Fodlan: Edelgard Path 20
By Shadowbaron28 -- Report
I know I am a little early with this one but I don't know for sure if I can write tomorrow (if I can great I will still put one out)
The siege comes to its conclusion and Cornelia meets her fate. Before heading home however everyone decides to party the rest of the night away and maybe arrange some hookups.
Lots of options again with this one.
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Posted by Reaper2175 5 days ago Report
I figured that Hapi and Dimitri would at least be appeased by Cornelia being reduced to a healing meal.
As for the votes.
Victory lovers
B. This way everyone has a chance to more thoroughly enjoy how Cornelia is padding out Sheze.
Yuri...
Why did he have to open his big mouth at the worst time. I realize he was in a bad position, and I know it might upset Hapi but Yuri almost got her taken and Sheze digested by Cornelia. This resolves Petra's desire for a crest and relic. D. Petra
Vore. C. Prisoners so we can enjoy our lovers and allies.
Opera. We still have to rebuild Adrestia and deal with Mieson (or however it's spelled.) I would say hold off until he's dealt with. B.
Petra. B. As stated previously feed Yuri to her.
Posted by Shadowbaron28 4 days ago Report
Dimitri, Hapi, and Edelgard checking what Cornelia added to Shezd: We just have to ASSess the situation.
As for Yuri, he opened his mouth so now so will Petra.
Posted by Reaper2175 4 days ago Report
Because I do read your other replies. I will say if Yuri provides a good enough explanation he probably could talk his way out of it, but... he would be on the thinnest of ice. And if it feels like a double standard compared to Constance she did surrender fairly quickly. Also Yuri could have contributed directly to Hapi's death and depending on how things go afterwards it could have led to Constance and Balthus's deaths. Yuri you are possibly the worst house leader in this timeline. (Potentially subject to change as things develop more.)
Posted by Reaper2175 4 days ago Report
Also because jokes are required. I'm sure that with the combined abilities of both harems they will be able to get to the BOTTOM of this WEIGHTY matter. This will require a more HANDS ON inspection though.
Posted by CelestialDissolve 5 days ago Report
Victory Lovers: C, go to both. Sheze should have some company to help get over being in that horrible belly.
Yuri: D, he betrayed us, he gets gurgled like all the rest.
Vore: A, Dorothea; sorry, Ferdinand, but she and Edelgard were already having a moment earlier.
Opera: B, we'll get her that show eventually
Petra: B, lets get her that crest, Yuri's not gonna be needing it anymore.
Posted by CelestialDissolve 5 days ago Report
Actually, I want to switch victory lovers to B; Sheze deserves to have some revenge fantasy, and may make relations with the kingdom even stronger
Posted by Shadowbaron28 4 days ago Report
Dorothea and Ferdinand just start to grope each other through the stomach walls
Edelgard: This- this awkward.
Posted by CelestialDissolve 4 days ago Report
Well, if he thinks he and Dorothea can have a moment while Edelgard and at least two others have some fun; he’s free to hop in. Oh, also; I wanted to ask some more advice about writing a CYOA. When you thought up this series, did you have a basic idea for each character’s path before sending out the “Choose your character” and flesh it out after, or did you list the characters, the create tge outline for their path?
Posted by Shadowbaron28 4 days ago Report
Kinda. The lords were the easiest as I could basically just take story cues from the games. Even the seige you guys did, while out of order from the games events, is still technically in game. The harder ones to think up were the side characters.
Let's use Bernadetta as an example. For Bernie I thought up these as possible endings. One Bernie overcomes her fear and becomes a predator supreme (to achieve this ending Bernie would have had to eat several powerful characters), Bernie could have found a love to protect her (An easier route where Bernie basically ends the game by marrying someone she earned enough support with), and the Safer Home rout where Bernie lives long enough to essentially flee Fodlan and find a homeland without vore.
Bernie's path would have started similarly to Edelgard's with the mock battle arc but Bernie would have been hiding in her room. You guys would have had to decide between staying put in your room, trying to sneak out at night, or to risk interacting with people. Since Bernie had a prey score of like 1 she was going to constantly be targeted. However I did not have a straight shot outline for how Bernie would get from point A to point Z. I had an idea for the ending, and a couple chapters and paths plotted for the beginning. Trying to plot more than I'd say three chapters out gets VERY tricky and honestly time wasting. You have no way to know for sure how the people will vote. That's not to say give it NO thought but don't fret over it too much. I did have a few key ideas for the mid game with her such as when the war broke out she could decide to stay loyal to Edelgard or defect to another side. If people planned to flee to another land I had the idea for her to be able to study foreign lands in the library although one day she might bump into Kronya looking for an easy snack.
