Vore University: A New Beginning
By iliketoread -- Report
It’s been over eight months since Jack had last seen Emma. Assuming she was to be imprisoned forever or even killed, the young man struggled but did his best to move on with his life. He got a new job, new friends, and even obtained new crush. Each helped him that little bit to bring the optimism back into his life. Unbeknownst to Jack, his new lifestyle and new desires are about to be challenged with the giantess’s return and he’ll experience first-hand that mixing male indecision and female jealousy with a chaotic sorority party only leads to bad results.
This is the 6th story in the Vore University series. It sits at around 26k words. I do understand this story takes a while to get to the good stuff but I really felt like it was needed. I am trying to cut down on the narrative bulk in my stories but I couldn’t control myself this time around. This is already the shorter version of what I originally wrote. I just can’t help myself when writing a story revolving around Emma and Jack.
I’d love to hear what people think of this story so please leave a comment if you have the time!
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Posted by Balkerizz 5 months ago Report
Never apologize for narrative, that separates shlock from story :)
Posted by iliketoread 5 months ago Report
:)
Posted by TinyHunter 5 months ago Report
I can't wait to read this! I've been having a bad year (hence the lack of writing) and seeing this on my feed really cheered me up!
Posted by iliketoread 5 months ago Report
Hope this story can help, the world always needs more TinyHunter stories!
Posted by TinyHunter 4 months ago Report
I read this right away and forgot to write my comment!
Loved it, best chapter since the original I think. You did a good job setting up a new series of conflicts and seeding plenty of characters for the coming chapters.
I want to see Emma eat Vanessa so bad!! haha...not because she deserves it or I don't like her or anything, I actually do like Vanessa...but it is what it is, haha. It's so hot how Emma keeps considering it as an option to win the love triangle, clearly she doesn't regret what she did to Jessie much :P
But as much as I want to see it, I had a feeling it wouldn't happen right away and you'd build up to it for maximum payoff, and I have a feeling my instincts are on the right tract...but I can't wait to see where the story goes!
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
Yeah from what I've gathered your preferences are, I felt that you'd be wanting to see Vanessa get eaten the most. Of course I couldn't let it come THAT easy lol. Here's to hoping my idea to have Vanessa around a bit longer will lead to some good teasing and future scenes.
Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts!
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 5 months ago Report
Yay! It’s good to read your story again!
Posted by iliketoread 5 months ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Drakovyr 5 months ago Report
Really great as usual !
The vore part is a bit short but really enjoyable, loved it ^^
And I think the dynamic you introduced with the different characters is a good idea, looking forward to all the teasing you'll be able to do :D
Posted by iliketoread 5 months ago Report
Yeah making it happen with a waterslide made me feel like I couldn't write it any longer. In my head, the whole scene happened so fast that I felt too much writing could negatively impact it.
Regardless, I'm looking out to make sure future stories are a bit more vore indulgent. I know I say that often but I do feel like this story was a tad unfocused on the vore.
Cheers!
Posted by Wolfsage 5 months ago Report
What a lovely surprise to wake up to this fine saturday.
Posted by iliketoread 5 months ago Report
Great day for reading about a giantess eating people!
Posted by Wolfsage 5 months ago Report
For a while, I was convinced it was gonna be the final chapter and Jack would end up eaten. Glad I was wrong. Can't wait to see where this story goes. Also I like that you mention the older characters, especially Jessie, I still miss her, she was cool.
Posted by Animo24 5 months ago Report
Awesome was so excited when I saw this pop up in my feed and like always it didn't disappoint at all amazing story
Posted by iliketoread 5 months ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by CastleCrashing 5 months ago Report
The dreaded love triangle emerges. I'm not surprised Vanessa survived this time though. Nothing in this series is easy.
Posted by iliketoread 5 months ago Report
Yeah, felt like if the series was going to continue, it needed more characters and more conflicts. Wonder where it'll go.
Cheers!
Posted by Zerotwo 5 months ago Report
I’ve really been looking forward to this for a long time. It’s been over eight months since Jack had last seen Emma. Well, well, well… and it’s been a year since I last saw them myself — lol, just kidding.
