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I finally finished it. Hooray! Although don't expect too much :3 Anyway This story is about a mouse who tries to get a drink, but instead gets drank* herself, by an elephant. Hope you all like it! *Drank? Drunk? Dranken? GAH NONE OF THEM MAKE SENSE!
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Posted by Kuja 16 years ago Report
^^ Increadible story Halcyon! I had a blast reading it. I really love your amazing discriptions of the internals as well as Kuras thoughts.
Posted by Halcyon 16 years ago Report
EXCELLENT!
Glad you liked it then :D
Posted by Bittersweet 16 years ago Report
OMFG. I love you. <3
Posted by Halcyon 16 years ago Report
Thanks : P
Posted by Tai 16 years ago Report
Good to see you with another story! I love it! Keep up the good work! : ))
Posted by Halcyon 16 years ago Report
Awesome, and I will : P
If I can stop being lazy lol XD
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
maybe you just need a vitamin "C" boost luckily, kiwi media is here XD
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
I lol'd XD
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
yeh
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
think maybe your next one could revolve around someone or some furry getting a full tour of the inside of an orca?
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
Well, I'm actually in the process of writing a third one. It will take place in a zoo, so I'm still thinking of the best storyline to write. Although, I haven't thought of anything aquatic - thanks for the idea!
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
if it were seaworld, you could try an orca.
but since it's the zoo, do they like have alligators or crocs, because maybe you can use one of them...
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
Sure, why not :]
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
cool
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
OOH OOH!!! I GOT ANOTHER IDEA!!!!
maybe you can do one about hippos. that'd be so awesome. she gettin' a full tour the hippo's system.
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
That was actually my original plan, before I decided on the elephant :p
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
well, can still happen, can't it?
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
Oh yes.
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
cool
Posted by mad_hatter_plus 15 years ago Report
Nice to see a fellow fan of full tour. It's the reason I joined the site in the first place.
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
*Facepalm*
Could you NOT advertise on my stories?
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
you're no fun, man -.-
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
XD
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
want more people to view it.
(it's a full tour vore story)
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
please help promote my vore stories? i'll be ya best friend :-D
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
Well I don't know how I'm supposed to do that >.>
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
i dunno either, BUT YOU GOTTA HELP
*sheds tears*
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
Try getting a gallery
Lulz
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
i kinda feel weird asking eka for a gallery, when i don't really update as often...
Posted by voriator212 15 years ago Report
one thing: aren't elephants usually afraid of mice? or is that cartoon?
Posted by Halcyon 15 years ago Report
Yep, that's cartoon ^^
Posted by Reverie 10 years ago Report
I never thanked you for writing the first great full tour story- thanks. I kind of consider you an inspiration, in a weird way.
Posted by Halcyon 10 years ago Report
Thanks so much!! I'm flattered that you'd call it something like that. Actually, it's funny how long ago this story was written. I feel like I've come so far as a writer, yet people always come back to these old gems. I'm happy to have inspired you ^.^