Story 7
By French_snack -- Report
My second story about the International Vore Competition. Cherry returns, hoping to retain her title. And Xavier seems to be unlucky... but how will things turn out for him in the end?
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Posted by Fidel2323 17 years ago Report
omg that is a really great story...
i hope somewhere in the future i could write as good as you :(
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
Posted by Emi 17 years ago Report
I was very excited, guy:) Go on writing;) Chery is amazing, and the Vore Competition is a VERY good idea! I'd wish to be the one of preys;) Where can I read 1,2,4,5 and 6 stories??
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it.
The other stories are here, but they're not about the vore competition:
http://aryion.com/g3/showgallery.php?id=161539
Three of them are "Snackaboy" stories.
Posted by VoraciousArtistry 17 years ago Report
Holy S*** that is one amazing story, as are all your stories.
Excellent, how long have you been writing vore stories?
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! It's always good to know people enjoy reading them; it motivates me to write more. So thank you for the feedback!
To answer your question, Story 1 was my first vore story, and I wrote that back in late April or early May.
Posted by naruto7568426 17 years ago Report
*sigh* Oh what I would'nt give to be on Cherrys plate. *sigh* I guess i'll just have to wait. But if you do write another story about me and Cherry, when do you think it could be done? Just out of curiosity...
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
No idea, sorry. I've got heaps of stories to write, and too little time to write them in. I'm focusing on Felarya right now. I don't set myself schedules, because I'm unable to keep them.
Glad you like Cherry, though. :)
Posted by naruto7568426 17 years ago Report
Hmm... I see. Well that's okay! I love Felarya. Just look at my picture! It's Crisis enjoying a little snack.
Posted by naruto7568426 17 years ago Report
Hey French Snack, lets play a roleplaying vore game!
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Hi again. Sorry to have to disappoint you, but I don't do roleplays. Not because I don't want to, but because I haven't got time. I may do so one day (although I'm going to be even busier over the coming months than I have been so far). For the same reason (time constraints), I don't take part in Eka's writing group (at present).
Did you do that picture of Crisis, by the way? She looks adorable.
Posted by naruto7568426 17 years ago Report
*laughs* Sorry no I didnt draw that. And she does look adorable doesnt she? ^3^ Im also sorry to hear you dont do roleplays. (I was gonna pretend to be Crisis!)
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
It's tempting. :p Maybe one day, just not any time soon.
Posted by naruto7568426 17 years ago Report
*sigh* Sorry to bother you again im just... really bored! Thats why I want to play with you! But, your probably writing right now so...
Posted by Throku 16 years ago Report
Very interesting story, didn't think willing preywould catch my attention. You've got an interesting way of writing (yeah I just read nr3 story and liked it, so I continued here :P)
I have to say I half hoped that the confident blonde would offer to instruct and show the competitor how to do it when she failed to swallow the guy, by regrowing and having the competitor shrink down to get a first hand instruction...naturally the whole swallow and digest lesson as well as the blonde would take her place and clean off the table in a skilled fashion and then some. :)
I know that's not what happened...
Ahh well, gotta finish the story ^^
Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it despite it not being your preferred type of vore.
Posted by Throku 16 years ago Report
Well I think this one was even better, lots of interesting turns. And strangely enough I don't find the willing prey so creepy despite their eagerness or the genital references. Perhaps there in lies the trick, eager, not desperate meals? The creeps posting on forums and in chats tend to appear...desperate, do they not?
Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
Definitely. *shudders* I feel sorry for female vorarephiles who are bombarded with requests from some of the creepier guys.
I think a large part of the difference is whether or not the willing prey respects the pred, considers her as a person (who should be treated as such) rather than as merely an object of desire.
Posted by Throku 16 years ago Report
Hmm... could be very true. I wonder how many have a preference for clothed preds? It's kind of obvious you do and so do I. It's more natural, I suppose, I don't know that many girls that gets naked to eat a snack or a meal :P
(I guess it's a bit like my Meghan would say. "Why should I get naked? If you want to get inside my pants, then I should keep them on..."
I don't now if you've read Twrch_Twyth's Morgan stories, but they are a bit similar and have had me thinking in similar contest ideas, though with fullsized prey. still willing though and I suppose that's the main reason I've never put anything of it to print, because willing prey is an enigma to me :)
I do now when reflecting on it realize that there are two creepy factors you don't include in these Cherry-stories, which is the weight gain (Oh, now she gets bigger boobies... :O ) and coincious bodyparts and what not. (Oh, now I'm her twat! I hope she masturbates twelve times an hour...)
Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
Right. Eating food is not an inherently sexual act, so why should a girl get undressed to do it? And when she's eating strangers, she (in most cases) won't want to reveal herself to them naked.
I haven't read Twrch_Twyth's stories, so thanks for the pointer.
I've never really liked the idea of breast expansion through vore. So you'll never see that in my stories. Conscious bodyparts is something I've done in my two transformation vore stories, but those are based on magic; I avoid it in more "realistic" stories like the Cherry ones.
Posted by Throku 16 years ago Report
Heh, I doubt I could give you any pointers, it's obvious that you're a much better writer than I am. That I utter stuff anyway probably has to do with my brain being in random-malfunction-mode. ;)
Posted by Miridium 2 years ago Report
Hey this is one of my favorite fics from you so I have to ask this even though it's way out of date: did Cho go on to eat more people? She sure seamed to enjoy eating Xavier and was assured that willing prey were enjoying it all the same.
Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report
Wow, I wrote this 15 years ago! I didn't realise it had been so long ago.
I think she did. Maybe when she spent time with Cherry again, Cherry made sure to shrink a few eager treats for her. ;)