Expand Add to favorites | Full Size | Download Noctivagus and the fox By Noctivagus -- Report A story written for Davmil3111, who did some pieces for me a while back. I hope you like it!
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Posted by Davmil3111 17 years ago Report
Oh, this story is awesome! Greatly detailed and nice fight we did there ^^ You could have been more descriptive about the slide down the throat, but except that it's an amazing story ^^ Thank you very much for doing it buddy, I really love it =3
Posted by BerserkerB 17 years ago Report
I thought it was a nice read, for a short story. I agree, you could have described the vore a little more, bu other than that, great work.