Itsy Bitsy Spyder - Pt.2 (Trade)
By Timerbreaker -- Report
~ It’s a beautiful summer day, the sun is shining, and the beach is looking especially inviting. No better day to be social and make some new friends. That’s what local Predator Suicine Amenela wants to do. She meets an unlikely group of her friend’s older sibling, an infamous daredevil, and a fun-loving peeping tom, who are unexpectedly joined by a trio of gals from across the country. Suspecting little about the latter despite the leader’s no-nonsense look, Suicine takes them all down to the beach – at a significantly smaller size – to have some fun together… But what’s a harmless, fun time for her eventually turns into a gurgly, claustrophobic nightmare for the rest. And one of them won’t be leaving the same person they once were… ~
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This is the second part of my half of an art trade I did with SusMofungomf ;it's my very first ever trade, and I'm so honored and proud to have earned fanart not with money, but with my own effort! In my eyes, there's no better way of repaying somebody.
Anyways, it stars my PredatEarth OCs (whose bios, you can find in my Characters folder), primarily Predators Suicine Amenela and Spyder Caramel, in their very first encounter with each other. If you're were so wondering what Spyder's deal with Suicine was back in this year's Vore Day special, then well, here's your context! Expect lots of fun shrinking action and noms in unexpected circumstances!
Initially, it was just going to be a one-off "what if?" storyline and nothing more. However, because I loved the premise so much, and because I want my OCs to meet each other and add onto their characters, I decided this would be canon event! So now you know how they met! Somebody's about to learn their true place on the new food chain...
Link to the first part: https://aryion.com/g4/view/1317020
Want to request a story of your own? Shoot me a PM so we can discuss your idea!
Be sure to check out the rest of my gallery, too, if you haven't already! You might find something cool!~

Posted by skorpio 10 days ago Report
Good story! I loved reading about Suicine and Caramel again; they're such great characters. I appreciated the color-coded dialogue; it made the story much easier to follow.
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Posted by Timerbreaker 10 days ago Report
I plan to update their bios later to expand upon their characters a lot more, especially for when I introduce them properly to Eka's. And yeah, the color-coded dialogue helps with storytelling, and makes the story visually pop.
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