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A Mother's Day Suprise

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Penny and her adopted tiny brother Quinn have made sure to prepare a dinner surprise for their mother on Mother's day. But disaster strikes when Quinn finds out the appetizers he's baked turned out terrible. Desperate to give his mother the best surprise possible he looks to his older sister for guidance. Not a fan of sharing her mother's attention with Quinn, Penny deviously leads her brother to the dangerous idea of hiding in his mother's food in order to surprise her. What could possibly go wrong?

Happy Vore Day y'all. This story is based off of comments in a blog post I made a bit over a month ago. I asked fellow readers what I should write for 8/8 and I ended up picking an idea that was a combination of what dclover2025 and GacoMichael had proposed. Mainly selecting it due to 'mother pred' requests from previous blog posts. I actually really loved other ideas in the blog post and want to try writing them as well. So thank you all to those that took their time to write ideas down, I seriously appreciate it.

This story contains a young teenager character that gets eaten. If that bothers you PLEASE do not read this story. The story is 13,000 words in length, so relatively short compared to what I normally do lol. And as always, I'd love to hear what you think of this story and I welcome all comments and constructive criticism. I do try take feedback in consideration for future stories I write. Cheers and enjoy!

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dclover2025

Posted by dclover2025 1 year ago Report

Glad that I served as a contributor to the overall idea of this story. And just in time for 8/8!

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Thanks again for the idea!

GacoMichael

Posted by GacoMichael 1 year ago Report

I'm so glad you took my suggestions into account! I'll read the story when I'm free, but I'm sure I'll enjoy it with all my heart! After all, your stories never disappoint.

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Hope you end up enjoying it!

AlbertKwon9182

Posted by AlbertKwon9182 1 year ago Report

Yes! It’s always a joy to read your giantess vore stories!

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Thanks!

koradile

Posted by koradile 1 year ago Report

Good workkkk, simple and nice. Good you made the deadline!
Everything you touch turns to gold!

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

It took some grinding at the end but I managed lol. Thanks!

Cancer

Posted by Cancer 1 year ago Report

Great story, really wish you did a version with a full scat scene.

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Yeah I would have added a scat scene but I just wasn't feeling much inspiration by the time I completed this story.

Miridium

Posted by Miridium 1 year ago Report

So Jessica may have adopted another tiny? I wonder if she'll eat them too. Wouldn't surprise me.

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

She wouldn't... right? Up to the readers imagination I guess :)

2KFSK

Posted by 2KFSK 1 year ago Report

Oh man, this is one of the best stories I've read in months. It reminds me of Observer and Survivor in their respective primes, two now-abandoned writers who both were incredibly good at creating these darkly ironic vore stories with irredeemable preds. I'm so glad I found your stuff, I'll need to dig more into your back catalogue!

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Thanks! An honour to be compared to those guys. Hope you end up enjoying any other stories of mine you come across!

pendingingdelet329234b9

Posted by pendingingdelet329234b9 1 year ago Report

Observer my beloved. My biggest inspo for real.
I got some of the Observer vibes from this story as well.

pendingingdelet329234b9

Posted by pendingingdelet329234b9 1 year ago Report

Oh, this was fun! I'm not usually one for macro/micro, but this one had such a lewd concept and was very well written. Bravo

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed reading it!

nosuspicious

Posted by nosuspicious 9 months ago Report

Love this. Jessica’s starting to lean into it when she accepts the situation is awesome. My favorite way to do an unaware pred.

Would love a sequel about the next boy she adopted. It feels like a natural progression that she would want to allow another such incident to happen after her attitude about this one.

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 9 months ago Report

Thanks! Yeah a sequel does sound like it could be an interesting scenario. I'd feel almost bad for whichever tiny boy she'd adopt next...

nosuspicious

Posted by nosuspicious 8 months ago Report

If you take commissions I’d be interested in that.

iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 8 months ago Report

Appreciate the interest but this is more of a hobby thing for me. Def don't wanna disappoint people who pay for me to write something for them lol

nosuspicious

Posted by nosuspicious 8 months ago Report

No sweat. If you ever decide to do it for yourself, I’m sure lots of people would be interested in what happens to Jessica’s next adoptee, no matter where you go with it.