The narrative bulk before the vore event is absolutely necessary. It plays a huge role in shaping the characters, which is why every time I read your stories, I get completely immersed. After all, an empty character can’t carry a good script. I’ve read a lot of novels, and I dare say that your long-form storytelling is an important trait that sets you apart from other writers. It’s like delayed gratification, a concept often seen in psychology research. The conflicts in your story are already very engaging on their own — I see vore as more like an extra reward mechanism. When it happens, it makes me feel: “Ah, the wait was worth it.” That’s the kind of emotional buildup suddenly bursting out. And I’m pleasantly surprised that you still have fresh inspiration for how vore occurs — I really loved the water slide idea.
Now, about the plot itself. I didn’t read any spoilers, so when Jack and Jenna had their argument, I only then realized that this time the prey was Jenna instead of Vanessa. Jenna’s character transformation is really interesting too. Based on her earlier behavior and Vanessa’s complaints, I thought she was just a party bitch using her friends — but in the end, she overturned all of that. She showed her thoughtfulness and her care for her friends. This makes her character well-rounded. In some ways, I can see echoes of Ian in Mile. I think he and Kevin will definitely be the center of the story’s whirlpool going forward. I can see infinite possibilities for the future plot.
Jack and Emma make a great couple, and I’m a huge shipper. So when I saw Jack wavering between Vanessa and Emma, I got a little anxious, and I couldn’t help but agree with what Jenna said: “At this rate, you’re just going to lose both of them.” I’m also very curious about Emma’s ambiguous attitude toward Mile and Kevin — I want to know whether Emma will choose one of them or Jack. I like wholesome romance, but I have to admit this double love triangle is really thrilling. It was a delicious kind of angst. Still, I hope it doesn’t end up being actual NTR, because in this installment, somewhere along that road, without goodbye, without distance — Jack and Emma simply lost each other.
Wow, I ended up writing a lot. Thank you for reading all the way through.
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
Thanks for spending the time writing your thoughts in such detail. I appreciate getting to hear how you felt about different sections of the story! It definitely helps me understand what were the main things that stuck out to people and how scenes were interpreted. Its great feedback on my writing as before I post I only have my own opinion and the editors.
I'm glad you find the narrative bulk worth it. I do worry I overdid it in this specific story due to wanting to show different characters and try make sense of the time difference that took place between this and the last story. But at the end of the day I think the Vore University series needs to have a bit of slow down between the vore to not make the vore too common. I want to *try* make Emma eating people not something thats super casual so that there can still be some tension.
Happy you enjoyed the waterslide idea!
Cheers!
Posted by Zerotwo 4 months ago Report
I would like to offer a small suggestion. Your description of the throat bulge and difficulty swallowing is sufficient, but after the prey enters the stomach, the sense of volume is too small. Emma is 90 feet tall. By conversion, when she swallows an average person of 5.9 feet, it is equivalent to a 5.5-foot-tall girl swallowing a 4.4-inch-tall little person. This size should be able to cause a visible abdominal bulge.
Moreover, most of your post-swallowing descriptions are internal descriptions and the predator's sensations.I think there needs to be an external perspective, describing the abdominal swelling and the bulges caused by the prey's struggles. This could also lead to the direct reactions of other people.
PS:I think a water slide would be a great setting for Emma to have a massvore scene. As they slide down one by one, let Emma challenge her maximum capacity.
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
I appreciate the suggestion although I'm not entirely convinced a single ~4 inch tall person could create externally visible abdominal bulges. (Maybe a lot of tinies together can). To me, personally, it seems hard to believe that a 4 inch tall tiny could make such a force against such thick skin. But I could be wrong. I'm curious to what other people think.
But of course these stories are pure fantasy so what is realistic or not doesn't really matter. I will do my best to try incorporate abdominal swelling and bulges in future stories. I understand its appeal to people.
Thanks for the feedback!
Posted by MCPB 4 months ago Report
Others have already said that, but I also want to emphasize that I really love the entire buildup and that you take the time to development characters and setting – that makes every action and every permanent choice real and impactful.
