I like it. Probably because it's one of the few stories which plays with a personal aspect of my fantasies - the prey actually becoming edible food, such as a banana. I like your descriptions. The only small problem I see is the time it takes her to digest him. I doubt she would would sleep through the entire process; I think it takes quite a while longer than that.
Whoa whoa whoa, dude! If you read the story carefully, you'll notice that I never mentioned that 1. Johnny turned into a banana and 2. the digested banana is what she pooped out. I just tilted the story in that direction and everyone ran with it. ; )
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Posted by Star_Sage 18 years ago Report
Heh, thanks Lucky. I thought it was quite nice.
Posted by DerangedX 18 years ago Report
Damn it.. since the update I cant get to reading of this story >
Posted by komaru 18 years ago Report
I love the story, I hope to see more like it^_^
Posted by French_snack 18 years ago Report
I like it. Probably because it's one of the few stories which plays with a personal aspect of my fantasies - the prey actually becoming edible food, such as a banana. I like your descriptions. The only small problem I see is the time it takes her to digest him. I doubt she would would sleep through the entire process; I think it takes quite a while longer than that.
Posted by Lucky 18 years ago Report
Whoa whoa whoa, dude! If you read the story carefully, you'll notice that I never mentioned that 1. Johnny turned into a banana and 2. the digested banana is what she pooped out. I just tilted the story in that direction and everyone ran with it. ; )
Posted by Bomb_Nom_Nom_Nom 17 years ago Report
I enjoyed this story, I would love to see more like this.