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A thing I tossed up during my vacation. A student who is failing biology helps his teached with some special classes. M/F & F/F UB, maeusophilia & big bellies.

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gr8fzy1

Posted by gr8fzy1 14 years ago Report

Very nice! HIGHLY enjoyable! Keep it up!

EGIL-THE-FAROE-ISLAND-BOY

Posted by EGIL-THE-FAROE-ISLAND-BOY 13 years ago Report

NICE STORY RADIJS I HOPE THAT YOU IL MAKE IT MUCH LONGER AND BETTER AND I HOPE THAT IT IL BE SOON

max123

Posted by max123 13 years ago Report

nice story.so ar u going to continue or make part 2 to thois story?

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 13 years ago Report

I'm planning to make a sequal. But I'm right now, pressed for time, creativity and inspiration.

If you, if anyone has good ideas for this story, you can send them to me as a PM, or post them in the UB section of the forums. I'm certain to see them there.

Jacquelope

Posted by Jacquelope 13 years ago Report

Wow. Absolutely awesome. Unbirthed by your own teacher. This is my new fave UB story! :D

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 13 years ago Report

Yeah this is still one of my favorite stories. I should pick it up again and continue with it.

EGIL-THE-FAROE-ISLAND-BOY

Posted by EGIL-THE-FAROE-ISLAND-BOY 12 years ago Report

HERE IS A SUGJESTION MISS BUTTS UNBIRTHS BILLY & KATIE AFTER SCHOOL AND DISIDES TO KEEP THEM IN HER WOMB FORE ABOUT A WEEK AND WHIL THE ARE INN THE WOMB SOME THING HAPPENS

SO RADIJS WHAT DO YOU THING ABOUT MY IDEA

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 12 years ago Report

I think your caps lock key might be mallfunctioning.
At the moment I doubt however that the the two protagonists to get involved with the teacher for a while. Though the idea might be interesting I don't really see how it would fit in the plot without throwing causality out the window.

bdgfksfsgfbs321

Posted by bdgfksfsgfbs321 12 years ago Report

maybe you second part be about the student in senior year of high school and that teacher in that biology class ask him to come to his house, she unbirth him and pregnant and later give birth to baby boy and later his girlfriend comes looking for him and then teacher unbirth her too.

bdgfksfsgfbs321

Posted by bdgfksfsgfbs321 12 years ago Report

maybe you second part be about the student in senior year of high school and that teacher in that biology class ask him to come to his house, she unbirth him and pregnant and later give birth to baby boy and later his girlfriend comes looking for him and then teacher unbirth her too.

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 12 years ago Report

I can't understand what you're trying to say. Are you using an online translator to post this?

bdgfksfsgfbs321

Posted by bdgfksfsgfbs321 12 years ago Report

Misschien heb je tweede deel worden over de student in het laatste jaar van de middelbare school en dat de leraar in dat biologie klas hem vragen om te komen tot zijn huis, ze unbirth hem en zwangere en later de geboorte van baby jongen en later zijn vriendin gaat op zoek naar hem en vervolgens leraar unbirth haar ook.

bdgfksfsgfbs321

Posted by bdgfksfsgfbs321 12 years ago Report

Hey ik vroeg me af of je zou toevoegen tweede deel van het verhaal extra krediet?

ILLEGAL ALIEN 93

Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 12 years ago Report

This is one of the best Unbirth stories i have ever read i hope that part 2 is comming soon

yriko3816

Posted by yriko3816 10 years ago Report

many thanks for your story!!!

Imrhys

Posted by Imrhys 10 years ago Report

OMG, I wish you had continued this. A few typos and issues here and there, but all small things and rare. Yes, you could have left this as shorter true 'short story' but this extended version was a delight to read. But after four years I'm fairly certain this project is dead v.v

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 10 years ago Report

Unfortunately yes, most of my projects are on hiatus or over. I am not as prolific in my writing as I used to be. It is still one of my favorite stories but I find that I don't have any ideas or insipiration where to take this story next.

Quarren

Posted by Quarren 10 years ago Report

Did you ever think maybe picking someone who writes stories, giving them this as a base and saying 'Go with it?'

I mean if you're done with it, that might be an option. If you're not I'd LOVE to see more

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 10 years ago Report

I've never thought of specifically handing anything over. But if someone feels inspired to write a sequal to one of my stories they're welcome to do so.

ILLEGAL ALIEN 93

Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 8 years ago Report

I really hope that you can continue this awesome unbirth story soon because I am weary curious to know what is going to happen next to Billy Katie and Victoria Butts

Bookie

Posted by Bookie 6 years ago Report

This story was positively amazing.
The android babies kind of fall into the uncanny valley for me though.

TheRenic

Posted by TheRenic 5 years ago Report

I would love to see a sequal

peypey18

Posted by peypey18 3 years ago Report

Even tho this story is 10 years old, its still one of my favorites on here

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 3 years ago Report

That's great to hear. I'd love to write more some day. But I just haven't been able to find the time or the inspiration.

Nightcrawler99

Posted by Nightcrawler99 1 year ago Report

I know this was posted a while ago but I’m like peypey18. This is and continues to be one of my favorite story of yours.

I had some ideas for a sequel to this if you are interested.^^
I don’t wright very much but I get ideas I think would make for great material.

I can never find time to really put any of it to good use though, so I figured I’d start giving ideas away in the hopes of spreading inspiration to those in need. Let me know if your interested. ^^

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 1 year ago Report

I won't make promises, but you can give me your suggestions

Nightcrawler99

Posted by Nightcrawler99 1 year ago Report

Thank you for replying. I appreciate it.
A sequel to this story would be very nice to read, so I figured I'd share the thoughts I have and just see what happens. So anyway, here s what i was thinking.


What if Katie is behind in the class, or Billy is behind in another class by the time summer break roles around?

To catch back up they would have to stay with Victoria at the school during the break to get their grades up.

This could make for an easy start to keep the story going.

To spice things up further I was thinking Billy and/or Katie's parents could play a key role in the events to come.

To be more accurate, what if Billy and Katie's parents find out about their new love life and their failing or fallen grades? Things could get extremely heated!

Miss Butts could be their only salvation as no one would think to look inside her to find them if they decide to elope or run away to be together.

On that note however, asking this of Miss butts is a bit risky.

Sure they would be safe and free of their oppressive parents but she would be in control again. Unbirthing is addictive for her and it could lead to a much longer entrapment this time around.^^ I can see her giving in to temptation after just a couple days of carrying them around and pretending she's just preggers.


This is all I got at the moment. Its not much but at the very least its a nice idea if I may say so.

Radijs

Posted by Radijs 1 year ago Report

The idea has some potential.
I won't have time to write anything in the foreseeable future though.

But if you want to take a crack at it you have my permission.

Nightcrawler99

Posted by Nightcrawler99 1 year ago Report

Thanks for replying and thanks for the offer!^^
Was beginning to worry you forgot me.
That aside, I can fully understand you not having time to make such a story.

I’m sort of in that position as well.
Between work and my creative juices all but evaporating, I currently find myself in almost stalled state as well.
Currently working on a small pet project on the old Writing.com sight right now. It’s hard to get the page to load but after hitting the refresh button a random amount of times it comes alive.

Trying to piece together a story from the scraps and it seemed to be coming along little by little.

Luffredd

Posted by Luffredd 3 weeks ago Report

I keep coming back to this story every couple of years. It is by far my favorit unbirth story :D great job