I also appreciate that – within the obvious constraints of the general fantastic setting – your stories feel realistic; from authentic character development to the real-life struggles of swallowing the equivalent of a 10cm person.
Given the overall realism, there was one thing that didn't really fit for me, and that was the peaceful fadeout inside Emma's stomach: "She let out a defeated sigh before letting herself fall backwards into the acid and float in place. A rhythmic heart beat surrounded by endless churning, bubbling, and gurgling. Slowly but surly, the sounds seemed to get quieter before they had simply become white noise". IMO it is hard to imagine that anyone would just sigh and take a relaxed bath – while they suffer full-body chemical burns, their survival instinct kicks in, and they literally go crazy from all the pain, all while digestive juices are creeping into your orifices etc.
I fully understand if you're not into the gory details, but then it probably would work better – at least for my immersion – to just switch perspectives before it becomes too nasty. (That being said, I'd really love to read your artistic implementation of the whole not-so-pleasant experience.)
And also – but that's a personal problem caused by bad storytelling over the last few thousand years – I've been burned far too often by the entire deus-ex-machina-topos. If there is no closure, no confirmed death, I almost expect by now that something magical happens and the eaten person is somehow rescued or just survives; so it always improves the authenticity for me if there is some kind of "closure" to "prove" that the person is really gone. This could be a number 2 as in previous stories, or it can be an omniscient narrator that takes a look inside Emma's body, or something else; but without that, the entire Jenna-arc feels incomplete and thus a bit... unsatisfying for me.
Long wall of text, sorry for that – and thank you for another wonderful chapter of VU!!
(And I hope my suggestions don't read like: "You stupid author did wrong bla, I as an entitled reader expect you to do this instead blurb"; I'm not a native English speaker, and I always struggle to give honest feedback without sounding demanding – in German, stuff like that is always super direct, up to the point where it sounds outright rude for foreign speakers 😅)
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
Thanks for spending the time to explain your thoughts on the story, I appreciate it.
I think the point you bring up regarding the end with Jenna is fair. I'll make sure to reflect on it and change my approach for future stories. Its good to hear feedback like this because otherwise I don't really know how to improve.
When I wrote the section, "She let out a defeated sigh... etc etc etc" I think imagined her still in pain, agony and yelling but wrote it that way to emphasis her acceptance with the situation. Additionally I remember when I was writing it, that I felt that readers generally would be bored if I dragged it out with long gory details. I personally don't mind the gory digestive details myself but thought there wasn't much value in adding them. Obviously its fair to say that I was wrong in thinking that. Especially if I'm going to spend the effort to write 26,000 words for the story, I might as well spend the effort to cap it off properly. I have heard feedback in the past with the issue of the lack of disposal scenes in some of my stories. Which again makes me feel guilty for not including here. Some part of me (while I was writing) kept telling me that a disposal scene would be totally out of place. Again, that was probably a mistake as well.
As for the '...no closure, no confirmed death..." comment, I've never really thought about it that way when I read these types stories but I'll make sure to take that in mind going forward. Understandably I would also be annoyed/unsatisfied if a character was brought back to life (or secretly alive) after the author implied death. I know it doesn't really help me saying it in the comments of the story, but Jenna is def Emma's poop after that lol.
Thanks again for taking the time, don't worry your comment does not come off as rude at all. I need honest feedback like this so thank you!
Cheers!
Posted by MCPB 4 months ago Report
"but wrote it that way to emphasis her acceptance with the situation" – I think that actually might be the reason why it rubs me a bit xD
Maybe it's a me-problem, because I cannot really imagine acceptance in such a situation. Like, if you are in good palliative care, or you are waiting in a cell without acute pain and such, of course – I can imagine that you accept and somewhat "rationalize" the situation, and come to peace with it... but not while you're currently being digested. I think that any normal person would need some time and peace to come to terms with their situation and accept it, and both is not really available inside Emma here.
