiny getting swallowed, I'm all in as well lol.
Interesting to know that you're not a fan of tinies getting eaten casually. It seems to be pretty popular on this site. And yeah, although I do really enjoy mother preds, I just never felt like I could write them as well as others so I normally don't attempt to write stories with them. I feel I don't make them feel 'motherly' enough.
I wish I could donate some tinies to Hazel's purse as well.
Happy to hear you enjoyed the story, cheers!
Posted by Drakovyr 1 year ago Report
"Interesting to know that you're not a fan of tinies getting eaten casually. It seems to be pretty popular on this site."
Yeah, I like when the vore part is something special, when tinies are plenty and are just considered as bugs by most of the population it has less impact imo.
That's why your first Vore university is probably my favorite vore story (noone expect it to be possible and those who would like it to happen know how wrong it is...+ The betrayal, + the oblivious teacher) and youthful curiosity is close second :D
Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report
Wait, did I miss something? The story starts with a summery of how Hazel ate Olivia, then we get a transision saying "2 Months and 3 Weeks BEFORE The Incident" But the minis still talk about the incident which isn't supposed to happen for a nother 2 months as if it's already happend? Help me understand, cuz I think I missed something.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Ah, I can see how that can be confusing. Each of the three stories currently involving these characters always start with it saying "X Time before The Incident".
"The Incident" is actually something that hasn't happened in the series yet and it is not referring to the Hazel situation at all. Its the big climax of the series involving Ashley, Cara, Hazel, and Erika that will happen in the future.
Best thing to do is literally just ignore the "2 Months and 3 Weeks before The Incident" completely. It will only make sense once I post a story called "The Incident". Thank you for bringing it up though, I totally missed that this sort of misunderstanding could happen.
I was just trying to explicitly show readers when each story took place in reference to an event that happens in the future. An event that I haven't written about yet. Hope that clears up some of the confusion.
Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report
Ok I got it, thanks for carifying.
Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
I love this kind of scenario--where two friends stumble across tinies and one pressures the other into swallowing one...it's just so naughty while also being so believable.
It makes the whole thing so playful which opens up such great opportunities for teasing. Like on her own not only would Erika never think to swallow a tiny, but when getting egged on by Hazel she'll go as far as to tease her prey about becoming her shit haha. It's so funny (and hot) how even nice girls can be so cruel once they're able to justify their actions!
Good shit, and I could tell you worked on the pacing, didn't take long get to the good stuff. And I'm very curious what "the incident" is!
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Yeah two friends teasing and playing with a tiny is always a good time. Feel like I should have elaborated a bit more on Hazel's and Erika's dynamic with one another. Oh well. "The Incident" should be coming soon. Really depends if it or vu6 ends up taking priority.
Cheers!
Posted by hatter 1 year ago Report
Just saw this one and really enjoyed it. I like the girl's teasing dynamic a lot. I know all too well how difficult it is to make this sort of thing feel plausible! I thought you did a good job with it.
Also, the unaware sequence was neat and had a rather unusual matter-of-factness to it which I thought was refreshing. The way it was written made it feel unceremonious which actually enhanced the scene in an interesting way.
Hazel's the best, it's fun to have an outright pervert pred.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Interesting note on your thoughts of the unaware scene and yeah Hazel is a lil' perv lol. Thanks for taking the time!
Posted by Barmin 1 year ago Report
The scenes where Hazel roughly washed Sophia and where she teased Maya were truly arousing. I’m convinced that everyone on this site must be a hopeless masochist :D
That aside, if Ashley were to find out about this whole series of tragedies, she might fall into deep distrust of people. She has already been hurt by Ethan’s betrayal, and when I imagine the possibility that she could suffer a blow to her spirit upon learning that her two best friends have secretly been engaging in such cruel acts, I can’t help but feel very sorry for her.
Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report
Makes you wonder if and when Ashley will find out about all these cruel acts her friends took part in. Feel like if it does happen, it'll be a true test in friendship lol.
Thanks for the comment!