Expand Add to favorites | Full Size | Download Barriers of Nature By Akyana -- Report My second story... reviews would be great please
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Posted by Hagglesmite 18 years ago Report
Very interesting story, and a nice read ^^ This story is a bit hard to read because the dialog is sometimes muddled together a bit, and sometimes the details follow the same route. Other than that, however, this was an excellent story. Nice work!
Posted by Akyana 18 years ago Report
Thanks I've been wanting to write more to get better... but I've been having some writers block
Posted by zwolf 18 years ago Report
well hopefully it passes soon cause i can hardly wait!
Posted by helldragonx6 17 years ago Report
I would have to say not bad, although adding a sex seen in it would be good not just oral, but altogether great job.