I would go so far and argue that even in the "best case scenario" – e.g. if a terminally ill person on pain killers is swallowed willingly as last will or sth – they would not be able to stay calm and accepting, but panic and fight and beg; simply because biology kicks in as pain, physiological stress, and survival instincts take over.
As for a disposal scene, I also don't think it would have been out of place here; but I'm also biased as I love the biology of digestion, and disposal is the natural conclusion to me. To see what remains – and equally important, what is irrevocably gone – is really fascinating and oddly satisfying lol.
I'm so happy that you're continuing the storyline, despite all the oddballs and necessary weirdnesses with the scaling of a giant person!
Cheers!
(Btw cheers: did you know that 500ml beer in Emma equivalent would be roundabout 2500 liters? :D)
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
That number is somewhat scary when you then think about how many people could fit in her stomach at once. Especially if she really tried and packed herself...
Posted by MCPB 4 months ago Report
Yep – I always like to do the numbers for myself because I feel like humans (or well, at least me) lack a good intuition of cubic scaling. Length etc is doable, like I can imagine 30 length or height; but volume is really difficult to just scale intuitively.
Posted by TheTinyWriter 4 months ago Report
This was worth the wait!
As much as it pained me to see Emma almost turn on Jack in the previous installment, this chapter definitely reminds us that he’s a huge jerk in many ways lol. Though that’s what makes it compelling, since Emma is far from innocent herself, especially since she does absolutely nothing in the finale and relishes in her latest victim.
I think the plot is one of the most important parts of these stories, so no need to apologize for it. It was a lot of fun reading, and it kept me hooked. Even though I just said Emma isn’t innocent at all, I still do feel bad for her because Jack is unable to be honest with her/potentially leading both her and Vanessa on, and because he was the thing keeping her going when in the laboratory. She’s not entitled to Jack of course, but him playing with her feelings is really uncool of him.
Honestly the ending where she might get together with Miles did make me happy for her too. As bad as she is, Jack does still have a hand in making her a monster. Miles seems to like her in a much deeper and compassionate way, and I’m interested to see if that ends up affecting her for the better. Given what the government needs her for, I doubt they’re going to kill her easily. So the best that can be done is for someone to help her see a better path in life.
So yeah. Loved this!
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
Yeah Jack sometimes does come off as too much of a jerk sometimes. Him and Emma are pretty bad people but I guess it's easier to feel back for Emma due to her freak existence and from what just happened in the story above.
Definitely have some interesting ideas for the upcoming part. Really wanted to dive into Emma's side of stuff more and go into the interesting quirks of a giantess existing in our society.
Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment! Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Cheers!
Posted by hushcleo 4 months ago Report
You don't know how happy I am that this is back! I had no idea if you were going to continue this series or not. I love Emma so much! Don't know if I want to be her, Jack, or Jenna... sigh, just typical switch problems! xoxo
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
Thanks! It's nice to hear the love for Emma specifically!
Posted by AnAccount 4 months ago Report
Kevin and gang are a fun addition, Im gonna miss Jenna, and this ice cream outing feels like foreshadowing. Emma and jack playing with each others hearts gives me an uneasy tension, but im glad that this is back. I also kinda forgot just how psychotic Emma is. Yet her muttering under her breath what she really wants is awesome. She really has the perfect mind, if a little unstable, for who she is.
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
Thanks! Yeah I really really didn't want to kill off Jenna, she was my fav. But alas, better and greater things are planned for the future. And yeah Emma is a bit unhinged but I like to think being the only giant in a world full of regular humans does that to you lol.
Posted by AnAccount 4 months ago Report
In a way she's just a realist lol. What giant woman wouldn't come to her conclusions?
Posted by leriodenbron 4 months ago Report
Man, it's so good to see the gang back again, and with such intriguing new friends! This is a great start to the "sequel." I love Vanessa, love(d) Jenna, and the introduction of romantic competition for Emma’s affections is a fun new element, too.
You chose the perfect point in Jack's budding relationship with Vanessa for Emma go show back up again. Jack's still a bit of a dirtbag-by-selfish-cowardice, but that gives us readers permission to self-insert without fighting the moral current of the story. His inner conflict feels organic given the timing; and it spurs the action on without leaving him much time to ruminate on morality, which is so effective in this genre.
