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three girls are cought by a guy who shrink them

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Kobra

Posted by Kobra 14 years ago Report

Wow. Great job... especially with the description!

Fidel2323

Posted by Fidel2323 14 years ago Report

THX :D
me and my fiance wrote that a long long time ago, in a galaxy far far away...
i think a year ago, a few metres from that place were my computer are now...

Emi

Posted by Emi 14 years ago Report

Oh, meow! :) I'll read it right now;)

SeruOmen

Posted by SeruOmen 14 years ago Report

Oh, VERY nice. Does the story continue...? I'm a sucker for multiple prey.

Fidel2323

Posted by Fidel2323 14 years ago Report

Maybe i will continue the story, i didnt know at the moment...

Emi

Posted by Emi 14 years ago Report

WOW, it's really great, Micha seems to be very cute handsome boy:) It'd be cool if he swallows both Isa'd friends right before her eyes, and her - in the end;)

Fidel2323

Posted by Fidel2323 14 years ago Report

hehe, i keep that in mind ;)

Tsavo

Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report

Awesome read. As already said the details made the story.

Fidel2323

Posted by Fidel2323 14 years ago Report

true true...

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report

Very good indeed! I like the way you write about the narrator's troubled reaction at the end.

Fidel2323

Posted by Fidel2323 14 years ago Report

thx

tangent

Posted by tangent 12 years ago Report

lovely :]

Fidel2323

Posted by Fidel2323 12 years ago Report

thx^^

iwillnomu

Posted by iwillnomu 10 years ago Report

Good story, i perfer m/f vore.