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Posted by decendingskulls 18 years ago Report
Incredible! I wish I could write like that.
Posted by KavenBach 18 years ago Report
Damn, that was fast! You read all that in 10 minutes? Hat's off to you!
Thank you very much for the compliment. Some people can produce Art; others can write.
Posted by decendingskulls 18 years ago Report
I read kind of fast sometimes, slowing down for parts here & there. To be honest I'm not really into writing, but you have serious skill, enough to make even me read :P
This was a really great story & it gets the heart-rate up!
Posted by KavenBach 18 years ago Report
Well then, thank you again!
Posted by geofrey 18 years ago Report
It is always great when the prey is forgotten about after her traumatic experience in such a casual way.
Posted by KavenBach 18 years ago Report
Isn't it, though? 8) Just one little mistake on the part of the Owner. Oh well... she can always get another house-sitter. If she has to... >_>
Posted by soldier148 18 years ago Report
dang, thought the plant was going to swollow her into it's stem. would've been better for my tastes, but that was still great writing. btw: did you get that invasive probe idea from veeshan123? he has a similar thing in his druid stories.
Posted by KavenBach 18 years ago Report
A: invasive probes are fairly common I believe. :) B: I didn't know veeshan actually wrote stories of his own, let alone a series?
C: As for this plant, I based the scene off my older drawn piece "The Garden Walk." I just felt like putting it into story form.
Posted by soldier148 18 years ago Report
ah. well now you know he does. he's working on some right now, i know from his DA journal, but he works slowly, but i guess that's how stories work
Posted by Omega 18 years ago Report
Interesting story. You are definitly getting the hang now of describing the characters in more detail and fleshing them out well. Quite a bit of lead-in on this one too!
As for plants and pod-sex-probes. Thats been around quite a while now. It's the main, aheh, thrust of Strikers sexual-battery plant monster series of stories and features in the second animation I did of that. It's even shown up briefly in the "Evil Dead" movies.
Posted by KavenBach 18 years ago Report
Thank you very much. I have been wanting to improve my characterization skills, and if it's paying off then good! Glad you enjoyed it Sir. And, well... I'm sure you know this by now, but I prefer stories with vore in them, as opposed to vore with a semblance of a story somewhere in there. -_- Long lead-ups just feel better to me. Then again I might have a smidge more of an attention span than most internet surfers. -_-
Posted by SlyMoogleGirl 16 years ago Report
...I almost want to know what you cold do to me now, I have read three of your stories and each onedriving me wild kupo
Posted by KavenBach 16 years ago Report
Glad you're enjoying them so much! Always nice to have a new reader appreciate my scribbles. :)
Thanks!