I also agree with everyone above who would've liked some more time with Jenna, post-slide. While disposal isn't my thing, digestion scenes are always some of my favorite parts of these stories. On that note, if you ever felt so inspired as to just pop off a bit of that as its own vignette, I've always secretly hoped we'd get to revisit the campers from the last chapter. They all still had plenty of life in them at their last POV (despite the forboding "coalmine canary" of Kayla,) and I'd sure love to see their final moments if you felt like sharing them!
Again, this new chapter is excellent, the build-up adds to the payoff, and I can't wait to see where we go from here. Thank you for sharing your work with us!
Posted by iliketoread 4 months ago Report
I loved Jenna too... I almost wrote in a whole new character too keep her around but alas that seemed like a silly thing to do.
I will take note of the feedback of having longer/more detailed digestion scenes. Clearly a lot of people were wanting more of that lol. As for the campers from the last chapter... stay tuned. Might just have something cooked up for that...
Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts. I really appreciate it and the feedback helps!
Posted by leriodenbron 4 months ago Report
Omg amazing, that entire sequence with the campers is one of my favorites in all of vore lit. That's very exciting that we might get to see them again!
Posted by Hozomat 3 months ago Report
Boy, 26k words eh?? Took me an hour and a half to get through! The build-up was great from start to end and the back-and-forth between Emma and her prey was lovely (bonus point considereing the fact she had promised not to hurt anyone, heh).
Speaking of prey, I was wondering throughout the first half if Vanessa was gonna be the prey, but I thought "naah, that would solve the love triangle too easily." And then Jenna appeared and "yep, there it is." But even though I had guessed right, you kept me on my toes with all the boys' shenanigans at the party!
Posted by iliketoread 3 months ago Report
Yeah I'm worried my stories going forward will be have just as many words... But yeah, can't let the Vanessa pay off become that easy lol.
Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment!
Posted by Himmi1999 2 months ago Report
Thank goodness you are back with a banger. Theres few people who can engage me this long & your writing is so addictive. Thanks man.
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Thanks for the kind comment! I look forward to writing and posting more!
Posted by Dickevin 2 months ago Report
Hi illikertoread !
I recently stumbled upon your stories, and most notably this série. And si must say, it was a pretty nice read ! It's funny how even for me, the reader, seing Jack and Emma interactions make me both thinks it's heartwarming about 2 peoples finding love together due to their abnormalities, and at the same time cringe about how they are using each other as sexual outlets for their common fetish and ruining their chances togethers with their lack of effective communication (just do a threesome if it bother them so much X) ).
All in all, a very nice read to me all along. Hope the next part will go out soon, I am really curious about how it will evolve between Jack and Emma after their falling out ! ;)
I also go some questions for you, because I'm a curious gal. Hope they will not bother you too much :
1- How does Emma look like ? I got that she is 30 meters tall and blonde, bot other than that, I can't remember anything else about her physical appearence.
2 - How would you describe Emma in term of personality ? I am curious about how she is in your opinions, why is she so attached to Jack, ...
3 - What are the abilities of Emma ? Is she unnaturally strong for her size (meaning she can actually break concrète bare handed for exemple), is she unnaturaly tough (like bulletproof tough), how smart is she, ...
4- Why does Emma love eating things alive that much ? Is it the taste, feeling, something else ? And would she bé satisgied if she only swallowed animals instead of peoples ?
5 - How many humans Emma can actually theorically eat ? What is her soft limit (where she is not hungry anymore, but can still eta if she push herself) and hard limit (where her stomach is literaly full to bursting) ? And what factor can affect these limits (for exemple, could she train to eta more, burping can free space inside, ... ) ?
6 - How effective is Emma digestion (like how long it take her to digest, how thorough it is, ..) ? Can she increase her digestion effectiveness (for exemple, after some time eating peoples, her digestion could not leave any bones anymore, ...) ? What are the factors that can affect her digestion speed and strenght ?
