The Dial
By NocturneWolf -- Report
Have you ever wondered what goes through a predator's mind when they find unusual prey? Here's a short story for you to find out! ^^
Contains human/fox SV
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Posted by Akela 18 years ago Report
Hmm, I like the description!
There's something catchy about the flow of words which makes it a nice thing to read, as well as the reason as to why the predator decides to act. The whole thing revolves around every day problems, yet a tad different.
It has mutliple levels, this story does. oO
Sweet write. ;>
Posted by NocturneWolf 18 years ago Report
Thank you for the comments, and I'm glad you like my writing style. I'll try to get more writing done in the near future!
Posted by SpiceWeasel 17 years ago Report
That was an incredible story. Very smooth, very well done. Keep it up!