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Samantha Story

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I'm writing a story. Not sure if it'll turn into much, but this is what I have so far. Trying some different writing styles in it, too, such as breaking the fourth wall and putting pictures in it, Vonnegut-style.
Updated 3-15-09

Ignore the last two lines. They're just notes I put in for later.

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Stank

Posted by Stank 17 years ago Report

&#8220;I like to believe in fate. That way, nothing's my fault.&#8221;
-Killer line

Psittaciform (parrot-person)
-Killer parrot person

...I'll read the rest when I have time later. :P

Humbug

Posted by Humbug 17 years ago Report

Clyde's a sarcastic philosopher, I've decided.

Also: Yay. I'm actually going to get a sucker to read it. Woo!

hunter1243

Posted by hunter1243 17 years ago Report

nice story read it all in one sitting because i couldnt look away

Humbug

Posted by Humbug 17 years ago Report

Wow! That's quite the feat. Thank you.

Any suggestions or things you liked in particular? Obviously it's a rough draft, but it's good to hear input.

hunter1243

Posted by hunter1243 17 years ago Report

hhhhhhhhhhhhhm maby a little more stuff for the jackle/bunny relationship and maby no clifhanger

Humbug

Posted by Humbug 17 years ago Report

Oh, well the story is in progress, so there is more to come with both of those issues.
Thanks for the input, though.

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Humbug: Not a huge fan of unsolicited critique. If I ask for it, though, go for it; just try to supply a solution for the problems you mention, please.

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