7 - How hard it is to escape Emma stomach, and what would it take to hurt it ? Can someone actually escape it (for exemple, by using emetics, suffictient trauma to the walls, ... ) to make Emma throw you up ? What would it take to tear her stomach open if need is to escape or save someone inside her ? And can Emma increase her resistance thresholds ?
Well, I'm done. I'm wishing you a nice day and good luck for whatever you are doing right now in your life !!! :)
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
Hi Dickevin,
Thanks for the interest in the series!
1. I don't go into too much detail describing her in the stories. Mainly because she's meant to be displayed as an "attractive" character and I want her to be able to fit easily into what the reader finds attractive. Although the basics of her visually are: that she is 30 meters tall, blonde (normally has her hair straight down past her shoulders), blue eyes, barely visible freckles (maybe you can see them up close), a 'conventionally' attractive female body with breasts and ass that make you wanna ogle. That's pretty much where the details end, any more specific features are up to the readers imagination. If the reader prefers smaller or bigger breasts, for example, I think the writing leaves room for that.
2. Feel like that I could write forever about, but I'll try boil it down: Emma is an emotionally driven girl that is generally considered cheerful and friendly. She likes teasing and joking around. Due to attention she's gotten throughout her life because of her size, she prefers solo activities and hobbies such as reading, drawing, doom scrolling the internet, etc. Even though she doesn't show it, she's incredibly insecure about her size and is passively stuck in a mental crisis in trying to understand why she wasn't given a normal life to live. Anything that helps her feel normal or genuinely appreciates her size is like ecstasy to her. In my opinion she is so attracted to Jack for a variety of reasons. A. Because she's a young horny adult and he's considered cute. B. She gets off on seeing others - particularly those people she finds attractive - get off. (Jack gets off to her eating people or teasing with her mouth. C. She's young and he's the first person she's let past her emotional firewall. She feels understood and seen around him. Appreciated for not just her size but who she is inside.
3. Currently Emma has no disclosed special abilities. We can assume her human abilities have scaled with her size. So like she's way bigger physically so she's probably just as strong. I'll say it's 'possible' she has some things special about her but currently they have never been mentioned in the stories.
4. She doesn't particularly like eating things alive just like that. She likes doing it because it turns Jack on and she likes seeing him get turned on. She's done it once (to a human) prior to Jack just out of stupid childish curiosity and deviousness. It's not understood in the stories if she regrets doing what she did as a kid. Due to Jack getting her used to swallowing people alive, she may swallow people in the future for self-defense or emotionally driven reasons. One can assume she would equally value crushing someone or some other killing method. Extra note: Emma does find it entertaining having people kicking around in her stomach and finds it amusing knowing that they know they will turn to her shit. So she would probably not get the same satisfaction out of eating an animal vs a human.
5. I haven't really thought about this too much. Maybe one day in a story we may find this out. There was someone once who did the rough calculations. I think its a good mental exercise to try figure out the limit. I feel like intuitively someone could say she could do like 30 people at once, and then push to like 60 total if she was going crazy. Maybe that's absurd... I'll need to go ask other people on their opinions.
6. I think in the stories I kept her digestion relatively normal to a human. So like 2 to 5 hours for the stomach. There are small bits of bone left at the end, the skull normally being left over. I haven't thought about anything to speed up or slow down her digestion that wouldn't work for a normal human. So like anti-acids would probably slow it down. Maybe there will be reason in future stories to speed up or slow down her digestion process. Currently that hasn't been a huge focus in the stories.
7. Good question. I'm sure if you brough a sharp object larger than a dagger you could probably mess up the inside of her stomach and get her to unwillingly throw you up or literally make a hole in her stomach. Regular human fists/legs only tickle her and would not cause damage. She also doesn't like the idea of throwing someone up so she'd probably do her best to never vomit. Maybe a future story someone will manage to make her vomit. Not sure there is anyway for Emma to increase her resistance to physical attacks. The story does have sci-fi elements so there is always a possibility something can be introduced in the future. Atm she's just a giant 19 year old girl.
Hope I've answered your answers sufficiently, cheers!