In short, have a planned out beginning, a few ideas of an ending, and don't worry too much about the middle except on how to steer it towards one of those endings.
I hoped this helped.
Posted by CelestialDissolve 4 days ago Report
This does help a lot, thank you
Posted by ScarletBellyache 5 days ago Report
Victory Lovers: C, Both Byleth and Sheze
They’ve enjoyed both having sex with us before, and Byleth helped a ton rescuing her (plus a lot more than we actually know but shhhhh). And it’s comfort time after the hurt.
Yuri: D, Petra
You know, I’d say we should keep him alive in deference to the Wolves but he nearly got Hapi killed, so fuck him.
Give Petra the zoomy Crest/Relic combo, she’ll love that shit (and become even more of an absolute terror).
Vore: A, Sheze
But only if she’d find it comforting instead of terrifying in the moment. Not gonna hurt a girlfriend.
Opera: B
Look, shit may be calming down now but we’ve maybe got a bigger war coming down the pipes. Defer defer defer, which sucks, but hey.
Petra: B, Yuri
I mean.
Posted by Shadowbaron28 4 days ago Report
100% going to give Petra a check the first time she uses it to not crash into a tree. As for the wolves, their be upset but I’m sure they will get it given what happened. Plus Hapi has some things to take her mind off it tonight.
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 5 days ago Report
Victory - B the more the merrier, roll those dice for a pregnancy.
Yuri’s a traitor. Traitors get gurgled. Feed him to Petra, she can have his crest too two birds one stone.
Vore-A, maybe switch it up and unbirth someone during the love scene
Opera, funds are needed so b
Petra-b, feed her yuri.
Posted by Shadowbaron28 4 days ago Report
Those pregnancy odds are low but if everyone gets together one of them has to hit those odds right?
Posted by JungleBeat 5 days ago Report
Good to see Hapu and Dimitri are happy with this turn of events.
Lovers: Let's go C. Spend some quality time with Byleth and Sheze. With Byleth helping more than we know and Sheze having such a rough experience it would be nice to reward them both.
Yuri Yuri Yuri...D. Give em to Petra. I would rather spare him for the rest of the Wolves but he did almost get Hapi captured or eaten while one of the Empress's lovers DID get eaten and almost digested. Hopefully the rest of them understand. I have a feeling Hapi might be the most hurt by it. Unless he has a REALLY good explanation he and his Fetters would be of better use appeasing Petra before she does unintentional harm to country relations getting her crest.
Vore: C Let us feast on those deserving of it
Opera: B Let's take care of the rest of the Agarthans in Adrestia first than we can help with the play.
Petra B for reasons stated with Yuri.
Not surprised Mercedes nabbed herself a meal and is quite pleased with herself. She always did have a mother bear kinda feel to her and would take pleasure in punishing those who wrong her and her loved ones. Her and Rhea I feel have mastered the "smile of imminent doom."
Posted by Shadowbaron28 4 days ago Report
It looks like everyone agrees Yuri is princess chow but I will give him a chance to explain and roll to see if anyone cares. His odds of success are LOW though. He almost killed the mission after all.
As for Mercedes I love how in lore she is so sweet most of the time but when she wants to break out her mama bear/witty mode she goes for the jugular.
Posted by HVL 5 days ago Report
C for Lovers (Byleth & Sheze)
A for Yuri
B for Vore (Byleth)
A for Opera
C for Petra
Posted by Shadowbaron28 4 days ago Report
Looks like everyone is voting to hold off on the opera but honestly this is where I originally had it planned to be placed.
Posted by skorpio 5 days ago Report
Victory Lovers: C (As much as it pains me to turn down a chance to be with Mercedes, we should be with Byleth and Sheze - especially Sheze, considering what she just went through.)
Yuri: D (Sorry, Yuri, but you done goofed. Sparing him or any other high-ranking subordinate of Cordelia would make Edelgard AND Dimitri look like pushovers.)
Vore: C (Some random mid-level mooks will do for a meal.
Opera: B (Kick that can down the road!)
Petra: B (Enjoy your Yuri!)
Posted by Shadowbaron28 4 days ago Report
Mercedes just blowing a kiss as she walks into Dimitri’s tent and Edelgard is just sweating going: Love over lust, LOVE OVER LUST.