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Archive > Talksalot > Writing > Somewhere on the Shelf > One offs and smaller worlds > Rachel the cat > Rachel's First Time
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Rachel's First Time

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Hello vorarephiles!
This is my first ever story and post! It is a bit old and I have had it about ready for a long time but struggled with procrastination and nervousness. To make it worse, I insisted that I would post it after drawing a thumbnail, shooting myself in the foot as I abandoned the drawing for a long time since I can't seem to get drawing right (in a way I like enough that is). The story is good enough for me at least, although it could be better and I struggled a lot getting my tenses right (a reoccurring problem).
The story follows two characters and swap perspective. Perspective swaps and transitions are indicated by 3 stars. There are 9252 words and I hope it is readable!
(It is a PDF, so it is best to read on desktop. However, I have found that with my mobile browser, I can set it to desktop mode and read PDFs without issue and recent updates to the site seems to have made new PDFs easier to view on mobile. Purely speaking from my own experience as of posting date.)

I hope to post more newer stories soon with a wide variety of kinds. Some more vorey and goonworthy, others big worlds of fiction. Or at least I have ambition. Art is unlikely at the moment, but I may continue trying thumbnails, will see how that goes.
For now, let me know what you think (in a kind way please, I am pretty sensitive).


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Read this if you have specific tastes and don’t want to be surprised and would rather know what happens before you read.

The story follow a male mouse and a female cat. Both have vore urges they can’t explain and hide them from the world. As pred and prey they are attracted to each other and meet up in private. They talk it through, but the cat’s desires are hard to control and much stronger than that of the mouse. It is also implied that it is sexual for her but is not explored much in the writing, aside from an implied orgasm. The story is non-fatal, consensual, safe vore, but there are thoughts of fatal vore. There is internal conflict from Rachel, the cat, and she has arguments with herself about fatal vore. No mice were harmed in the production of this story.

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Tags: Cat Cat Pred Cat/Mouse Consensual F/M Female Pred First story Mouse Mouse prey Non-fatal Oral Vore past tense perspective shift perspective swap Perspective Switch Regurgitation Released prey Size difference Soft Vore tags are hard Third Person

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FishnorFowl

Posted by FishnorFowl 1 day ago Report

Cool story though I couldn’t figure out how to copy paste the spoiler stuff
The digestion/unwilling prey fantasy and fear stuff was uncomfortable for me but I assume I would have known about it if I could figure out how to copy the spoiler text
Story does make being eaten sound like fun though like a lot of vore stuff does
I think you did a good job with the story

Talksalot

Posted by Talksalot 22 hours ago Report

Thank you for reading and thank you for your feedback! I apologise for any discomfort caused by the story, and not being able to read the invisible text. It was mostly a test and I feared people may have difficulty with it. For the future I will most likely make the text visible for ease of reading, it was only invisible for people who hate spoilers and quickly and unwillingly pick up words that spoil the story. Regardless, I would appreciate it if you could inform me what platform (mobile/desktop) prevented you from successfully copying and pasting the text. On my side (desktop) I can simply drag over the text, CTRL C and CNTRL V in a notepad or something (I realise this would be more difficult on mobile.)

And for the spoiler itself, you are correct that it was meant to warn about that aspect of thoughts of fatal vore. For convenience, I put the spoiler in the description now, and I will try and figure out something better for my next work. (Maybe I should make the tag "Contemplated Fatality")

FishnorFowl

Posted by FishnorFowl 22 hours ago Report

Oh I was on mobile that could be why it didn’t work

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Talksalot: If you ever find yourself sensitive to content not mentioned in the tags, content warning or spoiler, please let me know, so I can consider adding a warning next time.

I would love to hear your opinion and thoughts, as long as it is constructive and done with kind intentions.

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